大学英语综合教程 Text One writing for myself.ppt

UnitOne TextOneWritingformyself RequirementsforThisCourse Self studyPreview Post reading QuestionsMakeclearthedifferencesbetweenEnglishstudyinmiddleschoolanduniversityFormyourownmethodofEnglishstudyHaveaclearaimofEnglishstudyClasspresenceandhomeworkwillbemarkedinyourfinalexamination ArrangementforThisCourse IntensivereadingTextAisforclassstudyExtensivereadingTextBisforhomereading post readingFast readingstudyAfter classreading ListeningforpreviewingFinishtheexerciseofeachunitWritingskill FinishBook1thisterm5 6periodsforaunit Unit1GrowingUp TextAWaitingformyselfTextBsummerreading forhomereading TextCFastreading TextAWritingformyself DiscussionPreludeStudyTextStudyTask1VocabularyTask2ContentQuestionsTask3TextOrganizationTask4TextDiscussionTask5LanguageFocusTask6Development Discussion Doyoulikereadingnovelsorstories Whatkindofnovelorstorycanattractyou detective love humorous Ifyouwereawriter whatdoyouthinkisthemostimportantthingwhenyouwerewriting Prelude Whenwearewritingweareoftentoldtokeepourreadersinmind toshapewhatwesaytofittheirtastesandinterests Butthereisonereaderinparticularwhoshouldnotbeforgotten Canyouguesswho RussellBakersurprisedhimselfandeveryoneelsewhenhediscoveredtheanswer Translation Whoafriendis AtoZ Afriendiswho 朋友就是 Acceptsyouasyouare 原汁原味地接受你Believesin you 时时刻刻信赖你Callsyoujusttosay hi 打电话是为了问候你Doesn tgiveuponyou 不会抛弃 放弃你Envisionsthewholeofyou 对你所知甚深Forgivesyourmistakes 原谅你的错误Givesunconditionally 无条件的付出 Translation Helpsyou 帮助你Invitesyouover 邀请你Just be withyou 和你 形影不离 Keepsyoucloseaheart 心里常记挂你Lovesyouforwhoyouare 爱你是因为你是你Makesadifferenceinyourlife 为你生活画上一笔Neverjudges 不会妄言评断Offerssupport 祝你一臂之力Picksyouup 跌倒时会把你扶起 Translation Quietsyourfears 害怕时为你打气Raisesyourspirits 让你神采飞扬Saysnicethingsaboutyou 对你加以美言Tellsyouthetruthwhenyouneedtohearit 在需要的时刻 能把真话告诉你Understandsyou 理解你Valuesyou 重视你 Walksbesideyou 一路与你肩并肩X plainthingsyoudon tunderstand 当你不懂的时 为你答难解疑Yellswhenyouwon tlistenasecond 当你不听劝告 就会吼叫你Zapsyoubacktoreality 朋友还会一把拉你回到现实里 Assignments FirstlytranslatethoseitemsintoChineseanddiscussingroupsabouthowtomakeitbetter Writeasimilaronetoexpressyouropiniononthekinshiporlovebetweenyouandyourrelatives orloversinanorderofA Zinformofnarration TextStudyWritingformyself TaskOneVocabularyassociatewith oneselfwith associationassign to haveareputationfor ruinsb sreputationestablish makeareputationforoneselfliveuptoone sreputationinspire with inspired inspiring Task2ContentQuestions HowdidBakerusetofeelaboutEnglishcourses WhatwashisownimpressionofhisnewEnglishteacher Whydidheputoffthewritingassignmenttillthelastminute Whydidhewanttowriteaboutthetopic WhatdidBakerthinkwhenhehandedintheessay HowdidtheclassrespondwhenMr FleaglereadBaker sessay WhydidBakerfeelsodelighted Task3TextOrganizationParagraphsHeadings1Baker sfeelingsaboutEnglishcourses 2Baker simpressionofhisnewEnglishteacher 3AtopicthatattractsBaker sattention 4Vividmemoriesthetitlebroughtback 5Baker ssuddendesiretowriteaboutthetopic 6Anticipatingpunishment 7Mr Fleagle sannouncement 8Classmates responsetotheessay 9WhatBakerdiscovered Task3TextOrganization PartsParagraphsMainIdeasPart Paras1 2BakerwasboredbyeverythingassociatedwithEnglishcourses Part Paras3 5Bakerfoundhimselfattractedbyoneparticulartopicandwroteaboutitforhisownjoy Part Paras6 9Theexperienceofwritingtheessayhelpedhimdiscoverhistalentforwritingandrealizewhathewishedtodoinlife Task4TextDiscussion HowdoyouthinkaboutEnglishcourses WhatistheidealEnglishteacherlikeinyourmind HowdoyouwanttohaveyourEnglishclasstaught Task5LanguageFocus Theideaofbecomingawriterhadcometomeoffandonsincemychildhood butitwasn tuntilmy thatthepossibilitytookhold