（新）2014高考作文新题型

读写任务RequirementsFulfillmentHow to summarize the given passage?How to polish your expressions?How to summarize the given passage?How to polish your expressions?读写任务FulfillmentHow to summarize the given passage?How to polish your expressions?要求考生根据所给情景用英语写一要求考生根据所给情景用英语写一篇篇150个单词左右的短文。情景的形个单词左右的短文。情景的形式包括图表、图画、提纲、信函、式包括图表、图画、提纲、信函、短文等。考生应能：短文等。考生应能：（1）根据特定的语境准确使用英）根据特定的语境准确使用英语语法，选用恰当的词汇；语语法，选用恰当的词汇；（2）使用一定的句型、词汇，清）使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地传递信息和表达思想。楚、连贯地传递信息和表达思想。1以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2以约120个词谈谈你对平凡工作的想法，内容包括：(1)描述清洁工工作的艰辛；(2)假如没有清洁工，环境会变得如何？(3)你对平凡工作的看法。1作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。读写任务RequirementsFulfillment the given passage?How to polish your expressions?a short,clear description that gives the main facts or ideas about something,without giving all the details.the authors major on the topic A Many people who are lazy feel unpleasant with their jobs,which they dislike.For the reason that jobs are quite easy but boring,people couldnt be given enough satisfaction.They always hold the view that they should do something uncommon.(43 words)B Today,many people think they are not pleased with their jobs for the reason that the job is dull and boring.But they play an important role in our life and they are worth respecting.(36 words)misunderstanding;missing the key point!A People may show great interest in their jobs after they graduated from universities.However,as time flies,they will get tired of their jobs.Are these jobs not suitable for them?Are these jobs so boring?Maybe the answers are“No”.(2 p./46 words)B As is shown in the passage,people are bored with ordinary jobs because such jobs bring no satisfaction.However,ordinary jobs also matter a lot in our daily life.The people doing ordinary jobs are worthy to be respected.(40 words)misunderstanding;unnecessary detailed information;missing the key point.A To some people,they are not satisfied with their jobs because they think their jobs are too ordinary for them to spend time on.Yet ordinary jobs are also very important to our society and they deserve our respect.(40 words)B Doing ordinary jobs which are called“dull and boring”,more and more people become less interested.What makes them feel bored is the lack of satisfaction.(30words)missing the key pointA As is shown in the passage,many people dislike their jobs in the factory or even in the office.They think although their jobs are quite easy;they are very boring,because the jobs are too ordinary.(37 words)B Many people dislike their jobs in that they think their jobs are too boring to make something great.However,these ordinary jobs play an important role in making society a better place to live in and they should be respected.(40 words)not brief;missing the key point.A According to the report,we can achieve a information that many people not work hard.Most of them dislike their jobs in the factory or even in the office because these people simply dont enjoy the job they are doing.The report also tell us society cannot function a single day without the“dull and boring”jobs.(62 words)B What the text talks about is ordinary jobs.Many people dislike such jobs because they are too boring to bring people satisfaction.However,the“dull and boring”jobs have great value in our society.(37 words)too long;many spelling and grammar mistakes;copying;A Considered as“dull and boring”,ordinary work may make people unpleasant.What contributes mostly to the phenomenon is these peoples lack of satisfaction.However,no matter,it is vital that we should respect our jobs no matter how ordinary they are.(47 words)B As is shown in this article,many people dont like an ordinary job in their life.They always think their jobs cannot give them any real satisfaction.However,I think their attitude about jobs are very ridiculous.(40 words)missing the key point;giving personal views Though many people find their job boring,small and unsatisfying,ordinary jobs like cleaning streets are necessary and important in modern society.And these jobs are worth respecting.(28 words)1)Whats the topic and the main idea for each paragraph?2)Whats the authors attitude?3)Whats the authors purpose?(to inform or to persuade,etc.)Omit specific details,such as illustrations,descriptions,and detailed explanations;Eliminate all unnecessary words and repetitions;Eliminate all your personal ideas;Set a limit to the number of your words.