高考英语作文素材课件

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,二级,三级,四级,五级,高考英语作文,高考英语作文,1,1.,写作考情解读,2.,写作升级,3.,实战演练,4.Q&A,目,录,CONTENTS,1.写作考情解读2.写作升级3.实战演练4.Q&A目录CON,2,1,PART ONE,写作考情解读,1PART ONE 写作考情解读,3,03,考情考点解读,-,写作文体分类,1,记叙文,写人、写事,2,议论文,话题类、现象类,图片类、图表类,3,4,应用文,书信、日记,演讲稿,说明文,人物、地点,事物、方法,03考情考点解读-写作文体分类1记叙文2议论文34应用文说,4,考情考点解读,-,作文评分标准,1,2,3,4,Fast and effective creation of your presentation,覆盖了所有内容要点和要求；,内容：,10,分,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；,语言：,10,分,有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，全文结构紧凑流畅,结构：,5,分,内容,+,语言,15,分,结构考虑,+4-5,分,考情考点解读-作文评分标准1234Fast and eff,5,“,总分,25,分,“,“,定档给分,“,“,卷面美观,“,“,字数要求,“,词数,70,最多,10,分,高分作文,180-220ws,内容,10,分；语言,10,分；结构,5,分,内容,+,语言,15,分,结构考虑,4-5,分,卷面定印象,如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次,A-E 5,个档,考情考点解读,高考作文采用总体评分方式,：,1.覆盖了所有内容要点和要求；,2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；,3.,具备较强的语言运用能力；,4.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，全文结构紧凑流畅,“总分25分“定档给分“卷面美观“字数要求“词数70,6,考情考点解读,-,写作五档,档次,内容,语言,组织结构,要求,A档,9-10分,9-10分,4-5分,覆盖所有内容要点；,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；,有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑,B档,7-8分,7-8分,3分,虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容；,语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，,应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯,C档,5-6分,5-6分,3分,虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容；,有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解；,应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。,D档,3-4分,3-4分,1分,漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容；,有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解；较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性,E档,0-2分,0-2分,0分,明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容；,较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解；,缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯,考情考点解读-写作五档档次内容语言组织结构要求A档9-10,7,2,PART TWO,写作升级,2PART TWO写作升级,8,9,一：,语言第一位（语言高级）,二：,内容第二位（要点齐全）,三：,结构第三位（文章分段）,三原则,高级词汇和句式,修辞手法,有效的连词,名人名言或谚语,作文升级,9一：语言第一位（语言高级）三原则高级词汇和句式修辞手法有效,9,01,写作,思路,02,内容,升级,03,语言,升级,开头,-,正文,-,结尾,审题立意,词汇,+,句型升级,写作升级,作文升级,01写作02内容03语言开头-正文-结尾审题立意词汇+句型升,10,2.1,写作思路,作文升级,-,写作思路,2.1 写作思路作文升级-写作思路,11,01,写作前,准确审题,解决内容问题,解决结构问题,02,写作中,想法 变 文字,语言运用能力,03,后写作阶段,修改,&,复查,写作规范,作文升级,-,写作思路,01准确审题02写作中想法 变 文字03后写作阶段修改&复查,12,作文升级,-,写作思路,结尾,开头,正文,三段论,的段落结构,作文升级-写作思路结尾开头正文三段论的段落结构,13,引入主题,01,阐明观点,02,引出下文,03,开头,作文升级,-,写作思路,-,开头,Hearing the news that,you plan to develop a new app of students sharing clothes, I feel truly proud of your novel idea. Personally speaking,I am willing to,share my clothes on your app.,The reasons are as follows.,引入主题01阐明观点02引出下文03开头作文升级-写作思路,14,正文,内容恰当,1.,把题目变成问题,2.,找出题目中的关键词,内容充分,1.,具体事例,2.,个人,经历,3.,类比,立意深远,1.,扩大范围,2.,扩大范畴,作文升级,-,写作思路,-,正文,正文内容恰当1.把题目变成问题内容充分1.具体事例立意深远1,15,话题：假货的危害,内容升化,立意深远,To,harm original bond,holders.,(cant,attract,and,remain customers),T,o,harm,consumers(harm consumers suffering financial,and emotional,loss),T,o harm national morality (cant set an example for the young),C,档,内容,话题：假货的危害,To,harm original bond,holders. + lose money, lose reputation,To harm consumers,. + poor quality goods, financial loss,作文升级,-,写作思路,-,正文,话题：假货的危害内容升化立意深远C档内容话题：假货的危害,16,Summary,Final comment,功能,总结,直接总结,首尾呼应,让步,提出解决方案,发出呼吁,预测将来发展,评论,In summary,I strongly hold the opinion that artificial intelligence will dominate human soon.,It is time for us to,lay more,emphasis on,its,development and find out how to,utilize,it properly.,作文升级,-,写作思路,-,结尾,Summary功能总结直接总结提出解决方案评论In summ,17,实战演练,-,图片类作文解析,作文升级,-,写作思路,实战演练作文升级-写作思路,18,Directions:Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.,请根据漫画的内容谈谈看后的感受。