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2010-2013年连续四年广东高考英语试题基础写作重点句式2010年高考基础写作题以下是一则关于中国政府决定禁烟的报道的主要内容。 内容：公共场所禁烟 实施时间： 2011年1月1日起 实施范围：全国 目标：所有室内公共场所无烟 措施：张贴禁烟标志 相关数据： (1)吸烟人数：约3.5亿 (2)分布：男性75；女性25 (3)受二手烟影响人数：约5.4亿 (4)因二手烟死亡人数：超过10万年 二手烟：second-hand smoke写作内容请根据以上内容给学校英语墙报写一篇通讯，内容包括：1禁烟决定的内容及实施的时间和范围； 2目标和措施；3相关数据。 写作要求 只能用5个句子表达全部内容。评分标准 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【写作点评】 思路点拨2010年广东省高考英语的基础写作为应用文中的通讯报道。试题详细地给出了内容要点，为控制性写作。这次的写作主题是“禁烟通告”，并且要求考生阐述与之相关的信息。在文章结构方面，一定要紧扣考题已给出的写作提示：第一和第二点分别用一个句子来阐述，后面的相关数据可以分成三个句子来写。要写好此文，考生需要注意三点：一是要认真审题，确定体裁、人称和时态等；二是要运用适当的句型，合理地组织文字；三是切忌照译，要适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。1时态的把握一定要准确，文章前半部分是一则2011年生效的通告，应该采用将来时态，而后半部分是对于现实状况的描述，应该使用一般现在时。2在词汇方面，这篇文章当中的数字翻译是一个难点：在英文中，数字的翻译以千（thousand），百万（million）为单位，因此，3.5亿，5.4亿，10万这些数字转换成相应的英文表达：350 million，540 million，100 thousand。此外，“smoke”是本文的中心词，它既有名词的用法，表示烟，比如说：所有室内公共场所无烟应该翻译成：There will not be smoke indoor public places；同时，“smoke”又有动词的用法，表示抽烟，比如“禁烟”的翻译“forbid smoking”就用到了动词的非谓语形式。因此，考生在写相关概念的时候一定要分清词性，避免出错。3在句型方面，为了用五个句子表达全部内容，复合句的使用依然是考查的重点，比如说相关数据中的人数和分布这两个点联系紧密，可以用定语从句合并为一个句子：It is reported that 350 million people smoke, among which 75% are men while 25% are women. 此外，这篇文章是一则通告的描述，应该写得正式而客观，因此在语态的选择方面，善用被动语态的策略在这篇文章中再合适不过了，比如“公共场所禁烟”用被动语态表达为“Smoking will be forbidden in public places.”则比考生惯用的主动句型“We will forbid smoking in public places.”更为恰当。同样，张贴禁烟标志也可以运用被动语态翻译成：“No Smoking”signs will be put up.如果考生能在文中这几个地方使用被动，文章一定会更加简洁、正式和得体。【范文展示】The Chinese government has decided to ban smoking in public places across the country. /This decision, which aims to make all indoor public places smoke-free, will come into effect from the first of January, 2011. /To this end, no-smoking signs will be put up in all indoor public places. /Currently China has about 350 million smokers, among whom 75 percent are men and 25 percent are women. /Around 540 million people are influenced by second-hand smoke, which causes 100,000 deaths per year. 2011高考英语作文真题（广东卷） 以下是一本图书的基本信息及相关报道。基本信息：（1）书名：Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother（2）作者：Amy Chua，美籍华人，耶鲁大学教授（3）出版时间：2010年（4）内容：作者用中国传统方式教育两个女儿的故事（5）效应：引发了中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论相关报道：（1）中文版：2011年初开始在中国销售（2）意外反应：多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做法（3）最新消息：17岁的大女儿已被哈佛和耶鲁录取*耶鲁：Yale；*哈佛：HarwardVersion 1A book entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother by Amy Chua was published in 2010. It tells how the mother, a Chinese American and professor at Yale University, educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way. Its publication has started a debate as to which way of parenting is superior, the traditional way or the American way. It is reported that the Chinese version of the book began to sell in China early 2011. Unexpectedly, the majority of mothers in China disagree with the author though her 17-year-old elder daughter was lately reported to have got offers from both Harvard and Yale.2012高考英语作文真题（广东卷） 你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。【写作内容】请根据以下信息，介绍一位传奇人物姓 名：Allan Stewart国 籍：澳大利亚出生日期：1915年3月7日世界纪录：2006年获硕士学位时年龄最大学习态度：挑战自我，永远为时不晚。第一个学位：1936年获得 第二个学位：医学博士第三个学位：80多岁时决定学习法律，2006年获得硕士学位。第四个学位：2012年通过网络学习获得，善于合理安排学习时间，受到老师表扬。*硕士学位：masters degree; *博士：doctor参考范文：Allan Stewart, who is from Australia, was born on March 7th. He enjoys challenging himself and thinks that it is never too late to learn, and as a result, he set a world record of receiving a masters degree in the oldest age in 2006. In 1936, he got his first degree andlater he received a doctors degree in medicine. In his eighties, he decided to study law and fortunately he got a masters degree in 2006. In 2012 he got another degree through learning on the Internet, because he is good at arranging his time properly andhe is praised by his teachers.2013年高考英语书面表达真题及范文：广东卷你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇时事快讯。