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笨老师分享课堂(中考作文)01 学校:_姓名：_班级：_考号：_ (一)世界在发展，文化在交融，英语已经成为人们沟通的桥梁。怎样学好英语是 我们一直在求索的问题。几年的学习经历你一定积累了许多成功的经验，请从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你的建议。要求：1.词数：80100 词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）2.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。How to learn English well English is important and useful to us.How can we learn it well?Here are my suggestions.(二)假如你是韩梅，对英语兴趣浓厚，但学习起来却很棘手。你知道，中国学生要想学好英语，练就听、说、读、写的技能很关键，掌握枯燥的语法更是必要。对于 native speakers来说，是否也如此？因此，你打算给你远在加拿大的笔友 Kate 发一封电子邮件，谈谈这些问题。注意：词数：80 词左右；文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其它相关信息，否则不予评分；邮件开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Dear Kate,Im writing to you for some questions about learning English._ _ _ _ I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.(三)3如今，中学生的假期生活发生了很大变化。假定你是李明，美国的笔友 Lisa 想了解中国学生现在的假期 生活。请写封回信。要点如下：学习和休闲仍然重要；帮忙做家务或干农活；参加社会活动，做志愿者工作，帮助他人。注意：1词数 80 一 100；2请结合实际增加细节，适当发挥；3信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇:volunteer 志愿者 Dear Lisa,Im glad to have received your letter.Our holiday life has changed a lot.Best wishes!Yours,Li Ming (四)越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？请写一篇有关交通安全的短文(80 字左右)内容包含：遵守交通规则，如走人行道/过斑马线。别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。劝父母不能酒后驾车。你可以适当增加内容，让短文通顺，过渡自然。参考词汇：sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑马线 注：第一段已给出，不计入总数 With more and more cars coming into our families,we are happy that it has greatly improved our life.But unluckily,it has also brought many problems,such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.(五)总结是有效学习的重要组成部分，每个同学都应重视和培养这方面的能力。今天的英语考试已经接近尾声了，经过近两个小时的答题体验，请总结一下自己在英语学习中中取得的进步和存在的不足，并对今后的英语学习拟定一些计划。下面的提示句可以帮助你更好地完成写作。要求；1、紧扣主题，观点正确，行文连贯、流畅。2、提示句需在文中出现。3、字数 80 100 左右。I have just had a very time in this English examination.I found I have made great progress in But there is still to learn further.In the future,I will try my best in (六)假如你叫刘畅，你的朋友小明因为沉溺于电脑游戏，成绩日益下降。作为小明的朋友，你很担心，并决定给他写一封 e-mail,帮助他改掉这个坏习惯，好好学习。要点提示：1、说明玩电脑游戏的利弊。2、建议小明在课余时间多参加有意义的活动。3、你对小明的期望。要求：1、字数：80 词左右（开头与结尾已给出，且不计入总词数。）2、文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息。3、文中必须包括提示中所规定的要点，并可适当发挥。参考词汇：be addicted to 沉溺于-Dear Xiao Ming,How are you doing recently?Yours,Liu Chang (七)假如上周一你班举行了“爱护水、节约水”的主题活动，请你根据以下要点为你校校报写一篇活动报道。活动内容 邀请王老师作报告；全班讨论如何节水和爱护水。活动收获 我们知道我国一些地方水源受到污染；我市虽有一些河流和湖泊，但也缺水。所以（节水和爱护水的方法至少各发挥一点)。活动感受 注意：1词数不少于 90。文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。2要点完整、层次清晰、语法正确、上下文连贯。3文中不得真实的人名、校名。Last Monday we held an activity_ _ (八)爱是心中的太阳，融化你我身边的冰雪。假设你是李明，你们学校的“English Canden”正在办主题为“付出既是收获”的征文活动，请你联系自己平时的爱心行为和感受写一篇文章投稿。要求：1、文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。2、80100 词。标题和文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。(九)假如你是李华，请根据提示，给你的英国笔友 Michael 写一封信，介绍你们的校园活动，并说说你对校园活动的看法。注意：（1）内容应至少包含两项校园活动，要求意思、语句连贯；（2）词数 80100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；（3）注意书信格式，信中不得出现真实姓名和校名。(十)地球是我们人类共同的家园。“低碳、环保”已成为当今时代主题。目前，我市英语学会准备在全市中学生中开展以“Save(拯救）our earth”为主题的英文征文活动。现请你根据以下三个方面的提示，写一篇 70 词左右的短文参评。1.重要性：只有一个地球 2.主要问题：污染、疾病、灾难 3.措施：停止污染、保护大自然 参考词汇：disaster n.灾难 protect V.保护 注意：(1)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名；(2)文章标题已给出，但不计入总词数；(3)可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。Save Our Earth _ _ _ _ 参考答案 1One possible version:How to learn English well English is important and useful to us.How can we learn it well?Here are my suggestions.First,we should often listen to the tapes,English songs and programs.Watching English movies is also helpful to us.Second,we should speak English in class as much as possible.Dont be afraid of making mistakes.The more you speak,the fewer mistakes youll make.Wed better join the English club and practice with others.Third,we can read more English newspapers and magazines.Its good for us.At last,we should recite some good passages and keep diaries.In a word,as long as we do more listening,speaking,reading and writing,we will learn English well.