line1 Theideaof hadcometosbsince itis notuntil that 强调句型 offandon onandoff fromtimetotime nowandagaine g Ithasbeenrainingonandoffforaweek possibility stateofbeingpossible that of e g IsthereanypossibilityoflifeonMars Thereisapossibilitythattheyhavetakenthewrongroad takehold becomeestablishede g TheideaofonechildonlyhastakenholdinmanyChinesefamilies UntilthenI dbeenboredbyeverythingassociatedwithEnglishcourses line3 bored boringe g Itisaboringfilmthatmakesmebored associatedwith joinorconnecttogethere g Jimwishedtoforgeteverythingassociatedwithhisformerlife Ihatedtheassignmentstoturnoutlong lifeless line5 turnout producee g Americanfilmstudiosturnouthundredsoffilmseveryyear Whenourclasswasassignedto Ianticipatedanother inthatmosttediousofsubjects line7 8 anticipate expect ing that e g WeanticipatethatdeathsfromAIDSwillhavedoubledby2009 tedious boringandlastingforalongtimee g Themoviewassotediousthatmanyviewersleftbeforeitwasover Mr Fleaglehadareputation fordullnessandinabilitytoinspire line9 reputation opinionheldbyotherse g Hehasahighreputationasastatesmanintheworld Shehasquiteareputationforbeingcomic inspire encouragee g Hisspeechinspiredpeopletofightforequalrights Theyinspiredthekidswiththeirenthusiasm inspired inspiring Hewassaidtobevery andhopelesslyoutofdate line10 besaidtobe itissaidtobe e g Heissaidtobeaseriousman outofdate old fashioned opposite uptodate seventyandexcessivelyprim line11 excessive very extremee g Theycomplainedabouttheexcessivenoisecomingfromtheupstairs Thepriceofthehouseisexcessivelyhigh Heworeprimlysevereeyeglasses line11 severe completelyplain strict pain difficulty worrye g Thewidowworeasevereblackdresstoherhusband sfuneral Thefatherisseverewithhisson Theseverechestpainprovedtobeaheartattack IpreparedforanunfruitfulyearwithMr Fleagleandforalongtimewasnotdisappointed line16 17 Iexpectedthatthingswouldn timprovewithMr FleagleasourEnglishteacher andforalongtimeIwasrightinmyexpectations Lateintheyearwetackledtheinformalessay line17 tackle dealwithe g Toshibarecentlydesignedarobotthatcantackleanykindsofhousework Nonewasquitesosimple mindedas WhatIDidonMySummerVacation butmostseemedtobealmostasdull line19 20 Althoughtherewerenotopicsaseasyas WhatIDidonMySummerVacation mostofthemwereasboringasit broad minded narrow minded close 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Goandmakeyourselflookrespectable Wewerebroughtuptoberespectfulofauthority Menandwomenhaverespectiverolesinsociety butIwantedtoputitdownsimplyformyownjoy line34 putdown writedownputoff putforward putthrough putasideWhenIfinisheditthenightwashalfgone notimetocomposea line40 compose writeorcreate music poetry etc e g RichardcomposedthesongRightHereWaitingforhiswife Therewasnochoicenextmorningbuttoturninmytaleof line41 Thereisnochoicebutto turnin handine g Turninyourhomeworkbefore10tomorrow IwaspreparingmyselfforacommandtoreporttoMr Fleagle line44 IexpectedthatMr Fleaglewouldordermetoseehimsoonafterschoolforthepurposeofpunishingme prepareoneselfforsth putoneselfintoasuitablestateofmindforsthcommand order n giveanorderto v e g Hegavethecommandthatalltheprisonersshouldbewelltreated Thecaptaincommandedhismentoleavetheshipatoncereportto goto bepresentatfordiscipline forthepurposeofpunishing What smore theentireclass line50 whatismore inaddition furthermore moreover besidese g Sherunsherbusinesswell what smore sheisagoodcook EvenMr Fleaglestoppedtwoorthreetimestoholdbackasmallprimsmile line53 holdback prevent controle g Shemanagedtoholdbackherangerandtears holdon holdup holdout holdoff Intheeleventhgrade attheeleventhhourasitwere Ihaddiscoveredacalling line56 Inmyeleventhgrade