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书面表达突破(四)调查报告原题再现最近我校对高一学生入学一个多月来的学习生活适应情况做了一个调查,情况如下。请你用英语表达下表的调查内容,并提出个人观点。60%左右的学生认为40%左右的学生认为我的观点1.高中学习很有压力；2.科目难度大,课后作业多；3.没有时间参加锻炼等活动。1.适应并喜欢高中生活；2.课程更有趣,活动更丰富,受益匪浅。要求：1.词数150左右；2.文章开头已给出,但不计入总词数。参考词汇：course课程；benefit对有益；stressful有压力的写作模板学生习作Recently,asurveyhasbeencarriedoutinourschoolwhetherthefreshmenhasadaptedtothelifeinseniorhighschool.Ascanbeseenfromtheresultofthesurvey, opinionsaredivided.About持有第一种观点的人数.Thereasonsareasfollows.Firstly,第一种原因.Besides,第二种原因Onthecontrary, otherssay他们的观点.Theysaythat持有这种观点的原因AsfarasImconcerned, weshould自己的想法.Onlyinthisway美好前景预测Recently,asurveyhasbeencarriedoutinourschoolwhetherthefreshmenhasadaptedtothelifeinseniorhighschool. Ascanbeseenfromtheresultofthesurvey, opinionsaredivided.About60%ofthestudentsholdtheopinionthatlifeinseniorhighschoolisfarfromrelaxing.Thereasonsareasfollows.Firstly, thesubjectstheyarelearningnowareobviouslymoredifficult.Besides, theyhavetodoendlesshomeworkafterclass, whichleavesthemlittletimeforexerciseandotheractivities.Onthecontrary, otherssaytheyhaveadaptedtothenewlifeandhavebeguntoenjoyit.Theysaythattheyfindthecoursesaremoreinterestingandtheactivitiesaremorecolorful, whichsurelybenefitthemalot.AsfarasImconcerned, weshouldbalanceourstudyandotheractivitiesanddoeverythingefficiently.Onlyinthiswaycanwelearnmoreandenjoyourlifebetter.名师点评本文同样以三段论的形式进行写作的,文中用了简单句、并列句、同位语从句、定语从句、倒装句,句式丰富多样,结构复杂,恰当运用了较多高级句式,足显作者写作功底深厚；段与段之间巧妙运用了衔接语onthecontrary,asfarasImconcerned使过渡自然,整篇文章浑然一体；另外,文章中还运用了一些较高级词汇,如farfromrelaxing,balance等。所以该篇文章应属于一篇档次较高的优秀作文。仿写训练今年寒假期间你就返乡农民工问题进行了一次社会调查。调查中发现因受国际金融危机的影响,农民工原来打工的工厂倒闭,致使25%的农民工失业。针对农民工的就业问题,政府采取了一系列的措施,如举办各种劳动力招聘会,鼓励返乡农民工自己创业,为年轻农民工提供免费技能培训等。请根据你的调查写一份调查报告,并谈谈你的看法。注意：1.词数150左右；2.文章的开头已经给出,但不计入总词数。参考词汇：economicslowdown经济危机；jobfair招聘会Duringthewintervacation,Iconductedasurveyaboutthereturnedofffarmworkers.75%ofthesurveyedofffarmworkerssaidtheywouldreturntotheoriginalworkasscheduled,but_【参考范文】Duringthewintervacation,Iconductedasurveyaboutthereturnedofffarmworkers.75%ofthesurveyedofffarmworkerssaidtheywouldreturntotheoriginalworkasscheduled,but25%ofthemlosttheirjobsbecausetheirfactorieshadbeencloseddownowingtotheglobaleconomicslowdown.Buttheywerenotalonestrugglingtosurvivetheeconomiccrisis.Duringmyinvestigation,Ifoundthatthelocalgovernmenthaddonewhattheycouldtohelptheofffarmworkerstobeemployed.Allkindsofjobfairswereheldtohelpthemtofindjobsinthehometown.Somefarmerswereencouragedtoengageintheagriculturaldevelopment.Somewerehelpedtosetuptheirownbusinesswiththeloanprovidedbythestate.Youngpeoplewereofferedachancetobetrainedfreeandlearnapracticalskill.Ithinkthestatehasattachedgreatimportancetothelifeofthefarmers,butwestillfacealotofchallengesandmuchremainstobedone.However,withthegovernmentshelpandofffarmworkershardworkingIbelievetheycansurvivetheglobaleconomicslowdownandliveabetterlife.补偿练习1阅读理解Workersmayfeelcomfortablehandinginasicknoteforfluorphysicalillness,butnearlyhalfofworkersreportednotbeinghappytodiscloseamentalhealthconditionatwork,especiallyamongmanual(体力的)andskilledprofessions.Thesurveyof1,000workersbynationalcharitytheShawTrustfoundthat18.3%wouldnotrevealaconditioneventotheirHRdepartmentandonly17.9%woulddisclosedetailsofanillnesstoacolleague.Oftherespondents34.5%saidthereasontheywouldnotdiscloseamentalhealthconditionwasthattheyfeltworriedorashamedtheywouldbetreateddifferently.Thisfigureroseto43.3%among16to24yearolds.Besides,oneintenworkersthoughtthatdisclosingaconditionwouldreducetheirchancesofpromotion.TimCooper,managingdirectoroftheShawTrust,said,“TheOfficeofNationalStatisticsestimatesthatoneinsixpeoplemaysufferfromamentalillhealthconditionatonetime.Despitethis,ourresearchshowspeoplearestillunwillingtodisclosesuchacondition,particularlyinthecurrenteconomicclimateinwhichworkersareconcernedaboutshowinganysignofweakness.Weknow,however,fromourworkpeoplewithmentalhealthconditionsareperfectlycapableofmanagingajobandtheirconditionswiththerightsupportfromtheiremployersandthereforefeelitisimportantthatsuchmisunderstandingis laidtorest.”Tosolvetheproblem,businessesneedtocreateanenvironmentinwhichpeoplenotonlyfeelconfidentenoughtodiscussamentalhealthconditionwithalinemanagerormembersoftheHRteambutcanalsoreceivethesupporttheyneedtocontinuemakingavaluablecontribution.Additionally,tohelpbusinessesachievethis,theShawTrusthascreatedawebsiteofferingadviceandinformation.1Whatsthemaintopicdiscussedinthepassage?AWorkerstendtokeepsilentonmentalhealthconditions.BAlargenumberofpeoplesufferfrommentalhealthproblems.CWorkerspaymoreattentiontophysicalhealththanmentalhealth.DWorkersdisclosetheirmentalhealthconditionsindifferentways.答案A解析综合概括题。这篇文章讨论的问题是员工们对自己的精神健康状况保持沉默。2Workersarentwillingtodisclosetheirmentalhealthconditionsmainlybecause_.AtheythinkitstheirentireprivacyBtheywillbedismissedifdoingsoCtheyareafraiditwillinfluencetheirworkDtheywillhavenoopportunitytogetpromoted答案C解析细节理解题。从第二段的内容可得出他们不愿透露自己健康状况的主要原因是C项。3Theunderlinedphrase“laidtorest”inthethirdparagraphroughlymeans_.AstrengthenedBunderstoodCneglectedDremoved答案D解析词义猜测题。根据上文misunderstanding,可知laytorest是消除误解的意思,所以是remove(去除)。其他三个词都不符合。4WecanlearnfromwhatTimCoopersaidthat_.ApeopledisclosingmentalhealthconditionscandoworkperfectlyBemployerssupportcontributestoworkersperformancesCthecurrenteconomyisdevelopingwellDworkersshouldaskdoctorsforprofessionaladvice答案B解析推理判断题。从TimCooper的说话内容可以推断出选B项。补偿练习2书面表达(2009南通二次调研)90后的学生,思想特殊、行为方式和价值观令人担忧。请你根据下表中所提供信息以“Dotrustusagenerationborninthe90s”为主题写一篇英语演讲稿,以消除人们的忧虑。90后的境遇面临更多的升学和就业烦恼,所处环境竞争更加激烈。人们的忧虑1.注重自我,轻视合作2.缺乏毅力,容易气馁3.盲目追求,渴望成名我们的长处敢于挑战Goodafternoon,everyone!Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“Dotrustusagenerationborninthe90s”_Thankyouforyourlistening!参考范文Goodafternoon,everyone!Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“Dotrustusagenerationborninthe90s”Livinginanenvironmentfulloffiercercompetition,we,agenerationborninthe90s,arefacedwithmoreproblemsinenteringhigherschoolsandgettingemployed.Underthesecircumstances,wearedevelopingourspecialmannersandvalues,whichhasraisedpeoplesconcern.Theyworrywecaretoomuchaboutourselvesandareunwillingtocooperatewithothers,whichmakesithardforustoachievesuccessinwhateverwedo.Besides,theyconsiderusaslackingindetermination,andthisiswhatittakestodoanyjobwell.Withoutit,wemayeasilygiveupintimeofdifficulty.Theyarealsoconcernedthatwearesoeagertowininstantfamethatwefollowfashionblindly,whichwillinturnruinourvaluesandfuture.However,we,agenerationborninthe90s,haveourownadvantagesdespitesomeweaknesses.Firstly,wehavethecouragetomeetchallengesandtakerisks,whichhelpsrealizeourdreams.Inaddition,wearequickmindedandcreative.Wecandoourworkmoreefficiently.Yet,westillneedtolearnmorefromthoseexperienced.Pleasedotrustus!Thankyouforyourlistening！内容总结（1）书面表达突破(四)调查报告仿写训练今年寒假期间你就返乡农民工问题进行了一次社会调查
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