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书面表达,话题写作（二） 物品介绍篇,【话题点睛】 (1)涉及的话题主要有:物品介绍、失物招领等。 (2)涉及的要点:学习用品、生活用品、发明物等在外形、颜色、功能、用途、操作步骤以及特点等方面的介绍。,典例分析,书包伴我们学习,伴我们成长!某英文报以“My schoolbag”为题,举办中学生征文活动。请根据下面的图表信息,写一篇短文。内容包括:书包的外形特征、用途和书包背后的课业问题以及课余你期望做的事情。 提示 (1)短文应包括图表中的全部信息,条理清楚,行文连贯,段落分明; (2)短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;,(3)词数:不少于80,开头已给出,不计入总词数。,My Schoolbag I have a schoolbag. _ _ _,【思路点拨】 1.要点提炼:主题是对书包进行描述,文章主要有4个要点: (1)书包的外形特征;(2)书包的用途;(3)书包背后的课业问题;(4)课余期望做的事情。 2.确定时态:一般现在时 3.确定人称:第三人称,【写作架构】,【基础写作】 .写主干句(根据所给提示补全下列各句。) 1.书包总是陪伴在我们的身边。(always) The schoolbag is by our side. 2.然而,它也给我们带来许多麻烦。(however) , it also us many problems. 3.不是享受精彩的周末,我们被迫用它上额外的课。(instead of) enjoying the wonderful , we are forced to have extra classes with it. 4.如果我们有更多的空余时间,我们能参加活动、做运动。(if) we have more spare time, we can activities and play sports.,always,However,brings,Instead of,weekend,If,take part in,5.此外,我们也能够培养爱好和兴趣。(as well) , we can develop hobbies and interest . 6.作为一名中学生,我希望我的书包能分享我的乐趣和快乐而不是变成一种负担。(rather than) a middle school student, I hope my schoolbag can my joy and happiness become a burden.,Besides,as well,As,share,rather than,.句子升格(按括号中的要求完成句子。) 1.I use it to carry the school things, such as books, pens and so on. (改为被动语态) 2.It looks like a luggage. The luggage always accompanies me in the world of knowledge. (合并为含有定语从句的复合句) 3.We have to do much homework. We cannot get enough sleep. (用sothat将两句合并为一个复合句),We have to do so much homework that we cannot get enough sleep.,It is used to carry the school things, such as books, pens and so on.,It looks like a luggage which/that always accompanies me in the world of knowledge.,【连句成文】 My Schoolbag I have a schoolbag. It is used to carry the school things, such as books, pens and so on. It looks like a luggage which always accompanies me in the world of knowledge. The schoolbag is always by our side. However, it also brings us many problems. We have to do so much homework that we cannot get enough sleep. Instead of enjoying the wonderful weekend we are forced to have extra classes with it. If we have more spare time, we can take part in activities and play sports. Besides, we can develop hobbies and interest as well. As a middle school student, I hope my schoolbag can share my joy and happiness rather than become a burden.,拓展积累,【相关短语】 look like看起来像; as small as和一样小；the most useful最有用的；for example比如；such as比如；with the help of在的帮助下；in order to为了；from then on从那以后；bring to sb.给某人带来；learn about了解 【参考谚语】 1.Something is learned every time a book is opened.开卷有益。 2.A letter from home is a priceless treasure.家书抵万金。 3.Its my cup of tea.那恰是我所喜欢的。 4.You cannot eat your cake and have it.鱼与熊掌,不可兼得。,【物品来源表达】 1.There is a washing machine in my home. 2.It was invented by an American tanner named John Loud in 1888. 3.My mother bought the scarf for me as a gift. 【物品用途表达】 1.It is easy to wash dirty clothes and other things. 2.The electronic schoolbag is like a computer. 3.Computers are useful, convenient and they have more functions. 4.For example, you can listen to music and watch movies on it. 5.The ballpoint pen is one of the most useful inventions. 6.The ballpoint pen really helps us write faster and makes our life easier.,【物品特点表达】 1.The electronic schoolbags are easy to carry and childrens backs and necks may not be hurt. 2.And the price of it is usually low. 3.The book is just like my best friend. 【物品外观表达】 1.Ballpoint pens are becoming smaller and lighter. 2.My handbag is red and small. 3.The special cup looks like a small football.,实战演练,A2018株洲 假定你是李华,你在美国的笔友Sam给你寄来一本英语词典,你给他回赠一件具有中国特色的礼物,并发送一封电子邮件,包括以下内容: (1)说明你觉得他的礼物怎么样; (2)介绍你回赠的礼物的中国特色; (3)邀请他来中国观看冬季奥运会(the Winter Olympic Games)。 注意 (1)词数:80左右; (2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; (3)文中不能出现可能泄漏考生真实身份的任何信息。 _,One possible version: Dear Sam, I am very glad to receive your letter. You sent me an English dictionary.It is new and special. I like it very much. I will send you a Chinese knot in return. A Chinese knot has some special symbols of the Chinese nation, like well-being, happiness and good fortune. In ancient times, people used it to record the event,but now it is used mainly for decorative purposes. The knot means love, marriage and reunion in Chinese. A knot is often used for jewelry as a gift exchange or pray for good luck and keeping off evil spirits. This form of handicrafts from generation to generation has become increasingly popular in China and around the world. Whats more, the twenty-fourth Winter Olympic Games will be held in Beijing, China in 2022.Welcome to China to take part in the Winter Olympic Games. Yours, Li Hua,B2018东营 在你的成长历程中,一定收到过礼物。有件礼物不一定贵重,但是在你看来却非常珍贵。 某英语杂志以“A Precious Present(一件珍贵的礼物)”为题举办征文活动,请写一篇短文,跟大家分享。 内容包括 (1)这件礼物是什么? (2)你为什么觉得它珍贵? (3)它背后有什么故事? 要求 (1)词数:100左右; (2)文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。 _,One possible version: A Precious Present I have received lots of presents so far. Among the presents, the most precious one is a book. Five years ago, I hurt my legs because of an accident. So I had to stay at home for a few months and I fell behind others. I didnt study anymore. My good friend Jack gave me a book written by Nick who was born without arms or legs. The book encouraged me not to be afraid of difficulties. Later, my study got better and better, but Jack moved to another city. Whenever I look at the book, I think of my friend Jack. The book not only shows the friendship between us, but also tells me not to give up easily. Ill keep it forever.,
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