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Click to edit Master title style,Click to edit Master text styles,Second level,Third level,Fourth level,Fifth level,*,.,*,Click to edit Master title style,Click to edit Master text styles,Second level,Third level,Fourth level,Fifth level,*,.,*,U,.,U.,1,“,U,型三步法,”,在概要写作中的尝试,1,概要写作评分原则解读,2,“,U,型三步法”的设计思路,3,“,U,型三步法”的设计课例,.,“U型三步法”在概要写作中的尝试1概要写作评分原则解读2“U,2,本题总分为,25,分，按,5,个档次给分。,评分时，先根据所写概要的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要去来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。,词数少于,40,的和多于,80,的，从总分中减去,2,分。,评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑,.,拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。,如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。,1,概要写作评分原则解读,.,本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。1概要写作评分原则解读.,3,评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：,1.,对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；,2.,应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；,3.,上下文的连贯性；,4.,对各要点表达的独立性情况。,解读之 篇,.,评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：解读之 篇,4,解读之 篇,档 次,描 述,第,五,档,(,21,-,25,),理解准确，涵盖全部要点。,能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。,有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完 成的概要结构紧凑。,完全使用自己的语言。,.,解读之 篇档 次描 述第 理解准确，,5,整体阅读,提炼归纳,解读文本,大,P,assage,理解准确，涵盖全部要点。,小,P,assage,能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。,有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的,概要结构紧凑。,完全使用自己的语言。,解读之 篇,.,整体阅读解读文本大Passage理解准确，涵盖全部要点。小P,6,U,P W,要点守恒,扩词成句,压缩文本,提炼关键词,W S,增色添彩,连句成篇,S P,2,“,U,型三步法”的设计思路,理解准确，,涵盖全部要点。,能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。,有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使结构紧凑。,完全使用自己的语言,。,有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使结构紧凑。,.,UP W要点守恒 扩词成句压缩文本提炼关键词W,7,“,U,型三步法”之,第一步,P W,整体阅读,怎么找？,直接提取法,间接整合法,直接间接混合法,找什么？,transitional words,key words,回视语篇,词拼图,还原语篇主要脉络,.,“U型三步法”之 第一步 P W整体阅读 怎么,8,第一步,P W,之,直接提取法,例,1,（节选自,2013,年北京卷,阅读理解,C,篇）,The phenomenon of tracking celebrities has been around for ages.In the 4th century B.C.,painters followed Alexander the Great into battle,hoping to picture his victories for his admirers.When Charles Dickens visited America in the 19th century,his sold-out readings attracted thousands of fans,leading him to complain about his lack of privacy.Tabloids of the 1920s and 1930s ran articles about film-stars in much the same way that modern tabloids and websites do.,.,9,第二步,W S,之,同义替换,例1（节选自2013年北京卷阅读理解 C篇）,The tracking problem faced by celebrities,has a long history,.,People have been crazy about,/obsessed with,chasing,celebrities,for a long time,.,The craze for,following,celebrities,started long ago,.,tracking celebrities,for ages.In the 4th century B.C.,in the 19th century,the 1920s and 1930s,.,第二步 W S 之 同义替换例1（节选自201,10,第一步,P W,之,间接整合法,例2（节选自2014年四川卷阅读理解E篇）,Generally,people believe that the hormone oxytocin is let out in our body in various social situations and our body creates a large amount of it during positive social interactions such as falling in love or giving birth.But in a previous experiment Professor Ryan found that the hormone is also let out in our body during negative social interactions such as envy.,.,11,第二步,W S,之,同义替换,例2（节选自2014年四川卷阅读理解 E篇）,The hormone oxytocin is,released,in negative as well as positive social,contacts,.,Generally,the hormone oxytocin,let out,positive But,negative,social,interactions,.,12,第一步,P W,之,直接间接混合法,例3（节选自Module 6 Unit 2 Poems）,There are various reasons why people write poetry.Some poems tell a story or describe something in a way that will give a strong impression.Others try to convey certain emotions.Poets use many different forms of poetry to express themselves.,.,13,例3（节选自Module 6 Unit 2 Poems）,reasons write poetry.,Some describe,Others convey certain emotions.,第二步,W S,之,同义替换,People,compose,poems for,different purposes,some,descriptive,while others,emotional,.,Poems stem from people,s,intentions,of,shar,ing,stories or feelings,.,Poetry springs from people,s,desires,to,dep,ict things,or to,portray emotions,.,.,14,“,U,型三步法”之,第二步,W S,句内连接,（要点内部）,（1）词连接,（2）句型连接,（3）语法结构连接,要点守恒,简单句：,同义替换,复合句：,词的精确 句的达意,同义替换,.,“U型三步法”之 第二步 W S句内连接（1）词连,15,第二步,W S,之,句内连接（,要点内部,）,例4（节选自2013年北京卷阅读理解 C篇）,Although being famous might sound like a dream come true,todays star,s,feeling like zoo animals,face pressures that few of us can imagine.They are at the center of much of the worlds attention.Paparazzi camp outside their homes,cameras ready.Tabloids publish thrilling stories about their personal lives.Just imagine not being able to do anything without being photographed or interrupted for a signature.According to psychologist Christina Villarreal，celebritiesfamous peopleworry constantly about their public appearance.Eventually，they start to lose track of who they really are，seeing themselves the way their fans imagine them，not as the people they were before everyone knew their names.,“,Over time,”,Villarreal says,“,they feel separated and alone,.”,.,第二步 W S 之 句内连接（要点内部）例4（节,16,第二步,W S,之,句内连接,:,词连接,the center of,attention celebrities,worry,public appearacne,lose track,Celebrities are the,focus,of much attention.They,are very concerned about,their public,image,and start to,lose their own identity,.,Since ce,lebrit,i,es are the focus of much attention,and are overly,concerned about their public image,they,start to lose their own identity.,and thus;as a result/consequence;consequently.,.,第二步 W S 之 句内连接:词连接 th,17,第二步,W S,之,句内连接,:,句型,连接,Celebrit,i,es are the,focus,of much attention.They,are very concerned about,their public,image,and start to,lose their own identity,.,As the focus of muc
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