你的作文需包含：,1.,描述图片的内容,2.,谈谈你的看法,作文升级,-,写作思路,-,实战演练,Directions:Write an English c,19,Vividly depicted in the picture is a mother,helping her daughter wash feet and a daughter taking the service for granted and almost forgetting to celebrate Mothers Day without the remind of the newspaper.,It ironically reveals a commonly-occurring phenomenon,that children are spoilt, ignorant of paying off parents love and care.,As far as I am concerned,considering the shrinking scale of Chinese family, the only child is usually treasured. Parents are ready to do whatever they can to ensure their childs living condition, even helping them wash feet. No wonder the children are becoming selfish under such education.,However, it will lead to serious consequence to not only the family but also the society.,作文升级,-,写作思路,-,实战演练,开头：引入主题,阐明观点,引出下文,Vividly depicted in,20,Firstly, children are robbed of the opportunity to take care of themselves, thus losing the living ability when they grow up. They will,find it difficult to stay independent without their parents care.,Secondly, basic respect to parents is replaced by the idea to regard parents as servant, let alone pay back love and care,causing parents to feel heartbroken.,Whats more, when children lose the ability to respect and love people,the world of this question will be horrible to live.,After all, as the famous saying goes, Everyone is born equal instead of being someones slave.,As consequence, this phenomenon is definitely harmful.,Healthy environment of a family should be created,simply by refusing to treat your child as a king or queen.,作文升级,-,写作思路,-,实战演练,正文：内容升华,立意深远,结尾：总结,发出呼吁,Firstly, children a,21,2.2,内容提升,作文升级,-,写作思路,2.2内容提升作文升级-写作思路,22,神奇的STREEC（裸奔法）,STREEC因为和英文里的裸奔streak的发音相同，所以也叫“裸奔法”。,STREEC可以帮助我们快速记住下面12个单词：,Skill（技能）&Efficiency（效率）,Technology（科技）&Safety（安全）,Right（权利）&Responsibility（责任）,Environment（环境）&Health（健康）,Employment（就业）&Money（钱）,Culture（文化）&Fun（乐趣）,每一行第一个单词的首字母拼在一起，就是STREEC。有了STREEC，覆盖了人类生活中最常见的方面，我们便可以把抽象，难以理解，或者难以找到论点支撑的话题迅速具体化，让思考点子的过程变成顺藤摸瓜的过程。,作文升级,-,内容提升,-,审题立意,神奇的STREEC（裸奔法）STREEC因为和英文里的裸奔s,23,作文升级,-,内容提升,-,审题立意,一起来看看下面这个作文题目吧,Suppose you are asked to give advice on whether to attend college at home or abroad, write an essay to state your opinion. You are required to write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.,神奇的STREEC（裸奔法）的运用,Skill（技能）&Efficiency（效率）,Technology（科技）&Safety（安全）,Right（权利）&Responsibility（责任）,Environment（环境）&Health（健康）,Employment（就业）&Money（钱）,Culture（文化）&Fun（乐趣）,作文升级-内容提升-审题立意一起来看看下面这个作文题目吧,24,根据,STREEC,，可以从以下这些点来写：,Skill,（提升技能，可以说到国外的一些教育做得比较成熟，能够提升我们的学术技能，语言技能等。同时，一个人到国外念书，还能够提升我们的一些生活技能，如独立生活的能力以及对不同环境的适应能力等）,Employment,（因为有着国外留学的背景，也可以增加我们的就业竞争优势）,Culture,（去到国外，我们还能够接触到不同的文化，传播中国的文化，了解中外文化的差异，开阔自己的眼界等）,Fun,（去到国外留学同时也是一种有趣的生活体验，不仅体验到其他国家的教育，还能去到喜欢的国家，体验更多的来自学习，旅游，交友等等的乐趣）,作文升级,-,内容提升,-,审题立意,根据STREEC，可以从以下这些点来写：作文升级-内容提升,25,2019,年,1,月,写作试题,作文升级,-,内容提升,-,审题立意,2019年1月写作试题 作文升级-内容提升-审题立意,26,2019,年,1,月,II. Guided Writing (25),Directions: Write an English composition in around 150words according to the instructions given below.,假如你是明启中学的李华，你的朋友李楠给你写了一封信，告诉你他要开发一个新的,APP,，用这个软件共享衣服，想要征集大家的看法，你是否愿意共享你的衣服，给出理由（信的格式已给）。