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英语记叙文的写作,记叙文,记叙文用于记叙过去发生的事件或经历,以写人、叙事为主要内容。它可以包括历史,游记,报道,回忆,故事,琐事等。这样的文章也要有中心。一般从第一或第三人称角度出发,表达自己或他人的经历或感受,使读者对事情十分明了以获得强烈感受。记叙文通常以一般过去时为主,根据上下文用各种时态。,记叙文写作的注意事项,一、交代背景文章的开头应概括地介绍事件发生的时间、地点、人物以及事件等二、详略得当过多不必要的细节会冲淡文章的主题。因此,在细节的选择上应注意选择与主题密切相关的内容,从而点明文章中心。三、条理清晰记叙文一般按照时间顺序或空间顺序来描述,要求层次清晰、条理清楚。,记叙文常用句式首段:交代主题,ItwasthemostexcitingmomentthatIhaveeverexperienced.Allthroughmyseniorhighschool,IcouldntforgetIntheyearsthatfollowedtheeventfrequentlyfloatedinmymind/oftenrecurredtomymemory/kepthauntingme.Lastweek,whenIwasonmywayhomesomethingterriblehappened.Iquicklyturnedaround,justintimetoseethewholeprocessoftheaccident.,记叙文常用句式首段:交代主题,补充交代时间Theeventtookplace/happened/occurredintheearlymorning.Thewholestoryhappenedthe(first)dayIenteredtheseniorhighschool.,记叙文常用句式主体部分:,(一)作者心理活动的描写Icouldhardlybelievemyeyes.IfeltasifIwereontopoftheworld.Iwascompletelyshocked.Iwasburstingwithjoy.,记叙文常用句式主体部分:,(二)人物外貌和性格的描写Heisofmediumheight.Heisgood-looking/ordinary-looking.Sheisplump/slim,withfairskinandcurlyhair.Helookshandsomeinasportssuit/bluejeans.Heisofmild/badtemper.Atfirstglance,youwouldsayheistheperfectimageofanobedientboy,butdeepdown,heisnotthatwayatall.,记叙文常用句式主体部分:,(三)物体的描写Itcomesinavarietyofcolors/shapes.Itconsistsofseveralintegratedparts.Itisshapedlikeacircle.Itisflatinshapeandsmallinsize.Attachedtothebottomis,记叙文常用句式主体部分:,(四)景物的描写Thereisawonderfularrayofflowersalongthestreet.Theairisfilledwiththescentofroses.Thetreesstoodthereonguardforgenerations,withbranchesreachingoutlikeacanopyovertheroad.Ifeelmiserablyinsignificantapproachingthemountain.Evenjudgingbymodernstandards,thetownwaslargeinpopulation.Thecampushasauniqueatmosphere.,例文TheDayMyClassmateFellIll(orGotInjured).,实战演练2003年9月英语四级作文及其范文PartWriting(30minutes)Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicTheDayMyClassmateFellIll(orGotInjured).Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:简单叙述一下这位同学生病(或受伤)的情况2.同学、老师和我是如何帮助他/她的3.人与人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是,词汇拓展,扭伤twistonesankle/giveawrenchtoonesankle/sprainonesankleonessprainedankle喉咙疼痛haveasorethroat痛苦的表情anexpressionofpainHerfacewascontortedwithpain.她痛得脸都变了样。量体温takeonestemperature轮流照顾某人takecareofsb.byturns/taketurnsatcaringsb.发高烧have/runahighfever健康状况health/condition请假askfora(sick)leave/askforafour-dayleave/beonsickleave,例文TheDayMyClassmateFellIll(orGotInjured).,写作模板:架构阶段第一段:开篇句:about_oclockoneeveningin_,_.扩展句:_.(展开描述一下事件)第二段:主题句:withouthesitation,_.itwasntlongbefore_.扩展句:1、one_.2、another_.3、ourteacher_.第三段:结尾句:is_?whocantell?but_.扩展句:1、when_,peopleshowed_spiritregardlessof_.2、thiskindofcarebetweenpersonsistheverykindgiving,unselfishandpricelessdevotionorsacrifice.3、anditisjustbecauseofthiscarethatwecanhavewarmfamilies,ahappylifeandabeautifulworld.,例文TheDayMyClassmateFellIll(orGotInjured).,写作模板:填充阶段第一段:开篇句:aboutnineoclockoneeveninginmay,myroommatelimingwaslyinginbed,tremblingwithcoldandhavingacough.扩展句:hisheadwasachingsointenselythathekeptgroaning.hisforeheadfeltveryhot.wetookhistemperature.itwas38.5.第二段:主题句:withouthesitation,idialed120.itwasntlongbeforeanambulancearrived.扩展句:1、oneroommatebroughtablanketforhim.2、anothersupportedhimintheambulance.3、ourteacherinsistedongivinghimsomemoney.第三段:结尾句:isheasuspedtedsarspatient?whocantell?butwedidtretreat.扩展句:1、whenthesavagesarswasspreading,peopleshowedfearlessspiritregardlessofdangerstotheirownhealth.2、thiskindofcarebetweenpersonsistheverykindgiving,unselfishandpricelessdevotionorsacrifice.3、anditisjustbecauseofthiscarethatwecanhavewarmfamilies,ahappylifeandabeautifulworld.,例文TheDayMyClassmateFellIll(orGotInjured).,范文AboutnineOclockoneeveninginMay,myroommateLiMingwaslyinginbed,tremblingwithcoldandhavingacough.Hisheadwasachingsointenselythathekeptgroaning.Hisforeheadfeltveryhot.Wetookhistemperature.Itwas38.5.Withouthesitation,Idialed“120”.Itwasntlongbeforeanambulancearrived.Oneroommatebroughtablanketforhim.Anothersupportedhimintheambulance.Ourteacherinsistedongivinghimsomemoney.IsheasuspectedSARSpatient?Whocantell?Butwedidntretreat.WhenthesavageSARSwasspreading,peopleshowedfearlessspiritregardlessofdangerstotheirownhealth.Thiskindofcarebetweenpersonsistheverykindgiving,unselfishandpricelessdevotionorsacrifice.Anditisjustbecauseofthiscarethatwecanhavewarmfamilies,ahappylifeandabeautifulworld.,学生作品中的常见问题,在叙事时,一般用过去时,但在表述个人观点时可以用现在时。在叙述部分缺少所对叙述事件的结果。Lastweek,myclassmatehadabadcold.不要用或A,B,C来表示人,可以取一个恰当的名字,或是用JohnDoe或JaneDoe来表示“某人”。,记叙文练习题目,)Directions:NowyouareallowedthirtyminutestowriteapassageonthetitleMyBestFriend.Youshouldwriteatleast100-120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.简要介绍你最好的朋友。2.你们之间的故事。3.你对朋友的理解。2)Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicAWitnessofaTheftIncident.Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:1)描述你在公共场所目睹的一次扒窃事件2)谴责这种不文明的现象并提出解决建议。,
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