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2020届高中英语二轮复习短文改错（1）1、假定英语课.上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.WelcometotheGreatWall.Measuredmorethan6,000kilometersinlength,theGreatWallisknownasthelongwallintheworld.Ithasalonghistoryofmorethan2,000years.ThatisamazingabouttheGreatWallisthatitismainmadeofstonesandbricks,andalltheconstructionwasdonebyhand.Thoughitwasusedtoprotectthecountryfromforeigninvaders,everyfewhundredmetersalongwiththeGreatWall,therewasawatchtower.Now,assymbolofChina,theGreatWallwillbecomeoneofthemostfamoustouristattractionsintheworld.ItisnowonderfulthattheGreatWallattracthundredsofthousandsofforeigntouristseveryyear.，2、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。IamwritingtooffermysincerecongratulationYouwonthefirstprizeintheChineseChessNetworkChallengeAsyourfriend，IjustwantyoutoknowhowgladlyIamatyoursuccessInlastfewyears，youhadshowngreatinterestinChinesechessYoukeeponpracticingthemeverydayNotonly1haveyoureadmuchbooksaboutChinesechessstrategies，butalsoyouhavecompetedonallkindsofChinesechesscontestsFinally，yousucceededinwintheonlinecompetition!IwassoveryhappythatIcouldntgotosleeplastnightImeagertoplayChinesechesswithyouatthecommunityclub，whichwe11enjoyourselves3、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。DearLaura,Thanksforlettingustostayatyourseasidehouse.Now,youmighthaveheardfromyourneighborsaboutwhichhappenedonSaturdayevening.WhenIwasoutawalk,myyoungerson,Tom,playedfootballbeforeyourhouse.Hemadesomanynoisethattheneighborsgotquiteangrily.Evenworse,TombrokeoneofthewindowofMr.Wilsonshouse.TomandIapologizedotalltheneighborsfortheunhappyhappenings,butpromisedtohavethebrokenwindowrepairsoon.Tomsaidthatwewouldnotdosuchsillythingsanymore.Iamgladthatyourneighborshadforgivenus.Theyarereallynicepeople.Yours,Betty4、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。WhenIwas12,ImetMary.ShecametoChinawithherparents,whomtaughtEnglishinanuniversity.Wesoonbecamegoodfriends.ShewasfluentlyinChinesewhileIhaddifficultywithmyspeakingEnglish.InordertohelpmewithmyEnglish,wespokeasmuchEnglishaswecanwhenweweretogether.Beforelong,IcouldspeakEnglishwellbutatthesametimeIalsomadegreatprogressesinmywrittenEnglish.2Luckily,ayearlater,shehadtoreturnbacktohercountrywithherparents.Andwehaveoutoftouchwitheachothereversince.HowImissher!5、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。Lastsummer,LiHuaandhisclassmatesmadeatriptoLondon.Onhisarrivalattheairport,itwasrainingheavy.Sotheytookabustothehotel,wherewasnotfarfromtheairport.Thenextday,theycantwaittoseethewonderfulplaceofinterestinLondon.TheyfirstwenttotheElizabethTower,asymbolofUnitedKingdom.Theguidetoldthemthetowerhadbeenappearedinmanyfilms.ThentheyvisittheBritishMuseum.Totheirgreatsurprise,theyfoundmanyChineseartworksdisplayedthere.Feltveryproud,theytookalotofphotosbuttheyreallyhadgreatfun.6、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。Thetimewehaveisusuallimited.However,evenanhourisofmuchvaluable.Weshouldmakefulluseofyourtimetodousefulthings.Asstudents,wemustntstudyhardsoastoserveforoursocietyandournationinthefuture.Butitispitythattherearealotofpeoplewhodidntknowtheimportanceoftime.Theyspendtheirvaluabletimesmokeanddrinking.Theydontrealizethatwastingtimeisthesameaswastingapartoftheirlife.Remember,dontputoffwhichyoucandotodayuntiltomorrow.37、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分MyvillagelieinthemountainsinsouthwestChina.Althoughtheclimateandlandscapearepleased,peopleleadatoughlifethere.Atthebeginningofthe21stcentury,thegovernmentbegantoattachgreatimportancetoitsdevelopment,undertheinfluenceofthat,peopleslivingconditionbegantoimprove