高考英语高分写作指导课件

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,英语书面表达指导,英语书面表达指导,Beautify your Composition,高考作文的华丽变身,遇难心不慌，,遇易心更细。,Beautify your Composition高考作文的,命题特点,1.,所选题材及体裁都非常贴近考生生活，,实际具有时代特点，紧扣与学生相关的,社会热点及学生的生活与学习。,2.,词数要求,100,，既要求表,达事实信息，又要陈述个人观点，对考,生,思维和表达能力,的要求提高了。,3.,开头或,/,和结尾都已经给出，无文体要,求，,主要考查考生的表达能力。,命题特点1.所选题材及体裁都非常贴近考生生活，,1.,词数都符合试题要求。,2.,都覆盖了所有要点，并进行了分段表达，基本上是,3,段；,3.,所用句型以简单句为主，但是使用了一定量的高级词汇，大量的短语和句型，丰富的句式结构增强了表达的效果。,4.,都有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。,参考答案特点,1. 词数都符合试题要求。参考答案特点,高考评分标准,第五档（,21-25,） ： 完全完成试题规定的任务，完全达到了预期的写作目的，,覆盖所有的内容要点,，用了,丰富的语法结构，语法与高级词汇,有,少些错误,，全篇,流畅，连词使用较好,。,第四档（,16-20,） ：,完全完成试题规定的任务,，达到了预期的写作目的，写漏了一两个要点，,语法和词汇基本正确，,有少些错误，主要是,想使用高级词汇与复杂句子所致。,高考评分标准第五档（21-25） ： 完全完成试题规定的任务,第二档 （,6-10,） ： 未适当完成试题规定的任务，有要点，但表达不清晰，只有一些句子可读。,第一档 （,1-5,） ：未完成试题规定的任务，只是一些字词的堆积，不成句，让读者根本不明白写什么。,0,分：空白，或者抄写一些无关的东西。,第三档（,11-15,） ： 大错（时态、句子结构等）超过,五六,处，不能及格，写漏了一些内容，但覆盖了主要要点，基本上让人能够看懂，基本达到了预期目的。,第二档 （6-10） ： 未适当完成试题规定的任务，有要点，,高考阅卷特点：,1.,阅卷时间,短,；,2.,阅卷的速度,快,；,3.,阅卷老师的心理状态：,给分中庸平均分,15,4.,高考卷其余部分是标准化计分,书面表达是提高分数最大的潜力股,高考阅卷特点：,15,分的作文中规中矩，该对的都对，包括内容要点的完整，语法与词形的正确，但句式简单，没有多少亮点。而,20,多分的作文句型词汇方面就做了很好的包装，它的句子如人穿的衣服，它已经不是普通校服，而是李宁、耐克等名牌，所以让人觉得很“拽”，而高考英语写作要的就是这种很“拽”的感觉,.,小 结,15,分和,20,多分的作文到底差在哪里？,15分的作文中规中矩，该对的都对，包括内容要点的完整，语法与,高考作文评分原则,形式上,胜人一筹,，也就是文章结构，谴词造句,内容要点，发挥想象，适当拓展,高考作文评分原则,书面表达在评阅时遵循三原则,语言第一位（语言高级）,内容第二位（要点齐全）,结构第三位（文章分段）,一、高级词汇和句式,二、修辞手法,三、有效的连词,四、名人名言或谚语,语言第一位（语言高级）,漂亮、地道,书面表达在评阅时遵循三原则语言第一位（语言高级）内容第二位（,1.,高级词汇短语,词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。,1.高级词汇短语词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平,词汇使用的原则,人靠衣装，文靠词装,1,、词组优先原则,2,、地道原则。,3,、避免重复原则,4,、后,、,高,、,长原则,后学到、较高级、较长词汇。,四项原则,词汇使用的原则人靠衣装，文靠词装 1、词组优先原则2、地道原,1,、词组优先原则,原文,A new railway is being built in my hometown.,修正,A new railway is,under construction,in my hometown.,2,、地道原则,原文,Through traveling, I learned a lot of knowledge.,修正,Through traveling, I,gained,obtained,a lot of knowledge.,1、词组优先原则原文A new railway is,4,、后高长原则,后学到、较高级、较长词汇。,原 词,替换词,hard,diligently,very,rather extremely,pay attention to,attach importance to,happy,delighted enjoyable,more and more,the increasing number of,3,、避免重复原则,原文,I like reading while my brother likes watching television.,修正,I like reading while my brother,enjoys,watching television.,4、后高长原则后学到、较高级、较长词汇。3、避免重复原则,Adj.,聪明的、脑筋好的,clever,smart,wise,bright,intelligent,Adj. 聪明的、脑筋好的,电脑在我们生活中的作用是十分重要的。,1.Computers are very important in our life.,2.Computers,play a very important role,in our life.,puters,are of great importance,in our life.,电脑在我们生活中的作用是十分重要的。,EX,、运用高级词汇：,As a result, the plan failed. (,一般,),She went to Austria in order to study music. (,一般,),Suddenly I thought out a good idea,.,(,一般,),The plan turned out to be a failure.,(,高级,),She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music.,(,高级,),A good idea occurred to me.,/ A good idea suddenly struck me,(,高级,),EX、运用高级词汇：As a result, the pl,At the news of her death,he went.,(,高级,),She has trouble in pronouncing the word,.,(,高级,),When he heard she had died, he went pale with sorrow. (,一般,),She cant correctly pronounce the word. (,一般,),运用高级词汇：,At the news of her death, he w,2,，句式多样，文章增,“靓”,使用较丰富的句式：,运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉,2，句式多样，文章增“靓”使用较丰富的句式：运用得当的句子结,他昨天下午来的。