【解析】试题分析：这是一篇命题作文。在要点中给出了写作的大致方向，需要自己发挥的地方较多。动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥，确定时态主要词汇等问题。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。考点：命题作文的写作 点评：本题给出的材料较为简略，可发挥的空间较大，所以自己可以选择自己比较熟悉的内容发挥，利用自己熟悉的单词句式等。2One possible version:Dear Kate,Im writing to you for some questions about learning English.You know,I have great interest in English all the time.However,I find it difficult to learn.In China,if you want to learn English well,listening,speaking,reading and writing are quite important.I wonder whether it is the same in Canada.Besides,our teachers tell us again and again that grammar is very important;we must take it seriously.However,I dont like grammar.It is so boring that I never learn it well.Dear Kate,is grammar also very important to you native speakers?I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours,答案第 2 页，总 6 页 Han Mei【解析】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，要求写一封电子邮件，谈谈关于学英语的问题。材料中给的资料比较全面，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥，确定时态主要词汇等问题。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。另外，在描述时，应该注意人称的变化。考点：应用文的写作 点评：本题给出的材料较为简略，可发挥的空间较大，所以自己可以选择自己比较熟悉的内容发挥，利用自己熟悉的单词句式等。3One possible version Im glad to have received your letter.Our holiday life has changed a lot.Learning and relaxing are still very important to us.Besides,we often help our prents do housework or farm work.Through that,we realise how hard our parents work every day.And we can make a habit of laboring at the same time.Also,we take an active part in social activities as volunteers.Sometimes,we go to the streets to collect rubbish or go to the hospital to cheer up the sick children.We try our best to help people in need and make our hometown more beautiful.We find great pleasure in all these activities.Best wishes!Yours，Li Ming【解析】本题是写一篇给定材料的回信，信的内容是告诉美国笔友中国的假期情况，内容包括学习，做家务，生活和社会活动等，在写作时应注意书信的格式，同时要符合题意，注意语言的准确性和连贯性。4Traffic safety is everybodys business.We must obey the rules.For example,we must walk on walk side.when we cross zebra crossing,stop and look right and left,then go across fast.Dont play football on the road.we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive,not to run through red lights,not to talk and laugh while driving etc.We can say cars are coming into our life,but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybodys business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.【解析】本题是材料作文，通过一段话引出主题-交通安全。题目给出了四点写作要点，还是比较容易下笔的。所给的参考词汇要用上，写作时，注意语句要通顺，不能出现拼写和语法等方面的错误。5One possible version：I have just had a very wonderful time in this English examination.Im happy that I have done it well.I can finish it without effort.Because my English often gives me a hand,he teaches me how to study.Many students also help me with my homework.If I have problems with it,my classmates are willing to help me.I found I have made great progress in English.But there is still a lot to learn future.Sometimes I cant pronounce the word correctly.So I will communiciate with my students,friends,parents.In the future,I will try my best in it.I believe my English will be better and better.【解析】试题分析：这是一篇命题作文。在要点中给出了写作的大致方向，需要自己发挥的地方较多。根据要求可知写作主要内容是总结一下自己在英语学习中中取得的进步和存在的不足，并对今后的英语学习拟定一些计划。随意时态主要是现在完成时态，一般现在时态和一般将来时态，注意时态与时间状语的搭配问题。写作中，应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。考点：命题作文的写作 点评：本题给出的材料较为简略，可发挥的空间较大，所以自己可以选择自己比较熟悉的内容发挥，利用自己熟悉的单词句式等。6Dear Xiao Ming,How are you doing recently?We take pride in that you are good at playing computer games.Computers are more and more important in our lives.Playing games on them can help us know more about computers,which is very useful for our future lives.But if you are addicted to it,itll be quite harmful to you.It is not only bad for your health but also has bad influence to your study to spend too much time playing them.Next you should take an active part in all kinds of activities in your free time.We all know you are a cute boy,you must do better in the study if you spend less time playing computer games.Yours,答案第 4 页，总 6 页 Liu Chang【解析】试题分析:这是一篇应用文写作，写一封信。