董朝基于话题的词块复习与写作指导

基于词块的过程性写作指导A process approach to writing with lexical chunksWriting on your social practiceBy the end of the class,students should be able to:1.Write a composition about their feelings and reflections on their teaching practices under the teachers guide step by step;2.Use the given lexical chunks as many as possible,such as“what I have learnt from the experience is that”“Not only,but also”,etc.3.improve their writing by changing the simple sentences into clauses and organizing the contents logically and clearly by making good use of transitional words,such as besides,furthermore,therefore 4.evaluate and edit their compositions and according to the assessment standard by peer-evaluation.Teaching objectivesFocal points Write a composition about their feelings and reflections on their teaching practices under the teachers guide step by step1.Do peer editing,self-editing and work in groups effectively and efficiently2.Improve their writing by using improve their writing by changing the simple sentences into clauses and organizing the contents logically and clearly by making good use of transitional wordsDifficult points基于词块的过程性写作指导A process approach to writing with lexical chunksWriting on your social practiceBrainstormingBrainstormingWhat did you do in your social practice?What have you learnt from your social practice?Have you ever taken part in social practice?What are the influences it has on you?tutor the left behind children for freeexperience the farming life work as a shop assistantserve for the community and clean the streetsThe forms of social practice:Lexical chunksLexical chunksltake a part-time jobltutor the left behind children for freelexperience the farming life lwork as a shop assistantlserve for the community Are social practices good to us?What are the advantages?The advantages of social practice:Lexical chunksLexical chunkslSocial practice help us put knowledge and practice together.lWith this practice,we will know more about social reality and be familiar with the future job.lWe can not only get experience about work,but also learn the skills that deal with others,and learn further about social reality.lIn the social practice,we are sure to learn more than our textbooks.Our participation in social practice might strengthen our sense of responsibility.lOur close contact with the working people might help us apply our knowledge to solution to the practical problem.lSocial practice plays an important role to set foundation for our work and make our life more colorful and meaningful.Can you share your social practice with others?In order to let others know more about it,please write a passage about your feelings and reflections on your social practices.What points should be included in your writing?1.Brief introduction to your social practice3.Your feelings and reflections on your social practice4.The influence it has on your future life2.Some details of your social practiceWhat did you do in your social practice?What were your feelings when doing social practice?What have you gained from your social practice?Step1:Answer the following questions:What are the influences it has on you?Serve for the community(help the residents do the housework,clean the sports facilities,pick up the rubbish)Tired but happy,excited as a volunteerA more beautiful community,experience the honor of working,learn further about social reality Build my confidence,strengthen my sense of responsibility(brief introduction)(feelings)(gains)(influences)Step2:complete the following sentences.1.During the _vacation,the students in our class joined in a meaningful activity.All of us_.(the form of social practice)2.It was _but we were very_.We were _ as a volunteer.3.We gained _and experience_.4.This experience _ served for communitywintertiringhappyexcited helped me build the confidence and strengthen my responsibility.the praise of local residentsthe honor of working(feelings)(gains)(influences)During the winter vacation,the students in our class joined in a meaningful activity.All of us did our bit for community.We visited an elderly lady at her home.We chatted with her and help her with the housework,such as sweeping the floor,cleaning the table and the windows.It was tiring but we were very happy.We went outside to clean the sports facilities.Although it was freezing cold,we all try to create a better environment for the residents living in the community.After that we picked up the rubbish.We sorted them out to reuse and recycle conveniently later.We were excited as a volunteer.We made our community more beautiful and experienced the honor of working.This activity helped me build my confidence to communicate with others and strengthen my responsibility to our society as well.I realized that only when everyone tries to do something helpful can we build a harmonious society.Step3:form the writingHow can we make our writing better and more interesting?During the winter vacation,the students in our class joined in a meaningful activity.All of us did our bit for community.During the winter vacation,the students in our class joined in a meaningful activity,_all of us did our bit for community.Use clausesin which I realized that only when everyone tries to do something helpful can we build a harmonious society._ is that only when everyone tries to do something helpful can we build a