,1.He came here yesterday afternoon.,2.He,didnt,come here,until,yesterday afternoon.,3.,Not until,yesterday afternoon,did,he come here.,4.,It was,yesterday afternoon,that,he came here.,他昨天下午来的。,思考：什么样的作文会成为一篇好作文,无遗漏信息点（审题）,篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词,句式多样,地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组,思考：你能想到的好句式有哪些？,思考：什么样的作文会成为一篇好作文 无遗漏信息点（审题）思考,强调句,倒装句,with,复合结构,advanced,sentences,定语从句,名词性从句,非谓语动词,常用谚语,被动句,强调句倒装句with复合结构advanced定语从句名词性从,化腐朽为神奇,十,式,化腐朽为神奇十 式,一、将两个简单句合并为并列句。,操作难度 写作效果,1.,You can do it. I can do it. One of us must do it.,you,I must do it.,Either,or,一、将两个简单句合并为并列句。 操作难度 写作效果,If you go through the gate, youll find the entrance to Bear Country. (,一般,),Go through the gate, and youll find.,(,高级,),I got up late this morning, otherwise I could have caught the early bus.,(,高级,),I got up late this morning. I didnt catch the early bus. (,一般,),The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.,(,高级,),When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (,一般,),If you go through the gate, yo,二、主动句与被动句的互换。,操作难度 写作效果,The government should take immediate measures to deal with the present financial crisis.,People suggest that the conference be put off. (,一般,),It is suggested that the conference be put off.,(,高级,),Immediate measures should be taken to deal with the present financial crisis.,二、主动句与被动句的互换。,三、 将陈述句改为感叹句。,操作难度 写作效果,1. To prevent the pollution is very important,How,！,2. She is a clever girl,What,!,How important it is,to prevent the pollution!,what a clever girl she is!,三、 将陈述句改为感叹句。,四、将陈述句改为倒装句。,操作难度 写作效果,1. I could,hardly,understand the importance of English at that time.,Hardly could I,understand the importance of English at that time.,2. We did,not,realize our mistakes,until,at that time.,Not until at that time did we,realize our mistakes.,3.Though Im weak, I will make the effort. (,一般,),Weak as I am, Ill make the effort.,(,高级,),四、将陈述句改为倒装句。,五、将简单句改为强调句。,操作难度 写作效果,1.,Smoking,did great harm to his health.,2. Our money is earned,through hard work,by our parents.,It was,smoking,that,did great harm to his health.,It is,through hard work,that,our money is earned by our parents.,五、将简单句改为强调句。,六、将两个简单句合并为复合句。,操作难度写作效果,1.,同位语和同位语从句（常用于描述人物、地点等介绍性文段）,1) Liu Xiang is an excellent athlete. He won the first prize in Mens 110 Hurdle Race in the 2004 Olympic Games. (,用同位语改写,), won the first prize in Mens 110 Hurdle Race in the 2004 Olympic Games.,2) The word is true. The president will give our school a speech.,is true,the president will give our school a speech.,六、将两个简单句合并为复合句。 操作难度,2.,定语从句 （限制性,/,非限制性）,1) The 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing, and its slogan is One World, One Dream,The 2008 Olympic Games,.,2) In my opinion, the Great Wall and the Summer Palace are well worth visiting.,In my opinion, the Great Wall and the Summer Palace,.,3) Yesterday, we went to the East Gate, and we bought a lot of clothes.,Yesterday, we went to the East Gate,.,Whose slogan is One World, One Dream ,will be held in BJ,are the two places which are well worth visiting.,Where we bought a lot of clothes.,2. 