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书面表达,话题写作（五） 日常生活篇,【话题点睛】日常生活涉及的话题很广,你可以谈谈日常生活中的一些收获、困惑和感受。,典例分析,要求 (1)参考表格内容,可适当发挥; (2)语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整; (3)文章不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等); (4)词数:不少于80词(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。 Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home. _ _,【思路点拨】 1.要点提炼:主题是介绍上周日一天的活动以及感受。写作内容可以从以下几方面展开: (1)上周日我独自在家照看五岁的妹妹Nana; (2)周日这天上午、中午和下午各做了什么事情; (3)发表你的感受。 2.确定时态:一般过去时 3.确定人称:第一人称 【写作架构】,【基础写作】 .写主干句(根据所给提示补全下列各句。) 1.早上我先给她讲了许多故事。(morning, tell) , I many funny first. 2.我也教她说一些简单的英语单词。(teach sb. to do sth.) I also a few simple English words. 3.我很开心她很享受这顿午餐。(glad) I was very the lunch. 4.然后我们休息了一会儿。(have) Then we . 5.下午我们一起玩游戏。(afternoon, play) , we together.,In the morning,told her,stories,taught her to speak,glad that she enjoyed,had a rest,In the afternoon,played games,.句子升格(按括号中的要求完成句子。) 1.I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home. (改为定语从句) 2.She said, “They are delicious.” (改为宾语从句) 3.We watched cartoons. My parents came back. (用until合并为时间状语从句) 4.I felt tired. I felt happy.(用but合并为一个句子) 5.We were happy last Sunday. (改为感叹句),I looked after Nana, my sister, who is 5 years old, at home.,She said (that) they were delicious.,We watched cartoons until my parents came back.,I felt tired but happy.,How happy we were last Sunday!,【连句成文】 Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after Nana, my younger sister, who is 5 years old, at home. In the morning, I told her many funny stories first. Then we sang and danced happily together. I also taught her to speak a few simple English words and she learned well. At noon, I cooked noodles with tomatoes and eggs. She said they were delicious. I was very glad that she enjoyed the lunch. Then we had a rest. In the afternoon, we played games together. After that, we watched cartoons until my parents came back. I felt tired but happy.,拓展积累,【日常活动及购物】 1.We are having a good time here. 2.I usually watch movies and play games with my friends. 3.They often go bike riding on weekends. 4.I often stay at home to read and relax. 5.I would like to buy a dress for my mum because she likes wearing a dress. 【体育锻炼】 1.I often exercise in the morning. It can make me healthy, strong and full of energy. 2.We should develop good habits and correct bad ones in our life. 3.Wed better not spend too much time online. 4.They can easily be short-sighted after playing computer games for a long time.,【饮食健康】 1.To keep a healthy lifestyle, we should get away from junk food. 2.Take more fruits and vegetables which can provide what we need. 3.In a word, a balanced diet can help make us stronger and healthier. 【日常生活谚语】 1.Time and tide wait for no man. 岁月不待人。 2.Never do things by halves. 做事不要半途而废。 3.All roads lead to Rome. 条条大路通罗马。 4.Nothing is difficult to the man who will try. 世上无难事,只要肯攀登。 5.Time flies. 时光易逝。,【生活感悟】 1.You can learn a lot from your experiences. 2.As the saying goes, failure is the mother of success. 3.Study plays an important role in their life. 4.Reading can make our life colourful. 5.You should study hard at knowledge, pay attention to social news and develop hobbies.,实战演练,.,实战演练,实战演练,One possible version: Hi, Rick, Im fine these days. There are many rules in my family too. For example, I have to get up at 6 oclock and go to bed before 10 oclock. I must go back home at 6:30 p.m. On school nights hanging out and surfing the Internet are not allowed. But I dont agree with some rules which are too strict. Because sometimes surfing the Internet is good for my study and I also need to spend more time with my friends. Best wishes! Han Lin,B 英语课上,你们开展了一次以“What can we do to make home a happier place?”为主题的讨论,同学们把自己的想法写在卡片上。请结合卡片信息,用英语写一篇短文,向校刊English Learning投稿。,注意 (1)短文必须包括卡片所给的信息,适当发挥,并谈谈自己的想法; (2)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息; (3)词数:80100。短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。 短文首句:In our English class, we had a discussion about what we can do to make home a happier place. _,One possible version: In our English class, we had a discussion about what we can do to make home a happier place. We shared different ideas. Some say its better to spend more time with family. The more we get together, the better we understand each other. Family members should share happiness and worries. For example, when they have problems, we should try to cheer them up. Others believe its important to give small presents to our family on their birthdays. I think, showing love for family is necessary. If we help with housework, they may feel warmer. Sometimes, even the smallest thing like walking with family makes them happier. Though were young, we can do much to make a happier home.,
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