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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,*,专题十二,短文改错,关于短文改错的技巧,我想和大家分享一个我觉得很,有用的改错顺口溜:动词形,名词数,注意形和副;非谓动词细区分,习惯用,法要记住;句子成分多分析,逻辑错误须关注。“动词形,主要包括两类错误:动词的时态和语态错误,以及主谓不一致的错误。“名词数指名词单、复数形式的用法错误,常表现为将名词复数写成单数。“注意形和副指注意区分形容词和副词在句子中的作用和具体用法。“非谓动词细区分主要有动词-ing形式和-ed形式类错误,也包括不定式类错误。,“习惯用法要记住主要指习惯搭配方面的根底知识。这需要我们在日常学习中多多积累。“句子成分多分析是指不同的句子成分要用不同的词类;不同的语境要选择不同的词语。这些都需要我们对句子结构和句子成分作细致的分析,才能找出用词不当的错误。“逻辑错误须关注是指与句子的上、下文不一致,甚至相矛盾,属于逻辑性错误。如称谓上的张冠李戴,人名、地名、时间、方位等方面的错误。只要把这个顺口溜的相关内容多加注意,相信大家肯定能做好短文改错题。,香港中文大学张放,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,Correction 1(2021全国),In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday,I took driving lessons.I still remember how hard first day was.Before getting into the car,I thought I had learned the instructors orders,so once I started the car,my mind goes blank.I forgot what he had said to me altogether.The instructor kept repeating the word,“Speed up! “Slow down! “Turning left! I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left.A few minutes late,the instructor asked me to stop the car.It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,【答案与解析】,第一句:eighteeneighteenth考查数词。表示某人的第几个生日,用序数词,故把eighteen改为eighteenth。,第二句:hard后加the/my考查介词或代词。day为可数名词单数,故前要有限定词,结合其前的first可知,此处可加the或my,表示“我的第一天。,第三句:sobut/yet考查连词。前后句为转折关系而非因果关系,故用but或yet连接。,第三句:goeswent考查时态。由前面的started可知此处用过去时,故goes改为went。,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,第五句:wordwords考查名词。word为可数名词,由后面的话可知此处的word要用复数形式。,第五句:TurningTurn考查动词。教练所说的话属于命令,因此用祈使句。上文的“Speed up!“Slow down!也有所提示。,第六句:去掉much考查形容词。此处为so.that.结构,意为“如此以至于。,第七句:latelater考查副词。a few minutes later“几分钟后。,第八句:suddenlysudden考查形容词。此处的stop为名词,故其前应该用形容词修饰。,第八句:onof考查介词。in the middle of“在中间,为固定搭配。,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,Correction 2(2021全国),Mr.and Mrs.Zhang all work in our school.They live far from the school,and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day.In their spare time,they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden,that is on the rooftop of their house.They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together.They have also bought for some gardening tools.Beside,they often get some useful informations from the Internet.When summer came,they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,【答案与解析】,第一句:allboth或去掉all考查代词。Mr.and Mrs.Zhang是两个人,所以代词应该用both。,第二句:aan/one考查冠词或数词。hour是以元音音素开头的,故冠词应该用an。一个小时可以表示为an hour或者one hour。,第三句:interestinginterested考查形容词。be interested in“对感兴趣;interesting“令人感兴趣的,修饰物。,第三句:thatwhich考查非限制性定语从句。先行词为garden,指物且在定语从句中作主语,故用which引导。,第四句:earlierearly考查形容词。此处没有比较的含义,因此不需要用比较级。,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,第五句:去掉for考查介词。buy为及物动词,for是多余的,所以去掉。,第六句:BesideBesides考查副词。beside“在旁边;besides“除此之外。,第六句:informationsinformation考查名词。information为不可数名词,因此应将informations改为information。,第七句:camecomes考查动词时态。根据“主将从现的原那么,从句用一般现在时,因此把came改为comes。,第七句:pick前加to考查非谓语动词。invite sb.to do sth.“邀请某人做某事。所以应在pick前加to。,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,Correction 3(2021全国),When I look at this picture of myself,I realize of how fast time flies.I had grown not only physically,and also mentally in the past few years.About one month after this photo was took,I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club.Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time:car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes,playing pop music,and collecting the late music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,【答案与解析】,第一句:去掉第二个of考查介词。I realize of how fast time flies中,realize是谓语动词,其后是how引导的宾语从句,of多余。,第二句:hadhave考查时态。句子的时间状语是in the past few years,应用现在完成时或现在完成进行时。,第二句:andbut考查连词。not only.but also.意为“不仅而且,为固定搭配。,第三句:tooktaken考查语态。photo与take为动宾关系,故用被动语态,因此将took改为taken。,第三句:becomebecame考查时态。本句的谓语动词是entered和become,形式应该一致,根据上下文可知应将become改为became。