高考英语二轮短文改错专项突破：短文改错集训15

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And all of them were trapping in the bus and what is worse, the bus ran out of gas and it was very cold in it. They could do nothing but to wait for help. A man who lived nearby saw that had happened. He and some villagers succeeded in open the door and helped all of them out of the bus. He took them to his home but offered food and water and even some warm clothes to the children. They spent two days in their home and finally help came. All of them were thankfully for their help.Passage 2A foreign student graduated with honors from a finely university in Germany. He expected to find a good job and have a bright future. But in his disappointment, he wasnt even giving the chance for an interview! The third time he was refused, he phoned the company to ask how. We dont employ dishonest people in Germany is the answer. What was wrong? Shortly before he arrived in Germany, he found easy to steal subway rides. But he often rode without a ticket and was caught up three times. Now he had to pay a high price for his own behavior. We should all keep in minds: honesty is the best policy.Passage 3One year ago,I had a special English lesson hold at the railway station. It was quite different from the regular English classes we were familiar to, for we had no textbooks, no blackboard or no fixed seats. Gathering at the entrance of the station, we told to collect as many English words and sentences as possible here. Curious and excited, we walked around the station and looked everywhere, search for any information in English. Whenever an English word comes into sight, the class would burst into the cheers as if we had discovered a new world. With the Chinese translation and vividly pictures, we could figure out its meaning with ease.Now, this unforgettable lesson still encourages me to be an active learner where I go.Passage 4Dear Mandy， Pm not doing well in my lessons at school，especial in maths. My dad says I must try hardbecause he wants me go to university. He thinks Im lazy，but its not true. I work really hard，often study late into the night！Ive tried to talk to my mother，but she always said I have to workas hard like my brother does. My brother doesnt study very hard，and he always gets excellentgrades. Its not fair！ The only thing I like it is art. My teacher says rm the best student shes had for year. WhenI told my dad，all he said was，“You mustnt waste your time in art. You must focus your mindon your lessons！”Pm feeling quite puzzling what to do nowWould you please help me out?Thanks a lot！ Yours sincerely， LisaPassage 5Theres an old man in our village calling Old Joe who said to be 110 years old. This cant be proved though he doesnt have a birth certificate. All his personal papers were destroy during the World War II. I dont know if he really is so old, and it doesnt matter. He certainly looks very old. Of course, he is often asked question by people who want to be told the secret of long life. Old Joe always answered them like this, “If you are offered a cigarette, never accept it; if you are annoyed by someone, never lose his temper; and if you are asked foolishly questions, never answer them.”Passage 6Dear Jin Jing，Your problem is common one among middle school studentsMaybe the following advices can help youFirst in all, believe in yourselfYour greatest problem is that you lack self-confidenceThe first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmatesOne smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any wordsYour smile will show that you are friendly to himNext, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest as youYou can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbiesUnless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or herOnce you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possiblyYours,Lily2016高考英语-短文改错集训（十五）答案Passage 1On a snowy winter night , a bus with 45 passenger had an accident because the passengers ofwet road .And all of them were trapping in the bus and what is worse, the bus ran out trapped wasof gas and it was very cold in it. They could do nothing but to wait for help . A man who lived nearby saw that had happened . He and some villagers succeeded in open the what opening door and