andonemightsayatthelastpossiblemoment IhadfoundsomethingIwishedtotakeupasacareer it softheveryessenceoftheessay line60 essence themostimportantqualityofsomethingoftheessence necessaryandveryimportante g Inthissituation timeisoftheessence GrammarPoint Invertedstructure 倒装结构 最常是状语前置全部倒装 FullInversion E g Therewasasuddengustofwindandawaywenthishat Bang Bang Bang Camethreereportsoffirecrackers 局部倒装 PartialInversion NeverhaveIfoundhiminsuchagoodmood Onlyyesterdaydidhefindoutthathiswatchwasmissing Notonlydidhecomplainaboutthefood healsorefusedtopayforit Sodangerouswasthetyphoonthatthepedestrianshadtostopped Iwritefornootherpurposethantoaddtothebeautythatbelongstome JackLondon我写作只是为了增加自身之美 杰克 伦敦Certainlytheartofwritingisthemostmiraculousofallthingsmanhasdevised T Carlyle写作的艺术无疑是人类创造的万物中的最大奇迹 卡莱尔 Task6Development Youthislife sseed time Holmes青年时代是人生的播种期 霍姆斯Youthistheseasonofhope enterprise andenergy toanationaswellasanindividual W R Williams青年时期对国家和个人来说 都意味着是一个希望的季节 创业的阶段和充满活力的时期 威廉姆斯 美 伊 叶 舒尔 阳光下的美是鸟儿是绿树是茁壮成长的庄稼是人们为收获而忙碌还是在为丰年而欢舞 夜晚里的美是呜咽的风是淅沥的雨还是那歌手幽幽的吟唱专注而深情 美深居在我们的心灵处处行善快乐开心梦乡里劳作中休憩时都会飘有美的身影 Task6Development DiscussionWhatdoyouwanttolearninyourEnglishclass WhatdoyouwanttodoinyourEnglishclass Task6Development EssaywritingMyIdealEnglishClassMyIdealEnglishTeacherIfIwereanEnglishteacher TextBsummerReading forhomereading Thanksforyourattention Howtowriteanarrative 传记 游记 报导 回忆录 故事 写好背景某个事件或者故事发生的时间 地点 人物 原因等 一般来讲 作者在文章一开始就应该将时间 地点 人物交代清楚 细节的选择作者应选择既生动有趣又扣住主题的的典型事例 避开那些与主题无关的细节 写作次序以情节发生的时间先后为序记叙 写作角度写作角度可以以第一人称和第三人称 Topics AutobiographyAnUnforgettableDayinMyLifeMyFirstDayinZhejiangNormalUniversityMyFormerEnglishTeacher Exercises Vocabulary I 1 arguments put down sequence rigid tedious holdback reputation distribute offandon vivid associate with congratulations finally turnin turnout tackle2 1 Georgehasbeenassignedtothenewspaper sParisoffice 2 Thereisapossibilitythathiswishtobecomeawriterwillcometrue 3 Shehadaclearimageofhowshewouldlookintwentyyears time 4 Whentheofficergavethecommandthesoldiersopenedfires 5 Aslongaspeoplekeepbuyingbikeswe llkeepturningthemout 3 1 rigid toinspire bored2 andtedious arguments ideaswhichareoutofdate3 compose myschoolcareer hiscongratulations holdback II composed severe agony extraordinary recall command wasviolating anticipateIII at for of with as about to in in from on upon Structure 1 1 RussellBakerisreportedtolivetodaywithhiswifeinVirginia 2 Theyaresaidtobebuildinganotherbridgeacrosstheriver 3 OnlyafewstudentsinMr Parker scompositionclassaresaidtohavereallycapturedtheessenceoftheessay 4 ThoselovepoemswerebelievedtohavebeencomposedbyanEnglishpoetofthesixteenthcentury 2 1 asyousuggested2 asItoldyouto3 exactlyasIwas4 asyouhavedescribedtome Cloze A holdback congratulations tedious scanned recall vivid arguments offandon turnout turnin careerB that after black kids children at for of different So On she answer assignment book wrong proved Thus myself Translation Susanlostherlegsbecauseof inacaraccident Foratime shedidn tknowhowtofaceuptothefactthatshewouldnever beableto walkagain Oneday whilescanning through books atruestorycaughthereye shewasattractedbyatruestory Itgaveavividdescriptionofhowadisabledgirlbecameawriter Greatlyinspired Susanmakeuphermindtoreadasmuchasshecould andwhat smore shewantedtowritestoriesaboutherownchildhood Susanbegantofeelthatshe too wouldfinallybeabletoleadausefullife DevelopingbyNarration Narratewhatoneexperiences hearsandsees when where whom thecauseandeffect theexemplificationthedevelopment ContextSelectionsofdetails Waysofnarration Sequentialnarration 顺叙 Flashback 倒叙 Interposednarration 插叙 Writing ASurpriseinMyLifeNationalDay sTime