如何写关于旅行的作文.ppt

如何写关于旅行的文章,写作思路,1写清楚旅行时所去的地方。 2要写明什么时候去的，与谁一起去的，怎样去的，做了什么。 3注意人称，时态，语法，单词拼写，卷面书写。,Exercise 1,假设上个月你们一家人去北京观光。请你以第一人称的形式写一篇60词左右的短文。内容包括怎样去的，参观了哪些地方等。,思路点拨,1题材，记叙文 2时态，一般过去式 3人称，讲述自己一家去北京北京观光，故用第一人称。 4写作思路，文章要叙述怎么去的，尤其要叙述去了哪里。,example,Last month, my family went to Beijing. We went there by train. We visited lots of places of interest. We went shopping in the biggest store. Then we went to Beijing Zoo. We went to Tiananmen Square, too. We took a taxi to visit many beautiful places.,Exercise 2,假定你是Danny,上周你和Jenny一起去西安旅行，请根据一篇有关旅行的文章，60词左右。 提示： 1 三月一日下午乘火车到达西安。 2 参观兵马俑，鼓楼，钟楼,品尝美食等。 3 三月五日乘飞机返回北京。,思路点拨,1体材，记叙文。 2时态，一般过去时。 3人称，本文写自己和Danny一起去旅行，故用第一人称。 4写作思路，文章要写清时间，乘坐的交通工具，参观的景点等。,example,Last week, Danny and I took a trip to Xian. We went there by train. We arrived in Xian on the afternoon on March 1.We visited Terra Cotta Warriors, the Drum tower, the Bell tower. We ate delicious food there. On March5,we went back to Beijing by plane.,TIPS,1 理清思路，题目要求的信息要完全体现在作文中。 when who where how what 2 总结。 We had a good trip. We enjoyed our trip. We had a good time /a lot of fun there . 3书写。 书写工整，不要涂抹。 首字母大写，写清楚标点。,