初中英文作文训练指导

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Writing Training,作文类型,记叙文,议论文,说明文,应用文,(,书信,日记,通知,便条等,),Where,did the story happen?,Who,would go to the capital?,When,did she go to the train station?,What,happened to Mrs.Clark?,Why,did she take a wrong train?,Can you guess,how,she could do then?,记叙文,经历 发展变化,六要素,when,where,who,what,why,how,下面的三幅画描绘了一位盲人和小孩相互帮助的情景。请根据图画内容和所给文字提示，用英文写一篇短文描述此事并写出自己对此事的看法。,注意：,1.,书面表达应包含图片内所有内容。,2.,词数：,80,词左右。,3.,生词提示：拐杖,walking stick,香蕉皮,banana skin,审 题,词,范文,句,A blind man was walking slowly with a walking stick.Suddenly he heard a boy crying behind him.That boy fell on the ground because he stepped on a banana skin.The blind man turned to the boy and said,Dont cry.Let me help you.Then he helped the boy stand up and carried him on his back.The boy,in his turn,began to tell the blind man the way.They helped each other happily.,The story shows that all of us should,help each other.,Key Points,人称,时态,顺序,(,顺叙,/,倒叙,),叙述与对话,一说到考试,同学们总有讲不完的故事,.,在你的记忆中,那些发生在考场内外的故事,一定有使你至今感慨,难忘吧,!,请以考试为话题,写一篇题为,An Unforgettable Experience,的短文,.,以下提示词语可能对你有帮助,(,可根据需要选用,):final exam,mid-term exam,nervous,warm words,relax,confident,give the best performance(do well),fail,注意,:1.100,词左右,2.,请不要使用真实姓名和所在学校名称,.,Practice,An Unforgettable Experience,Among many exam experiences,I still remember what happened in the final exam last term.,In the past I always felt nervous at the beginning of exams.And because of this,I never gave the best performance.But in the last final exam,when I got the paper,I was surprised to see some warm words on the paper,Hi,everyone.Believe in yourself and you will do best.Good luck.Seeing these words,the terrible feeling soon disappeared and I became confident.I did my best.,Since then,whenever I have exams,these simple but warm words encourage me and make me feel confident.,作文类型,记叙文,议论文,说明文,应用文,(,书信,日记,通知,便条等,),议论文,议论为主,结构,:,a.,引言,提出问题,b.,主体,分析问题,c.,结论,解决问题,类型,:,a.,“,一分为二,”,的观点,.,b.,“,两者选一,”,的观点,.,c.,“,我认为,”,型,.,d.,“,怎样,(how to),”,型,.,e.,图表作文,.,假如你是李建华,最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京动物园是否应迁出市区,.,以下是你所在班级讨论的情况,.,请你给该报写一封信,反映讨论结果,.,赞成迁出,:,反对迁出,:,游客多,交通堵塞,郊区环境好,建于,1906,年,中外闻名,搬迁易造成动物死亡,注意,:,词数,100,个左右,信的开头已为你写好,.,可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯,.,参考词汇,:suburb(,郊区,),be in favor of(,赞成,),be against(,反对,),at home and abroad(,中外,),Dear Editor,Recently,our class have had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city.,Opinions are divided on the question,A,Some students,agree with/are in favor of,1.Large crowds of tourists cause the traffic jam.,2.Good living conditions in the suburbs.,On the contrary,B,Other students,are against/object to,1.Built in 1906,very famous,2.Moving may cause the death of the animals.,(,游客多,交通堵塞,),(,郊区环境好,),(,建于,1906,年,中外闻名,),(,搬迁易造成动物死亡,),Dear Editor,Recently,our class have had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city.,Some of my classmates are in favor of the move.They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jam.They also say that once moved,animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs.,However,other students are against the idea,saying that the Beijing Zoo,built in 1906,has a history of 100 years,and is well-known at home and abroad.So it should stay where it is.Whats more,moving may cause the death of some animals.,To move or not,this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.,Yours sincerely,Li,Jianhua,Key Points,论点,鲜明，确切,论据,充分，可靠,论证,严密，得法,现在社会上经常有一些体现个人魅力的比赛,如,“,超级模特,”,“,超级女生,”“,主持人大赛,”,等等,而选手越来越年轻,甚至是在校的中小学生,这使他们不能正常的学习和生活,那么你的看法是什么呢,?,请写一段话来说明它的优缺点,.,词数,80-100,个左右,.,P,R,A,C,T,I,C,E,Now we usually can hear many different kinds of contests on TV,for example,model contests,Super Voice Girls,host contests and so on.Many students at school also enjoy taking part in them.On one hand,its,a good,chance,for them to go out of the school and know more about the society,and also a great chance for them to practice themselves.But on the other hand,many students are so crazy about them that they cant study the subjects carefully and even fail a lot of exams.So I think its really a serious problem for us.We should do something for that.,How can we write a good article?,Read the instructions carefully and decide the style.,Follow typical patterns,List the key points.,Put the key points into sentences.,（列提纲）,（明审题）,（选句型）,（妙联句）,(,细复查,),Develop the sentences into passage.,Check your work.,Homework:write a passage,假如你叫李华，今年读初三。下午班会课你们同学展开了一场讨论，主题是初三学生要不要参加体育锻炼。请你根据下面提供的信息，给某英文报社写一封信，介绍讨论情况。,55%,的同学认为,45%,的同学认为,1,、应该每天进行适量的锻炼；,1,、锻炼浪费时间；,2,、可以做早操、打乒乓球、篮球，但不要时间太长；,2,、锻炼使人疲劳；,3,、锻炼能增强体质、减少生病；,3,、运动后很兴奋，耽误学习时间；,4,、运动使大脑得到休息，学习效率更高。,4,、运动后还有可能受伤。,注意：字数,100,120,左右,Thanks a lot!,Any comment is welcome!,主要时态：,人称：,一般过去时,第三人称,walk,hear,cry,fall,step,turn,say,help,carry,tell,walked,heard,cried,fell,stepped,tu