定语从句 （限制性/ 非限制性）Whose sloga,3.,主语从句,1) His wonderful performance on the stage impressed me.,most was his wonderful performance on the stage.,2) It satisfied me. Our school dining hall provides us with a large variety of kinds of dishes.,our school dining hall provides us with a large variety of kinds of dishes.,3) I learned from the story that as long as we have patience, confidence and perseverance, we can realize our dreams.,as long as we have patience, confidence and perseverance, we can realize our dreams.,What impressed me,What satisfied me is that,What I have learnt from the story is that,3. 主语从句What impressed meWhat s,【推荐句型】：,What surprisesastonishedsatisfiedimpressed me is that,What I would like to suggest advise put forward is that,What matters most is that,What I learnconclude from the story is that,【推荐句型】：,4.,表语从句,【推荐句型】：,is no longer what it used to be.,我的家乡不再像以前那样了。,My hometown is no longer what it used to be.,4. 表语从句,5.,状语从句,【推荐句型】,结果、程度,so,that,; such,that,让步,no matter how what when where,.=whatever, however, whenever, wherever,时间,was doing,when,5. 状语从句,1),不管前面有多少困难，我们都要学会独立的克服他们。,we should learn to overcome them independently.,2),我正沿着马路走，突然我听到有人叫我。,I,along the road,suddenly I heard my name called.,No matter how many difficulties there are ahead of us,was walking,when,1)不管前面有多少困难，我们都要学会独立的克服他们。No m,七、将两个简单句合并为一个由,which,引导的非限制性定语从句,操作难度写作效果,1. Recently many middle school students spend their money on unnecessary things. Different people have different opinions about it.,Recently many middle school students spend their money on unnecessary things, which arouses people to think differently,2. Many boys learn to smoke. It does harm to their health.,Many boys learn to smoke,.,which,Which does harm to their health.,七、将两个简单句合并为一个由which引导的非限制性定语从句,八、,It,作形式主语或形式宾语句型,操作难度写作效果,1. You pretend to know what you dont know. Its no good.,2. It is easy to get on with Pam. I find,.,Its no good pretending to know what you dont know.,I find it easy to get on with Pam.,八、It作形式主语或形式宾语句型,九、分词结构代替状语,/,定语从句,操作难度写作效果,1. If you work harder, you will do better in the exam next time., you will do better in the exam next time.,2. Because my friend was frightened of losing his job, he said nothing to the police., my friend said nothing to the police.,Working hard,Frightened of losing his job,九、分词结构代替状语/定语从句,2.,The moon travels round the earth once every month.,The moon is a natural satellite of the earth.,The moon,，,traveling round the earth,once every month,，,is a natural satellite,of the earth.,2.The moon travels round the e,与信件和公用电话相比，手机和网络更快也更方便。,(,广东,),Compared with letters and public phones,，,mobile phones and the Internet are faster and much more convenient.,与信件和公用电话相比，手机和网络更快也更方便。(广东)Co,十、,with,引导的短语或者复合结构,操作难度 写作效果,With +,宾语,+ adj./ adv./,介词短语,/to dodoingdone,常用句型,with a population of,.,with a total area of,with a long history of,years,十、 with 引导的短语或者复合结构 操作,1),这个地区占地,2000,平方千米，人口,10,万。,This area covers an area of 2000 square kilometers,.,2),我们学校周围种了很多花和树，吸引了大量的学生来参观。, it attracts a large number of people.,3,）没有做完作业，这个小孩不敢去上学。, the boy dared not go to school.,4),这两个男人早早就睡了，蜡烛烧了一个晚上。,The two men went to bed early,.,with a population of 100,000,.,With so many trees and flowers surrounding our school,.,with candles burning a night long,With homework not finished,1) 这个地区占地2000平方千米，人口10万。 with,一、,肯定不如双否好,二、,陈述不如倒装妙,三、,主动不如被动巧,四、从句不如分词傲,高级句式使用的原则：抓住高考阅卷老师的心理的秘诀,四“不如”,誊写规范不要少,一、肯定不如双否好二、陈述不如倒装妙三、主动不如被动巧四、从,修辞的使用在书面表达中算作很大的亮点，在高中阶段很少有学生会注重修辞的应用。