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第五次讲座（写作分析）1、节假日活动 2、计划与安排3、个人情感与观点（描述和说明自身的感受及观点）4、地点介绍 5、校园生活6、校外生活 7、环保与健康8、人物介绍 9、其他话题1、节假日活动 根据中文大意和英语提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的短文。所给英文提示词语供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 假设你是北京6中的初三学生李辉，你收到了来自美国中学生Tom的一封电子邮件，在信中他希望成为你的笔友，并要求你介绍一下中国人过春节（the Spring Festival）的一些信息。请你给他回一封信，介绍中国人过春节的一些信息及人们的感受。信的开头和结尾部分已经给出。 参考词汇：happy to be, pen pal, the most important festival, late January or early February, before the Festival, on the Eve of the Festival, dinner, food, watch, play, stay up, say, meet, trip, enjoy 范文Dear Tom, Glad to receive your letter. Im very happy to be your pen pal. Im a student of Beijing No.6 Middle School. Im now in Grade Three. Let me tell you something about the Spring Festival in China.The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. It usually comes in the late January or early February. It is on the first day of the Chinese New Year. People usually have a seven-day off. Before the Festival, people are busy shopping and cleaning their houses. On the Eve of the Festival, family members will get together and have a big dinner. The most popular foods are dumplings and fish. After dinner, they usually play cards or watch TV until midnight. Then they go out to see set off fireworks. Some people go to bed then, and others will still stay up for fun until the next morning. People will say “Happy New Year” or “Good luck” to each other during the festival. Most people will meet their relatives and friends,others will take trips to some places of interest. All the people enjoy themselves during the Festival.Could you tell me something about Christmas in America? Yours, Li Hui 暑假即将到来，阳光中学的学生正计划外出旅游，好好休息一下。请结合有关旅游去向的调查结果和中文提示，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。注意要点完整、语法正确、上下文连贯，可适当发挥。首句已给出（不计入总词数）。提示：到大城市可参观博物馆并游览名胜；到小城市可享受美食；到农村可呼吸新鲜空气（fresh air）并领略大自然的美丽（beauty）。 The summer holidays are coming. _ 优秀范文：The summer holiday are coming. Students in Yangguang Middle School did a survey about places where they would like to go on vacation. Here is the result.Most students would like to go to big cities. On the one hand, its convenient to travel to most places by subway or bus. On the other hand, they can visit beautiful places like museums or enjoy fantastic sights.But some of them prefer to go to small cities which are famous for delicious food. Thats why they decide to spend holidays there. Only one sixth of the students like going to the countryside to enjoy the beautiful nature. They believe the longer they stay in the countryside, the happier they will be.Everyone has his or her own thoughts on this subject. In my opinion, where to go for holidays depends on what he or she cares about. 良好范文：The summer holiday are coming. Yangguang Middle School students are planning to go somewhere relaxing. Here is the survey result.According to the survey, one half of the students would like to go to big cities, because they can visit some museums, historical sites and places of great interest. Some of them would like to go to the countryside. The reason is that they can enjoy the beautiful views and breathe the fresh air there. Only a few of them wants to visit small cities. They think it will be a good chance to try the local food.I prefer to go to the countryside rather than visit big cities or small cities. I enjoy the beauty of nature. In my opinion, the most important thing is to have a great time no matter where to go. 2、计划与安排Be going to do sth. / will do sth. Im planning to do sth. / I plan to do sth. I want to sth. / I would like to do sth. I will be + adj / It will be + adj I can do / I could do / I decide to do / I hope to do / I hope that+ 句子 （练习篇一）再过几个月初中生活就要结束了,同学们:初中最后的暑假你是怎么安排？请为你们班的英语园地”我们的假期生活”栏目写一篇短文.短文包括以下内容: 简述你去年是怎样渡过暑假的 再具体说说你今年暑假打算怎么度过并说明原因. 提示词语: visit , volunteer , be going to do , study harder. 注意: 1.字数不少于60, 2. 开头已给出,不计入总字数.Last year I had a wonderful summer vacation. I _ （练习篇一范文） Last year I had a wonderful summer vacation. I traveled with my parents to visit grandparents. We played games together and spent a lot of time talking about my schoolwork. They were proud of me and our time together was very special. However, Im going to do something different this summer vacation. First of all, I will study harder than before because I want to make great progress in all subjects next term, especially in English. I am weak in English listening. Ill listen to the English radio program every day to improve my listening skills. Besides, Id like to volunteer some time to visit the sick kids in the local hospital to cheer them up. Im good at singing and dancing so I can put this love to good use by playing with them. Im sure Ill have a busy but colorful summer vacation.3、个人情感与观点俗话说：“国有国法， 家有家规。”为了使子女身心健康，顺利成长， 使家庭成员之间的关系融洽,更和谐,.每个家庭都会有这样或那样的家庭规矩,比如:必须按时回家,不准玩电子游戏等。请你结合家庭的实际情况，根据下面的提示和要求，以“My Family Rules” 为题，写一篇短文 提示：1家里有哪些家规; 2对家规的感受 3对父母的建议 优秀范文： All my families work on developing routines and habits. Here are 3 important rules for us. The first is the dinner time. We must have dinner together, which brings us a sense of belonging and promotes communication. the second is the night time routine. I do my homework while my parents have a rest. But 10：30pm is bath time, and it is light out by 11:00pm.The third is about doing chores, which is a family affair. I have been learning responsibilities to help parents .My contribution is really a happy thing to my growth. In my point of view, family rules, not only for kids, but also for parents, are necessary and useful. They help make a family more harmonious and peaceful. However, I hope children could be allowed to express opinions and to be heard more often. In short, setting good family rules will benefit every family. 