【写作内容】请根据以下信息,写一篇关于移民火星的快讯。志愿者的选拔: 到2015年,在全球选出约30名去火星*的志愿者。志愿者的条件:至少18岁; 做好不回地球的准备; 愿与他人保持良好的关系。专家观点: 火星生活条件太艰苦; 面临严寒气候、孤独和恐惧。志愿者观点: 厌倦地球生活,想体验火星生活; 如果成功, 就是人类英雄。*火星：the Mars参考范文：About thirty volunteers to the Mars will have been selected throughout the world by 2015. The candidates are expected to be at least 18 years old and make preparations for the fact that they cant return to the earth. Moreover, the candidates should be willing to keep good relations with others. Experts believe that the living conditions on the Mars would be too tough and the volunteers would be faced with bitterly cold climate, loneliness and fear. However, some volunteers claim that they have been tired of the life on the earth and they want to experience the life on the Mars, adding that they will be the heroes of mankind if they succeed.附：【基础写作评分标准】基础写作主要考查考生语言结构的应用能力：能够用正确、规范的语言表达特定的内容。本题目要求考生根据所提供的信息，使用个句子表达写作内容所提供的全部内容。评分时，按语言、内容和连贯三项标准分别给分。语言语言7-8分具有很好的的语言运用能力；语法和句子结构准确性高，词汇方面使用较好，只有少许错误。5-6分具有较好的语言运用能力；语法和句子结构准确性较好，有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。3-4分语言运用能力一般；语法和句子结构基本准确，语法结构或词汇方面的错误不影响理解。1-2分语言运用能力较差；语法和句子结构基本不够准确，语法结构或词汇方面的错误较多，而且影响了对句子意义的理解。0分语言运用能力很差；语法、句子结构、词汇错误很多，句子意义无法理解。备注每多或少一个句子，扣一分。内容分包括了所有信息内容。分包括了大部分信息内容。分包括了基本信息内容。分包括了少部分信息内容。分包括了少许信息内容。分没有包括所提供的信息内容。连贯分内容连贯，而且结构紧凑。1.5分内容连贯性比较好，而且结构比较紧凑。分内容连贯性较差，而且结构不够紧凑。分内容缺乏连贯性，而且结构松散。备注文不对题，给分。广东高考英语试题基础写作重点句式1. 活动安排相关句式1. Its a pity that you have to go back soon, so a farewell party for you will be held in Room 302 in the Sun Club at 6:00 pm this Saturday evening. 你很快就要回去，所以我们将于本周六晚上六点在阳光俱乐部302房举行欢送会。2. If you are interested in, please take part in the writing contest held by 如果你对感兴趣，请参加比赛。3. If you are interested, please sign up at the office before 5:00 pm next Thursday so that we will make necessary arrangements. 如果你有兴趣，请在下周四下午五点前到办公室报名，以便我们作必要的安排。4. Those who would like to attend it can go to and sign your names there. 凡是愿意参加的人可以去那里报名。2. 经历感受1. Last Monday, we were having our Chinese class when the teacher suddenly slipped and fell.我们正在上语文课，老师突然滑倒了。2. Hardly had he finished his speech when the audience started cheering. 他一演讲完观众就欢呼起来。3. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. 一到达，我们就开始工作。4. After that we had a party. Some of us sang; others danced or told stories in turn. 在那之后，我们举行了聚会。有的人唱歌，有的人跳舞或轮流讲故事。5. Moved by his word, I praised him for his deeds. 我被他的话感动了，我赞扬了他的行为6. What attracted us most was that the water there was so clear. 最吸引我们的是那儿的水是如此的清澈。7. Ill never forget the day when we stayed on the farm. 我永远也不会忘记我们在农场的那一天。During the visit, we were excited to find that farmers are living a better life.参观期间，我们发现农民改善了生活，感到非常兴奋.3学习生活1. I almost buried myself in books every day, going over my lessons and doing a lot of exercises.我几乎每天都埋头读书，复习功课和做练习题 2. I will appreciate it if you give me a hand to solve the problems. 如果你能帮忙解决这个问题，我将非常感激。3. I have some trouble in collecting the relevant materials.我在搜集相关资料上有困难。4 理由建议1 The reason why Im late is that I missed the bus. 我迟到的原因是没赶上公共汽车2 In my opinion, there are three reasons for this .在我看来，有三个原因。3 The reasons for this are as follows. 其理由如下。4 Here I have some suggestions. 这里我有几条建议。5 It would be better if you could share more of the housework, such as cleaning, washing, and cooking. 如果你能分担更多的家务，如扫地，洗衣，做饭，那就更好了。For one thing, and for another (thing) 一来二来 First of all, Secondly, Finally, 第一，；其次，；最后，First of all/ first/ To begin with Second (ly) / Then/ Besides/ In addition/ Whats more finally/ Lastly/ Last but not least首先，其次/然后/还有/此外最后/最后但同等重要的是5 说明重要1. think it is very important for parents to cultivate their childrens independence.我认为父母培养孩子的独立性很重要。2. More and more people begin to attach great importance to relationship.越来越多的人开始非常重视人际关系了。3. Protecting water is of great importance to the life in the future. 保护水资源对未来生活非常重要。4. The Internet is playing a more and more important role in our daily life.英特网在我们日常生活中正起着越来越重要的作用。