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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,2016/11/24,#,Welcome to our class,!,High School of Henan University,Yang Kun,How to Use the Attributive Clause in your Writing,写作中的定语从句,Part1.,高考满分作文中的定语从句欣赏：,1.,（,2013,年全国高考新课标,I,）,Ive asked my uncle to bring you the Chinese painting youve asked for before.,你知道，我的叔叔李明要去,你居住的,城市参加一个会议。,You know,my uncle Li Ming is going to the city where you live to attend an international meeting.,_,_,我让叔叔带去,你想要的,那幅中国画。,2.,（,2013,年广东高考）,那些,做普通简单工作的,人也在推动着社会的发展。,Those who do simple and ordinary jobs are also promoting the development of the society.,正如我们都知道的那样,，扫大街是最为困难的工作之一。,As we all know,cleaning streets is one of the hardest work.,_,_,当今，父母为他们的独生子女做所有的事情，,这使得这些独生子女非常依赖于父母。,Nowadays parents have done everything for their single children,which makes the children rely on their parents badly.,_,_,A sailor who has experienced no storm will never become an excellent sailor.,_,3.,（,2013,年福建高考）,没经历过暴风雨的,水手永远不会成为一名优秀的水手。,Part2.,写作中定语从句的主要作用：,1.,增加词数,Last Saturday I watched a,concert,.,The,concert,was wonderful.,Last Saturday I watched a concert which was wonderful.,People can enjoy the moon while eating moon cakes,which are the special food for this festival,.,2.,可连接两个包含同一事物的句子，避免单词重复和句式单一,3.,补充细节，以丰富文章内容,This is my uncle,a doctor.,This is my uncle,who is a doctor.,1.两个句子的合并,S1：Harry Porter is a boy.,S2：He has a scar on his forehead.,S1+S2,Harry Porter is a boy who has a scar on his forehead.,Guangzhou is a beautiful city.It develops very fast,Guangzhou is a beautiful city which develops very fast,2.三个句子的合并（适当运用同位语）,Jphn，my best friend，gave me a gift，,which he bought from USA,3.四个句子的合并（同位语词组）,Kate，a new student from a northen province，speaks a dialect which we find it hard to understand.,Wangmeng，a girl of 25 who was born in Hei Longjiang Provice，began her skating training at the age of 10.,Iphone，苹果公司制做，深受年轻人的欢迎。,Iphone，a kind of cellpone which is made by Apple，is quite popular among teenagers.,二.作为插入语使用,众所周知,综上所述,As we all know,As is mentioned above,插入语位置灵活，可放在句子前中后的位置。,1.众所周知，中国拥有最多的人口,China，as we all know，has the largest population in the world.,2.综上所述，我赞成后者的观点,As is mentioned above，I am in favor of the latter view.,3.正如我们所期待的，她取得了第一名,She，as we expected，won the first prize.,三.非限指代整句的使用,我们不应该参加选秀节目，这会影响学习。,We should not take part in the talent show，which has a bad effect on study.,注意，此句式可以对题目中没有说明的情况进行细节补充，丰富先行词。,(2013,年高考山东卷,),描述你的假期打算（包括兼职、旅游、志愿者等）,I would like to do a part-time job,which will help,me earn money and accumulate working experience.,Practice:,用定语从句增添做这些事情的原因,Traveling is one of my choices,which will enrich,my life and broaden my horizon.,I would like to do voluntary work,which will make a great contribution to society.,高考链接,在内容匮乏的情况下，可适当添加细节,1.兼顾国内外新闻,It covers national and international news，which broadens my sight.,2.介绍名人成功故事,It introducs many stories of celebrities，which can inspire me to study hard.,，可使我见识广阔。,，这会激励我努力学习,个人情况：年龄，性别，学历,I am 16 years old.,I am a girl.,I study in,No.1 Middle school.,可适当增加细节：是我们城市重点高中之一,I,a 16 years old girl，study in,No.1 Middle school,，which is one of the best senior schools in our city.,1.,目前，英语在高考中是一个备受争议的学科。,对此，,不同的人持有不同的观点。,Currently,English is a controversial subject in the College Entrance Examination,about which different people hold different views.,Translation:,2.,我没有及时回信的原因是我一直在准备期末考试。,The reason,why I failed to write back in time,is that I had been preparing for the final exam.,controversial,fail to do,write back,prepare for,Fill in the blanks:,去年暑假，我去乡村做志愿者。在那我看到了辛勤工作的农民和他们快乐的生活，给我留下了深刻的印象。,Last summer vacation,I did voluntary work in the countryside _ I saw hard-working peasants and their happy life _made a deep impression on me.,正如上面所提到的，定语从句用处很大。,_,the Attributive Clause is of great use.,where,that,As is mentioned above,As is known to all=As we all know,众所周知,As is often the case,就跟经常的情况一样,As is reported,正如所报道的那样,（,As,引导非限制性定语从句，可放在主句前中后，“正如”）,即将到来的端午节是中国的传统节日,The upcoming Dragon Boat Festival is a Chinese Festival.,定语从句可以对表达中没有说明的情况进行细节补充，丰富先行词（Festival）,可补充:节日的目的，节目的活动,The upcoming Dragon Boat Festival is a Chinese Festival which is celebrated to honor our national hero，Qu Yuan.,My destmate is a very warm-hearted man.,用定语从句具体化：经常帮我买早餐，在我有困难的时候帮助我，帮我提高学习成绩等,My destmate is a very warm-hearted man，who always lends me a hand when I am in need,.,1.句子合并,1）Miss Zhang is our English teacher.,2）She is beautiful with big eyes.,3)She often plays games in her class.,4)We can learn a lot in her funny class.,2.翻译：正如我们所总结的，过度使用（overuse）汽车会严重污染环境。,3.用定语从句具体化,I would like to do some voluntary work.,1.句子合并,1）Miss Zhang is our English teacher.,2）She is beautiful with big eyes.,3)She often plays games in her class.,4)We can learn a lot in her funny class.,Miss Zhang，,our beautiful English teacher with big eyes,，often plays games in her class,in which,we can learn a lot.,翻译：正如我们所总结的，过度使用（overuse）汽车会严重污染环境。,As we have concluded，overusing cars will cause serious pollution to our environment.,3.用定语从句具体化,I would like to do some voluntary work.,
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