,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,第四句:在picture前加this或the考查限定词。picture是一个普通名词,其前应该有限定词修饰。此处特指上文提到的照片,因此用this或the修饰。,第四句:theythat/which考查定语从句。“Around me in the picture are the things是主句,“they were very important in my life at that time是定语从句修饰the things。they不能充当定语从句的引导词,应改为that或which。,第五句:differencedifferent考查形容词。此处的kind是名词,需用形容词修饰。,第五句:latelatest考查形容词。表示最新的音乐专辑应该用latest。late意为“晚的,迟的。,第六句:yourmy考查代词。全文借助一张照片在描述“我的高中生活,因此将your改为my。,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,Correction 4(2021全国),The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They were also the best and worse years in my life.At the first,I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself.However,my parents didnt seem to think such.They always tell me what to do and how to do it.At one time, I even felt my parents couldnt understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them.I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes.Now I am leaving home to college.At last,I will be on my own,but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,【答案与解析】,第一句:yearyears语境为13到19岁这几年,故year应该是复数形式。,第二句:worseworst根据语境和前面的best可知此处应该用最高级形式。worse是bad的比较级形式,其最高级形式是worst。,第三句:去掉theat first “起初,开始,是固定搭配。,第三句:yourselfmyself本文自始至终都在讲述“我的故事,且本句的主语为,故此处应为myself。,第四句:suchsothink so表示“这样想/认为。,第五句:telltold本文讲述的是过去的事情,故用一般过去时。tell的过去式是told。,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,第六句:freelyfree系动词be后面用形容词作表语,freely是副词,其形容词形式为free。,第七句:wearwearing介词by后面用动词-ing形式,表示方式。,第八句:tofor动词短语leave.for.表示“离开某地去某地,为固定搭配。,第九句:whenever后加I状语从句缺少主语,且根据语境应该是每当“我需要帮助时。,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,Correction 5(2021四川),It is Mothers Day today.Though its a western festival,its popular in China now.,Mom has a full-time job,so she has to do most of the houseworks.She is a great mother.Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mothers Day.We get up early in the morning.Dad cleaned the house,and then went on shopping.When he came back,I found a bunch of flowers in her hand.I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen.The dishes what I cooked were Moms favoritest.At dinner,we said to her,“Happy Mothers Day!Mom was grateful and moving.,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,【答案与解析】,第三句:sobut本句为并列句,前后分句“妈妈有全职工作与“大局部的家务活还要妈妈干两者之间为转折关系,故把so改为but。,第三句:houseworkshouseworkhousework“家务活为不可数名词。,第五句:orandboth.and.为并列连词,表示“两者都,为固定用法。,第六句:getgot本文描述了我和爸爸为妈妈庆祝母亲节的经历,get up这一动作发生在过去,故把get改为got。,第七句:去掉ongo shopping为固定搭配,意为“去购物。,第八句:herhis手里拿着一束花的是父亲。,第九句:在第二个in后加thein the kitchen与前文的in the sitting room相对应。,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,第十句:whatthat/which或去掉what分析句子结构可知,引导词在句中引导定语从句,先行词为dishes,指物,且在句中作宾语,故把what改为that/which或者删除what。,第十句:favoritestfavoritefavorite名词,“最喜欢的事物。另外,favorite作为形容词时,没有等级变化。,第十一句:movingmovedmoving“令人感动的,moved“感动的,妈妈因为我和爸爸的表现很感动。,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,Correction 6(2021全国),When I was a child,I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city,but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately,on the development of industrialization,the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so,well live to regret it.,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,【答案与解析】,第二句:thinkthought根据上一句的时间状语When I was a child可知此处应用一般过去时,故把think改为thought。,第三句:countryside前加the“我现在生活在城市里,但“我想念“我乡下的家。此处应是特指作者童年所生活的乡下,故加定冠词the。,第四句:orand由语境可知,the air is clean和the mountains are green之间应是并列关系,不是选择关系,故把or改为and。,第五句:onwithwith the development of.为固定搭配,意为“随着的开展。故把on改为with。,第六句:去掉been句子主语studies和谓语动词show之间应是主动关系,故删除been。,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,第六句:seriouslyserious名词problem前应用形容词修饰,故把seriously改为serious。,第七句:airsairair意为“空气时为不可数名词,故把airs改为air。,第八句:MuchManyanimals是可数名词复数形式,而much只能修饰不可数名词,故把Much改为Many。,第九句:foundfind情态动词后面必须跟动词原形,故把found改为find。