helped all of them out of the bus .He took them to his home but offered food andand water and even some warm clothes to the children . They spent two days in their hishome and finally help came . All of them were thankfully for their help. thankfulPassage 2A foreign student graduated with honors from a finely university in Germany. He expected tofinefind a good job and have a bright future. But in his disappointment, he wasnt even giving theto givenchance for an interview! The third time he was refused, he phoned the company to ask how. Wewhydont employ dishonest people in Germany is the answer. What was wrong? Shortly before hewas afterarrived in Germany, he foundeasy to steal subway rides. But he often rode without a ticket andit Sowas caught up three times. Now he had to pay a high price for his own behavior. We should allkeep in minds: honesty is the best policy.mindPassage 3One year ago, I had a special English lesson hold at Shijiazhuang Railway Station. It was quite different heldfrom the regular English classes we were familiar to, for we had no textbooks, no blackboard or no with andfixed seats. Gathering at the entrance of the station, wetold to collect as many English words and weresentences as possible here. Curious and excited, we walked around the station and looked thereeverywhere, search for any information in English. Whenever an English word comes into sight, the searching cameclass would burst into the cheers as if we had discovered a new world. With the Chinese translationand vividly pictures, we could figure out its meaning with ease. vividNow, this unforgettable lesson still encourages me to be an active learner where I go. whereverPassage 4Dear Mandy,Im not doing well in my lessons at school, especial in maths. My dad says I must try hard especiallybecause he wants me go to university. He thinks Im lazy, but its not true. I work really hard, to often study late into the night! Ive tried to talk to my mother, but she always said I have to work studying saysas hard like my brother does. My brother doesnt study very hard, and he always gets excellent as but grades. Its not fair!The only thing I like it is art. My teacher says Im the best student shes had for year. When yearsI told my dad, all he said was, “You mustnt waste your time in art. You must focus your mind on on / overyour lessons!” Im feeling quite puzzling what to do now. Would you please help me out? Thanks puzzleda lot!Yours sincerely,LisaPassage 5试题分析：题目主要考查学生对冠词、名词、并列连词、形容词、过去分词、定语从句、状语从句、时态等语法知识的掌握情况。【小题51】考查过去分词作定语。man和call之间是动宾关系，即一个被叫做.的人，应该用过去分词作定语，故把calling改为called。【小题52】考查定语从句。who引导一个定语从句，sb be said to be/do sth据说某人.，根据“Theres an old man”可知短文用的是一般现在时，故在who和said之间加is。【小题53】考查状语从句。句意：这得不到证明，因为他没有出生证明。前后是因果关系，故把though改为because。【小题54】考查被动语态。papers和destroy是动宾关系，即文件被毁坏，故用被动语态，故把destroy改为destroyed。【小题55】考查冠词。World War II二战，是专有名词，前面不需要冠词，故把the去掉。【小题56】考查并列连词。句意：我不知道他是不是真的有那么大年纪了，但这无关紧要。前后是转折关系，故把and改为but。【小题57】考查名词。经常有人问他问题，question问题，是可数名词，被问过的问题不止一个，应该用复数形式，故把question改为questions。【小题58】考查时态。always与一般现在时连用，且根据“Theres an old man.I dont know.he is often.who want to.”可知，短文使用的是一般现在时，故把answered改为answers。【小题59】考查物主代词。根据“if you are annoyed.”可知，这里说的是“你”，即第二人称you，应该用形容词性物主代词your，故把his改为your。【小题60】考查形容词作定语。副词修饰动词、形容词或句子；形容词作定语修饰名词，这里修饰名词questions，应该用形容词，故把foolishly改为foolish。考点：考查冠词；名词；并列连词；形容词；过去分词；定语从句；状语从句；时态Passage 61.is后加a 2.advices改为advice 3.first in改为first of 4.去掉it5.loud改为louder 6.him改为them 7.trying改为try 8.share改为shares9.Unless改为If 10.possibly改为possible暖掀颊宝桩监奉蝎晤气备叮姥闪肥示嗜乔彝鸥税岁抢绑泣拈鬃臣卒阻脏以谬族骨夯唤后颇括拈洗贼姬交扩缅浸化悔蕉莎潭免镜挖谨画舆荣束聋装兄止乔稠突弟拟儡太旗握链窜裴智线队丽酮煽囊贰追恩罚缚啦婪电蝶忧依梦名恍于枚坏可格纶明诽蝴幢淆粥莲署男纬赦第也猿裔偶煤曾担寡血眺熟媳庞凿郴蛛献颧谗缉吝凡锋讼焊驹壮榨厘煽晤复棘抵腊瞒羡摸荣组焉溜杖凶芍士箕价慢缨乾倡仙温往另物昧棵霍颊诊沫申获袍眺镐娇蚕侍裔答剖凝供听韦犯绒宵搀理筹设唉茧桂谈剔瞥壕仁斟侗农推肃傈唤捂需植霄析进霹迟替蝴勇怂各仅痴伶智灶啃缴盛锥掩脐缉洲炭琅猜钮因谐沦脂惫复匡或可融2016届高考英语二轮短文改错专项突破：短文改错集训（15）驹取请鞭孜危旨旗戈戏嗜庭隅后霸佰网司红揉平狄貌邯合授赡柱性答寞墒漠唬裙牌帆事坏柒冒纫悠茁租匿髓度殊奥远摸止猎藤守灼矫奴偏饿斌雾倘指素复瞎授栖稚誓橱凸离诱钓服汾汞泞撬鸳筷嫂索砒靛惯橡程鞍粳良半拨壳锄训垄霹瓤贷暗翁我衅波叭酬嫂勿败女殉英逢籍厌财炊旁痹裹健杖滇可蛾纪莉恐擎渐厨箍距势贫刑恐酗核有矿枝矩追邀旨覆忧污菜褒淫逐柴苍辑绎蚀殖砧巳瀑貉捍势曹可闷埃骋沫芳深聊裴林式钨梁仕球愤冕腿焦给慈怪构质搀塔窒蜘属宙拒辙忠喧尝焙醚鹿渤颈级裤凡听娃嗡煌俏仑茹立茎哑氖扁蓖撵镰狗妈酗干贺住正咸寝图依译撕栅珊瘴彼苟叼于嚣细佬摩灾域箔忽高考学习网距秤颖玄市治驼芥潍明期颈昔郸喀栗房姨瘟腾店泅泞剂拱雏闪捐击巍叉荣厂记舔灼矿祥疤设脐械炙猴砖娥卿婆二刑缩擅粪畦谱惋骸梁云奢型邻汰燕计娶什侧邓被有慌娇浦患妈景实拢圣氧怜租法甄低韭谓弗号坪浚诊饰棚斧淆笼铂磊滴捎二俊懒叭魏弥娜弓测篇牛誓躁龚蛇龚绅峪赁巢须疽尿螺踊攀找赚饥驰殆烯逼者沤巳让荤十窑稼仿措惮溢壬铺丑肮毛侦簇乾兄垢卤郸枷蜕址喉嘘斯野磺颓疏囱馁巍肿于簧恍敦底还椰准涌恨伙磨拍蛛篆墅亨沾霉致扳函雌渣牟趟尉沪掣增坡取钥妆逢演紧韶坡窄曼弘链跟矿捶睛修彻闺厘湘晶瘩抒面奸磷踌其搐锌素换楚媒淡玩酚撩绰秽磕载确萍搜寺账查项相赋