高中英语基础写作指导.ppt

时间分配 基础写作的命题特点 考生按所给的内容及要求 用5个规范的英语句子描述所给信息的全部内容 并组成连贯的短文 简而言之 考查考生整理信息和组词造句成文的能力 对于书面表达的要求 1 Coverallthelanguagepointsandgiveninformation 覆盖所有的语言要点 Avoidgrammarmistakesandwrongspelling应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性 3 coherent tight上下文的连贯性即有效地使用语句间的连接成分 使全文结构紧凑 4 usethewordsproperly语言的得体性 5 Writeyourarticleclearly 6 Mindthenumberofyoursentences 月考基础写作评讲总结 StudyingGoals Learntocombinesentencesandwritecomplexsentencesinwriting I 巧妙运用短语 写出规范的简单句 1 借助名词短语做同位语2 借助介词短语做定语3 借助介词短语做状语4 借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语II 巧用连接词 写出规范的并列句III 用好从句 定语从句 名词性从句 状语从句 和引导词写出规范的复合句 Combinethetwosentencesintoone1 Myhistoryteacherisabeautifulwoman 2 Shehastwobigeyesandlonghair 名词短语做同位语Myhistoryteacher abeautifulwoman hastwobigeyesandlonghair with介词短语做定语Myhistoryteacherisabeautifulwomanwithtwobigeyesandlonghair 定语从句Myhistoryteacherisabeautifulwomanwhohastwobigeyesandlonghair Revision Leading in Combinethetwosentencesintoone1 Australiaislocatedinthesmallestcontinent Oceania 2 Australiaisthesixthlargestcountryintheworld 名词性短语做同位语Australia thesixthlargestcountryintheworld islocatedinthesmallestcontinent 非谓语动词做状语Locatedinthesmallestcontinent Oceania Australiaisthesixthlargestcountryintheworld Combinethetwosentencesintoone1 Australiaismadeupof6states 2 MelbourneandSydneyarethelargestcitiesinthesixstates 定语从句Australiaismadeupof6states inwhichMelbourneandSydneyarethelargestcities Combinethetwosentencesintoone1 Australiacoversanareaof7 686 850squarekilometers 2 Australiahasapopulationof20million Australiacoversatotalareaof7 686 850squarekilometerswithapopulationofabout20million and引导的并列句Australiacoversanareaof7 686 850squarekilometersandithasapopulationof20million Combinethetwosentencesintoone1 Australiaisfamousforitsbrightsunshine countlesssheepandcattleanditsuniquewildlife 2 Thetouristsfromallovertheworldcometoenjoyitsscenery 状语从句BecauseAustraliaisfamousforitsbrightsunshine countlesssheepandcattleanditsuniquewildlife thetouristsfromallovertheworldcometoenjoyitsscenery 写作要求 1 使用5个句子表达全部的内容 2 句子结构准确 信息内容完整 篇章结构连贯 写作内容 Let smakepreparations Usefulwordsandexpressions 以 为背景草原主要角色羊族乐观童趣启智迄今推出奖项相关的 besetin on grasslandsmain leadingcharactergoatfamilyoptimistic holdapositiveattitudetowardlifefunnyinspiringuptonowputforwardawardrelevant Let stranslatethesimplesentences Translatethefollowingsentences 这个动画片以生活在草原上的羊群和狼群为背景 故事童趣但不幼稚 启智却不枯燥 喜羊羊是主要角色之一 喜羊羊是羊族的小英雄 喜羊羊聪明伶俐 乐观勇敢 贪婪的灰太狼总是带着一顶带补丁的黄帽子 无论怎样 它总是抓不住羊 由于取得巨大成功 迄今卡通公司获得很多奖项 并推出了玩偶 图书 游戏等相关产品 这个动画片以生活在草原上的羊群和狼群为背景 1 Thiscartoonseriesissetonthegrasslandswherethegoatsandwolveslive 故事童趣但不幼稚 启智却不枯燥 2 Thestoriesarefunnybutnotchildish inspiringbutnotboring 喜羊羊是主要角色之一 