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书面表达,话题写作（九） 节日与传统篇,【话题点睛】针对的话题主要关于各国各地的风俗习惯、传统节日、风土人情。主要涉及描述节假日的活动安排、各国的饮食习惯、节日习俗、礼节礼仪等方面。,典例分析,某国外杂志向你约稿,请你以“When in China, do as the Chinese do!”为题,向西方读者介绍中国的饮食文化。以下是杂志社的稿件要求,请仔细阅读,完成写作。 Please try to answer at least 4 of these questions from our readers. Are meals in China the same as meals in the West? What time are lunch and dinner served in China? How to eat food? How to behave politely while eating with the old? How do we know that a meal is over in China? Is it a good idea to talk about food during a meal? Will there be just three courses or more in China?,要求 (1)文章应至少包括框中的四条信息,并适当发挥; (2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名; (3)词数: 80100。 _,【思路点拨】 1.要点提炼:主题是介绍中国的饮食文化,文章主要是从稿件要求中回答至少四个问题。 2.确定时态:一般现在时。 3.确定人称:第三人称或第一人称。 【写作架构】,【基础写作】 .写主干句(根据所给提示补全下列各句。) 1.中国的饮食习惯和风俗和西方的有许多不同点。(betweenand) There are many Chinese western eating habits and customs. 2.当然,在中国的餐桌上主要的不同就是筷子而不是刀和叉。(instead of) Of course, the difference on the Chinese dinner table is chopsticks knife and fork. 3.进行一些练习是个好主意。(Its a good idea to) Its good get some practice.,differences between,and,main,instead of,a,idea to,.句子升格(按括号中的要求完成句子。) 1.Here are some things. You may wish to know the things about eating together in China. (合并为含有由that引导的定语从句的复合句) 2.Chinese people like to eat rice, noodles, vegetables and meat. Western people prefer bread, milk and steak. (合并为由while连接的并列句) 3.Its a little difficult to use chopsticks. You havent tried before. (合并为含有由if引导的条件状语从句的复合句) 4.Chinese people like to talk about food. Its a good topic of conversation. (用so连接为一个句子),Here are some things that you may wish to know about eating together in China.,Chinese people like to eat rice, noodles, vegetables and meat while western people prefer bread, milk and steak.,Its a little difficult to use chopsticks if you havent tried before.,Chinese people like to talk about food, so its a good topic of conversation.,【连句成文】 When in China, do as the Chinese do! There are many differences between Chinese and western eating habits and customs. Here are some things that you may wish to know about eating together in China. When in China, people usually eat lunch or dinner much earlier than people in the West. There will be a lot of different dishes, not just three courses. Chinese people like to eat rice, noodles, vegetables and meat while western people prefer bread, milk and steak. Of course, the main difference on the Chinese dinner table is chopsticks instead of knife and fork. Its a little difficult to use chopsticks if you havent tried before. Its a good idea to get some practice. The preparation takes a long time and everything will look beautiful. The plates will be placed in the middle of the table, for everyone to share. Chinese people like to talk about food, so its a good topic of conversation. At the end of the meal, you will usually be served fruit. The golden rule is:When in China, do as the Chinese do!,拓展积累,【相关短语】 get ready for 为做准备; put things away整理东西; sweep the floor扫地; cook the meal做饭; a traditional dinner一顿传统的晚餐; lucky money红包; shake hands握手; nod heads点头; hug each other相互拥抱; afternoon tea下午茶; at the start of a meal在一顿饭开始时; have one day off有一天休息; lay the table摆餐具 【参考谚语】 1.When in Rome, do as the Romans do. 入乡随俗。 2.East or west, home is best. 金窝、银窝,不如自己的草窝。 3.You cant make something out of nothing. 巧妇难为无米之炊。,【亮点句型】 节日表达 1.春节在中国是最重要的节日。 Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. 2.它通常在二月到来,但有时它在一月到来。 It usually comes in February, but sometimes it comes in January. 3.在春节前一天的晚上,我们用一顿传统的家庭晚餐庆祝春节。 We celebrate the Spring Festival with a traditional family dinner on the evening before the Spring Festival.,餐桌礼仪表达 1.在一些西方国家,中饭通常在下午一点。 In some western countries, lunch is usually eaten at about 1pm. 2.在西班牙,在下午三点吃中午饭和晚上十点吃晚饭,这是惯例。 In Spain it is usual to have lunch at 3pm and dinner at 10pm! 3.汤用勺子来吃。 Soup is eaten with a spoon. 风俗习惯表达,风俗习惯表达 1.我们中国人在会见客人时通常握手和微笑。 We Chinese often shake hands and smile when we meet visitors. 2.在不同的国家人们做不同的事。 People do different things in different countries. 3.在印度人们把他们的手放在一起,并点点他们的头。 In India people put their hands together and nod their heads. 4.中国女孩子经常和她们的朋友手挽手走路。 Chinese girls often walk arm in arm with their friends.,实战演练,A2018苏州改编 假定你是苏华,你的加拿大笔友Ryan是一个中国迷,他想在中秋节期间来中国看看,请认真阅读他的邮件,并回复。 To: From: Subject: Chinese culture Dear Su Hua, How are you? I hope you are well. As a fan of Chinese culture, Im thinking about going to China during the Mid-Autumn Festival. Would you please tell me the following things? How do you usually celebrate the Mid-Autumn Festival? Which city in China is most worth visiting? Why? What is the best way to travel between cities in China? What gifts can I buy for my friends? Please write back and tell me everything. Best wishes! Yours, Ryan,注意 (1)词数:90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数; (2)回复须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺; (3)文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear Ryan, Im glad youre coming to China. China is a country with a long history and rich culture. _ _ I hope my reply is of some help to you. Looking forward to seeing you in China. Su Hua,One possible version: Dear Ryan, Im glad to hear youre coming to China. China is a country with a long history and rich culture. The Mid-Autumn Festival is in the middle of autumn. It is a time for the family to get together and celebrate harvest. At night, the whole family get together and eat all kinds of delicious mooncakes. The old often tell the story of Change while watching the big bright moon. Suzhou is a beautiful city with many Chinese gardens. Its well worth visiting. You can take the high-speed railway to Shanghai or many other cities. You can buy different kinds of mooncakes as gifts because the mooncakes are round like the moon. They carry peoples wishes to the families they love. I hope my reply is of some help to you. Looking forward to seeing you in China. Su Hua,B2018本溪改编 假如你是莉莉,你的英国笔友戴尔想在今年暑假进行一次中国之旅,但是他对中国不是很了解。请你根据下面的图示,给他回复一封电子邮件,至少选择三个方面给他的旅行提出建议,帮助他度过一个愉快的假期吧! 要求 (1)文中不得出现真实姓名与校名; (2)词数:80100,开头已给出,不计入总词数。,Dear Dale, Thanks for your last email. Im very happy to know you are coming to China for the summer vacation. Now let me tell you something about China. _ _,One possible version: Dear Dale, Thanks for your last email. Im very happy to know you are coming to China for the summer vacation. Now let me tell you something about China. First, there are many kinds of delicious foods and famous places in China. When you come, youd better taste them. You should take a camera with you and take photos of the famous places. Then, Chinese people are friendly. When they meet, they usually shake hands. So you can shake hands when you meet Chinese people. Next, we speak Chinese in China. So if you cant understand what we say, you can ask the guide for help. Finally, it is very convenient to travel in China. The traffic are always there waiting for you. But if you want to take a train or a plane, youd better book a ticket first. I hope you will have a good time in China. Yours, Lily,
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