浙江卷高考续写公开课ppt课件

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,2020/7/9,0,读后续写,-,荒野冒险,读后续写-荒野冒险,1,阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。,One weekend in July,Jane,and her husband,Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a,lake,in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “Im going to find a better spot for us to camp” and,walked,away.,With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had,climbed,to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.,“Tom!” she cried. “Help!”,No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.,Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (,滴落,) somewhere,at a distance,. Quickly she followed the sound to a,stream,.,To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.,As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a,helicopter,. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her,yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.,Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasdark._,ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup._,2016,年,10,月浙江高考读后续写,阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。,2,Read,步骤？,Think,Write,1) 5W1H,2) organization,3) language,关键词,开头语,Predict the plot properly,1) Actions,动作,2) Feelings,情感,3) Surroundings,环境,Get the main idea,Read步骤？ThinkWrite1) 5W1H2) o,3,Read for 5W1H,content,who,when,where,what,Why,Jane was lost,they quarreled,Jane, Tom,one weekend in July,in the forest,main idea?,On weekend in July, Jane was lost in the forest because she had quarreled with Tom.,Read for 5W1Hcontent who when,4,One weekend in July,Jane,and her husband,Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a,lake,in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “Im going to find a better spot for us to camp” and,walked,away.,With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had,climbed,to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.,“Tom!” she cried. “Help!”,No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.,Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (,滴落,) somewhere,at a distance,. Quickly she followed the sound to a,stream,.,To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.,As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a,helicopter,. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her,yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.,Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasdark._,ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup._,In what order is the material developed?,One weekend in July, ,As night was beginning to fall, ,Jane rose at the break of the day, ,But and it was getting dark again.,It was daybreak when Jane woke up.,Time,Read for the organization,In what order is the material,5,阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。,One weekend in July,Jane,and her husband,Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a,lake,in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “Im going to find a better spot for us to camp” and,walked,away.,With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had,climbed,to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.,“Tom!” she cried. “Help!”,No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.,Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (,滴落,) somewhere,at a distance,. Quickly she followed the sound to a,stream,.,To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.,As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a,helicopter,. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her,yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.,Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasdark._,ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup._,With no path to follow, Jane, she turned around, hoping to ,Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that ,Jane rose, hungry and thirsty.,If only she had not left her mobile phone ,Never in her life had she tasted anything better.,Read for language,阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。,6,细读两段续写的,开头语,，理顺续写段落的,逻辑关系,；,围绕划定的,10,个,关键词,，合理创新,故事情节,。,Para. 1: Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasdark.,How did Jane feel then?,What did Jane do then?,How did Jane struggle through the night?,Para. 2: ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.,Was Jane rescued?,Who rescued Jane?,How was she rescued?,How did she feel then?,Think,浙江卷高考续写公开课课件,20,浙江卷高考续写公开课课件,20,细读两段续写的开头语，理顺续写段落的逻辑关系；Para. 1,7,The underlined words,where,02,03,04,yellow blouse,walked,Tom,helicopter,Jane,lake,stream,climbed,at a distance,to her great joy,Classify 10 key words into different groups.,浙江卷高考续写公开课课件,20,浙江卷高考续写公开课课件,20,The underlined words where0203,8,Classify 10 key words into different groups.,_: Jane, Tom,_: helicopter, yellow blouse,_: walked, climbed,_: lake, stream, at a distance,_: to her great joy,characters,actions,objects,surroundings,feelings,浙江卷高考续写公开课课件,20,浙江卷高考续写公开课课件,20,Classify 10 key words into dif,9,A: actions,动作的丰富性,F: feelings,情感表达的多样性,S: surroundings,恰当运用环境描写,Write,浙江卷高考续写公开课课件,20,浙江卷高考续写公开课课件,20,A: actions 动作的丰富性Write浙江卷高考续写公,10,He was so surprised that he stood there with his mouth open. Maybe ashamed of what