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Click to edit Master title style,Click to edit Master text styles,Second level,Third level,Fourth level,Fifth level,11/7/2009,#,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,W,riting,Writing,What kind of writing is a good writing?,Cover all the contents(,要点全,),Be well-organized(,分段、逻辑,),Use advanced words and sentences(,高级表达,),Show neat handwriting(,规范书写,),What steps should we follow?,What kind of writing is a good,FRIED,steps of writing,1.Cover,all the contents(,要点全,),F,ind the points,列要点,2.Be,well-organized(,分段、逻辑,),R,eorganize the points,分段,3.Use,advanced words and sentences(,高级表达,),I,nteresting sentences,E,dit your writing,4.Show,neat handwriting(,规范书写,),D,esign your handwriting,誊写,FRIED steps of writing1.Cover,I.use advanced words and expressions:,1.Im glad to hear from you and feel grateful for your _ about my situation.,2.In winter time,the hazy weather often happens.,In winter time,the hazy weather happens _.,In winter time,the hazy weather _ our city _.,3.To tell the truth,the situation is really bad.,To tell the truth,the situation _.,4.Every day,I _ a gray sky,not able to see white clouds or hear birds sing.,5.When,we go out,we have to wear a mask.,When,we go out,we _,wear a mask.,cant but/cant help but,/cant choose,but,frequently,hits/strikes,frequently/from time to time/over and over again,concern,cannot be worse,wake up to,I.use advanced words and expr,6.Poeple can not see everything around them.,Everything around _.,Everything around _.,7.The haze may damage peoples heath.,The haze may _ _ peoples health.,8.,The dry air and the bad environment cause the terrible hazy weather.,The dry air and the bad environment _ the terrible hazy weather.,9.I sincerely hope the government can continue developing the economy while taking good care of our environment.,I sincerely hope the government can _ the economy while taking good care of our environment.,have a bad effect on/do harm to/do damage to/be harmful to,seems to have disappeared,seems to be out of sight,push on with,lead to/result in,/contribute,to,6.Poeple can not see everythin,II.,使,用复杂结构,:,I)Passive,voice,1.In winter time,the hazy weather strikes our city frequently.,These days,especially in winter,our city _ thick yellow smog.,2.Because,of haze,we have to close highways.,Because of haze,highways _.,3.As,a result,people with lung problem pour into hospitals.,As a result,hospitals _ people,with lung problems.,is blanketed with,have to be closed,are jammed/crowded with,II.使用复杂结构:is blanketed with h,II)Non-finites,1.In recent years,the hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in Chengdu.It has affected peoples life and health greatly.,In recent years,the hazy weather has _ Chengdu over and over again,_ peoples life and health.,In recent years,the hazy weather has hit Chengdu over and over again,_(leave)this city _(blanket)with thick yellow smog.,2.This situation affects peoples daily life seriously.It causes lots of breathing system problems.,This situation affects peoples daily life seriously,_ lots of breathing system problems.,hit/struck,affecting,leaving,blanketed,causing,II)Non-finiteshit/struckaff,3.I have experienced the haze weather,which is a nightmare to me.,_ is a nightmare to me.,4.In winter,you may sometimes wake up to the yellow smog.,Sometimes in winter,you wake up early,_.,5._(,由恶劣的环境引起,),the hazy weather seems to be more severe in recent years.,6.I sincerely hope the government can push on with the economy and at the same time care for our environment.,I sincerely hope the government can push on with the economy _our environment.,To have experienced the hazy weather,only to find,the city blanketed with thick smog,Caused by the terrible environment,while caring for,3.I have experienced the haze,III)Subordinate clause,and absolute structure.,1.In recent years,the hazy weather has hit Chengdu over and over again,leaving this city blanketed with thick yellow smog,_.,2.The smog in the city is very severe.People cant but wear a mask.otherwise thay may breathe in many harmful chemicals.,The smog in the city is _ severe _ people cant but wear a mask.otherwise thay may breathe in many harmful chemicals.,which does have a great impact on peoples life and health.,so,that,III)Subordinate clause and ab,3,.Why does haze occur so frequently?,The reason _ the environment is critically polluted.,4.Our city is blanketed with thick yellow smog.Everything around seems to have disappeared.,With _,everything around seems to be out of sight.,our city blanketed with thick yellow smog,why haze occurs so frequently is that,our city blanketed with thick,IV)Emphatic sentence and Inversion,1.The dry air and the bad environment cause the terrible hazy weather.,_ the hazy weather.,2.And people,especially the old and young,suffer terribly.,_,3.I sincerely wish the government could push on with the economy while taking good care of our environment so that we can enjoy a better life!,I sincerely wish the government could push on with the economy while taking good c
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