良好范文： My Family Rules To make every family member form good habits, each family has its own rules .There are some in my family. For example, we cant quarrel with other or watch TV or read newspapers while having a meal .Also, we must wash hands after coming back home or before mealtime. Whats more, were not allowed to play computers or watch TV3hours in order to protect our eyes. Nobody can tell a lie and everyone must be polite. Sometimes family rules seem strict, but I know they are quite good and help make everyone healthy, polite and gentle. But I suggest we should have a family meeting each month to talk about how to sole some problems. I hope my family will be more peaceful. 练习篇二） 假如你是李华，你的笔友Peter正在美国的一所学校学习汉语，给你寄来一封信。请根据其内容给予回信。针对他的问题，谈谈你的看法，同时提出你的建议，并表达你乐意帮助的愿望。Dear Li Hua, How are you getting on ? Thanks for telling me something about your life. Im glad youre doing well in your English study. As you know, I like China very much. So I begin to learn Chinese now. But I really need your help. Im really bad at that. Please help! Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Peter Dear Peter,_ （练习篇二范文）Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. I dont think learning Chinese is so difficult. Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese. Try and write me in Chinese next time. I will be ready for help. Best wishes！ yours Li Hua （描述和说明自身的感受及观点） 1 在描述一定对象时,要条理清楚,层次分明.可选用下列表示先后顺序的连接词. 首先: first , firstly, first of all, 其次：Second, secondly, then, next. 再者：Third, thirdly, whats more, further more, moreover, besides. 最后： Finally, lastly, last but not least.2陈述个人观点，表示“ 我认为”, “ 在我看来”可用： I think / I guess /I bet In my opinion In my piont of view In my eyes, 3表示“总之，总而言之”的总结性陈述时，可用： In short, all in all, in a word, in conclusion, to sum up,4描述规则时应避免重复使用同样的词句，可参考： Should / can / could do sth. Shouldnt / cant / mustnt do sth. Be supposed to do sth. Be allowed to do sth Sth. must/mustnt be done 5. 提建议的句型可用： You can /could/ should/ cant/ shouldnt. Why not do? = Why dont you do ? Youre supposed to do If I were you, I would do. I suggest that Youd better do I advise sb. to do sth. 5、校内生活 1. My favorite subject is English.2. More than three quarters of the information on the Internet is in English.3. It is used by travelers and business people all over the world.4. China has joined the WTO and the Olympic Games will be held in China. English becomes more and more useful.5. So English is very important and I like English very much.6. We have a lot of fun in the English class.7. Our English teacher often makes us happy in the English class.8. I hope I can go abroad one day, and then I can speak to foreigners in English.9. I like English and try my best to learn it. 常见句型:开头How time flies! In the past three years, I have gained a lot both in study and in daily life.My school life was so colourful and enjoyable. I treasure this busy but happy days. My school was full of happiness and fun. Its most precious time in my life.中间In the past, I was / I had / I spent in doing sth.Right now, I am / I have / I love doing sth. / I also spend In the future, I want to be / I am planning I understood knowledge is power. I put more effort into my study.Some teachers inspired me so much.I cherish my classmates, who understood and encouraged me.Playing sports with my friends made me healthier and stronger.I have made up my mind to improve my grades by working hard.I am grateful to the teachers for their help. They not only teach us how to study but also teach us how to be a useful person. 结尾I am sure I can get good grades in the senior high entrance examinations.All I have done is not eough, I still need to make more progress.I am sure where there is a will ,there is a way. I can do it better.In the future, I ll make full use of my time to study better and improve myself in more ways. All in all, studying in our school is a great experirence for me, Ill always remember my mother school after graduation.6、校外生活 1、Housework2、An unforgettable experience3、Helping others is great4、Being a volunteer is great5、Outdoor activities 开头句I am going to tell you a story about One day ,I I have an unforgettable experience. Id like to share with you.I still remember once there is something unforgettable that happened to us in our life. One day 结尾句I cant forget that day, I know that my parents really love me.From then on, I didnt any more. I started toIts one of the most interesting things that I have ever had. Ill never forget it.I realize that we have rarely expressed our gratitude to those around us in our daily life. However, in fact, they are the ones who care about us most. I hope more people could make full use of every chance to say “thank you” to them.优秀范文：With some housework to do, every family member is assigned some task to finish every day. For me, instead of a bothersome matter, doing housework for my family is actually what adds some spice to my life. After getting up every morning, I constantly help my mum prepare for breakfast, from which I obtain some valuable skills in cooking. Also, thanks to the housework, I have some good opportunities to spend time talking and laughing with my mum, so that I can refresh my mind in fast paced life and get ready to face whatever comes in the day with enthusiasm. Its truly meaningful and important for me!In a word, even if doing housework is just alittle deed, it contributes to making me become an allround student by helping me know more about life.As my summer vacation is coming, I cant wait to do everything within my capability for my family. 