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无忧,PPT,整理发布,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,无忧,PPT,整理发布,Writing of TEM-4,常见语言失误类型,词的属性,句子的结构,时态、语态、语气、情态,句子连接,平衡结构,(1),Some one thinks that the opportunity is very few for him because he has never meet the chance.,(2),But other one thinks there are chances here and there,then everyone can meet opportunity.,(3),I resist the second opinion.,(4),There are some opportunities,the important thing is that if we could catch the chance when we meet it.,(5),In our lives we have a lot of choice that need us take our heart to.,(6),For example,when I was a little boy,my health was very bad.,(7),One day a teacher advise me to join the basketball team with my friends.,(8),My health become well.,(9),So I think there are opportunities for everyone.,命题作文写作模式,比较选择类,意义、重要性、危害性说明类,观点论证类,现象解释类,提出建议、解决问题类,命题作文写作模式,A.,比较选择类：,A1.,比较两种事物的优缺点并标明倾向,A2.,比较两种做法的利弊并标明倾向,A3.,对一事物或做法的利弊说明,比较两种事物的优缺点并标明倾向,Television as a,Better,Source of Entertainment,A Balanced Diet:,A Better Way,to Stay Healthy,Borrowing Books,Outweighs,Buying Books,结构模式,A1,B1;A2,B2,语言模式,Between the two:A and B,I hold that A is better,My belief that A is better than B is based on the following two reasons.The first reason is that A can .While B can only.The second reason is that A can .But B can only .,For the reasons mentioned above,we can easily draw the conclusion that A outweighs B as an important C.,比较两种做法的利弊并标明倾向,Where to Live:In a City or in the Country?,Where to Eat:In a Restaurant or at Home?,Whether to Further Study or to Find a Job Soon after Graduation?,结构模式,引言：事实引出,A,B,说明两者有利有弊。,正文：赞成,A,的理由概括加拓展；赞成,B,的理由概括加拓展；,AB,各有弊端。,结论,语言模式,As to the question:where should we A or B,different people have different opinions.Actually,both A and B have their own advantages and disadvantages.,Many people appreciate the convenience of A.But B is also attractive.Both A and B,however,have their own disadvantages.,As far as I am concerned,I like A/B.So,given the chance,I would prefer A/B to B/A.,Exercise,Directions:Every July is the time for graduates to decide whether to further study or to find a job.Some students take part in graduate entrance examination,but others want to work as soon as they graduate.Suppose you were to graduate,which one do you prefer?,Which to Choose:to Further Study or to Find a Job after Graduation?,Actually,different people have different opinions as to the question,because both have their advantages and disadvantages.,Many people appreciate the bright future a masters degree may bring to them.But a promising job after college graduation is also attractive.,However,both of them have their own problems.,As far as I am concerned,I want to be more knowledgeable and capable through post graduate study.So,given me a chance,I would choose to further study in graduate school.,对一事物或做法的利弊说明,The Advantages and Disadvantages of Taking a Part-Time Job,On Online Shopping,On the Widening of College Enrollment,结构模式,引言：说明,A,引起的争议,正文：详写利弊的一端，或利或弊,结论：标明自己的观点,语言模式,“,A coin has two sides.”It is the same case for A.A has both advantages and disadvantages.Though some people argue that,I insist that its,My decision that mostly lies in the following.One .Another reason for my preference for A is .Finally,A,On the whole,A can be said a blessing and a curse.But fairly speaking,everyone should admit that the merits of A outweigh the troubles it brings to us,which,after all,is a problem of how to,B.,意义、重要性、危害性说明类,The Importance of Extracurricular Activities,The Harms of College Students Renting and Living Out,Travel Broadens Our Mind,结构模式,引言：引出要说明的事物，明确自己对这一事物的态度。,正文：承接首段观点：,分主题一,+,拓展观点,分主题二,+,拓展观点,结论：重要性,+,建议或展望,/,危险性,+,警示,/,有利性,+,建议,语言模式,A plays a very important role in,(A should be banned.),The importance of A lies in the following aspects.Firstly,Secondly,(The grate harms A may bring to our life lie in the following aspects.),From what are discussed above,we can naturally draw the conclusion that A is essential to Therefore,we should,(From what are discussed above,we can.Therefore,it should be prohibited.),The Harms of College Students Renting and Living Out,There is a popular tendency that college students live in rented houses,enjoying their freedom.,No matter how,popular it is nowadays,however,I hold a disapproving opinion to such a behavior.,Money is the first and the most important reason,for me to say“no”to this practice.,The second reason for my disapproval is that,living out of campus and separating from your classmates would bring about much communication inconvenience and consequently lead to little sense of belonging to your class,When students talk about renting houses out of campus,romantic scenes bubble.,But thinking about the real life,should we all have to be realistic enough?,C.,观点论证类,Do You Agree with“Euthanasia”?,Is Thrift Necessary in Modern Society?,Whats your opinion about reducing childrens excessive assignment?,结构模式,Part one:,引出主题；引出相反观点；顺承别人观点表明同意,Part two:,承接首段观点，对本段内容加以限制；不同观点,+,解释、说明,Part three:
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