,作文升级,-,内容提升,-,审题立意,神奇的STREEC（裸奔法）的运用,Skill（技能）&Efficiency（效率）,Technology（科技）&Safety（安全）,Right（权利）&Responsibility（责任）,Environment（环境）&Health（健康）,Employment（就业）&Money（钱）,Culture（文化）&Fun（乐趣）,2019年1月作文升级-内容提升-审题立意神奇的STRE,27,Dear Li Nan,Hearing the news that you plan to develop a new app of students sharing clothes, I feel truly proud of your novel idea. Personally speaking,I am willing to share my clothes,on your app. The reasons are as follows.,To begin with, it will be wonderful for me if I learn that someone that I barely know of can,share my happiness,of wearing my clothes. It feels like you are emotionally connecting someone in your clothes. Then I may naturally wish to know more about that particular “someone” and probably,further deepen our relationship.,In the end, a good friendship between me and my clothes mate might be built based on our common clothes. Whats more, if other students can try my clothes through the app,in turn, I also can try their new clothes. Therefore, students can wear different types of clothes,without actually spending any money.,作文升级,-,内容提升,-,审题立意,愿意共享衣服,Fun,：乐趣、交友,Money,：省钱,Dear Li Nan,作文升级-内容提升-审题立,28,Whats more important is that sharing my clothes will,take full use of them.,In todays material society, there are so many parents who prepare lots of clothes for their beloved children for different occasions, such as a dress for the party, gym suit for indoor sports. Moreover,the clothes can only realize their true value,after they are put on a persons body.,To summarize, sharing my clothes on your app,benefits others and me,.,Yours,Li Hua,作文升级,-,内容提升,-,审题立意,Efficiency：衣服充分利用,作文升级-内容提升-审题立意Efficien,29,2.3,语言提升,作文升级,-,语言提升,2.3语言提升作文升级-语言提升,30,A,B,语言升级,词汇升级,A,句型升级,B,作文升级,-,语言提升,AB语言升级词汇升级A句型升级B作文升级-语言提升,31,具体性原则,stir/stimulate,students interest in,study,arouse,students,passion,in learning,make,students,self-motivated,in acquiring knowledge,.,新颖,性原则,the,approach,of the Internet,era,the,emergence,of the digital age,the,advent,of big data age,.,短语优先,As opposed to,making the team a united one, we spend too much time on developing individual skills.,词汇,升级,例,1:,make,students,like study,；,01,02,03,例,2:,the arrival of the age of information,例,3:,We spent too much time developing individual skills and we dont spend any time making the team a united one.,作文升级,-,语言提升,-,词汇升级,具体性原则stir/stimulate students,32,.,副词,Seemingly,meaningless little,thought or ideas can,potentially,explode into great projects when acted upon.,并列,Fragile yet sterner,Seemingly f,ragile yet sterner,词汇,升级,例,4:,Some little ideas seem meaningless, but they have a potential to explode into great projects when acted upon.,04,05,06,例,5:,the grass is not only fragile but also sterner.,例,6:,He is a wise man,and inspires me a lot.,押韵,Wise and witty,he has inspired me,a lot.,作文升级,-,语言提升,-,词汇升级,副词Seeminglymeaningless litt,33,The drawing above,depicts,a miracle : a group of,seemingly fragile but tenacious grass,can even,push upward,the huge rock above them. The power of,a single blade of grass,is weak, but if thousands of grass,straighten their unyielding backbones together, they can,overturn,big rocks and gain the blue sky and sunshine for growth.,作文升级,-,语言提升,-,词汇升级,The drawing above depicts a m,34,语言点评,具体,新颖,高级,1.,Seemingly,- It seems that /to be,2.,fragile,同义转化,weak ,tender, slight, sensitive, vulnerable,3.,tenacious,同义词转换,strong; firm; persistent; preserving,4.,straighten their unyielding backbones,挺起不屈的脊梁,作文升级,-,语言提升,-,词汇升级,语言点评1. Seemingly - It seems,35,B,分类,A,词汇,C,积累,作文升级,-,语言提升,-,词汇升级,BAC作文升级-语言提升-词汇升级,36,高级句型有哪些,排比句,非谓语动词,常用谚语,其他,强调句,倒装句,with,复合结构,定语从句,状语从句,名词性从句,被动句,8,作文升级,-,语言提升,-,句型升级,高级句型有哪些排比句非谓语动词常用谚语其他强调句倒装句,37,38,一：肯定不如双否好,二：陈述不如倒装妙,三：主动不如被动巧,三,不,如,作文升级,-,语言提升,-,句型升级,38一：肯定不如双否好三作文升级-语言提升-句型升级,38,例,1:,The postman comes on time every day.,01,02,03,The postman,never fails to,come,on time.,Not only can travelling relax us,but also broaden our horizons.,The main problem now is how,this can be prevented,from happening again.,例,2:,Travelling can not only