.Alotofroadswerebuiltandplentyoftradecenterswerenewlyfound,whichmadethemconvenienttodevelopeconomy.Whatsmore,greatmanystudentswereadmittedintofamousuniversities.Inaword,thanktothegovernmentssupport,greatchangeshavebeentakenplaceinthepastfewyears.Myvillagetakesupanewlooknow.8、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Travellingabroad,youshouldfollowthecustomsofthecountryyouwerevisiting.Whenyouareinvited,thatisgoodmannerstorefuseoraccepttheinvitationeitherbywritingandbytelephoning.Ifyougotoaparty,itispolitetoarriveonthetime.Itisgoodmannerstoshakehandswithourhost.Youcantakeapresentifyoulike,possibleabottleofwine,aboxofchocolatesoranyflowers.However,itisnotbadmannerstotakenothing.Itisnotpolitestaytoolateaftertheotherguestshavegone.Also,ithassuggestedtowriteortelephoneadayortwolatetothankyourhost.4答案以及解析1答案及解析：答案：WelcometotheGreatWall.MeasuredMeasuringmorethan6,000kilometersinlength,theGreatWallisknownasthelongisthatitismainthatwallintheworld.Ithasalonghistoryofmorethan2,000years.isamazingabouttheGreatWalllongestwhatThoughmadeofstonesandbricks,andalltheconstructionwasdonebyhand.itwasusedtomainlyAsprotectthecountryfromforeigninvaders,everyfewhundredmetersalongwiththeGreatWall,therewasawatchtower.Now,asasymbolofChina,theGreatWallwillhasbecomeoneofthemostfamoustouristattractionsintheworld.ItisnowonderfulattractthattheGreatWallhundredsofthousandsofforeigntouristseveryyear.wonderattracts解析：1.Measured改成Measuring.考查非谓语.theGreatWall与measure之间是主谓关系,所以用现在分词在句中做状语.2.long改成longest.考查最高级.长城是世界上最长的墙,所以用最高级.3.That改成what.考查名词性从句.本句是主语从句。从句中缺少主语,所以用what引导.4.main改为mainly.考查副词.此处用副词修饰动词made,mainly是副词主要地.5.Though改为As.考查连词.本句是表示原因,所以用as引导.6.去掉with.考查介词.沿着长城用介词along,所以去掉with.7.加a.考查冠词.根据句意是作为一个中国的象征,所以用不定冠词a.8.will改为has.考查时态.根据句意长城已经成为世界上最著名的旅游景点之一,所以用现在完成时.9.wonderful改为wonder.考查名词.它是世界奇迹,所以用名词wonder奇迹.10.attract改为attracts.考查时态.主语是长城为第三人称单数形式,所以用attracts.2答案及解析：答案：IamwritingtooffermysincerecongratulationYouwonthefirstprizeintheChineseChessNetworkcongratulationsChallengeAsyourfriend，IjustwantyoutoknowhowgladlygladIamatyoursuccessInthelastfewyears，youhadshowngreatinterestinChinesechessYoukeeponpracticinghave5everydayNotonlyhaveyoureadbooksaboutChinesechessstrategies，butalsoyouhavethemitmuchmanyallkindsofChinesechesscontestsFinally，yousucceededintheonlinecompetedoninwinwinningcompetition!IwassoveryhappythatIcouldntgotosleeplastnightImeagertoplayChinesechesswithyouatthecommunityclub，whichwherewe11enjoyourselves解析：3答案及解析：答案：DearLaura,Thanksforlettingustostayatyourseasidehouse.Now,youmighthaveheardfromyourneighborsaboutwhichwhathappenedonSaturdayevening.WhenIwasoutforawalk,myyoungerson,Tom,playedfootballbeforeyourhouse.Hemadesomanymuchangrilynoisethattheneighborsgotquite.Evenworse,angryTombrokeoneofthewindowwindowsofMr.Wilsonshouse.TomandIapologizedtoalltheneighborsfortheunhappyhappenings,repairbutwepromisedtohavethebrokenwindowsoon.Tomsaidthatrepairedandhewouldnotdosuchsillythingsanymore.Iamgladthatyourneighborsreallynicepeople.hadhaveforgivenus.TheyareYours,Betty答案：WhenIwas12,ImetMary.ShecametoChinawithherparents,whom解析：4答案及解析：antaughtEnglishinwhoauniversity.Wesoonbecamegoodfriends.ShewasfluentlyfluentinChinesewhileIhaddifficultywithmy6speakingcanEnglish.InordertohelpmewithmyEnglish,wespokeasmuchEnglishaswewhenspokencouldweweretogether.Beforelong,IcouldspeakEnglishwellbutandatthesametimeIalsomadegreatprogressesLuckilyinmywrittenEnglish.,ayearlater,shehadtoreturnbacktohercountryprogressUnluckilywithherparents.Andwehavebeenoutoftouchwitheachothereversince.HowImissher!解析：1.此处为定语从句,先行词为parents,所以要用who引导。故把whom改为who。2.University首字母为辅音所以应该用a,不用an。故把an改为a。3.此处表达地汉语很流利,所以用形容词fluent。