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赢取高分策略赢取高分策略NMET对书面表达的要求对书面表达的要求要求考生根据所给情景，用英要求考生根据所给情景，用英语写一篇语写一篇100个单词左右的短文个单词左右的短文情景包括目的、对象、时间、地情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等；提供情景的形式有点、内容等；提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲等。图画、图表、提纲等。本部分满分本部分满分25/30分，所需时分，所需时间约为间约为30分钟。分钟。NMET书面表达评分原则书面表达评分原则1、先根据文章的内容和语言初、先根据文章的内容和语言初步步确定档次确定档次。第五档第五档.2125分分第四档第四档.1620分分第三档第三档.1115分分第二档第二档.610分分第一档第一档.15分分0分分第五档第五档.2125分分第四档第四档.1620分分第三档第三档.1115分分语言地道，语言地道，规范规范覆盖所有内覆盖所有内容要点容要点2、主要内容：、主要内容：内容要点；内容要点；词汇和语法的数量和准确性；词汇和语法的数量和准确性；上下文的连贯；上下文的连贯；语言的得体性语言的得体性应用了较多应用了较多的语法结构的语法结构和词汇和词汇有效地使有效地使用了语句用了语句间的连接间的连接成分成分3、拼写和标点拼写和标点是语言准确性的是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。交际的影响程度予以考虑。4、词数、词数少于少于80和和多于多于120的，的，从总分中减去从总分中减去2分。分。5、如、如书写较差书写较差，以至影响交，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。际，将分数降低一个档次。词汇词汇,句型句型（高级）和（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）语法多样化（较复杂）1.覆盖了所有的覆盖了所有的要点要点2.应用了较多的语法结构应用了较多的语法结构和词汇和词汇3.有效地使用了语句间的有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑连接成分，使全文结构紧凑要要点点全全连连接接词词如何算是一篇好文章？如何算是一篇好文章？书面表达如何写？书面表达如何写？五个步骤1、审题、审题文字信息文字信息图画信息图画信息题材、人称、时态、要点题材、人称、时态、要点2、以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句、以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句话的细节要点。话的细节要点。3、联词成句：用联词成句的方法将上述要点、联词成句：用联词成句的方法将上述要点的词语扩展成句子。的词语扩展成句子。4联句成文：联句成文：注意：注意：主语和谓语主语和谓语背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等）背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等）逻辑关系逻辑关系开头与结尾开头与结尾语篇衔接语篇衔接5、检查修改，规范抄写、检查修改，规范抄写给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整整体体三三部部分分1.Heading点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性2.Body中心记述部分；层次分明3.Ending小结；呼应主题技技巧巧1.使用较高级的词汇使用较高级的词汇3.使用恰当的连接词使用恰当的连接词词汇反映你知识贮存量的词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉整篇文章因此而生辉 。使用恰当连接词，对写一使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有篇有“英语味英语味”的文章很的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。自然、紧凑。增强书面表达效果的技巧增强书面表达效果的技巧2.使用较丰富的句式使用较丰富的句式1.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.2.Weallthinkheisagreatman.3.SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.4.Thestudentsthereneedntpayfortheirbooks.5.Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.The plan turned out to be a failure.Thanks to the good weather,ourjourneywascomfortable.一、怎样使用较高级的词汇一、怎样使用较高级的词汇Weallthink highly of him.A good idea occurred to me./A good idea suddenly struck me.Books are free for the students there.6.Whensheheardhehaddied,shewentpalewithsorrow.7.ShewenttoAustriainordertostudymusic.8.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.9.Inourschool,therearetwenty-sixclassrooms.10.Youcanfindmyhouseeasily.ShewenttoAustria for the purpose of studying music.At the news of his death,shewentpalewithsorrow.The more he spoke,the more excited he felt.Our school is made up of twentysix classrooms.Youll have no trouble finding my house.丰富的句式：丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。1.感叹句e.g.HowhappyIwaswhenIreceivedyourletter!Whatakindboyheis!Howdisappointedhewas!2.强调句e.g.Itwasthisyoungboythathelpedtheoldgranny.Idohopeyoucancomeifpossible.3、倒装句e.g.Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.There comesthepolicecar.Hardlyhadtheygottothestationwhen theymettheyoungman.4、省略句e.g.Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus.Cometomeifnecessary.5、with短语e.g.Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreetwithahandbaginherhand.6、定语从句e.g.Inmyopinion,cybercafesshouldbeaplacewherewecanfindmuchusefulinformation.Letscometothemainteachingbuilding,atthebackofwhichstandstheschoollibrary.7、各种名词性从句e.g.ThatswhatIshoulddo.Weshoulddoafavourtowhoeverneedshelpatpresent.8、各种状语从句e.g.Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit.Themomentwereachedthefarm,wegotdowntoharvesting.Solongasweworkharderatourlessons,wellcatchupsoonerorlater.DocallmebeforehandsothatIcanmeetyouattheairport.Theyhadtowaitbecausetherainwasgettingmoreandmoreheavily.1Whenhearrives,pleasegivemeane-mail.（使用V-ing形式）.2.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名词性从句）3.ThoughImweak,Illmaketheeffort.(使用倒装句)4.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型)5.Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.(用虚拟语气）On his arriving,please give me an e-mail.What surprises him is thatthe little girl knows so many things.Practice怎样使用较丰富的句式怎样使用较丰富的句式Weak as I am,Ill make the effort.It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help.6.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(使用过去分词)7.Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.(使用V-ing形式)8.Iwontbelievewhathesays.（使用状语从句）9.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.（用并列句）10HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.(使用倒装句)No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.Followed by many students,she walked out of the lab.Singing and laughing,they went back to school.No matter what he says,I wont believe.Study hard and youll make rapid progress.高考大纲中常用的高考大纲中常用的连接词连接词1.表示递进表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容在同一话题上补充内容另外，还有：whatismore;besides;also;moreover;inaddition2.表示转折关系表示转折关系但是，然而，相反：but;however;yet;instead;ontheotherhand;onthecontrary.3.表示因果关系表示因果关系因为，因此，所以:since;as;because(of);so;thus;therefore;asaresult;4.表示条件关系表示条件关系如果，只要:if;oncondition(that);aslongas除非:unless否则:orelse5.表示时间关系表示时间关系当的时候:when;while在之后:after在之前:before直到:until一就:assoonas后来,然后:later;afterwards不久:soon近来:lately;recently自从:since从那时起:fromthenon6.表示特定的顺序关系表示特定的顺序关系首先，最主要的:aboveall其次:secondly然后:then;next最后:finally;intheend7.换一种方法表述换一种方法表述换句话说:inotherwords;thatistosay;8.进行举例说明进行举例说明例如，比如:forinstance;forexample;like;suchas9.用于陈述事实用于陈述事实实际上:infact;actually;asamatteroffact跟你说实话:totellyouthetruth10.对一个话题进行总结对一个话题进行总结总而言之，总的来说:onthewhole;inshort;allinall;ingeneral;inaword11.其它常用到的副词其它常用到的副词Therefore;otherwise;finally;furthermore;Thus;namely;although;afterwards;personally;On one side oftheroadthereisanewclassroombuilding.On the other side,wheretheplaygroundusedtobenowstandsanothernewbuildingourlibrary.(NMET1999范文)As far as I know,everyoneishappyaboutthisnewarrangementofthings.(NMET2001范文)Whats more,Icangotobedearlier.(NMET2001范文)三、怎样使用恰当的连接词三、怎样使用恰当的连接词PracticePractice1 1 请在下列句子中（间）填上恰当的关联词或意思有联系的短语。1.XiaoMingwaswalkinginthestreet_heheardsomeonecryforhelp.2.HeadvisedthatIhireacar_Icouldtravelaroundinthewest.3.Itwasnotlong_thepolicecame.4._heheardthecryforhelp,hejumpedintothewatertosavethegirl.wheninorderthatbeforeAssoonas5.Doyouagreewithmyarrangement?_,dowritetomesoon.6.Wecangodowntownanddosomeshopping._,wecanpayavisittosomeplacesofinterest.7.Isharedthecostofthegaswithmyfriends._,Isaved$80.8.Eatingsugarisbadforourteeth._,itmaymakeusfat.Ifnot/soInadditionAsaresultWhatsworse联合国教科文组织某考察团正在联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿的请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：形式简要介绍这个村的情况：1)大小：近大小：近100户人家，约户人家，约500口人。口人。2)变化：过去很穷，变化：过去很穷，78年后变年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。现已旧貌换新颜。3)教育：原来的学校很小，现教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层，层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。儿童在此免费就读。注意：注意：1）要点齐全，前后连贯。）要点齐全，前后连贯。2）词数：）词数：100-120之间。之间。Practice书面表达：书面表达：Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool.Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peopleherearericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Theschoolherewasverysmall.Nowithasbeenrebuilt.Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Thankyou.Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peopleherearericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Thisvillageisa small one with/which hasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.However,ithaschangedalotsince1978 and has been developing very fast.Peopleherelive a much better lifethanbefore.书面表达：书面表达：Nowitistakingonanewlook.Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall.Nowithasbeenrebuilt.Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Thankyou.Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmalland most children couldnt afford to go to school.Butnowithasbeenrebuiltand which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful oneinthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Whats more,theyenjoyfreeeducation.May you enjoy your stay herethenewlybuiltteachingbuilding/May you have a pleasant time here!Thankyou.Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!Thisvillageisa small one with/which hasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.However,ithaschangedalotsince1978and has been developing very fast.Peopleherelive a much better lifethanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmalland most children couldnt afford to go to school.Butnowithasbeenrebuiltandthenewlybuiltteachingbuildingwhich has 4 storeys is the most beautiful oneinthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Whats more,theyenjoyfreeeducation.May you enjoy your stay here/May you have a pleasant time here!Thankyou.20012001年春季高考作文年春季高考作文给澳大利亚的朋友写一封信，谈谈减负给学生的学习和生活带来的变化。Iwilltellyouthechangesofmylife.Before,wehadmanyclasseseveryday.Ihadtodoalotofhomeworkafterschool.Iwenttobedat11:30intheevening.Ihadnotimetoplay.Iwasverytired.NowIcanvisitmuseums.Icanlearncomputeranddrawing.Intheevening,IcanreadbooksandnewspapersandwatchTV.Igotobedat10:00now.17分高考满分作文Imverypleasedtotellyouthechangesinmylifesince our homework has reduced.Before that,learningduringthedaywasverysimple.Havingclassanddoinghomeworkwas the only thing weshoulddo.Intheevening,wealsohadalotofhomeworktodo.Wecouldnotgotobed until11:30.Nevertheless,sincereducingthelearningload,mylifehasbecomemuch moreinteresting.Ioftenvisitmuseumsandcomputerroomsanddrawpicturesin my spare time.Intheevening,I alsohavetimetowatchTVandreadnewspapers.Ino longer stayuplate;on the contrary,Igotobedatabout10pm.In short,Iamquitesatisfiedwithmylifenow.书面表达常用语句书面表达常用语句1.1.书信书信2.2.Thanksforyourlastletter.3.Iamwritingjusttoinformyou4.Inreplytoyourlastletter,Iamwriting5.toexplainthetwoquestionsasfollows:6.开头Lookingforwardtoyourreply/hearingfromyou!Thanksforyourconsideration.Doremembermetoyourparents!结尾2.2.叙事叙事Itisquiteobvious/clearthat(很显然)Thereisnodoubtthat(毫无疑问)Takeasanexample.(以为例）Ononehand,ontheotherhand(一方面，另一方面)Onlyinthiswayshallwe(只有这样我们才能)Asfarasisconcerned,Iprefer(就而言，我更)Measures/Actionshouldbetakento(必须采取措施去)Forthereasonsgivenabove,Ifeelthat(鉴于以上原因，我觉得Whatthesepeoplefailtoconsideristhat(这些人没有想到的是.)Undoubtedlythereisalongwaytogobefore(毫无疑问要还有很长的路要走）Therefore,Istronglyrecommendthat(因此，我强烈建议Allthefactsshowthat（所有的事实显示)Ilikenotonlybecausebutalsobecause(我喜欢不仅因为而且因为)Iamwritingtoyoutoinquireabout(我写信给你想询问)Iamwritingtoexpressmydissatisfactionwith/at(我给你写信表示我对的不满）Iapologizetoyoufor(我为向你道歉）Iamgratefultoyoufor(我为向你表示感谢）Mr.Green,mybestfriend,isteachingMr.Green,afavoriteteacherfromtheUSA,isteachingLetterwritingALetterNov 5,2001Wuzheng Middle SchoolZhejiang P.R.C.JackTongxiang High SchoolDearMary,BodyYours,Jack亲人、家属：Yourslovingly;Yoursaffectionately朋友、平辈：SincerelyyoursYourssincerely上级、长者：YoursrespectfullyRespectfullyyours单位、部门：YourssincerelyYoursfaithfully结束语Closing信封正面StampAirmail信封背面June5th,2000DearMr.Zhao,IamsorrythatIamunabletoattendschoolduringthefollowingweekbecauseoftheSportsMeet.Theschoolexpectsmetoplayanimportantpartinit.AndIwillbebacktoclassinaweek.Ihopeyouwillexcusemyabsence.(infact,ItakeaFrenchleave)YoursrespectfullyCharlesCharlesEncl:thePETeacherscertificate(Encl:thePETeacherscertificate(证明）证明）便条（病/事假条）（NOTICE/ANNOUNCEMENT)口头通知：LadiesandGentlemen,MayIhaveyouattentionplease?正文书面通知：NOTICEIncelebrationofMayDay,therewillbe-正文SchoolOfficeApril25th,2000通知、通告WednesdayMay5thCloudyItisnearlyamonthsinceIbegankeepingdiaries.IfinditaverygoodexerciseinEnglishcomposition.IgotbackmyessayonAVisittothePark.ItwasmarkedwithA.Therewereonlythreemistakesinit:oneingrammarandtwoinidiom.ImhappytoseethatIcannowexpressmyselfinEnglishmoreusuallythaneverbefore.,日记DiaryPractice2请你给中国日报写一篇稿件，谈谈农村儿童失学的主要原因及你的看法。原因原因：1、家庭贫穷，供不起儿童上学，他们不得不在家赚钱养家。2、部分家长认为女孩上学无用，不愿让她们上学。3、部分儿童对功课不感兴趣，不愿上学。看法看法：1、每个儿童包括女孩都应有受教育的机会。2、全社会都应重视儿童教育，他们对国家的未来将起到重要的作用。Nowinthecountryareas,therearemanychildrenoutofschool.Mostfamiliesarepoorandcantaffordtheireducation.Theyhavetostayathomeandmakemoney.Someparentsthinkdaughtersneedntgotoschool.Theydontletthemgotoschool.Somechildrenarenotinterestedintheirstudiesandwouldntliketogotoschool.Allthechildrenincludinggirlsshouldbeeducated.Thewholesocietyshouldpayattentiontoit.Theyllplayanimportantpartinthefutureofourcountry.