写作技巧点拨系列(二)

写作技巧点拨系列,(,二,),掌握四种并列关系,并列句变得更容易,【,句式提炼,】,1.(2013,四川高考,)Keep it in mind,and,gradually we can gain this good learning habit and benefit from it.,记住它,我们会逐渐掌握这种好的学习习惯,并从中受益。,分析,:,and,为并列连词,连接前后句子,表示同等关系。,2.(2013,辽宁高考,)Usually,no matter how far away,or,how busy we are,we will try to come home for the celebration.,通常,不管我们距离多远或者我们多么忙,我们将会设法回家庆祝。,分析,:,or,连接前后句子表示选择,为选择关系的连词。,3.(2013,湖南高考,)I began to learn English very hard,which was hard work,but,I enjoyed it.,我开始努力学习英语,虽然很辛苦,但我喜欢。,分析,:,but,连接前后句子是表示转折意义的并列连词。,4.(2013,全国卷,)As we all know,Chinese knots mean reunion,friendliness,warmth,peace and love,so,I think they will sell well.,正如我们所知,中国结意味着团聚、友好、温暖、和平和爱,所以我想它们会卖得好。,分析,:,so,连接前后两个表示因果关系的句子,意思为“所以,结果”,为因果关系的并列连词。,【,核心点拨,】,1.,并列句定义,由并列连词连接的两个或两个以上独立的句子就是并列句。其句式特点为,:,句子之间用逗号,+,连词或分号隔开或通过句意来体现。,2.,并列连词的分类,:,(1),同等关系,:,常用,and,not only.but also.,both.and.,as well as,then,when(,就在这时,),等。,He is in Class One,and,I am in Class Two.,他在一班,我在二班。,(2),选择关系,:,常用,or,otherwise,either.or.,neither.nor,等。,Either,you follow my instructions,or,you leave here.,要么你遵从我的指示,要么你离开这儿。,(3),转折关系,:,常用,but,still,yet,while,等。,She thought I was talking about her daughter,while,in fact,I was talking about my daughter.,她认为我在谈她女儿,可是,事实上我在谈我的女儿。,(4),因果关系,:,常用,so,for,等。,Peter went to bed early,for,he felt very tired.,彼得早早就睡觉了,因为他感到非常疲乏。,3.,特别提醒,:,(1)“,祈使句,+and/,or(otherwise,)+,简单句,”,也是并列句的一种,or,在此意为,“,否则,”,。,Give me one more minute,or,I wont be able to finish it.,再多给我一分钟,否则我不能完成它。,(2)not only.but also,连接的并列句,当,not only,置于句首时,其后的句子通常要用部分倒装的形式。,Not only,has she been late three times,but also,she has done no work.,她不仅仅迟到了三次,她还没干一点活。,(3),并列句有时也可不用并列连词连接,而用分号,(;),连接。,The future is bright;the road is tortuous.,前途是光明的,道路是曲折的。,【,对点训练,】,.,用适当的连词填空,1.He doesnt talk much,_ he thinks a lot.,2.One more week,_ we will finish the task.,3.Tom had a headache,_ he didnt go to the party.,4.Li Fang is very busy,_ shes always helping others with,their lessons.,5.Lets turn to Uncle Wang for help,_ our work cant be,finished on time.,but,and,so,but,for,.,用适当的并列连词变换句型,1.If you dont get up now,youll be late for work.,_,2.He is a poet.He is also a writer.,_,_,Get up now,or youll be late for work.,He is a poet and writer.,He is not only a poet but also a writer.,3.He is watching TV.Im reading the newspaper.,_,4.She cant finish the task on time and nor can I.,_,5.Run fast.You will be caught up with.,_,He is watching TV while Im reading the newspaper.,Neither she nor I can finish the task on time.,Run fast or you will be caught up with.,