OneofthemaincharactersisPleasantGoat 喜羊羊是羊族的小英雄 PleasantGoatisalittleherointhegoatfamily 喜羊羊聪明伶俐 乐观勇敢 PleasantGoatisclever braveandholdsapositiveattitudetowardhislife 合并句子 同位语 定语从句 3 OneofthemaincharactersisPleasantGoat alittleherointhegoatfamily whoisclever braveandholdsapositiveattitudetowardhislife 贪婪的灰太狼总是带着一顶带补丁的黄帽子 with介词短语做定语 ThegreedyBigBigWolfalwayswearsayellowhatwithpatches 无论怎样 它总是抓不住羊 状语从句 Nomatterhowhardhetries hecannevercatchanygoats 合并句子 非谓语动词做定语 4 ThegreedyBigBigWolf alwayswearingayellowhatwithpatches cannevercatchanygoats nomatterhowhardhetries 由于取得巨大成功 迄今卡通公司获得很多奖项 并推出了玩偶 图书 游戏等相关产品 状语从句 5 Becauseithasmadeagreatsuccess uptillnowthecartooncompanyhaswonalotofawardsandputforwardrelevantproductsliketoys booksandcomputergames 介词短语做状语 becauseof BecauseofthegreatsuccessofPleasantGoatandBigBigwolf uptillnowthecartooncompanyhaswonalotofawardsandputforwardrelevantproductsliketoys booksandcomputergames Thiscartoonseriesissetonthegrasslandswherethegoatsandwolveslive Thestoriesarefunnybutnotchildish inspiringbutnotboring OneofthemaincharactersisPleasantGoat alittleherointhegoatfamily whoisclever braveandholdsapositiveattitudetowardhislife Bycontrast thegreedyBigBigWolf alwayswearingayellowhatwithpatches cannevercatchanygoats nomatterhowhardhetries BecauseofthegreatsuccessofPleasantGoatandBigBigwolf uptillnowthecartooncompanyhaswonalotofawardsandputforwardrelevantproductsliketoys booksandcomputergames Appreciation Appreciatesomecompositionsofyourclassmates andtrytofindoutsomecomplexsentences 巧妙运用短语 写出规范的简单句 1 借助名词短语做同位语2 借助介词短语做定语3 借助介词短语做状语4 借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语II 巧用连接词 写出规范的并列句III 用好从句 定语从句 名词性从句 状语从句 和引导词 写出规范的复合句 Homework用5个规范的句子写一则日记 内容如下 我又一次考试不及格 回家遭到父亲的责骂 他说我过度沉溺于电脑游戏 我心情很沮丧 不知道该干什么 独自一人在外边漫无目的地闲逛 突然抬起头 看见树上有一个鸟巢 鸟妈妈正在给小鸟喂食 只有在这时候我才意识到 父亲所做的一切都是为了我好 我知道我以后我该怎么做了 我又一次考试不及格 回家 遭到父亲的责骂 scold 他说我沉溺于 beaddictedto 电脑游戏 我心情很沮丧 depressed 不知道该干什么 独自一人在外边漫无目的地闲逛 wander 突然抬起头 看见树上有一个鸟巢 nest 鸟妈妈正在给小鸟喂食 只有在这时候我才意识到 父亲所做的一切都是为了我好 我知道我以后我该怎么做了 1 Ifailedintheexamagain 2 Icamebackhome 3 Myfatherscoldedme 4 becauseIwasaddictedtoplayingcomputergames 5 Iwasdepressed 6 Ididn tknowwhattodo 7 Iwanderedoutaimlessly 8 Ilookedupandsawanestinthetree 9 Themotherbirdwasfeedingherbaby10 AtthistimeIrealizedthatwhatmyfatherdidwasforme 11 IknewwhatIshoulddoinfuture Havingfailedintheexamagain IwasscoldedbymyfatherwhenIcamebackhome HesaidthatitwasjustbecauseIwasaddictedtoplayingthecomputergamesthatIfailedagainandagain Notknowingwhattodo Iwanderedoutaimlessly JustatthattimeIcaughtsightofatree withanestinit whereamotherbirdwasfeedingherbaby OnlythendidIrealizewhatevermyfatherdidwasformeandIknewwhatIshoulddoinfuture Thankyouforattending