初中英语作文入门篇

,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,2013/7/20,#,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,Mango English,作文入门篇,第一,章,记叙文,记叙文是以记叙和描写为主要手法，通过写入、叙事来表达某种思想或感情的一种文体。它的主要特点是陈述的内容具有,“过程性”,。所谓,“过程”,，即表现出一定的顺序性、时间性和持续性。人的身世，事情的发展，环境的变化总有来龙去脉、前因后果，可以运用叙述的方式来反映某个过程。记叙文里有六个要素，即,when,（时间），,where,（地点），,who,（人物），,what,（事件），,why,（原因）和,how,（结果）,。应注意的是，在一篇记叙文里，写人、写景、写事、抒情往往是交织在一起的，不能截然分开，但又各有侧重。,要点概述,人是一切社会关系的总和，因此写人所处的社会环境，人与人之间的关系，这样的人才会给读者以真实感。在写人的书面表达中，必须要用人物的言行来表现他们的思想，用人物的神态来表现他们的情感，采用生动而具体的描写。在写人的记叙文中，应该注意以下几点：,1.,在写作时，应该有一个侧重点，如,侧重外貌描写、性格描写、人物事迹描写,等,。,2.,选材要有代表性，要选择能突出人物个性特点的材料，对次要情节要一笔带过。另外还要注意选材的客观真实性，不要言过其实。,3.,语言要精炼、简短、生动感人，不要拖泥带水、平铺直叙。,第一节 人物描摹,4.,要交代清楚人物、事件、时间、地点、原因和结果这些因素，尤其是人物、事件这两个要素不可缺少。,5.,人称和事态的正确使用。介绍人物的经理常用一般过去时态，若是写当前情况，则一般现在时态。人称通常用第三人称。,第一节 人物描摹,在你的成长过程当中，家人倾注了大量的心血，他们对你的生活和学习给予了关心、帮助外，也会提出一些建议。但作为子女的你总会在某些问题上和父母存在分歧。看看下面的提示词，搜寻你记忆的长河，有没有值得你回忆的事情呢,拿起笔来写一写吧！,要求：句式工整，书写规范，语句条理性强，词数控制在,80,字左右。,提示,词语：,watch TV ,be strict with , as usual,真题回放,根据中英文提示 ， 可以确定 ，这篇作文应用第一人称的手法来写。,这篇作文的主题是主要表现在你的成长过程当中，家人倾注了大量的心血，但同时父母和子女之间会在某些问题上产生分歧。可见，尽管是写人，但要通过叙事来烘托。那么在这篇习作当中，外貌描写可以少写或略写，突出人物的性格。其中心人物可以是：,my mother , my father , my parents .,根据题目的要求，这篇作文属于发生了的事情，叙述时应用一般过去时态。当然，在描写父母性格以及平时对我的关爱和帮助时应用一般现在时态。,写作点拨,My mother,，,is a kind and nice woman , but she,is very strict with,me .,One Sunday night , when I was watching the film Harry Potter very happily , mother asked me to go to bed . I loved the,film so much that I didnt move,. But for a while , I noticed that she didnt say anything , then she got angry and turned off the TV . I was so sad that I went into my room and cried .I thought , “I have only two nights to enjoy TV, why does not mother allow me to watch TV ? ” The next day when she was cooking ,she talked with me as usual . I pretended not to hear , but she didnt mind and,told,me she wanted me to have a good rest,. Then I understood her .,I love my mother .,满分,作文,My mother,1,开门见山地叙述了妈妈的性格特征,-,k,ind ,nice , and be strict with me.,4,说明了妈妈不让“我”看电视的原因,2so that,句型表现了我当时的委屈,3,以问句的形式来叙述当时的心理，进一步表现了与妈妈产生分歧,相关词汇：,1 severe adj.,严厉的；苛刻的,2 colleague n.,同事；同僚；同人,3 be strict with sb,对某人严格要求,4 be afraid of sb / sth,害怕某人、某物,HomeworkMy Father,My father is very tall . He has two small but bright eyes . His mouth is wide and big .,My father is a very severe man , hes very strict with me . Every night he asks me what I have learned in the day , and helps me with my home work. Every morning , at six oclock , he asks me to get up to read some English texts loudly . Sometimes hes serious , but I know he loves me very much .,He often goes to bookstore and buys a lot of books for me . If I want something , he always says , “If you study well , I will buy it for you .”Sometimes I am afraid of him , but I love him very much.,My father is a hard-working driver . He gets up early every day , and he is never late for work . His colleagues also like him very much .,I think my father is a very good man.,优秀范文,范文点评,