he had done, he was about to turn away when I seized his arm quickly. I stared at him for several seconds and broke the silence, saying “Roy, trust me. I am willing to help you .” Having regretted what he had done , he couldnt hold back his tears ,bent down and burst out crying with his head buried in his hands. Tears welling up in my eyes, I picked him up and hugged him tightly. He put his head against my should, sobbing and saying “If I could turn the clock back, I wouldnt have stolen the money”.,A:,动作的丰富性,浙江卷高考续写公开课课件,20,浙江卷高考续写公开课课件,20,He was so surprised that he st,11,F:,情感表达的多样性,Janes,feelings,Is that for me?,“Tom!”,“Help!”,confused,hungry and thirsty.,walked away, turned around, cried,actions,words,thoughts,looks,浙江卷高考续写公开课课件,20,浙江卷高考续写公开课课件,20,F: 情感表达的多样性 Janes Is that for,12,But no more helicopter came and it was getting dark again.,Amid the dreadful darkness, strange sounds of wild beasts were heard.,“,If it weren,t for that stupid quarrel, I wouldn,t be trapped here,”,she thought to herself, regretful tears clouding her eyes. Surrounded by the fear and tiredness,Jane,felt exhausted and finally slid into sleep. “,Tom, is that you?”she murmured.,“,Tom, help!,”,In her dream, she saw a man extending his arms towards her,at a distance,.,It was day break when Jane woke up.,After a washing, Jane continued to force her way ahead. In the boundless search, she found it impossible to find a way out, which threw her into desperat,ion,. Fortunately, a,helicopter,flew overhead just at that moment. In no time did Jane rush to the rock and,climb,onto it. She waved her,yellow blouse,madly to the passing helicopter.,To her great joy, this time, the helicopter,spotted,her. The moment Jane was reunited with her husband, her tears clouded her vision. They hugged each other tightly in the warm light of the setting sun.,thoughts,surroundings,looks,words,actions,浙江卷高考续写公开课课件,20,浙江卷高考续写公开课课件,20,But no more helicopter,13,1. Stepping out of the office, we felt a sense of relief with the sun shining down over us.(Roy,续写,),2. They hugged each other tightly in the warm light of the setting sun.(,范文,),3. A ray of sunlight shines through the dark clouds, bringing warmth and hope to the world.,4. Seeing the moon shining in the dark sky, he couldnt help thinking of the days that she spent with Tom and her family.(,王晨嵛,),5. The cold wind blew violately in the gloomy air.(,胡缨红,),6. With the cold wind blowing, Jane had to .(,姜玉萌,),7. The sound of the stream sounded relaxing, which relieved Janes anxiety.(,马莹昕,),S:,恰当运用环境描写,浙江卷高考续写公开课课件,20,浙江卷高考续写公开课课件,20,1. Stepping out of the office,14,But no more helicopter came and it was getting dark again.,Exhausted and hopeless, Jane sat beside a tree, stretching her acing arms. “Had I not qualrrelled with Tom, I wouldnt have been here.” She was so regretful that tears welled up in her eyes. Since Jane already worn out, she quickly fall asleep beside the tree.,It was day break when Jane woke up.,The sun shone through a break in the clouds. Jane walked along a stream, hoping to find the lake where Tom may camp at night. Suddenly, she heard a loud scream at a distance, “Jane, where are you?” To her great joy, it was Tom. They hugged tightly with each other, swearing that they will never leave each other again.,浙江卷高考续写公开课课件,20,浙江卷高考续写公开课课件,20,But no more helicopter,15,Thank You!,浙江卷高考续写公开课课件,20,浙江卷高考续写公开课课件,20,Thank You!浙江卷高考续写公开课课件 20浙江卷高考,16,环境描写（资料整理）,浙江卷高考续写公开课课件,20,浙江卷高考续写公开课课件,20,环境描写（资料整理）浙江卷高考续写公开课课件 20浙江卷高考,17,Wind,1. A gust of wind blew and parted the dropping branches of the weeping willow like a curtain.,2. A cold breeze blew through the quiet park.,3. A cold breeze wafted through my hair.,S:,恰当运用环境描写,wind water sky,一阵风吹，吹起了弯柳低垂的枝条，就像卷起的窗帘。,凉爽的微风吹拂着寂静的公园。,冷风吹拂过我的头发。,浙江卷高考续写公开课课件,20,浙江卷高考续写公开课课件,20,WindS: 恰当运用环境描写wind water sk,18,Water,1. The water was deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear surface.,2. There was a brook not far away from here, rushing and sparkling between green banks.,3.At one point, the faint sound of water tumbling through the valley.,水是深蓝色的，阳光在透明的玻璃表面闪闪发光。,离此不远，有一条小溪，在绿色的河岸间奔腾闪耀。,在某处，潺潺的水声在山谷中奏响。,浙江卷高考续写公开课课件,20,浙江卷高考续写公开课课件,20,Water水是深蓝色的，阳光在透明的玻璃表面闪闪发光。离此不,19,Sky,1.,They hugged each other tightly in the warm light of the setting sun.,2. By 3 oclock, the rain had stopped and the sky was a curdled gray burdened with lumps of clouds.,3. Like a dim lamp, the moon shone above and the stars twinkled their eyes with curiosity.,到三点的时候，雨停了，铅灰色的天空阴云密布。,月亮像一盏昏暗的灯，从上面照下来，星星也好奇的眨着眼。,他们在落日的暖阳下紧紧拥抱在一起。,浙江卷高考续写公开课课件,20,浙江卷高考续写公开课课件,20,Sky到三点的时候，雨停了，铅灰色的天空阴云密布。月亮像一盏,20,1,.,日本那些再现曲水宴的表演，有着不少“中国元素”，但是由于现代年轻人对古代中国文化了解甚少，并不知道哪些元素来自中国。,2,.,本着保证校车安全的原则，公安机关将会同教育行政等部门对校车驾驶人进行逐一审查，坚决清退不符合安全规定的校车驾驶人。,3,.,山寨文化是一种平民文化、草根文化，自然有其存在的意义和价值，但山寨产品的泛滥则是中国知识产权意识不足的揭露与讽刺。,4,.,神舟,7,号宇宙飞船载着三位航天英雄胜利返回地球，这艘宇宙飞船是我们国家自行研制的，每一个中国人不能不为之骄傲。,5,.,这家工厂虽然规模不大，但曾两次荣获省科学大会奖，三次被授予省优质产品称号，产品远销全国各地和东南亚地区。,6,.,杭州湾跨海大桥是一座由我国自行建造、自行设计、自行管理、自行投资的特大型交通基础设施，是我国跨海大桥建设史上的一个重要里程碑。,7,、,为防止,东南亚地区,发生的禽流感传入我国，国家质检总局和农业部今天联合发出通知，自即日暂行禁止进口来自疫区的禽类及其产品,。,8.,这家工厂虽然规模不大，但曾两次荣获省科学大会奖，三次被授予省优质产品称号，产品远销全国各地和东南亚地区。,9.,杭州湾跨海大桥是一座由我国自行建造、自行设计、自行管理、自行投资的特大型交通基础设施，是我国跨海大桥建设史上的一个重要里程碑,浙江卷高考续写公开课课件,20,浙江卷高考续写公开课课件,20,1.日本那些再现曲水宴的表演，有着不少“中国元素”，但是由于,21,