,第九句:yourour/the本文讲述的是我们所生活的环境,而且主语是we,故把your改为our;也可以用定冠词特指上文提到的环境,故把your改为the。,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,Correction 7(2021全国),One day,little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time,he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later,Tony saw parents.Mom said,“How nice to see you again!Dad and I were terrible worried.Tony promised her that this would never happen again.,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,【答案与解析】,第一句:parentparents由下文的his parents were.以及倒数第二句中妈妈说的话可知托尼是和爸爸、妈妈一起去的,所以应该用复数形式parents。,第三句:oninon表示在外表,in表示在里面。表示在商店的橱窗里,用介词in。,第四句:去掉very句中使用了so.that.结构,very多余,故将其去掉。,第五句:lookslooking该动词位于介词after后,要用动词的-ing形式,故把looks改为looking。,第五句:wherethat或去掉wherefound后是一个宾语从句,句子意思和成分完整,应该用只起连接作用的that引导,也可以省略。故把where改为that或去掉where。,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,第六句:begunbegan,本文描述的是过去的经历,and连接的两个并列成分应当时态一致,故此处用一般过去时,把,begun,改为,began,。,第七句:tellingtold,由,and,可知,此处和谓语动词,saw,并列,故用过去式。,第七句:athe,这里指的是前文提到的,shop,所以用定冠词,the,表特指。,第八句:saw后加his,这里特指托尼的父母亲,所以用形容词性物主代词,his,修饰,parents,。,第九句:terribleterribly,修饰形容词,worried,要用副词形式。,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,Correction 8(2021陕西),My soccer coach retired in last week.I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party.My mum makes the better biscuits in the world,so I decide to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic step of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.I thought the biscuits were really well.My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.,At a party,my coach,with a biscuit in his mouth,asked surprisingly who made them and joked,“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.,My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,【答案与解析】,第一句:去掉inlast,next等表示时间的状语前不用介词,故去掉in。,第二句:anythingsomethinganything用于疑问句和否认句中,something用于肯定句中,故将anything改为something。,第三句:betterbest表示比较的范围是in the world,故改为最高级。,第三句:decidedecideddecide意为“决定,此处时态应与全文时态一致,故改为decided。,第四句:stepstepsstep是可数名词,前面有some修饰,故用复数形式。,第六句:wellgood系动词be后接形容词作表语,副词不能充当表语,故将well改为good。,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,第七句:afterwhen/while“我唯一的错误就是当“我正在打包的时候掉地上了一些。根据句意可知将after 改为when或while。,第八句:athe第一段第二句中有提到party,此处为第二次提到,故用the表特指。故将a改为the。,第八句:just后加to分析句子结构可知,might have to是谓语局部,从而get不再是谓语动词,故只能是非谓语动词。此处表示目的,故用不定式。,第九句:enjoyenjoying此处my coach and me作介词of的宾语,enjoy与my coach and me之间是主动关系,应用动词-ing 形式。,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,Correction 9(2021四川),Hi,Janice,Its been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.,As I tell you last time,I made three new friend here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.Weve been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars.Its been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many.And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity!In fact,I dont like to go anymore,so Im afraid Ill lose their friendship.How do you think I should do?If you are me,would you talk to him?,Please help with me and give me some advice.,Grace,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,【答案与解析】,第一句:want后加towant to do sth.为固定搭配,意为“想要做某事。,第二句:telltold根据从句中的时间状语last time可知该动作发生在过去,故应用一般过去时。,第二句:friendfriendsfriend为可数名词,根据前面的数词three可知此处应用复数形式。故将friend改为friends。,第四句:singsingingspend some time (in) doing sth.是固定搭配,意为“花时间做某事。故将sing改为singing。,第五句:manymuch此处说的是在卡拉OK唱歌这件事让作者花费了很多钱,浪费了很多时间。many指代可数名词,much指代不可数名词。故将many改为much。,第七句:sobut逗号前说不想再去了,而后面又说害怕失去友谊,由此可知逗号前后为转折关系,而非因果关系。故将so改为 but。,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,第八句:HowWhat该句中do you think为插入语,分析句子成分可知动词do后缺少宾语,而how为疑问副词,在句中作方式状语,作宾语应用what。,第九句:arewere根据下文的would可知此处为if条件句的虚拟语气。与现在事实相反,应用一般过去时。故将are改成were。,第九句:himthem上文提到作者交了三个朋友,再结合上文中的their friendship可知此处指代那三个朋友,为复数。故将him改为them。,第十句:去掉with固定搭配help sb.with sth.意为“帮助某人某事,help后接的宾语为人时不用介词。故去掉with。