读写任务RequirementsFulfillmentHow to summarize the given passage?your expressions?Some of your fantastic expressions:No matter how bad the weather is,they have to stick to their post,cleaning the streets.Tired and bored,the only thing they can do is clean the streets.Were there no cleaners,disgusting smell would surround us.Were there no cleaners,our streets would be in a mess.Chances are that the rivers will be polluted and full of rubbish.With a dirty environment,virus can spread easily.It is these simple jobs that provide us with a harmonious society.In conclusion,ordinary jobs play important roles in our society and deserve our respect.Its important for us to reflect on our attitude to ordinary jobs.Ordinary jobs can provide us with joy.Its our attitude to jobs that really counts.As far as I am concerned,boring as the jobs are,our society couldnt function well without them.Under no circumstances should we discriminate the people who take on ordinary jobs.Their jobs are holy.What we need to do is to respect them and their jobs.If we like our jobs,ordinary jobs can bring us happiness as well.Only in this manner can our world become increasingly beautiful!I hold the belief that each kind of job is of importance to make our society function well.We are supposed to respect those who do their jobs whole-heartedly.At the same time,we should enjoy our own jobs even if it is an ordinary one.When we are having lessons,he is cleaning the toilet alone.And when we are enjoying ourselves,he sat on the floor and smoking.Improved:Some people may look down upon the cleaners,but have they ever imagined how our city will be without cleaners?Improved:Just because of these ordinary workers,we can enjoy our lives.Improved:Every beautiful city may lose its good appearance and the environment become not fit people to live.Improved:If there were no cleaners,I cannot imagine what our environment will be.Improved:If there were no cleaners,our world would be filled with things abandoned,smell bad.Improved:,I believe that more and more people are content to do ordinary jobs and more and more harmonious the world will be.Improved:What we need to do is to respect all devote their efforts to ordinary jobs.Improved:(1)More thanks should we give them for their devotion to our earth.Improved:(1)(2)Using “with n.doing/done/adj.”Using “it is/was that”Using inversion like“under no circumstances,only+adverbial,”Using non-finite verb like“doing;done;to do”Using subjunctive mood,like“ifdid/were,would/could”Using fixed phrases like“stick to;reflect on;providewith;chances are that”Using complex sentences,including noun clause,attributive clause and adverbial clause.Though many people find their jobs boring,small and unsatisfying,ordinary jobs like cleaning streets are necessary and important in modern society.And these jobs are worth respecting.As the author mentioned in the passage,cleaning the streets is a kind of ordinary job.It is,to be honest,pretty hard.To begin with,the cleaners have to start the cleaning early in the morning,even before the sunrise,to bring up a clean surrounding for the local citizens.Besides,the rubbishes and wastes they have to deal with are usually of unpleasant smells.Last but not least,seldom do people show respects to them and value their hard work.Please imagine a world without cleaners.What would it be?It would be a place crowded with rubbishes and wastes.It would be a place filled with unpleasant smells.And it would be a place occupied by mice and bugs.How terrible it would be!Taking all the above into consideration,I am in favor of the idea that ordinary jobs play important parts in our society.And there is no denying that they should be equally respected.Only in this way can our society develop soundly,continuously and harmoniously.Faced with a new test-writing after reading,we talked about how to write a summary and how to better our expressions.To have a good summary,we should catch the key points and write briefly.To better our expressions,we are expected to use advanced patters,like inversion,emphasis,complex sentences,non-finite verb,unreal conditional and so on.This pasage mainly talks about the importance of character development of children by giving an example of an old lady who gives up the seat offered by a gentleman to her grandson.Its common in our country that parents or grandparents often spoil the kids.For example,parents or grandparents will buy shoes of famous brands to satisfy their needs,no matter how expensive they are.Whats worse,they provide kids with whatever they want and ask them to do nothing in return.When these spoiled children grow up,many of them may greatly disappoint their parents.Some of them even commit crimes.If it happens,who is to blame?I think parents or grandparents are not supposed to spoil kids.Kids should go through hardships or do what they can to help parents or other people.Only by doing so can they be independent and responsible.