relax us, but also broaden our horizons.,例,3:,The main problem now is how we can prevent this from happening again.,肯定不如双否好,陈述不如倒装妙,主动不如被动巧,作文升级,-,语言提升,-,句型升级,例1:The postman comes on time e,39,40,一：巧用非谓语,二：,妙加同位语,三：,排山倒海句,加分句,作文升级,-,语言提升,-,句型升级,40一：巧用非谓语加分句作文升级-语言提升-句型升级,40,04,05,06,例,4:,Nowadays, we can easily travel from one place to another and this bridges the gap among different races or cultures.,The great wall,a living proof of our splendid past,will be our first destination.,We have got,to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.,Nowadays, we can easily travel from one place to another,thus bridging,the gap among different race or cultures.,巧用非谓语,妙加同位语,排山倒海句,作文升级,-,语言提升,-,句型升级,例,5:,The Great wall is a living proof of our splendid past, so it will undoubtedly be our next destination.,例,6:,We have to study hard to realize our dream.,040506The great wall , a livin,41,作文提升,-,卷面篇,-,书写卷面升级,衡水体,作文提升-卷面篇-书写卷面升级衡水体,42,3,PART THREE,实战演练,3PART THREE 实战演练,43,高考英语作文素材课件,44,2019,年,12,月,普陀一模写作试题,实战演练,2019年12月普陀一模写作试题 实战演练,45,2019,年,12,月 普陀一模,II. Guided Writing (25),Directions: Write an English composition in around 150words according to the instructions given below.,如今，许多家长焦虑地守在孩子身边、监视孩子的一举一动，被称之为“直升机父母”(helicopter parents)， 还有“扫雪机父母”(snowplow parents)， 轰隆隆地扫除孩子通往成功道路上的所有障碍，让孩子免遭失败、挫折。对此，,学校校刊特辟专栏对此进行讨论，请以李华为名投稿，用身边的例子描述这两类家长，并谈谈对此的看法,。,事例一：频繁打电话、偷看日记手机,失败之处: 缺乏信任，子女受伤、疏远,事例二：帮助写论文、竞赛,失败之处：剥夺成长机会,应该成为怎样的家长：智慧、大度、理解,实战演练,2019年12月 普陀一模事例一：频繁打电话、偷看日记手机实,46,In response to,the heated discussion in the school newspaper column, Id like to share with you my opinion on two kinds of parents: helicopter and snowplow parents.,Helicopter parents,as its name suggests, monitors their kids all the time.,So anxious about their children are they that they,feel like staying above their head forever. If you are “lucky” enough to have such parents like,my deskmate Wang Lei, you are likely to receive their calls once every two hours, asking questions like what you are doing and who keeps you company. I cant remember how many times Wang Lei has complained to me about his parents,stealing into his room and peeping at his diary and cellphone, which has almost driven him mad.,The helicopter parents,often end up with a worsening relationship with their children, because lack of trust will hurt their feelings.,实战演练,交代背景，阐明目的,身边例子描述,失败在哪里,In response to the h,47,Snowplow parents,on the other hand, often do a wonderful job clearing all the obstacles on their childrens way to success. They may feel relieved if their kids are spared from suffering losses and failures. I used to envy my friend Linda because her father was a professor, who could give her a helping hand in her academic research paper and English speech contest.,But Lindas fading interest in her thesis and contest reminded me of the old saying “no pain, no gain”.,Those snowplow parents fail to understand the fact that hardships, setbacks and failures are essential parts on the road to success and maturity.,A tree cannot become tall and strong without the bath of rainstorms.,These two kinds of parents often fail in their education, despite their love and care.,What we need are wise parents, who are broad-minded and empathetic. Love alone is not enough; wisdom is also badly needed when parents get along with kids.,实战演练,事例到议论的过渡,失败在哪里,看法：应该做怎样的父母,实战演练事例到议论的过渡失败在哪里看法：应该做怎样的父母,48,1. 多写多练，至少保证每周一篇的练笔。,2. 关注作文的各类题材，关注身边的热点话题。,3.,写完一篇作文后，注重分析与改进，反思可以提升的方面。,4,. 适当地积累一些好词好句，多学习好的范文。,写作备考建议,备考建议,1. 多写多练，至少保证每周一篇的练笔。写作备考建议备考建,49,4,PART,FOUR,Q&A,4PART FOUR Q&A,50,Q,A,&,提问,答疑,&,Q&A,QA&提问答疑&Q&A,51,Thank you,！,Thank you ！,52,