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HowtoMakeAnError findingandAnalysisReport 1 20世纪70年代末以来 中国坚持 深化改革 扩大开放 经济社会发展 取得了举世瞩目 的成就 2 2004年 中国进出口总额 达到1 15万亿美元 居世界 第三位 吸收 外商投资额达到606亿美元 居世界第二位 累计吸收外商投资额 超过5600亿美元 3 同年 中国国内生产总值达到1 65万亿美元 1 Sincethelate1970s Chinahasbeenconstantly drivingforthitsreforminitiative andexpandingthescopeofopening up andhasobtainedsubstantialachievements insocioeconomicdevelopment whichhasbeencenteroftheworld sattention 2 In2004 China simportsandexports totaledUSD1 15trillion ranking3rdamongallnations intheworld anditattracted USD60 6millioninforeigninvestment thesecondhighestamountworldwide bringingtheaggregatevalueofinwardforeigninvestment tooverUSD560billion 3 In2004 China sGDPamountedtoUSD1 65trillion Originaltranslation Originalversion 1 Sincethelate1970s Chinahasbeenconstantly drivingforthitsreforminitiative andexpandingthescopeofopening up andhasobtainedsubstantialachievements insocioeconomicdevelopment whichhasbeencenteroftheworld sattention 1 20世纪70年代末以来 中国坚持 深化改革 扩大开放 经济社会发展 取得了举世瞩目 的成就 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ranking3rdamongallnations intheworld anditattracted USD60 6millioninforeigninvestment thesecondhighestamountworldwide bringingtheaggregatevalueofinwardforeigninvestment tooverUSD560billion 7 中国的进出口总额 China simportsandexportstotaled Import N C anitem aservice anideaorapersonthatisbroughtintoonecountryfromanother Export N C anitem aservice anideaorapersonthatissentfromonecountrytoanothertobesold 牛津英汉双解商务英语词典 1999 China stotalvalueofimportsandexports 数字表达错误 顺序不当 8 达到1 15万亿美元 totaledUSD1 15trillion cameto1 15trillionUSD 美元 的两种表达方式 US number2 number USD U S dollar 11 606亿美元 USD60 6million 60 6billionUSD 5600亿美元 USD560billion 560billionUSD 9 居世界第三位 ranking3rdamongallnationsintheworld rankingthe3rdintheworld 10 吸收 attract absorb 12 居世界第二位 thesecondhighestamountworldwideworldwide extendingover knownoroccurringinoraffectingallpartsoftheworld 牛津英语大词典 2004 rankingthesecondintheworld13 累计吸收外商投资额 theaggregatevalueofinwardforeigninvestmentinvestment noun MassNoun investmentmadewithinacountryfromoutside 国外 在一国的投资 删除inward aggregate adj onlybeforenoun technicalbeingthetotalamountofsomething especiallymoney aggregateincomeandinvestment accumulate v tograduallyincreaseinnumbersoramount Theaccumulatedforeigninvestment 2 2004年 中国进出口总额 达到1 15万亿美元 居世界 第三位 吸收 外商投资额达到606亿美元 居世界第二位 累计吸收外商投资额 超过5600亿美元 Originalversion 2 In2004 China simportsandexportstotaled USD1 15trillion ranking3rdamongallnations intheworld anditattracted USD60 6million inforeigninvestment thesecondhighestamountworldwide bringingtheaggregatevalueofinwardforeigninvestment tooverUSD560billion Modifiedversion In2004 China stotalvalueofimportsandexportscameto1 15trillionUSD rankingthe3rdintheworldanditabsorbed60 6billionUSDinforeigninvestment rankingthesecondintheworld increasingtheaccumulatedforeigninvestmenttoover560billionUSD Errorfindingandanalysis3 3 同年 中国国内生产总值达到1 65万亿美元 3 In2004 China sGDPamountedtoUSD1 65trillion Originalversion ModifiedVersion China sGDPofthesameyearamountedto1 65trillionUSD Modifiedversion Sincethelate1970s Chinahasbeenconsistentlydeepeningthereformandopeningwidertotheoutsideworld makingremarkableachievementsinitseconomicandsocialdevelopment In2004 China stotalvalueofimportsandexportscameto1 15trillionUSD rankingthe3rdintheworldanditabsorbed60 6billionUSDinforeigninvestment rankingthesecondintheworld bringingtheaccumulatedforeigninvestmenttoover560billionUSD China sGDPofthesameyearamountedto1 65trillionUSD