基础写作Polishyou

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,写作训练之-Polish your sentences,Describe the following,pictures,1.他是一个八岁的男孩,A.He is a boy and he is eight years old,B.He is a boy,who is eight,C.He is an eight-year-old boy,D.He is a boy aged eight.,2.当他从车上摔下时，Lily正经过。,A.Lily was passing by when he fell off his bike.,B.Lily happened to be passing by when he fell off his bike.,3.我将尽全力帮助你,。,A.Ill do/try my best to help you.,B.Ill do what I can to help you.,C.Ill do my utmost(,最大可能),to help you.,D.Ill spare no effort to help you.,台湾日月潭,4.大家都知道：台湾是中国的一部分,A.Its known that Taiwan is a part of China.,B.As we know,Taiwan is a part of China,C.As is known to us,Taiwan is a part of China.,D.Its universally acknowledged that Taiwan belongs to China.,5,.,正如谚语所说：熟能生巧,A.As the saying goes,practice makes perfect,B.With the saying going,practice makes perfect.,用较高级词汇/短语替换划线部分,1,.We all,think he is a great man,.,2.I like sports very much so I want to be a volunteer in the 2010 Asian Games very much.,3.She went there,in order to study music,.,4.,In our school,there are twenty-six classrooms,.,We all,him,.,She went there,studying music.,Our school twentysix classrooms.,think highly of,Crazy about sports，I am eager to,be a volunteer in 2010 Asian Games,for the purpose of,is made up of,较高级词汇/结构,5.,You can find my house easily.,6.,Because the weather was good,our journey,was comfortable.,7.Daily exercise,is good for,our health,.,Youll finding my house.,Daily exercise our health.,the good weather,our journey was comfortable.,have no trouble,Thanks to,is beneficial to,语法结构转换(Exercises 1),1.When he arrives,please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形式）.,2.,What surprises him,is that the little girl knows so many things.（使用介词短语）,3.,He came in and there was a baby in his arms.(用with结构),please give me an e-mail.,，the little girl knows so many things.,On his arriving,To his surprise,He came in,with a baby in his arms.,5.,He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型),6.Your can fulfil your dream only by working hard.(使用only 倒装）,It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that,he knew what had happened.,语法结构(Exercises 2),Only by working hard can you fulfil your dream.,7.She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.(使用过去分词),8.When he spoke,he felt more and more excited.（使用句型结构-越，就越）,by many students,she walked out of the lab.,he spoke,excited he felt.,语法结构(Exercises 3),Followed,The more the more,句式多样,文章增“,靓,”,一.使用,非谓语动词,使句子简洁高档,二.巧用,倒装,增强句子表现力,三.尝试,多样化,表达方式,方法一.巧用分词结构 增强句子的表现力,She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.,she walked out,of the lab.,2.Once it is seen,it can never be forgotten.,it can never be forgotten.,When he arrives，please give me an e-mail,please give me an email.,4.,If the weather permits,I will come tomorrow,Followed by many students,Once seen,，,On arriving/his arrival,I will come tomorrow,weather permitting,.,.,方法二.巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力,1.He didnt realize his foolishness until he returned home.,Not until,2.We can save the earth by changing the way we live.,Only,3.He is clever but he does not work hard.,as/though,4.The clock tower stands on the other side of the street.,On the other side of the street,Complete the sentences,he returned home,did he realize,his foolishness.,by changing the way we live,can we,save the earth.,Clever,he is,he does not work hard.,stands the clock tower.,位于山顶,作为一个有,137,年历史的学校，我校是一所培养人才的摇篮,.,（同位语，介词短语、倒装）,2.,这次车祸是由于司机的粗心，导致了三尸四命。,With a long history of 137 years,our school,a cradle of numerous talents,is located on the top of the hill./,On the top of the hill stands our school,a cradle of numerous talents,which has a history of 137 years.,The drivers carelessness was to blame for the,traffic accident,which led to three deaths,including a pregnant woman.,Practice makes perfect,方法二.巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力,Translate the sentences by using Inverted Sentences(倒装句),1.他从不说关于他家庭的事.,2.只有我们每个人都意识到水的重要性,我们才能生活得更好.,3.,只有用这种方式,我们才能有足够的精力好好学习,.,Never did he speak about his own family.,Only when each of us realizes the importance of water,can we live a better life.,Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.,方法二.巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力,4.,他是个孩子，却知道很多。,5.,墙上有个通知，上面写着“请节约用水”.,Child as/though he is,he knows a lot.,On the wall is a notice saying“Please Save Water”.,方法三.尝试多样化表达方式,In recent years,Beijing has been advancing very fast.,All these make peoples lives convenient,pleasant and colorful.,_,which_,With the development of _,_,_,_so _ that_,_,In recent years,Beijing has been advancing very fast,makes peoples lives convenient,pleasant,Beijing,peoples lives are becoming more and more convenient,pleasant and colorful.,Nowadays,Beijing is developing fast peoples lives are getting more convenient,pleasant and colorful.,Use different ways to describe the picture,方法三.尝试多样化表达方式,一到机场就受到欢迎,As soon as,Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport,they were warmly welcomed.,On,arriving at the airport,Lien Chan and his wife,Lien Cha