故把fluently改为fluent。4.口语应该为spokenEnglish。故把speaking改为spoken。5.根据整句的时态可以知道应该用一般过去时。故把can改为could。6.此处表达我能说英语很好了,而且我的书面语也有了极大地提高。此处是并列关系,所以用and。故把but改为and。7.Progress不可数,不能用复数。故把progresses改为progress。8.根据语境可知一年后她要回国了,所以应该是不幸的是。故把Luckily改为Unluckily。9.Return就是回去,不能再与back连用。10.eversince通常与现在完成时连用。故在out前加been。5答案及解析：答案：Lastsummer,LiHuaandhisclassmatesmadeatriptoLondon.Onhistheirarrivalattheairport,itwasrainingheavywherecant.Sotheytookabustothehotel,wasnotfarfromtheairport.Thenextday,theywaittoheavilywhichcouldntseethewonderfulplaceplacesofinterestinLondon.TheyfirstwenttotheElizabethTower,asymboloftheUnitedKingdom.Theguidetoldthemthetowerhadbeenappearedinmanyfilms.ThentheyvisitvisitedtheBritishMuseum.Totheirgreatsurprise,theyfoundmanyChineseartworksdisplayedthere.FeltFeelingveryproud,theytookalotofphotosbutand解析：theyreallyhadgreatfun.7答案：Thetimewehaveisusual第一处：histheir【解析】根据文章开头的LiHuaandhisclassmates以及文章上下文的人你可知，此处代指李华和他的同学们，为复数概念。故将his改为their。第二处：heavyheavily【解析】rainheavily为固定短语，意为“雨下得很大”，此处用副词修饰动词。故将heavy改为heavily第三处:wherewhich【解析】分析句子结构可知，此处为非限制性定语从句，先行词为hotel,指物，关系词在从句中作主语，应用which引导。故将where改为which。第四处：cantcouldnt【解析】根据开头的时间状语Lastsummer及文中的时态可知，此处应该用一般过去时。故将cant改为couldnt。第五处：placeplaces【解析】根据常识可知，伦敦有很多的名胜古迹，且下文也提到了不止一处，故应用复数表示。placeofinterest意为名胜古迹”，为固定搭配，此处为其复数形式。故将place改为places。第六处：在United前加the【解析】theUnitedKingdom为专有名词，意为“英国”。故在United前加the。第七处：删除been【解析】appear为不及物动词，没有被动语态。故删除been。第八处：visitvisited【解析】根据文章开头的时间状语Lastsummer以及全文时态可知，此处应该用一般过去时。故将visit改为visited。第九处：FeltFeeling【解析】分析句子结构可知，此处考查非谓语动词作状语。主语they与feel之间为逻辑上的主动关系，故将Felt改为Feeling。第十处:butand【解析】根据句意可知，此处前后句表示并列或顺承关系，而非转折关系，故将but改为and。6答案及解析：Howevervaluablelimited.,evenanhourisofmuch.WeshouldmakeusuallyThereforevalueyourmustntfulluseofourmusttimetodousefulthings.Asstudents,westudyhardsoastoserveforoursocietyandournationinthefuture.Butitisapitythattherearealotofpeoplewhodidntdontknowtheimportanceoftime.Theyspendtheirvaluabletimesmokesmokinganddrinking.Theydontrealizethatwastingtimeisthesameaswastingapartoftheirlife.Remember,dontputoffwhichwhatyoucandotodayuntiltomorrow.解析：1.句意:我们拥有的时间通常是有限的。修饰形容词limited用副词,故把usual改为usually。82.上下文之间是因果关系,故把However改为Therefore。3.beofvalue有价值,故把valuable改为value。4.与前文的We保持人称一致,故把your改为our。5.我们必须要努力学习是常识,故把mustnt改为must。6.serve是及物动词,不需要介词,故#除for。7.Itisapitythat.是很可惜的。”,pity是可数名词,故在前面加a。8.本文使用现在时态,先行词是people,故把didnt改为dont。9.spendtimedoingsth.花时间做某事,故把smoke改为smoking。10.句意:记住,不要把今天能做的拖延到明天。此处表示“的东西或事情”,而且在宾语从句中作宾语,故把which改为what。7答案及解析：答案：MyvillagelieliespleasedinthemountainsinsouthwestChina.Althoughtheclimateandlandscapeare,pleasantitsdevelopment,undertheinfluenceofthatbuiltandplentyoftradecenterswerenewlyfoundpeopleleadatoughlifethere.Atthebeginningofthe21stcentury,thegovernmentbegantoattachgreatimportancetocondition,peopleslivingbegantoimprove.Alotofroadswerewhichconditionsthem,whichmadeconvenienttodevelopeconomy.Whatsfoundeditmore,agreatmanystudentswereadmittedintofamousuniversities.Inaword,thankthankstothegovernmentssupport,greatchangeshavebeentakenplaceinthepastfewyears.Myvillagetakes解析：8答案及解析：答案：uponanewlooknow.Travellingabroad,youshouldfollowthecustomsofthecountryyouwerearevisiting.Whenyouareinvited,thatandisgoodmannerstorefuseoraccepttheinvitationeitherbywritingbytelephoning.Ifyougotoaparty,ititorispolitetoarriveonthetime.Itisgoodmannerstoshakehandswithouryourhost.Youcantakeapresentifyoulike,9possibleanyabottleofwine,aboxofchocolatesorflowers.However,itisnotbadmannerstotakenothing.Itpossiblysomeisnotpolitetostaytoolateaftertheotherguestshavegone.Also,ithasissuggestedtowriteortelephoneadayortwolatelatertothankyourhost.解析：10
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