6 现象分析1. A latest survey shows that the health of Chinese youngsters has greatly declined.最近的调查表明，中国青少年的健康大大下降了。2. In fact, the morning meal plays an important part because it can provide 30 percent of the whole days energy.实际上，早餐起着重要的作用，因为它提供了整个身体能量的30%。3. Owing to lack of money, most migrant schools have no modern equipment, no playground, no libraries, and even not enough teachers. 由于缺钱，大多数农民工子弟学校没有现代设备，没有操场，没有图书馆，甚至没有足够的师资。4. In order to improve the situation, our government should take measures to help them.为了改善这种情况，我们政府应当采取措施帮助他们。7. 正反观点1. Recently we have had a discussion about whether parents should accompany their children at school. 最近我们讨论了父母是否该在学校陪读。2. Nearly 70% of us disagree because they think it makes them fall into the habit of dependence. 我们中有将近70%的人不赞同，因为他们认为这会使他们养成依赖性。3. While about 30% of my classmates think it necessary for our parents to accompany us. 而我的同学中大约30%的人认为父母有必要陪读。4. My opinion is that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. 我的意见是学生应该把学习、健康和安全放在其他事情之前。8. 调查报告1. Last week, we did a survey among 2,600 students on “Who Is Your Idol”. 上周，我们就“谁是你的偶像”在2600人中进行了调查。2. According to the survey, about half of the students will go to their classmates or friends when in trouble. 根据调查结果，大约一半的学生有困难的时候会去找他们的同学或朋友。3. Different persons may have different chioces on how to spend pocket money. 关于怎样用零花钱，不同的人有不同的选择。4. As is shown in the survey, drunk driving may result in serious accidents. 正如调查所显示的那样，酒后驾驶会导致严重事故。9. 人物简介1. When he was a boy, he showed a great interest in maths. 他小的时候就对数学非常感兴趣。2. Born in a small town in 1812, Charles Dickens was able to attend school for only two years owing to his poor family. 查尔斯狄更斯于1812年出生在一个小镇，由于家里穷，只上了两年的学。3. Wang Ping, an 18-year-old girl from Class 3, Senior 3, loves reading books. 王萍，来自高三三班的一个十八岁女孩，热爱读书。4. She devoted herself to scientific research and made great contributions to her country. 她为科研献出了一切，对国家做出了巨大贡献。5. She was awarded the Nobel Prize in Chemistry for her scientific achievement. 他因在化学方面的科研成就被授予诺贝尔化学奖。强化训练1：在2010年全国两会上有人提出要建立均等教育基本公共服务体系，这其中城乡教育差别大是主要瓶颈。请根据下面的信息提示写一篇英语短文，然后投稿到China Daily报社。写作内容 1.主要差别：城市学校师资好，设备一流，农村学校师资差，设备差2.解决措施：提高社会关注度，政府增加对农村学校的投入，鼓励优秀教师到贫困地区任教 写作要求 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。 Equal Education Opportunities for All Children_参考范文：As we know, there is a wide gap between the city and the countryside in education which has been a serious problem we are facing at the present time. Urban schools have good teachers, first-class teaching equipment and better enrollment while the rural ones are poorly equipped, some even having no desks or chairs for children. In order to help the children in poor areas, the government must pay more attention to it by maintaining the equal supply of educational resources and providing more money for schools in rural areas. What s more, good teachers should be encouraged to teach in the schools in poor regions. Only in this way can all children enjoy the equal education opportunities whether they live in the city or in the countryside.强化训练2： 随着科技的进步，多媒体已走进很多学校的课堂。课间休息时，有些学校利用它来播放音乐。假如昨天你班就”课间是否要播放音乐”展开了讨论。请你根据以下信息用英语写一篇短文，陈述讨论结果。写作内容 1讨论的时间和讨论的问题；2学生们的观点： 大多数学生认为：活跃气氛，放松，带来快乐，学习效率高。部分学生认为：时间短，没效果；课间太吵，需要安静。3.达成的共识：最好播放柔和并适合于中学生的音乐。要求用5个句子表达全部内容。_参考范文： Yesterday we had a discussion about whether music should be played during the class break or not. Towards this, most of the students think that music should be played for it can produce a better efficiency and greater relaxation as well as a lively and happy atmosphere. However, some believe they cant get the expected effect from playing music, for the class break time is short. What is needed most during the class break is peace rather than the noise produced by music. After a heated discussion, we finally reached an agreement that it s better to play soft music, which is suitable for our middle school students as well.
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