九年级英语上册 Unit 4 Growing up Task课件1 （新版）牛津版

UNIT4 GROWING UPLead in .is the person who has influenced .1.Who has influenced the writer most?2.What is her father like?3. What has her father done since 1990?4. What surprised the writer?5.What does the writer think of her father?Pre-writinghave a heart full of loveTv/care for children/give money toBe ready to help anyonedonate blood and blood cellsdecide to donate his body for medical research after his deathPre-writing: Useful expressions .is the person who has influenced me most.is in his twenties/thirties/fortiesYou will not find anything unusual about him until.has always been kind/helpful/.To my surprise,.When I was a little girl/boy, I could not understand.Now I realize that假如你是假如你是Sandy, 你学校正在举行写作比赛，主题是你学校正在举行写作比赛，主题是“The person who has impressed me most, 字数字数100个字左右。内容如下：个字左右。内容如下： My uncle 四十多岁，四十多岁，在当地医院工作在当地医院工作 工作细心工作细心对待病人有耐心对待病人有耐心 使我惊讶的是，使我惊讶的是，他已经决定他已经决定. 乐于助人乐于助人 关爱一些失独老人关爱一些失独老人My UncleIntroduction Main bodyConclusion Para1Structure Para2-3 Para4 age,jobPersonalitiesExamplesMy ideas评评 分分 标标 准准满分得分得分内容、信息全面、完成任务内容、信息全面、完成任务5分分语言（句子结构、语法、用词）语言（句子结构、语法、用词）5分分行文连贯、逻辑行文连贯、逻辑3分分（字数、大小写、标点等）（字数、大小写、标点等）2分分总分总分15分分 CriteriaPost-writing: SampleThe person who has influenced me most is my uncle.You will not find anything unusual until you learn more.As a doctor, he is both kind and patient with patients.Besides, he is so careful that he has never made any mistakes. He says:As a doctor,We cant be too careful.Whats more,he caresfor the old who have lost their onlychildren.To my surprise, my uncle has decided to donatenot only all his money but also his body after his death. Howbrave and kind-hearted his is!All in all, I have been imoressed by my uncle. Irealize that he is a man has a heart full of love.Homework: 1. Remember some usefulexpressions.2. Write about the person who has influenced you.Thank you for listening!