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,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,2006,年,TEM-4,作文试题及样卷评分,Topic,Recently a Beijing information company did a survey of student life among more than 700 students in Beijing,Guangzhou,Xian,Chengdu,Shanghai,Wuhan,Nanjing,and,Shengyang,.The results have shown that 67 percent of students think that saving money is a good habit while the rest believe that using tomorrows money today is better.What do you think?,Instructions,Write a composition of about 200 words.,You are to write in three parts.,In the first part,state specifically what your opinion is.,In the second part,support your opinion with appropriate details.,In the last part,bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.,You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.,Marks will be awarded for content,organization,grammar and appropriateness.Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.,Band 5:15 Effective Communication with Accuracy,The writing effectively addresses the writing task.It demonstrates a well developed logical organizational structure with clearly stated main ideas and sufficient supporting details.It has almost no errors of vocabulary,spelling,punctuation or syntax,an,d it displays an adequate ability to use the language with appropriateness.No difficulty is experienced by the reader.,Band 4:14-12 Good Communication with Few Inaccuracies,The writing adequately addresses almost all of the writing task,though it deals with some parts more effectively than others.It demonstrates a generally well developed logical organizational structure with main ideas and supporting,details,.,It has relatively few significant errors of,vocabulary,spelling,punctuation or syntax,and,it displays an ability to use the language with,appropriateness.Very little difficulty is,experienced by the reader.,Band 3:11-9 Passable Communication with Some Inaccuracies,The writing adequately addresses most of the writing task.On the whole,it demonstrates an adequately developed organizational structure,though there may occasionally be a lack of relevance,clarity,consistency or support.,It has occasional errors of vocabulary,spelling,punctuation or syntax,which may,from time to time,obscure meaning,and for the most part it displays some ability to use the language with appropriateness.Occasional difficulty is experienced by the reader.,Band 2:8-6 Problematic Communication with Frequent Inaccuracies,The writing only addresses some of the writing task.It demonstrates and inadequate,organiza,-,tional,structure,and there may quite often be a lack of relevance,clarity,consistency or support.,It has frequent errors of vocabulary,spelling,punctuation or syntax.And it displays a limited ability to use the language with It has frequent errors of vocabulary,spelling,punctuation or syntax.And it displays a limited ability to use the language with appropriateness.Some difficulty is experienced by the reader.,Band 1:5-3 Almost No Communication,The writing almost completely fails to address the writing task.It has neither an organizational structure nor coherence.,Almost all sentences contain errors of vocabulary,spelling,punctuation or syntax,and it displays no,ability,to use the language with appropriateness.Even after considerable effort on the part of the reader,the text is largely incomprehensible.,字数不足,170,扣,1,分。,以下是样卷分析。,Sample 1,The Good Habit,Nowadays,more and more,young people,think that,it is better that using tomorrows,money today than saving money,while,in,my opinion,I think,its right.,For the first,our,contrair,has to develop.,So it,calls us to,use more money to let the,nation develop.,And then,that,may make our life more,comfortable.For example,I heard a story,.,There,are,two man.A,use,tomorrows,money to buy a new house,as,he has to,pay money to the bank every,months,while B,start,keeping,money.,Twenty years later,B finally k,eeping,enough money to buy a new house,but A has been,lived,in,it,for twenty years and,pay,enough,money to the bank.,At the end,if we have the,abilile,to pay the,list,why we,dont,use tomorrows money to,let our life more wonderful,?,So,thats what I think.,5-6,分。结构基本符合，但语言过于简单，语法错误多，内容模糊不清，题目不正确，字数少于,170,。,举例不可信。举例应该真实可信，比如亲身经,历、朋友体验或者名人轶事等。,文章结尾太简单。,Sample 2:,Saving money is a good habit,The other day,I heard a conversation between a boy and a girl.“Why,are you always lack of,money?As far I know,your parents give you,ample,money for your daily life”.said the girl.“Yes,I always use tomorrows money today”.Said the boy.“Its a bad habit,and you,should your money,!”the girl,shouted,.This is a very common phenomenon among the university students.,Owing to their argument,certainly,I am in favor of the girls view.,What possibly contributes to,the,preference can be listed,as follow,.In the,first place,money is very important for us.,We use money,buy,food,buy clothes and,so on.But,money is very precious,because its very hard to make money.So,money should be used when its necessary.,In the second place
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