,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,Correction 10(2021浙江),My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass.I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view.On the left-hand side of the class,I could easy see the football field.In the mornings,it was full of students exercising.The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid.Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them.Farther in the distance,I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains.On the right side of the class was the road.I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning.The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming.If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom,I will never forget it.,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,【答案与解析】,第一句:sidesidesside,是可数名词,前面有数词,three,修饰,故应改为复数形式。,第一句:fromof,墙壁由玻璃制成,看得出原材料,故将介词,from,改为,of,。,第二句:sitsittingenjoy,后接动词,-ing,形式作宾语,故将,sit,改为,sitting,和,looking,at,the,view,构成并列结构。,第三句:easyeasilysee,是动词,需要用副词来修饰,故将,easy,改为,easily,。,第五句:iswas,全文用的都是过去时态,故将,is,改为,was,与全文时态保持一致。,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,第六句:themit此处代词代替的是the school,故将them改为it。,第七句:去掉not本文主要是谈论透过玻璃墙能欣赏到外面的景色,因而是能欣赏到山上的雪景,故此处的否认意义不符,故去掉 not。,第九句:in与hurry之间加ain a hurry意为“立即;匆忙,为固定搭配。,第十句:feltfeelmake使役动词后用动词原形作宾语补足语,构成make sb.do sth.结构,意为“使某人做某事,故将felt改为feel。,第十一句:IfAlthough/Though尽管当“我在那个教室读书时还只是个孩子,但“我永远不会忘记它。根据语境可知,这是一个让步状语从句,故将If改为Although或者Though。,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,Correction 11(2021全国),Nearly five years before,and with the help by our father,my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果) in our back garden.Since thenfor all these yearwe had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please.As result,the plants are growing somewhere.The fruits are small in size,but juicy and taste.There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year,but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,【答案与解析】,第一句:beforeago由下文可知,此处讲述的是过去的事情,与一般过去时连用应用ago,不用before。一段时间和before连用时常用于完成时。,第一句:byofwith the help of sb.为固定短语,意为“在某人的帮助下。故将by改为of。,第二句:yearyears前面的限定词these意为“这些,修饰可数名词复数,所以使用复数years。,第二句:hadhave时间状语since then和all these years一般与现在完成时连用,故把had改为have。,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,第三句:As后加aas a result为固定短语,意为“因此;结果。,第三句:somewhereeverywhere根据上下文可知,圣女果应该长得到处都是,而不仅仅只在某些地方生长。故将somewhere改为everywhere。,第四句:tastetasty根据连词and前后词性一致的原那么可知,因为juicy是形容词,这里应用taste的形容词形式tasty,意为“美味的。,第五句:muchmany根据be动词用are及后面的them可知,此处指代的是可数名词的复数,故将much改为many。,第六句:去掉but或butyetalthough引导的让步状语从句不与表示转折的连词but连用,但可以与副词yet连用。因此去掉连词but,或者把but改为yet。,第七句:wonderfullywonderful修饰后面的名词tomatoes,作定语,应该用形容词形式。,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,Correction 12(2021全国),My dream school starts at 8:30 ends at 3:30 are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.We didnt need to do so many homework.Therefore,we have more time with after-school activities.For example,we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.,My dream school look like a big garden.There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.We can lie on the grass for a rest,or sat by the lake listening music.The teachers here are kind and helpfully.They are not only our teachers but also our friends.,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,【答案与解析】,第二句:TheyThere表示“上午有三节课,下午有两节课要用there be句型。,第三句:didntdont全文的时态为一般现在时,故将didnt改为 dont。,第三句:manymuchhomework是不可数名词,故将many改为much。,第四句:withfor因此,“我们有更多的时间去做课外活动。have time for.为固定短语,意为“有时间(做)。,第五句:hourhoursone and a half修饰复数名词,故将hour改为hours。,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,第六句:looklooks主语my dream school为单数,且全文时态为一般现在时,故将look改为looks。,第七句:去掉第一个the在“all kinds of+n.结构中,名词前不加冠词。,第八句:satsit并列连词or连接两个形式相同的成分,故将sat改为动词原形sit,与前面的lie对应。,第八句:listening后加tolisten为不及物动词,后面加宾语时要用listen to,为固定搭配,意为“听。,第九句:helpfullyhelpfuland连接两个词性相同的成分,此处连接两个形容词作表语。