动笔前先要认真阅读材料，对有关内容都有所回应。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。考点：应用文的写作 点评：注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态一般是一般现在时态，人称是第一人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑。7Last Monday we held an activity about saving and protecting water.Mr Wang was invited to give us a talk.After his speech,we had a discussion about how to save and protect water.Now we know that some of the rivers are polluted in our country and that we are short of water although there are some rivers and lakes in our city.As a result,we need to protect and save water.For example,we shouldnt leave water running after using it.Besides,we mustnt throw rubbish into the rivers.After taking part in the activity,we had a better understanding of the importance of protecting the environment and saving water.【解析】略 8Giving is Receiving Im a student from Green Middle School.My name is LI Ming.I like helping others because I think it makes me very happy.I often help my classmates with their schoolwork.Sometimes I help clean up city parks.I go to the old peoples home and do some cleaning for them once a month.So Im pretty popular there.I often visit the childrens hospital to cheer the sick kids up.I read stories and sing songs for them.I am good with children.I also give money to charities to help people in trouble.I think giving is receiving.Helping others is helping ourselves.Do you agree with me?【解析】试题分析：这是一篇命题作文。在要点中给出了写作的大致方向，需要自己发挥的地方较多。动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥，确定时态主要词汇等问题。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该 符合英语的表达习惯。另外，在描述时，应该注意人称的变化。考点：命题作文的写作 点评：本题给出的材料较为简略，可发挥的空间较大，所以自己可以选择自己比较熟悉的内容发挥，利用自己熟悉的单词句式等。9June 13th,2011 Dear Michael,Im glad to tell you something about our colorful school life.We usually have our activities from 4:30 to 6:00 in the afternoon.We have different kinds of activities.Some of us are interested in sports.They play football and basketball.Every term there is a basketball match between students and teachers in our school.We also have some clubs,such as drawing club,dancing club and singing club.But computer is the most popular in our school now.We have a computer room in our school.Therere more than 100 computers in it.Every afternoon,some students go and play computer games.On Thursday afternoon we go to English corner.We like talking in English there.We like English corner very much.Because we practice lots of oral English there.We hope we can spend more time on such activities and less time on homework.Yours Li Ming【解析】试题分析：这是一篇命题作文。在要点中给出了写作的大致方向，需要自己发挥的地方较多。动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥，确定时态主要词汇等问题。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。另外，在描述时，应该注意人称的变化。考点：命题作文的写作 点评：本题给出的材料较为简略，可发挥的空间较大，所以自己可以选择自己比较熟悉的内容发挥，利用自己熟悉的单词句式等。10 We all live in the earth.The earth is our home.We have only one earth.We must take care of it.It gives us the best environment.If we harm it,it will be angry.And then we will have a terrible end.There are three problems in our earth,they are pollution,disaster and illness.Its our duty to protect our environment.So we must plant more trees,protect the flowers and the 答案第 6 页，总 6 页 trees,reduce the pollution.Protecting the nature is very important.Its our duty to keep our environment clean and tidy.If everyone makes a contribution to protect the environment,the earth will become much more beautiful.【解析】试题分析：本题要求写一篇保护环境的议论文。要求中已经给出了主要要点，因此要求我们自由发挥的地方较多，只是需要注意不能遗留要求中的要点。动笔前先要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后反复读几遍，适当修改。考点：关于环保的议论文 点评：本题难度较大，由于给出信息较少，故解题前需要自己组织整理材料。可先根据要求列出简要提纲，然后在动笔写作，不跑题偏题是做好书面表达的前提条件。