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Click to edit Master title style,Click to edit Master text styles,Second level,Third level,Fourth level,Fifth level,*,Skills in Compositions,-complex structures,and,advanced expressions,1,写作的评分标准：,第五档（,25,30,分）：,很好地完成了试题规定的任务。,*对题中所提供的信息进行了恰当的描述,清楚地表达了自己的观点并进行了充分合理的论证。,*语法结构和词汇选用恰当、丰富。,*语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误但为尽力使用较复杂语法结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。,*有效地使用了语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。,2,How to write a good composition,技 巧,1.,学会使用丰富的句式,2.,学会使用较高级词汇,实战演练,3.,学会使用适当的连词,3,一、学会使用丰富的句式,“既求达，也求雅”已成为高考高分评判的依据，所以要讲究句式结构的变化，避免单调、呆板和千篇一律的句子，尽量多使用各种句式，使句子丰富、灵活。,4,使用分词,Once it is held,it will bring a lot of chances to Beijing and make it more prosperous and modern.,Once,held,it will bring a lot of chances to Beijing,making,it more prosperous and modern.,Faced with,the environmental problems,to be solved,some people dont approve of it.,Weighing,the advantages and disadvantages,we should welcome the Olympic Games.,5,使用定语从句,Many pollution problems can be more serious,and it can eventually do damage to our surroundings.,Many pollution problems can be more,serious,which can eventually do damage,to our surroundings,.,More visitors from all over the world will flood into China,which,financially benefit Beijing.,Whats more,more people will be attracted,to Beijing,which will contribute to the,development of tourism to a great extent.,6,使用,with,结构,When the number of tourists is increasing,traffic will become more crowded.,With,the number of tourists,increasing,traffic will become more crowded.,With,more and more visitors,going,to Beijing,tourism will be,flourishing,.,With everyone doing his bit,the game will be a great success.,7,使用被动句,Measures should,be taken,to avoid the bad effect mentioned above.,Only in this way can we,hold a successful,Olympic Games.,使用倒装结构,8,二、学会使用较高级词汇,用词准确、得体是写作的前提，在此基础上使用高级词汇和短语，既可以体现出作者的语言驾驭能力，又有助于获得高分。,9,How to use advanced expressions,In my opinion,it is,difficult,to hold the,Olympics.,In my opinion,it is,challenging,to hold,the Olympics.,It will have a,great,effect on the development of Beijing.,far-reaching profound significant,10,In a word,the Olympic Games will make,Beijing more,beautiful,.,fascinating,In the long run,hosting the Olympics,will play,a,necessary,part in,prospering economy as well as booming tourism.,an indispensable,The advantages of the Game,is over heavier than,its disadvantages.,outweigh,11,Tourism is,becoming a booming industry,with the development of the city.,China will,enjoy a boom,in economy.,促进,繁荣经济,旅游发展,Some students see it as a good opportunity to,boost economy,and,accelerate the pace,of the,construction of our modern society.,Holding the Olympic Games will,promote the development of economy,making the city,more,booming,and modern.,12,“中国位于太平洋西岸，地大物博，历史悠久，面积,960,万平方公里”。,China lies on the west bank of the Pacific,Ocean.It is very big and has a lot of things.,Its history is very long,and its area is 9.6 million square kilometers.,Practice to challenge yourself,13,China,which,lies on the west of the Pacific Ocean,is rich in,natural resources.It is a great country,with a long history,covering,an area of 9.6 million square kilometers.,China,a large country,with a long history,lies on the west of the Pacific Ocean.,It,is abundant in,natural resources,covering,an area of 9.6 million square kilometers.,14,Replace the underlined expressions,Among all the people going to work,car,drivers,make up,18%.,2.The Internet can help us,finish,many tasks.,3.The library is,important,to us.,4.One can only become a skilled one after,many,failures.,5.Last year,saw,a more and more fierce competition in the job market.,6.He,tried to,pass the exam,but failed.,complete,accomplish,fulfill,vital,essential,endless,countless,numerous,witnessed,attempted to,amount to,account for,get through,15,7.Some students dont,value,their money at all.,8.It is also essential that you,get,some skills for taking exams.,treasure,cherish,acquire,obtain,gain,9.It would take me a great deal of time,which,would,surely,invite numerous inconveniences,to me.,undoubtedly,unquestionably,10.More and more people,come to,big cities,which causes serious housing problems.,flood into,crowd into,pour into,definitely,16,A Campaign Speech,Im sure I,well,satisfy the conditions for working as chairman.Since senior middle school,Ive been,serving as,monitor of my class,which has offered me,invaluable,experience.More importantly,my job has always been,sung high praise of,by both my classmates and teachers,which has fully proved my strong,capability,of being a student leader.As far as my character is concerned,Im optimistic,enthusiastic,17,easygoing and always ready to offer help.In addition,I enjoy,a variety of,hobbies,ranging from,literature to sports.All of the above demonstrates that I can be a qualified and,competent,chairman.,If I were elected,I would try every means to,cope with,whatever problem we might,encounter,.Moreover,taking all our interests into consideration,I would organize,diverse,activities so as to enrich our university life as well as improve,18,our
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