,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,Correction 13(2021辽宁),Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although weve been delighted to have you as neighbors,were hoping to settle something that bothers to us.In a word,your dogCleo.,Weve called several time about Cleos early morning barking.It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute shes outside.The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby.Beside,Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day.This morning she starts barking even before 5 oclock.That is too much for us,considering how closely the houses are.,We appreciate our apologies and goodwill,but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.,Sincerely,Jack and Rose,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,【答案与解析】,第一句:去掉第三个tobother为及物动词,后接宾语不用介词。bother sb.意为“麻烦某人。,第三句:timetimestime在此处为可数名词,意为“次数。由前面的several可知,此处应用复数形式。,第四句:understandingunderstandIt is difficult to do sth.是固定句型,意为“做某事很困难。,第五句:havehas主语the early morning barking为单数,因此谓语动词应用单数形式,故用has。,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,第六句:BesideBesides根据语境可知前后为递进关系,故将Beside改为Besides,意为“除之外。而beside意为“在的旁边。,第六句:第一个aanaverage的发音以元音音素开头,所以此处应用不定冠词an。,第七句:startsstarted由时间状语this morning可知,此处讲述的是过去发生的事,故应用一般过去时。,第八句:closelyclose作形容词时,close意为“近的;closely为副词,意为“密切地。此处表示两家的房子挨得很近,故用close。,第九句:ouryour根据上下文逻辑关系可知此处指代对方,应用your。,第九句:figure后加outfigure out是固定短语,意为“发现;弄清楚。,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,Correction 14(2021四川),Hello,boys and girls!Today,I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off.If you hear the alarm,stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside.Stay close to your teacher and classmate.Dont panic or get out of line,and trying to remain quiet and calmly.Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire.If its a false alarm and there is no fire,your teacher will lead us back to the classroom.If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt,tell your teacher immediately.,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,【答案与解析】,第二句:withabout表示“谈论某内容应用短语talk about sth.,而talk with后一般加谈话的对象。,第二句:gogoes从句主语为a fire alarm,为单数第三人称形式,且由语境可知此处应用一般现在时,故谓语动词go也用单数形式。,第三句:wait后加forwait是不及物动词,表示“等待某人或某物应用固定短语wait for。,第四句:classmateclassmates与你的老师和同学们待在一起。classmate是可数名词,且根据常识可知,同学应不止一个,故此处应用复数。,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,第五句:tryingtry句中and连接两个并列的祈使句,故此处应用动词原形。,第五句:calmlycalmremain是系动词,表示“保持,其后接形容词充当表语,故用形容词calm与上文quiet并列。,第六句:athe此处的fire特指上文提到的内容,故用定冠词the修饰。,第七句:usyou文章人称以第二人称为主,且根据前面的your teacher可知应将us改为you。,第八句:去掉when此处由that引导notice后的宾语从句,故when是多余的。,第八句:andor如果你注意到有人失踪或者受伤,就立刻告诉老师。失踪和受伤是两种不同的情况,此处指这两种情况中的任何一种,应该用or连接。,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,Correction 15(2021陕西),My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven.He wanted teach me about animals,insects and trees.My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.,One evening at sunset,we sat by the fire,have our barbecue.Just then a bird was flying over us.My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird.Neither of the arrows hit the target.Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the skythey were looked like rain!We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.,That day I didnt learn much about animals,insects or trees,but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,【答案与解析】,第二句:wanted后加towant to do sth.为固定短语。want后接动词不定式to do作宾语,意为“想要做某事。,第三句:comecame由第一句中的when I was seven可知时态为一般过去时,故将come改为came。,第四句:havehaving分析句子结构可知,have应用非谓语动词形式作伴随状语。句子主语we与have之间是逻辑上的主谓关系,故将have改为动词-ing形式having,表主动。,第六句:immediateimmediately此处表示立即跳起来,应用副词形式修饰动词短语jumped up,故将immediate改为immediately。,第六句:onatshoot at sb./sth.为固定短语,意为“朝某人/某物射击。,试做真题,透析真题,高手必备,萃取高招,对点精练,第七句:NeitherNone由下文可知,此处不只是两支箭,而是很多支箭。故将Neithe
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