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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Beautify,Composition,Welcome,广水市第四高级中学高三英语组,15,分的作文中规中矩，该对的都对，包括内容要点的完整，语法与词形的正确，但是全都是很简单句子的一个堆砌，没有任何的亮点。而,20,多分的作文句型词汇方面就做了很好的包装，它的句子如人穿的衣服，它已经不是普通校服，而是李宁、耐克等名牌，所以让人觉得很“拽”，而高考英语写作要的就是这种很“拽”的感觉,.,小 结,15,分和,20,多分的作文到底差在哪里？,书面表达在评阅时遵循三原则,语言第一位（语言高级）,内容第二位（要点齐全）,结构第三位（文章分段）,一、高级词汇和语法,二、修辞手法,三、有效的连词,四、名人名言或谚语,语言第一位（语言高级）,龙头；猪肚；凤尾。,还要强化“高级、复杂”两个概念,1,、词组优先原则,2,、地道原则。,3,、避免重复原则,4,、后,、,高,、,长原则,后学到、较高级、较长词汇。,四项原则,1,、词组优先原则,原文,A new railway is being built in my hometown.,修正,A new railway is,under construction,in my hometown.,2,、地道原则,原文,Through traveling,I learned a lot of knowledge.,修正,Through traveling,I,gained,obtained,a lot of knowledge.,4,、后高长原则,后学到、较高级、较长词汇。,原 词,替换词,hard,diligently,very,rather extremely,pay attention to,attach importance to,happy,delighted enjoyable,more and more,the increasing number of,3,、避免重复原则,原文,I like reading while my brother likes watching television.,修正,I like reading while my brother,enjoys,watching television.,一、,肯定不如双否好,二、,陈述不如倒装妙,三、,主动不如被动巧,四、从句不如分词傲,要强化“语法、修辞”两个概念,四个“不如”,修辞的使用在书面表达中算作很大的亮点，在高中阶段很少有学生会注重修辞的应用。双重否定也是种修辞，而且对于考生来说，只要稍加注意，可以在文章中设计双重否定的句子。就变成了亮点句，起到强调作用。,一、肯定不如双否好,The postman comes on time every day.,The postman never fails to come on time,.,1.He came here at 5,p.m.yesterday,.(,一般句式,)2.He did not come here until 5,p.m.yesterday,.,I couldnt have made so much progress in English without his help.,I have made great progress in English with his help.,倒装是一种最简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法。在高中阶段只需掌握倒装的四种形式，足以应对书面表达，如何应用倒装，有很多方法和技巧。,1.,Only,when we realize the importance of environmental protection can we solve the problem of pollution.,2.,So precious,is time that we cant afford to waste it.,3.,Diligent as,he was,he failed in passing the exam.,4.,By no means should,teenagers get into the habit of smoking.,二、陈述不如倒装妙,Never before have I seen such a wonderful film.,I will never marry you.,Never will I marry you.,1.,否定词开头：,2.Not until/till 5 pm.did he come here yesterday.,3.It was not until/till 5 pm.that he came here yesterday.,1.He didnt come here until 5 pm.yesterday.,把地点状语放在句首后面主谓倒装。这样做的好处之一是,倒装本身就是高级结构,，第二是,倒装后把真正的主语放到了句子的末尾，后面还可以继续加从句,，,使整个句子再呈现更多的亮点,。,In the center of our school lies our library,，,which is between the garden and the teaching building.,2.,地点状语开头,Our library is in the center of our school.,In the center of our school lies our library.,On the bank stand some flowers.,In the sky hang little stars.,Only in this way can we,achieve our goal.,3.Only+,介词短语：,Only in this way can I,improve my English,Only by taking exercises can we,keep healthy,4.,形容词,+as+,主语,+be,动词：,1.Young,as,I am,I can manage it,2.Rich,as,our country is,we have a lot of problems,3.Badly injured,as,he was,he managed to take down the cars number.,4.,So,glad am I to hear from you,.,三、主动不如被动巧,英语是一门,客观的语言,，而汉语是,主观的语言,，具体体现在,英语中经常用被动语态，汉语经常用主动语态,；,英语中经常用是事物或形式主语开头，强调一件事发生在什么人身上，而汉语经常用人称开头强调一个人发生了什么事,。所以使用被动语态符合英语的习惯，如果能将整个文章中,两个句子,变成被动语态，就会呈现句型的变化，使整篇文章句型丰富。,例如在,2006,年的高考中，很多学生在表达我们每次可以借五本书最多借十天时：,We can borrow five books at most,and we can keep them for ten days.,At most five books can be borrowed at a time and they can be kept for ten days.,哪种表达法分数会更高？,几乎所有的状语从句都可以变成独立主格或分词结构，时间状语从句，原因状语，条件状语等。例如条件状语从句：,If such is the case,you should apologize to her.,如何变成独立主格或分词结构呢？学会下面的口诀，如果你的作文中有状语从句，马上可改成独立主格或分词结构这个最大的亮点。,四、从句不如分词傲,口诀：一去，二看，三改。,一去：去连词；二看：看主语；三改：改分词。,第一步，去掉连词,if,；,If such is the case,you should apologize to her.,第二步，看前后两句话的主语，前后主语不一致，所以要改成独立主格；,第三步，改分词，,is,变成分词是,being,最后变成,Such being the case,you should apologize to her,如果前后两句话主语一致，就变成分词结构。,原文,The young man couldnt help crying when he heard the bad news.,修正,Hearing the bad news,the young man couldnt help crying.,原文,If everything is taken into consideration,we ought to have another chance.,修正,Everything taken into consideration,we ought to have another chance.,高三学生学习紧张，考试压力大，因此，做一些户外运动时很有必要的。请你以“,Health and Sports”,为题完成一篇短文。可以围绕主题适当展开，词数,100120,。,范文评讲,:,Some students say that taking sports is just,a waste of time,.At school,there are,so,many subjects,to learn and,so,much homework to do,that,time is,precious,to them.To us senior three students,every minute counts,.,As a,consequence,there is no time available,especially for students to take outside sports.However,I should,utter a sonorous voice,that sports are,essential,to us.,As,an old saying goes,“,All work and no play make Jack a dull boy.”,Concentrating on study for,all day long,without any relaxation is not effective,and,do harm to,our health.,Taking some exercises after class can relive the pressure,of taking examinations.Of course,it is improper for students to,overdo,sports.,As a whole,we should,make a balance,between sports and study.,Health and Sports,The majority of students hold the view that,taking sports is just,a waste of time,.At school,there are,so,many subjects,to learn and,so,much homework to do,that,time is,precious,to them.,As for,us senior three students,every minute c
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