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,写作技法点拨系列,十、发挥想象,灵活阐释开放作文,【,核心点拨,】,常用句型,1. As is shown in the picture, two ants are walking along the side of a standard triangle.,如图所示,两只蚂蚁正沿着一个标准的三角形而行。,2. As we can see in the picture, we are being surrounded by deserts.,正如图中我们看到的那样,我们正在被沙漠包围。,3. In the picture, we can see clearly the struggle between people and desert.,如图所示,我们可以清楚地看出人类与沙漠之间的较量。,4. The picture is trying to tell us that. . .,这幅图画向我们表明,5. The picture reflects a common social problem that. . .,这幅图画反映了一个普遍的社会问题,即,【,典题示例,】,(2016,浙江高考,),“,Planning is good, but doing is better”,是一句英语名言。请以此为题用英语写一篇,100,词左右的短文。,要求如下,: 1.,简述你对这句名言的理解,;,2.,用一个具体事例加以说明,;,3.,给出恰当的结尾。,【,审题谋篇,】,文章体裁,夹叙夹议文,中心人称,第一人称,I,主要时态,一般现在时,一般过去时,信息要点,1.,解释这句名言的含义,;,2.,用自己的具体事例加以说明,;,3.,这句名言的意义及我的感受。,【,词句构建,】,1.,词汇,汉语,一般词汇,高级词汇,没有好结果,have no good effect,_,一个恰当的例子,a proper/good example,_,开始,start/begin,_,完成任务,finish ones,task,_,_,bear no fruit,a case in point,set out,achieve ones,success,2.,句式,如果不去实际实施,一个计划不会有好结果。,一般表达,: A plan can have no good effect if it is not,actually carried out.,高级表达,: A plan can _,actually carried out. (,用高级词汇句式替代,have no,good effect, if,从句,),bear no fruit without being,我最终取得了比赛的第一名。,一般表达,: Finally I won the first prize in the contest.,高级表达,: I finally _the first,prize winner. (,用高级词汇替代,won),came out of the contest as,它,(,好结果,),来自计划周密和执行到位的完美结合。,一般表达,: It came from good planning and better,doing which are combined.,高级表达,: It came from good planning and better,doing _. (,用过去分词作定语,),combined,【,连句成篇,】,Planning is good, but doing is better,Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do what we want to do. However, a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.,My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point. A month before the event, I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps. After that, I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic, wrote a speech, and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills. I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.,I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.,【,即时应用,】,假设你校英语报正在进行名言佳句分享活动,请根据要求写一篇英语短文推荐“,Change what you can change; accept what you cant change. ”,这句名言。,1.,谈谈你对这句名言的理解,;,2.,举例说明理由。,注意,:,词数,100,个左右。,_,_,_,【,参考范文,】,Famous sayings usually contain much wisdom and teach us some philosophy of life. “Change what you can change; accept what you cant change. ”is just one such quote.,On the one hand, we should be optimistic, think positively and live actively. In other words, we should try our best to change everything around us for the better. One thing Im sure we can change is our attitudes. With a positive attitude, were more likely to achieve our goals and realize our dreams.,On the other hand, therere many things in our life which cant be changed, such as our appearance and family background. We have to accept all of these because theres no point in complaining about them.,
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