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*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*,*,欢迎来到英语课堂,欢迎来到英语课堂,书面表达,话题写作（一）,人物介绍篇,书面表达话题写作（一） 人物介绍篇,【话题点睛】,针对名人或周围熟悉的同学、朋友或家人进行描写。主要涉及人物的经历、变化或自己对该人物的看法等方面。,典例分析,【话题点睛】 针对名人或周围熟悉的同学、朋友或家人进行描写。,要求,(1),词数,:80,100,可适当发挥,(,开头已给出,不计入总词数,);,(2),短文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校等信息。,A Famous British Nurse,Florence Nightingale,Florence Nightingale was a famous British nurse.,【思路点拨】,1.,要点提炼,:,主题是介绍南丁格尔的生平。文章主要围绕时间线展开。,2.,确定时态,:,一般过去时,3.,确定人称,:,第三人称,要求,【写作架构】,【写作架构】,【基础写作】,.,写主干句,(,根据所给提示补全下列各句。,),1.,她于,1820,年,5,月,12,日出生在一个富有的家庭。,(be born),She,in a rich family on May 12, 1820.,2.,她很热心并且总是乐于帮助他人,尤其是病人。,(be always ready to do),She was kind-hearted and,help others,the sick.,3.,在,1851,年,她被训练为一名护士。,(be trained as),In 1851 she,a nurse.,4.,后来她创办了世界上第一所护士学校。,(open),Later she,the worlds,nurse,.,5.,在,1974,年,因为她给人们的爱和帮助,她的生日变成了国际护士节。,(because of),In 1974, her,became International Nurse Day,the great love and help she gave to people.,was born,always ready to,especially,was trained as,opened,first,school,birthday,because of,【基础写作】was bornalways ready toe,.,句子升格,(,按括号中的要求完成句子。,),1.She went to help in the front hospital. She saved many soldiers lives. (,用,and,将两句合并为一个并列句,),2.She came back after the war. She became a national hero. (,合并为含有由,when,引导的时间状语从句的复合句,),3.She was a great nurse. (,改写为由,what,引导的感叹句,),She went to help in the front hospital and saved many soldiers lives.,When she came back after the war, she became a national hero.,What a great nurse she was!,.句子升格(按括号中的要求完成句子。)She went t,【连句成文】,A Famous British Nurse,Florence Nightingale,Florence Nightingale was a famous British nurse.,She was born in a rich family on May 12, 1820. She was kind-hearted and always ready to help others, especially the sick. In 1851 she was trained as a nurse. During the war, she went to help in the front hospital and saved many soldiers lives. When she came back after the war, she became a national hero. Later Florence Nightingale opened the worlds first nurse school. Florence Nightingale died in London in 1910.In 1974, her birthday became International Nurse Day because of the great love and help she gave to people.,What a great nurse she was!,【连句成文】,拓展积累,【相关短语】,be born in,出生于,; come from=be from,来自,; be good at=do well in,擅长,; be of medium build,中等身材,; be of medium height,中等身高,; get on well with,和和睦相处,; at the age of,在岁时,; make friends,结交朋友,【参考谚语】,1.A friend in need is a friend indeed.,患难见真情。,2.Where there is a will, there is a way.,有志者,事竟成。,3.All things in their being are good for something.,天生我材必有用。,拓展积累【相关短语】,【,亮点句型】,人物外貌,1.My favourite teacher is,a 30-year-old young lady of medium height, with big eyes and long straight hair.,2.She wears glasses and often,gets dressed in,different styles of clothes.,3.A big smile can always be found,on her round face,.,4.She always,wears a smile,.,人物性格,1.Shes so kind and friendly,that,she,makes friends with,each of her students.,2.I,m,always,ready to,help others when they,re in trouble,.,3.The girl sings and dances,so well that,she often gives performances at the school party.,【亮点句型】,其他经典表达,1.The hero,won high praise,from the public.,2.I hope shell find ways to,keep us interested in,English.,3.When we,have problems in English, we can,turn to,her.,4.Whenever I think of her,a strong feeling of,joy can always fill my heart!,5.Everyone has his or her favourite teacher at school, and,so do I,.,其他经典表达,实战演练,A,2017,河北,英语课上,同学们正在准备举行以“真实的自我”为主题的演讲活动。请你以李华的名义写一篇演讲词,向同学们介绍一下自己。,提示,(1)What are your strong points?,(2)How do you improve yourself?,(3)What is your dream for the future?,实战演练A2017河北,要求,(1),演讲词须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥,;,(2),演讲词中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名,;,(3),词数,:80,左右,(,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数,),。,Hello, everyone!,Im Li Hua and Im very happy to stand here to talk about myself.,_,Thanks for your attention!,要求,One,possible,version,:,Hello, everyone!,Im Li Hua and Im very happy to stand here to talk about myself. Im a kind and helpful person. Im always ready to help others when theyre in trouble. I can sing and dance so well that I often give performances at our school party.,When I think back what Ive done before, I should help my parents do more housework. Doing housework is good for my future life.,As for my dream, I want to be a teacher. Ill make friends with my students. I want to teach them everything I know!,Thanks for your attention!,One possible version:,B,2018,聊城,假如你要竞选你班的体育委员,请你用英语进行竞选演讲。演讲的主要内容包括,:,(1),自己喜欢体育,身体健康,;,(2),擅长球类运动,尤其是足球和篮球,;,(3),可以传授运动技巧,助大家比赛取得最佳成绩。,注意,(1),词数,:80,左右,;,(2),可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯,;,(3),演讲内容中不得出现真实的学校和个人名字,;,(4),演讲的开头已给出,不计入总词数。,I want to be the PE monitor. _,_,B2018聊城,One,possible,version,:,I want to be the PE monitor. I enjoy sports, and I can run very fast. Im really fit and healthy. Just watch me in the playground between lessons! I play most ball games well. But Im really good at football, and I play basketball in the school team. Because I have a lot of playing skills, I usually get the best score in every match. I can teach you some if you like.,Choose me for the PE monitor and you can get the best score too!,One possible version:,励志名言,形成天才的决定因素,应该是勤奋,励志名言形成天才的决定因素应该是勤奋,安全小贴上,课间活动注意安全,安全小贴上课间活动注意安全,
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