harmonious society.What I realized Use clausesWe chatted with her and help her with the houseworkWe chatted with her _helping her with the houseworkas well asUse phrasesAlthough it was freezing cold,we all try to create a better environment for the residents living in the community.Although it was freezing cold,we all _a better environment for the residents living in the communityspared no effort with the purpose of creating Use phrasesWe made our community more beautiful and experienced the honor of working._did we make our community more beautiful,_ experienced the honor of working.Not only but we also Use phrases_it was tiring,_,we felt proud of ourselves.It was tiring but we were very happy.Add more information and make it more vivid.Although seeing the big smile on their faceAfter that we picked up the rubbish.We sorted them out to reuse and recycle conveniently later.Add more information and linking words and expressionsAfter that we picked up the rubbish_,_,we sorted them out to reuse and recycle conveniently later.The community _.lying on the groundwhats morewas full of cleannessWays to make your writing better and more interestingAdd linking words and more expressionsUse phrasesAdd more information and make it more vividUse clauses1）递进：2）转折：3）总结：4）强调：5）对比：furthermore,moreover,besides,in additionhowever,but,nevertheless,after allfinally,at last,in brief,to conclude,above allreally,indeed,certainly,surely,in the same way,just as,on the other handtransitional words:Lexical chunksLexical chunks During the winter vacation,the students in our class joined in a meaningful activity,in which all of us did our bit for community.Firstly we visited an elderly lady at her home.We chatted with her as well as helping her with the housework,such as sweeping the floor,cleaning the table and the windows.Seeing the big smile on her face,we felt proud of ourselves.Then we went outside to clean the sports facilities.Although it was freezing cold,we all spared no effort with the purpose of creating a better environment for the residents living in the community.After that we picked up the rubbish lying on the ground.whats more,we sorted them out to reuse and recycle conveniently later.The community was full of cleanness.We were excited as a volunteer.Not only did we make our community more beautiful,but we also experienced the honor of working.This activity helped me build my confidence to communicate with others and strengthen my responsibility to our society as well.What I realized is that only when everyone tries to do something helpful can we build a harmonious society.Sentence patterns:Lexical chunksLexical chunkslDuringvacation,we joined in,which was a meaningful experiencelWe doas well as doing lWe do and as well.lFirstlySecondlylIn the beginningthenlast but not least lNot only,but alsolAlthough it is,welWe spare no effort with the purpose oflWhat I learnt/realized from the experience is thatlThanks to this experience,I leant thatIts your turn to write!请你根据参加过的社会实践活动，谈谈请你根据参加过的社会实践活动，谈谈参加社会实践活动的参加社会实践活动的体会体会以及这样的活以及这样的活动对你将来的人生产生的动对你将来的人生产生的影响影响。Writing Task1.词数不少于词数不少于120。2.文中不得提及有关考生的任何信息，如文中不得提及有关考生的任何信息，如校名校名和和人名等。人名等。What did you do in your social practice?What were your feelings when doing social practice?What have you learnt from your social practice?Step1:Answer the following questions:What are the influences it has on you?Step2:make sentences according to the following sentence patterns.lDuringvacation,we joined in,which was a meaningful experiencelWe doas well as doing lWe do and as well.lFirstlySecondlylIn the beginningthenlast but not least lNot only,but alsolAlthough it is,welWe spare no effort with the purpose oflWhat I learnt/realized from the experience is thatlThanks to this experience,I leant thatThe forms of social practice:Lexical chunksLexical chunksltake a part-time jobltutor the left behind children for freelexperience the farming life lwork as a shop assistantlserve for the community The advantages of social practice:Lexical chunksLexical chunkslSocial practice help us put knowledge and practice together.lWith this practice,we will know more about social reality and be familiar with the future job.lWe can not only get experience about work,but also learn the skills that deal with others,and learn further about social reality.lIn the social practice,we are sure to learn more than our textbooks.Our participation in social practice might strengthen our sense of responsibility.lOur close contact with the working people might help us apply our knowledge to solution to the practical problem.lSocial practice plays an important role to set foundation for our work and make our life more colorful and meaningful.Have fun writing!Step three Use the above mentioned words,expressions or sentences to form your writing.You can add more information if you want.Try to make it better and more interesting!Step four Exchange your writing with your partners and evaluate it according to the following standards.Language Criterion language1.wordchoice2.wordform3.wrongwordorder4.wrongspelling5.wrongtense6.wrongpunctuation7.somethingmissing8.somethingshouldbeomitted9.whatdoesitmean?w.cw.fw.osp.tP()(?)Step five Select some good works to be presented to the whole class.Ask the authors to read it aloud.Homework Write your revised composition in your exercise book.Learntowriteandwritetolearn!