如何进行概要写作学习教案

会计学1如何进行如何进行(jnxng)概要写作概要写作第一页，共21页。rear-ending 追尾追尾 run off the road crash into treecrash into houseturn overTraffic accidents are dangerous. 第1页/共20页第二页，共21页。Reasons: Speeding Tired driving Drunk driving Careless driving Using cell phones while driving .?第2页/共20页第三页，共21页。Topic: Using cell phones while driving 1. Its a dangerous distraction to drivers. 2. It should be forbidden.Para 2: Argument (论点论点(lndin) 1 Para 3: Argument (论点论点(lndin) 2 Para 4: SuggestionPara 5: ConclusionTip1: Structure is a guide to find the main pointsPara 1: Viewpoint (观点观点(gundin) 第3页/共20页第四页，共21页。Para1 Cell phones are used everywhere, but on the road they are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.a facta viewpointPara 1: ViewpointTip2: The viewpoint of an argumentative writing （议（议论文）论文）should be included in a summary.第4页/共20页第五页，共21页。Point1：Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.Main points of the summary第5页/共20页第六页，共21页。1. Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers. Para 2: Argument (论据论据(lnj) 1 using a not using aon the phoneon the roadunpredictablecarefulIts dangerous.Its safe.Drivers using a phone were 4 times more likely to have an accident than those not using.DriversAttentionDrivingResult(Support)第6页/共20页第七页，共21页。Point1：Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.Point2：Drivers using a cell phone were 4 times more likely to have an accident than those not using a phone. Main points of the summary第7页/共20页第八页，共21页。Para 3: Argument (论论据据(lnj)22. Cell phones used on the road should be forbidden. at least 1,000 deaths per yearagainst the lawand strictly enforcedlaws are need to forbid the use of cell phones in carsAn example：phones used by driversdrunk drivingSimilarly（Support)第8页/共20页第九页，共21页。Point1：Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.Point2：Drivers using a cell phone were 4 times more likely to have an accident than those not using a phone. Main points of the summaryPoint3：Just like drunk driving, California need laws to restrict the use of cell phones in cars.第9页/共20页第十页，共21页。Q1：Before using a cell phone, what question should drivers ask themselves?Para 4: SuggestionSuggestion1：Suggestion2：Is this call really that important?Yes.No.Drivers need to be more responsible when using cell phones.Use a phone wiselyNot use a phone（Support)第10页/共20页第十一页，共21页。Point1：Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.Point2：Drivers using a cell phone were 4 times more likely to have an accident than those not using a phone. Main points of the summaryPoint3：Just like drunk driving, California need laws to restrict the use of cell phones in cars.Point4：Drivers at least need to be more responsible when using cell phones. 第11页/共20页第十二页，共21页。Para5 Cell phones can be a very important link in emergencies, but drivers need to use them wisely. As professional racer John Andretti says, “Driving safely is your first responsibility.” The best road to safety is to just hang up and drive.Para 5: Conclusiona quote (引语引语(yn y) Tip3: A quote is usually used to support an idea and should be not included in a summary.第12页/共20页第十三页，共21页。Point1：Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.Point2：Drivers using a cell phone were 4 times more likely to have an accident than those not using a phone. Main points of the summaryPoint3：Just like drunk driving, California need laws to restrict the use of cell phones in cars.Point4：Drivers at least need to be more responsible when using cell phones. Point5：Cell phones can be a very important link in emergencies, but drivers need to use them wisely. The best road to safety is to just hang up and drive. 第13页/共20页第十四页，共21页。1. Cell phones used on the road dangerously distract the drivers and should be banned.Skills:1. 词性转换法词性转换法 2. 近义替换法近义替换法 3. 正话正话(zhn hu)反反说法说法 4. 语态互换法语态互换法 5. 句式变化法句式变化法 Skills of restatement(重述重述(zhn sh): “Point1” as an examplePoint1：Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.2. Using cell phones while driving dangerously draw away drivers attention and should not be allowed.3. We should forbid using cell phones on the road for their harmful distraction to drivers.4. Drivers should be prevented from using cellphones while driving because they can be dangerously distracted.并列句并列句复合句复合句简单句简单句6. 主语(zhy)变身法 第14页/共20页第十五页，共21页。Have a try: work in groups of 4 to create a good summaryPoint1：Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.Point2：Drivers using a cell phone were 4 times more likely to have an accident than those not using a phone. Point3：Just like drunk driving, California need laws to restrict the use of cell phones in cars.Point4：Drivers at least need to be more responsible when using cell phones. Point5：Cell phones can be a very important link in emergencies, but drivers need to use them wisely. The best road to safety is to just hang up and drive. 第15页/共20页第十六页，共21页。Factors Checking pointscompleteconcisecoherentcorrectobjective2. No details in 4080 words1. Cover the main points using your own words 4. No grammatical mistakes5. No personal opinion3. Use transitional words if possible Learn to use the checklist: 4C+1O第16页/共20页第十七页，共21页。Using cell phones while driving can distract the drivers and should be baned. Drivers have a higher rate of accidents when use phones. Accidents are danger, which include running off a road and crashing into trees, fences. Just like drunk driving, laws are needed to restrict the use of cell phones in cars. Drivers should use phones with greater responsibility for safe. In conclusion, cell phones are important in emergencies and should be used wisely. After all, we only have one life at all. (89words)copy original wordsTo ensure safe driving, drivers had better not use them. unnecessary detailsno personal ideaBefore laws are passed,Revise the version written by one of my students.第17页/共20页第十八页，共21页。Using cell phones while driving distracts drivers and should be banned. Drivers have a higher rate of accidents when using phones. Just like drunk driving, laws are needed to forbid drivers from talking on phones. _, drivers should use phones in a more responsible way. _, cell phones are important in emergencies and should be used wisely. To ensure safe driving, drivers had better not use them. In conclusionMy final draft of the summaryBefore laws are passedTransitional words 过渡过渡(gud)语语(71 Words)第18页/共20页第十九页，共21页。第19页/共20页第二十页，共21页。NoImage内容(nirng)总结会计学。distraction to drivers.。Para 5: Conclusion。a quote (引语(yn y)。Transitional words 过渡语。See You第二十一页，共21页。