9es[高考英语]09书面表达2

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,*,*,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,高考总复习之,书面表达(二),飞,让,文,采,扬,达,表,面,书,语意要合情合理，过渡自然,语句要有简有繁，随“意而安,语法要结构正确，无懈可击,语言要地道流畅，书写标准,9/28/2024,2,05年高考英语湖南书面表达:,假设你是李平，最近参加了由某电视台举办的中学生英语演讲比赛并获奖，该台准备组织获奖者去北京参加一次英语夏令营活动，现就有关事项征求你的意见。请根据下表所提供的信息用英语以书信形式给予答复。请在答题卡上作答。,活动时间,7月15日到22日或8月15日到22日,活动内容,参加英语角,学唱英语歌曲,听英语讲座,表演英语短剧,看英语电影,教外宾学中文,对活动内容,的建议或要求,请注意：,选择适合你的时间，并说明理由；,2.,选择两项你喜欢的活动，并说明理由；,3.,对活动内容提出至少一个建议或要求；,4.,词数：,100,左右；,5.,信的开关和结尾已给出。,05年高考英语湖南书面表达范文,Im very glad,to be invited to,the English summer,camp. I prefer to go in,July because Ill have to prepare myself for the new school term in August. It,seems that all the,activities you offer are,attractive and,meaningful., Im glad to do , prefer to do, prepare oneself for, It seems that, all the activities that ) you offer, attractive , meaningful,But Id like to attend the English lectures, from which I can get more information on British and American culture. With the coming of the 2021 Beijing Olympic Games, more and more foreigners are eager to know about China, Id like to do , from which I can get more, With the coming of the 2021 , be eager to do ,05年高考英语湖南书面表达范文, But ,So I hope to,teach foreigners Chinese and spread,Chinese culture.,Its been a dream,for me to visit Beijing. Could you,organize a tour,around the city,during the,camp?,05年高考英语湖南书面表达范文, spread Chinese culture, It be for sb. to do , organize a tour , So ,怎 样 让 书 面 表 达,文采飞扬, Im glad to do , prefer to do, prepare oneself for, It seems that, all the activities (that) you offer, attractive , meaningful, But , Id like to do , from which I can get more, With the coming of the 2021 , be eager to do So , spread Chinese culture, It be for sb. to do , organize a tour ,1. 较高级词汇,2.丰富的语法结构,3. 恰当的连接词,， ， ， ， ， ,，,， ， ， ， ,， ,1. 多实少虚 :,nice,2. 短语优先：,I cannot,bear,it.,I,want,it.,generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted,I cannot,put up with,it.,I am,looking forward to,it.,弃旧取新:,e all,have,the same,chance,.,There,are,more opponents.,1. 较高级词汇,possess,opportunity,exist,学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。,1. Its very,dangerous,for the students to,go through,the traffic.,2. Students are,risking their lives,when,threading their way among,cars.,社会应加强对学生的交通平安教育。,1. The students should be,taught,more about the,traffic safety,.,2. And also it is of great use to,strengthen,the,safety education,over the students.,较高级词汇(Exercises 1),较高级词汇(Exercises 2),1,.We all,think he is a great man,.,2.,As a result the plan was a failure,.,3. She went there,in order to study music,.,4.,In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms,.,We all,of him,.,The plan to be a failure.,She went there,studying music.,Our school twentysix classrooms.,think highly,turned out,for the purpose of,is made up of,较高级词汇(Exercises 3),5.,You can find my house easily.,6.,Because the weather was good, our journey,was comfortable.,7.,Suddenly I thought out a good idea.,Youll finding my house.,A good idea to me.,the good weather,our journey was comfortable.,have no trouble,A good idea suddenly me.,Thanks to,occurred,struck,非,谓,语,各种从句,with复合宾语,倒,装,独立主格,虚,拟,等,等,强调句型,运用多种语法结构，句式灵活多变，可以使文章增色不少。,2. 丰富的语法结构,丰富的语法结构 (Exercises 1),When he arrives, please give me an,e-mail.使用V-ing形式.,2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.使用名词性从句,3. He came in and there was a baby in his arms. (用with结构),please give me an e-mail.,is that,the little girl knows so many things.,On his arriving,What surprises him,He came in ,with a baby in his arms.,4.(由于不知道他的 ，他没法跟Mary联系) (用非谓语,5. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型),6.Tom and Mary like singing songs.(使用倒装),It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that,，he cant get in touch with Tom,Not knowing his telephone number,he knew what had happened.,丰富的语法结构 (Exercises 2),Tom likes singing songs, Mary.,so does,7. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词),8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.使用句型结构,9. Because the weather is fine, many people went to climb the Western hill. 使用独立主格结构,by many students, she walked out of the,lab., a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.,he spoke, excited he felt.,丰富的语法结构 (Exercises 3),Followed,The more the more,The weather being fine,一篇好的书面表达，还应该行文连贯流畅，具有“逻辑美。使用恰当连接词，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑，使文章更为地道，更具“英语味。记得使用恰当的连接词，如:,soon, immediately, suddenly, in front of, next to, on one hand, on the other hand, however,though, otherwise, thanks to, as a result (of), so long as, on condition that,even if/though,whats more, besides, to make the matter worse, Im afraid, you know, As we all know,3. 