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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,How to write a good article,Robert Ruan,目标,goals,了解英语书面表达的评分标准,01,掌握书面表达的类型及写作技巧,02,能够应用写作技巧及所学知识，完成书面表达的写作,03,01,中考英语书面表达的评分标准,第一档（,13-15,分）,信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。,第二档（,10-12,分）,信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表达。,第三档（,7-9,分）,能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。,第四档（,4-6,分）,只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。,第五档（,0-3,分）,只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。,隐藏的评分标准！,02,1,、规范书写，字母饱满圆润，格式正确。,2,、坚决不能在试卷上出现,乱涂,、,乱写,、或,用修正液覆盖,现象,给人一种凌乱的感觉。,3,、一旦写错，规范修改,用一条斜线划掉,即可。,eg:He can speker speak English very well.,书写注意事项,英文字母实例,作文答题纸一般为单线，我们应将单线作为“四线格”中的第三线并以此为基准书写，不要把它作为第四线，让字母吊在线上。,？,单从书写上看,猜一猜他们的作文会是得多少分？,15,？,单从书写上看,猜一猜他们的作文会是得多少分？,6,？,单从书写上看,猜一猜他们的作文会是得多少分？,3,？,单从书写上看,猜一猜他们的作文会是得多少分？,Remember,！,We must pay attention to our handwriting,it can help us get a high grade.,03,根据汉语提示完成作文,根据表格提示完成作文,书面表达常见题型,根据图片提示完成作文,04,写作策略,审,列,整,连,稿纸上完成,美,实例展示,My room,写一篇短文向你的朋友介绍你的房间，注意用到房间里的物品和位置，短文不少于,40,个单词,写作第一步,My room,认真审题，分析背景,找出文章要表达的中心,。,审,写作第一步,写一篇,短文,向你的朋友,介绍你的房间,，注意用到,房间里的物品,和,位置,，短文,不少于,40,个单词,审,字数要求,文章,体裁,主题,文章内容,写作第一步,My room,用核心词汇或短语列出文章要点,。,列,写作第一步,My room,Talk in your group,介词或介词短语,:on,，,Next to,，,Above,，,In front of,关键句型,：,There be,，,I have,，,you can see,列,in,写作第三步,My room,将列出的,核心词汇,或,短语,整理,成句子,使结构完整，符合表达习惯,整,写作第三步,My room,1,，,There is,a big bed in my room,2,Above,my bed is a map of China,3,Next to,my bed is my bed stand,4,I have a book case too,many books are,on,it.,5,In front of,the case,you can see,my desk.,整,写作第四步,My room,恰当运用,关联词句,，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。,连,写作第四步,My room,There is a big bed in my room.Above my bed is a map of China.Next to my bed is my bed stand.I have a bookcase,，,and,many books are on it.In front of the case,it is my desk.On the desk,there is a fish tank,some fish are in it.There is,also,a globe on the desk.,连,写作第五步,My room,修改词句，,美化文章,。在,有把握的情况下,改变句式或添加语句，展示自己的语言功底。,美,写作第五步,My room,My Room,This is my room.,There is a big bed in my room.Above my bed is a map of China.,China is my Motherland.,Next to my bed is my bed,stand.I have a book case,，,many books are on it.In front of the case,it is my desk.On the desk,there is a fish tank,some fish are in,it.,I like them very much.,There is also a globe on the desk.,This is my room.Do you like this room?,美,My Room,This is my room.,There is a big bed in my room.Above my bed is a map of China.,China is my Motherland.,Next to my bed is my bed,stand.I have a book case,，,many books are on it.In front of the case,it is my desk.On the desk,there is a fish tank,some fish are in,it.,I like them very much.,There is also a globe on the desk.,This is my room.Do you like this room?,Congratulations!,Oh,dont forget the last step!,将草稿认真抄写到答题纸上，一定注意书写的注意事项。,英语书面表达写作技巧回顾,审,列,整,连,最后抄在答题纸上,美,Practice,给你的朋友,Mary,写一封书信，,向她介绍你的房间,以及你的体育,用品收藏（,sports collection,），,不少于,40,词,范文,Dear Mary,This is,a photo of,my room.,There is a big bed in my room.Next to the bed,you can see a bookcase.There are some things in it.I have a lot of sports collection.I have three baseballs,two basketballs and a ping-pong bat.I love sports!I want to play sports with you.Have a good day!,yours,xxx,Homework,假设你是李枚，下面的照片是你的全家福，请你写一篇文章介绍你的家庭。,