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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,9.概括记叙文的要点,概括方法,对于故事类记叙文，我们应首先找出故事的主角，然后找出该主角(何时何地因何原因或出于何种目的)做了何事，再弄清结果如何，以及该故事说明了一个什么道理或给人有什么启示。其中“某人做了某事”是最主要的。,在写作过程中还注意以下几点：,(1)时态应与原文时态一致。,(2)一般以第三人称的形式来表述。如I要变成The writer,he/she等。,(3)可选用以下句式开头。,The passage/story is about.,The author tells us a story about a.,The passage is a story about.,注:由于字数限制为大约30个词，我们也不一定要使用The story tells us之类的开头语。,超级模板,(不一定都适合,仅作参考),(1)In order to.sb.did sth./sth.happened.As a result/Therefore,.,(2)sb.did sth./sth happened./which shows.due to/thanks to/because,(of).which shows.,主题：诚实才是上策,1.The author tells a story about(,某人,)a Chinese student,with an excellent academic achievement who(,做某事,),couldnt find a job,in Germany(原,因,),because of,his stealing rides at the subway,(,启示,),which shows,honesty is the best policy.(2011,广州一模,),参考范文,2.(某人做了某事)The author happened to pick an umbrella on a bus and,tried to find its owner,.(结果)She was pleased to,find the owner,and also,got a job offered by the owner,of the umbrella.,(1)Some years ago,leaving the farm to work in the city,three brothers were employed by the same company and on the same pay.But three years later,they received different wages.So their father was confused and decided to pay a visit to the boss,who told him that he would let his sons explain for themselves.,超级仿写,概要写作,The three brothers were asked by the supervisor to go to the airport to get a cargo inventory at different times.Jim,who received 500 dollars a month,got the information on the phone instead of going to the airport himself.Frank,the 1000 dollars a month brother with a list of more cargoes.George,the 1500 dollars a month brother came back with detailed information and also did something extra without being told.,参考答案：,(某人做了某事)Three brothers,who worked for the same company,received different wages(原因)due to their different attitudes towards their work,(意义)which shows a right attitude is of great help to ones life.,(2)I hired a carpenter to help me repair an old farmhouse.After he just finished a tiring day on the job,a flat tire made him lose an hour of work.Worse still,his ancient truck refused to start.When I drove him home,he sat in stony silence.On arriving,he invited me in to meet his family.As we walked toward the front door,he stopped for a short time at a small tree,touching the branches with both hands.,When opening the door,his brown face was covered with smiles and he hugged his two small children and gave his wife a kiss.,After supper,he walked me to the car.When we passed the tree and my curiosity drove me to ask him,“Before we went in,why did you stop by the tree?”“Oh,thats my trouble tree,”he replied,“I know I cant help having troubles on the job and in my life,but those troubles dont belong in the house with my wife and children.,I can hang them up on the tree every night before I come home.But it turned out that the next morning there werent as many troubles as I remembered the night before.Put down our worries for a moment and we will be relieved for ever.”,参考答案：,In order not to worry his family,(某人做了某事)he didnt bring his trouble home,and to his surprise,he forgot the trouble the next day.(启示)Therefore,we are advised to put down our worries and relieve our pressure.,2.读写任务,(某人做某事)A boy,who used to think housework was an adults job,was asked to wash dishes.Though surprised and unwilling to do so at first,(结果)he finally realized he,too,should take on responsibility in the household.,Nowadays,quite a lot of children take it for granted that their parents do all the chores at home.They are either busy playing games or doing their schoolwork but seldom wash dishes or do the cleaning.,It is,of course,not right for children not to take on any responsibility in the household.As a family member,a child should help with the housework so that their parents can relax themselves after a long days work.If a child takes his role in the housework,he will become sympathetic and considerate and would like to help others.,I used to be rather lazy,not participating in any housework and did not understand my parents hardship until one day I helped clean the house.From then on,I find it a pleasure to help others and I am proud to say I have grown to be a person who can take on responsibilities both at home and at school.,
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