恰当的连接词,1. This village is very small. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978 .,This village is,a small one with/which has,nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor.,However,it has changed a lot since 1978 .,2. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it.,All the school-age children can study here.,Whats more, they enjoy free education in it.,3. Yesterday， there was a policeman in the street. He stopped a car. The car was at the corner. It looked like a Honda. There was a boy on the sidewalk. He was riding his bicycle. The bicycle was a two-wheeler. The car nearly knocked down the boy.,Yesterday， a policeman stopped a carHonda at the corner of the street，,because,it nearly knocked down a boy,who,was riding a two-wheel bicycle on the sidewalk.,恰当的连接词(Exercises),Last Sunday, two Young Pioneers were on their way to the Childrens Palace . They saw a box fall off a passing truck. They shouted “stop to the driver at the top of their voice.,Last Sunday, two Young Pioneers were on their way to the Childrens Palace when they saw a box fall off a passing truck. Without delay, they shouted “stop to the driver at the top of their voice.,书面表达欣赏：,Making Every Day Earth Day,As can be seen from the picture above, the earth suffers a lot from mans behaviour at present. There are many problems. For instance, we human beings are destroying too many trees, which leads to air pollution. Besides, polluted water is sent into rivers directly without being dealt with.,9/28/2024,18,Furthermore, few people,are aware of,such problems,while,most of us,take them for granted.,However, on the Earth Day,some measures are taken to,care for the earth.,Not only,do,people,spread the idea of,protecting the earth,but also,something will,be done,such,as,dealing with rubbish, recycling used battery and so on.,9/28/2024,19,But that is,far from,enough. I,strongly call on,everyone to treat every day as the Earth Day and,take care of,the earth every day.,Only in this way,can we,hope for,a better home to live in.,9/28/2024,20,练习,给澳大利亚朋友,Dick,写一封信,，谈减负给你的学习生活带来的变化,9/28/2024,21,Ex.1,Dear Dick,How nice to hear from you again.,I,am very glad to receive your letter. I tell you to before reduce learning. The students must go to school for learning every day. On weekday they had to learn and did them homework in the day. At night they have did them homework until after at 11:30 go to bed.,9/28/2024,22,Now, on weekday, They students visited museum, learned computer, so on. At night they can read newspapers and books. At 10:00 they went to bed Sunday.,So the students lived very happy than they lived before.,Yours, Li Hua,Best wishes.,第二档 , 7/12,9/28/2024,23,Ex 2,Dear Dick,How nice to hear from you again.,Our learning load really is reduced. From the life of weekend you will know. In the past, everyday I had to go to school and do many homework in weekend, but now I can do many things, such as go to visit museum, to learn computer, drawing and so on,.,9/28/2024,24,At night I also did some homework in the past. Today, I can read some newspaper, read some book and watch news. I feel very happy. Before I went to sleep at 11:30 everyday, and now I go to sleep at 10:00 every night.,Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua,第三档13/18,9/28/2024,25,Ex 3.,How nice to hear from you again.,I am so happy now because,great changes,have taken place,in our daily life and we have,more spare time,than before.,Before,learning load,was reduced, we had to do heavy homework,day and,night,. We,had(used) to,go to school at the weekend and we could,not,go to bed,until,11:30.,9/28/2024,26,But now it is (,has been,) improved. At the weekend, we could visit museums, study(,take,) computer lessons or learn drawing. In the evening ,we could spend some time watching TV news(,news on TV),or reading newspapers and books. (,Whats more,) we could go to sleep (,bed),at 10:00. (,Now,) we have enough time to do our favorite things. Dick, I hope you could come to Beijing to see our changes.,Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua,第五档,25/30,9/28/2024,27,描述学校午餐情景及看法,After class, I always hurry to the dining room with my lunch box. But often I am still too late. .,9/28/2024,28,描述学校午餐情景及看法,Hundreds of hungry students struggle to buy their meals, for there are no lines at all. Often I try to join them, but they are so unfriendly that I get hurt by their powerful arms. The whole experience makes me tired and unhappy.,In my opinion, students,should,line up at the dining room. Besides being a good way to show respect to others, it,would,help everyone in getting their meals faster.,9/28/2024,29,