良好范文：Every family is filled with different kinds of housework. Mom cleans the floor every other day , and does the laundry and all the other housework on weekends. Sometimes I help in the kitchen, doing some cutting , cooking or washing.For me, housework is tiring as well as boring, so it must be much harder for the parents coming home after a whole days busy work. Therefore, I think its time for me to learn to do more things for our family. Im planning to clean the plates after each meal and water the flowers in summer vacation. I hope Ill make my parents feel proud of me. 标准范文Every family has lots of housework. Everyone should learn to do some of it .I often help my parents do housework such as washing clothes, cleaning the room and watering flowers. I think Ive learned how to take good care of myself and my family by doing housework. Sometimes cleaning all the windows is an enjoyable experience. I really feel proud of myself. And doing housework is also a kind of exercise.The summer holiday is coming. Im going to learn how to cook some dishes. My parents will be happy to enjoy them. 7、环保与健康环保类词组Shouldsave water use the waste water to water the plantsturn off the water when we use the shampoo / take the showerturn off the tap should recycle / reuse booksrecycle / reuse paperuse both sides of the papertake public transportationpick up rubbish and throw it into the dustbinstart to collect waste things, such as battery, plastic bags and so on should1. protect our earth 2. save our earth 3. look after the earth take care of the environment4. keep our environment clean 5. recycle, reduce and reuse things DontDont litter everywhere.Dont throw away the rubbish anywhere.Dont use plastic bags. 环保基本句型1. Its our duty to protect our environment(savewater).2. Its very important to take care of our environment.3. We should not throw litter onto the ground.4. We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the trees.5. We should plant more flowers and trees.6. We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin.环保提高句型1.Asweknow, waterisveryimportanttoman.2. Wecantlivewithoutwater.3. Theamountofwaterwhichissuitabletodrinkislessandless.4. Manyriversandlakesareseriouslypolluted, Somethingmustbedonetostopthepollution.5. If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.6. It is crucial to make people be aware of the importance of protecting our environment.7. We should do whatever we can for the citizens and the future generations, for the ecosystem and for the earth.8. If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.9. Treesareveryhelpfulandimportantforus.10. Weshouldplantmoreandmoretreesinordertolivebetterandmuchhealthierinthefuture.Itseveryonesdutytoloveandprotecttheenvironment.8、人物介绍 人物介绍的基本句型:1、He/She is_ with thick glasses. with long curly/straight hair.2、He/She is a loving boy with an interest in music. talkative singing. humorous dancing. telling stories a easy-going girl/boy with various/all kinds of hobbies. friendly warm-hearted kind 补充：open-minded, diligent, patient, knowledgeable, cooperative, understanding, attractive 3、be good at doing sth. , be interested in , enjoy love doing sth. , be fond of doing sth. , which may help sb. do sth. be keen on doing sth. , which may make sb. adj. do well in doing sth. , take interest in doing sth. , be crazy about sth. , 4、be tired of sth./ doing sth. lose interest in sth. be poor at be weak in 5、be friendly/kind to sb. be strict with sb. help sb. with sth. spend in doing sth. encourage sb. to do sth. tell sb. not to give up cheer up the sick kids / cheer her(him/them) up tell sb. how to face the difficulties overcome the difficulties get out of the trouble deal with any problems teach sb. how to be a good student / be a good person(man) 6、with ones help with ones endless patience and great help 7、I was deeply moved by what she did / what she said. My English has greatly been improved. I have made much progress in English.8、would like to do sth. want to do sth. be willing to do sth. be eager to do sth.9、when I was in trouble, sb. helped to do when I met some problems, sb. encouraged to do No matter how difficult the problem is/was, sb. always takes(took) good care of sb. sb. always teaches(taught) sb. how to be strong 10、I must thank sb. for ones help for all she/he has done I am very thankful for I am proud of being his student/ kid. I am so lucky to be one of his student/ kid. He/She will be proud of me 典型例句1. His name is Jack.2. He was born in London in 1982.3. He is 1.68 meters tall and weighs 52 kilos.4. He is 20 years old.5. He comes from England.6. He is a good ping-pong player.7. He is medium build.8. He has short hair.9. He is outgoing. Every one likes to talk with him. He gets on well with us.10. He teaches English very well.11. He works very hard. He works in No.5 Middle School.12. He loves watching football games after work.13. He often helps me with my English.14. At the age of six, he began to play table tennis. 9、其他话题 1、新生事物评价典型例句1.Computer is becoming more and more important2.we should make good use of it.3.It maybe get in the way of our study.4.We can do lots of things with it5. It makes our life more easy6. Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students 例文网上购物Doing Shopping OnlineWith the help of the Internet, shopping is not a difficult job. Just click your mouse to choose the article you like, and the shopping is finished. You neednt step out of the room.It seems easy and quick. But there
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