双重否定也是种修辞，而且对于考生来说，只要稍加注意，可以在文章中设计双重否定的句子。就变成了亮点句，起到强调作用。,一、肯定不如双否好,I couldnt have made so much progress in English without his help.,I have made great progress in English with his help.,The postman comes on time every day.,.,The postman never fails to come on time,修辞的使用在书面表达中算作很大的亮点，在高中阶段很少,倒装是一种最简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法。在高中阶段只需掌握倒装的四种形式，足以应对书面表达，如何应用倒装，有很多方法和技巧。,1.,Only,when we realize the importance of environmental,protection can we solve the problem of pollution.,2.,So precious,is time that we cant afford to waste it.,3.,Diligent as,he was, he failed in passing the exam.,4.,By no means should,teenagers get into the habit of smoking.,二、陈述不如倒装妙,倒装是一种最简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法。在高中阶段只需,1.,否定词开头：,2. Not until/till 5 pm. did he come here yesterday.,3. It was not until/till 5 pm. that he came here yesterday.,1. He didnt come here until 5 pm. yesterday.,1.否定词开头：2. Not until/till 5 pm,把地点状语放在句首后面主谓倒装。这样做的好处之一是,倒装本身就是高级结构,，第二是,倒装后把真正的主语放到了句子的末尾，后面还可以继续加从句,，,使整个句子再呈现更多的亮点,。,2.,地点状语开头,Our library is in the center of our school.,In the center of our school lies our library.,On the bank stand some flowers.,In the sky hang little stars.,把地点状语放在句首后面主谓倒装。这样做的好处之一是倒装本身就,Our library lies in the center of our school.It is between the garden and the teaching building.,In the center of our school lies our library,，,which is between the garden and the teaching building.,Our library lies in the center,Only in this way can we,achieve our goal.,3.Only,的倒装句：,Only in this way can I,improve my English,Only by taking exercises can we,keep healthy,Only in this way can we achiev,4.as,：,1. Young,as,I am, I can manage it,2. Rich,as,our country is, we have a lot of problems,3. Badly injured,as,he was, he managed to take down the cars number.,Try as you will, you wont manage it,4.as：1. Young as I am, I can m,三、主动不如被动巧,英语中经常用被动语态，汉语经常用主动语态；英语中经常用是事物或形式主语开头，强调一件事发生在什么人身上，而汉语经常用人称开头强调一个人发生了什么事。所以使用被动语态符合英语的习惯，如果能将整个文章中,两个句子,变成被动语态，就会呈现句型的变化，使整篇文章句型丰富。,三、主动不如被动巧 英语中经常用被动语态，汉语经常用主动语态,每次可以借五本书最多借十天,(2006NMET),We can borrow five books at most, and we can keep them for ten days.,At most five books can be borrowed at a time and they can be kept for ten days.,哪种表达法分数会更高？,每次可以借五本书最多借十天(2006NMET)We can,几乎所有的状语从句都可以变成独立主格或分词结构，时间状语从句，原因状语，条件状语等。例如条件状语从句：,If such is the case, you should apologize to her.,如何变成独立主格或分词结构呢？学会下面的口诀，如果你的作文中有状语从句，马上可改成独立主格或分词结构这个最大的亮点。,四、从句不如分词傲,几乎所有的状语从句都可以变成独立主格或分词结构，时间状语从句,口诀：一去，二看，三改。,一去：去连词；二看：看主语；三改：改分词。,第一步，去掉连词,if,；,If such is the case, you should apologize to her.,第二步，看前后两句话的主语，前后主语不一致， 所以要改成独立主格；,第三步，改分词，,is,变成分词是,being,最后变成,Such being the case, you should apologize to her,如果前后两句话主语一致，就变成分词结构。,口诀：一去，二看，三改。第一步，去掉连词if；If such,原文, The young man couldnt help crying when he heard the bad news.,修正,Hearing the bad news, the young man couldnt help crying.,原文,If everything is taken into consideration, we ought to have another chance.,修正, Everything taken into consideration, we ought to have another chance.,原文 The young man couldnt he,1 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.,（使用,V-ing,形式）,.,2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.,（使用名词性从句）,3. He did not know what had happened,until he had read the news in the newspaper,.(,使用强调句型,),4. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(,用虚拟语气）,On his arriving, please give me an e-mail.,What,surprises him,is that,the little girl knows so many things.,Practice,改写句子,It was,not until he had read the news in the newspaper,that,he knew what had happened.,I,couldnt have passed,the physics exam,but for,your help.,1 When he arrives, please give,5. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.(,使用,V-ing,形式,),6,.,If you study hard, you will make rapid progress.,（用并列句）,7,He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.,(,使用倒装句,),No sooner had he come,back from Beijing,than,he was sent abroad.,Singing and laughing, they went back to school.,Study hard,and,youll make rapid progress.,No sooner had he come back fro,1.,通过使用网络与家人联系是很方便的,（,2010,南通模拟）,It is convenient to keep in touch with your family by using the Internet.,2.,我们所需要做的 是冷静下来,反思我们的学习方法。,（,2010,扬州模拟）,What we need to do is to calm down and reflect on our learning method.,3.,只有以这种方式， 我们才能进步。,（,2010,潍坊模拟）,Only in this way, can we make progress.,熟能生巧,Translate the sentences,1. 通过使用网络与家人联系是很方便的（2010南通模拟）I,4.,我们对自己的态度才是最关键的,。,（,2010,苏州模拟）,It is our attitude to ourselves that matters(counts).,5,.,坐在一盘子粽子前，这个男孩不知道如何打开他们。（,unwrap),（,2010,淄博模拟）,Sitting before a plate of zongzi, the boy didnt know how to unwrap them,.,6.,正如图中所示，爱就像黑暗中的一盏灯。,（,2008,北京模拟）,As is shown in the picture, love is like a lamp in the dark.,4.我们对自己的态度才是最关键的。（2010苏州模拟） It,但是值得提醒的是，同学们在使用复杂的句型和结构时，要有把握能正确地表达；也要注意分寸，应根据书面表达的内容和篇章结构而定，做到地道得体，千万不能生搬硬套，画蛇添足。,多看 多背 多模仿 多翻译,但是值得提醒的是，同学们在使用复杂的句型和结构时，要有把握能,走近高考范文,Fill in the blanks,（,2009,山东）,1,._(,众所周知）,that China is a country with a long history.,2._ (,随着春节的临近），,people will hold all varieties of activities.,3._(,自从我见过史密斯先生已经好久了）,and I miss him a lot.,It is well known,With the Spring Festival drawing near,It has been a long time since I saw Mr. Smith,走近高考范文Fill in the blanks（2009,（,2009,北京,）,1.We bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees,_,(,一路上有说有笑）,.,2._(,一到达），,we began to work immediately.,3._ (,看到一排排的树），,we all have a sense of achievement.,talking and laughing all the,way,Upon arrival,Seeing the lines of trees,（2009 北京）1.We bicycled to the,1. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.,（使用名词性从句）,3. He did not know what had happened,until he had read the news in the newspaper,.(,使用强调句型,),4. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(,用虚拟语气）,What,surprises him,is that,the little girl knows so many things.,Practice,怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇,It was,not until he had read the news in the newspaper,that,he knew what had happened.,I,couldnt have passed,the physics exam,but for,your help.,What surprises him is that the,5. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (,使用过去分词,),6. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.(,使用,V-ing,形式,),7.I wont believe what he says.,（,no matter what,状语从句）,8,.,If you study hard, you will make rapid progress.,（祈使句,+and,）,Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.,Singing and laughing, they went back to school.,No matter what he says, I wont believe.,Study hard,and,youll make rapid progress.,5. She walked out of the lab a,9,He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (,使用倒装句,),10.We all think he is a great man. (think highly of),11.As a result the plan was a failure. (turn out),12. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (the morethe more),No sooner had he come,back from Beijing,than,he was sent abroad.,We all,think highly of him,.,The plan,turned out to be,a failure.,The more,he spoke,the more excited,he felt.,9He had no sooner come back f,书写潦草、字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息，得 分,0,书写潦草、字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息，得 分,卷面不整洁,;,涂改较多,;,语言 错误多,;,层次不清,;,得 分,5,卷面不整洁; 涂改较多;语言 错误多;层次不清;得,Not good!,Not good!,Worse!,Worse!,Neat!,Neat!,高考英语高分写作指导课件,Lets try!,Lets try!,假设你是一名大学新生，遇到了大学生们常遇到的情况,:,在新校园里，,倍感孤独,，总是不能,照顾,好自己，故常,想家,。更糟的是，食物、气候不,适应,，钱物容易丢失，,与他人友好相处,有些费劲,。总之，,你感到你不像以前的你了,。令你高兴的是，,老师的话鼓舞了你,，你,下定决心,适应大学生活，不管多么艰难,。,假设你是一名大学新生，遇到了大学生们常遇到的情况: 在,1.,备词,take care of/ look after/ attend to / keep an eye on/ care for,agree with / suit/ adapt oneself to /be accustomed to doing sth. /adjust oneself to /be adjusted to,have some difficulty in doing sth/ there is some difficulty in (ones) doing sth.,decide to do sth./make up ones mind to do sth. /be determined to do sth,1.备词take care of/ look after/,2.,造句,1. I feel lonely at a new university.,It is at a new university that I feel lonely.,It is the first time that I have been at university, which leads me to feel lonely.,2. I cant take good care of myself, so/as a result I often feel homesick.,I cant attend to myself well, feeling homesick,Because I cant take good care of myself, I often feel homesick.,3. Because of different climates and food, they often feel sick.,Different climates and food dont agree with / suit me.,I dont adjust myself to different climates and food.,2.造句1. I feel lonely at a new,4.I have some difficulty in getting on well with others.,There is some difficulty in getting on well with others.,It is difficult for me to get on well with others.,5. I feel I am not a person that I used to be.,I feel I am no longer what I used to be.,6.To my joy , the teachers words encourage me .,What delights me is what the teachers have said encourages me.,7.However hard it is, I have made up my mind to adapt myself to university life.,No matter how,4.I have some difficulty in ge,3.,成篇,I am a freshman at university,but,I am at a loss what to do,when I am at university like other freshmen. I cant attend to myself in my everyday life,feeling lonely and homesick.,Whats more,clothes, money or mobile phones are sometimes gone.,And,because of different climates and food, I often feel sick.,Besides,，,it is difficult for me to get on well with others.,In a word,I feel I am,no longer what I used to be.,What delights me is what the teachers have said encourages me greatly.,I have made up my mind to adapt myself to university life no matter how difficult it is,.,3.成篇 I am a freshman at,Thank,you,，,good bye,愿同学们像这匹骏马，驰骋在高考的征程中，创造自己的辉煌！,Good Luck To You,Thank you，good bye愿同学们像这匹骏马，驰骋,. To use complicated structures,1.,People suggest that the conference be put off.,.It is suggested that the conference be put off.,2.She,walked out of the room and many students followed her.,Followed by many students, she walked out of the room,3.To his surprise, the little girl knew so many things.,What surprised him was that the little girl knew so many things.,被动语态,非谓语动词,从句,. To use complicated structure,4.The coupl