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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Writing Practice,Aims:,练习写正确的简单句,如何使用较高级句型,关联词的应用,一、关键在准确“简单”句,1,单句改错（,5,个）,I,went to the concert yesterday night.,I realized I had forgotten my key in the office.,.,.,Our country has many population.,She very likes dancing.,Dont worry.Your body will get well soon.,Because the kids thought their wages were too low.,Neither Tom nor he like this,book.,In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.,.,2,汉译英（,4,个）,必须采取措施控制人口增长,We,have to take measures to control the growth of population.Measures must,be taken,to control the growth of population.,站在那儿的高个子是我弟弟。,The tall man,standing over there,is my brother.,晚起是个坏习惯。,Get,ting,up late is a bad habit.,你的信已收到。,Your letter has,been,received.,二、精彩在高档句,句型转换,(5,个）,1 Taiwan belongs to China.It is known to all.,is known to all,Taiwan belongs to China.,2 He failed because he depends on others too much.,he failed is,he depends on others too much.,3 He was very angry and could hardly speak.,She was,angry,he could hardly speak.,4 My hometown is a small town.It has a population of 200 thousand and covers an area of 36 square kilometers.,My hometown is a small town with a population of 200 thousand and,an area of 36 square kilometers,My hometown is a small town,a population of 200 thousand and covers an area of 36 square kilometers.,5 I didnt know I was wrong until he told me the truth.,Not until he told me the truth,I was wrong.,It was not until he told me the truth,I was wrong.,that,The reason why(for which),As,so,that,covering,which has,did,I,know,that I knew,三、,美感在语句衔接,用衔接词或连接词填空,1 I like reading,he likes playing with toys.,2 You thought I like it.,I dislike it.,3 There are some common errors in his composition.,it is wrong to use he to replace the queen.,They are wasting resources,time,energy and money.,4 Some say Singapore is a nice place to live in.Others say it is not so nice.It is too competitive.,some like Singapore;some do not.,5 He never studied hard,and,he failed in the last examination.,while,On the contrary,For example,such as,In short/In brief/To sum up,as a result,写作练习,假设你是王琳，近来你们学校英语课堂教学采用现代化教学手段，发生了很多变化。请你根据下表提供的信息，给你的美国朋友,David,写一封信，客观地介绍这些变化。新的开头和结尾已给出。,Dear David,，,Im writing to tell you that changes have taken place in our English class since new teaching techniques started to be used.,_,_,Yours,Wang Lin,过去,现在,1,老师一直讲，学生忙于笔记，没有思考的时间。,2,所学内容难懂，记不住。,3,课堂枯燥乏味，学生逐渐对英语学习失去兴趣。,1,借助多媒体教学设备，学生不仅能听而且能看、能说。,2,化难为易，便于理解记忆。,3,课堂生动活泼，学生乐于学习。,根据要点提示补全下列范文。,Teachers,speak alone all the time in class,_(keep)students busy,(make)notes and leaving them no time,(think)for themselves.,_ was taught in class was difficult to understand or to remember.The classes were so dull,the students gradually lost interest in learning the language.,things are different now.With the help of computers and other equipment,students not only listen,but also watch _ speak a lot in class,makes,was dull or difficult easier to understand and remember.English classes have become so interesting and lively,all the students are ready to master this useful tool.,过去,现在,1,老师一直讲，学生忙于笔记，没有思考的时间。,2,所学内容难懂，记不住。,3,课堂枯燥乏味，学生逐渐对英语学习失去兴趣。,1,借助多媒体教学设备，学生不仅能听而且能看、能说。,2,化难为易，便于理解记忆。,3,课堂生动活泼，学生乐于学习。,used to,keeping,making,to think,As a result,what,that,However,and,which,what,that,Dear David,，,Im writing to tell you that changes have taken place in our English class since new teaching techniques started to be used.,Teachers used to speak alone all the time in class,keeping students busy making notes and leaving them no time to think for themselves.As a result,what was taught in class was difficult to understand or to remember.The classes were so dull that the students gradually lost interest in learning the language.,However,things are different now.With the help of computers and other equipment,students not only listen,but also watch and speak a lot in class,which makes what was dull or difficult easier to understand and remember.English classes have become so interesting and lively that all the students are ready to master this useful tool.,Yours,Wang Lin,你校部分学生进行了一场有关学生可否带手机进校园的讨论，请你根据下表中的提示写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况。,一些同学认为,另一些同学认为,.,带手机便于与同学联系,便于与家人联系,是一种娱乐方式,破坏学习气氛,浪费过多时间和金钱,考试时会发短信作弊,Homework:,