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,*,*,*,Dear Editor:,Id like to tell you anything about the trouble I 1._,was facing in buying furnitures.The other day,I ordered 2._,a set of furniture at an furniture exhibition.The week 3._,before last they sent me the furniture.So I found the color 4._,and the sizes of some pieces were not what I had been 5._,ordered.Whats more,one leg of the desk is broken.6._,I asked them to take back the furniture and gave 7._,back my money,but they refused.I wrote the manager 8._,of the factory but there was no answer.I 9._,hope where you will publish my letter on the newspaper 10._,and help me solve the problem.,something,furniture,a,But,been,was,give,to,that,Dear Editor:somethingfurniture,短文改错考前指导,短文改错考前指导,一、短文改错考查目标,1,）识别错误 并正确校正语篇的能力,2,）综合运用英语知识的能力,3,）准确理解语篇，掌握内容及行文逻辑的能力,一、短文改错考查目标1）识别错误 并正确校正语篇的能力,二、短文改错命题特点,1,、此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线,(,),划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。例如：,when my cousin joins in the Navy._,in,2,、此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号,(),，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。例如：,I,m eighteen years old and I live in small village._,a,3,、此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。例如：,I,m going to stay in Nottingham by my aunt._,with,4,、此行无错误：在该行右边横线上画一个勾,(),。例如：,the problem is that there,s nothing to do,_,二、短文改错命题特点1、此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(),三、短文改错命题原则,项目,年度,多词,缺词,错词,正确,2006,年安徽卷,1,1,7,1,2007,年安徽卷,1,2,6,1,2007,年全国卷,1,1,7,1,数据统计（一）：命题数据统计,三、短文改错命题原则 项目多词缺词错词正确20,数据统计（二）：错误类型统计,考点,年度,名词,冠词,形容词和副词,介词,代词,连词,动词时态语态,逻辑,2006,年安徽卷,0,1,1,2,1,2,2,0,2007,年安徽卷,1,1,0,2,0,2,1,2,2007,年全国卷,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,1,数据统计（二）：错误类型统计 考点名词冠词形容词和副词介,1,、名词的数,：可数名词的单复数形式,Many classmate,s,throw me up,名词的可数性考查,a lot of information,s,固定结构中的名词的数,different student,s,四、考点解读,is,2,、名词与主谓一致,：名词的可数性与主谓一致的关系,主语从句与主谓一致,What he said are right._,NO.1,名词,1、名词的数：可数名词的单复数形式 Many cla,1.,名词,单、复数,形式误用,注意,可数,名词与,不可数,名词,1.(2000)so that Ill get good marks in all my subject.,_,2.,He collected some informations about computers.,_,3.He has made a great progress in English lately.,_,subjects,information,不可数名词,3.,注意可,数名词前,冠词,(a,an,the),正确用法,progress,furniture,weather,fun,news,information,advice,a,注意：,1.名词单、复数形式误用注意可数名词与不可数名词1.(,NO.2,冠词,1,、,the,与,a/an,的特指和泛指,(2001),We may be one family and live under a same roof._,a,2,、固定搭配中的冠词用法,David is in the charge of this company.,3,、可数名词单数前的限定词,I want to buy present for Lucy,s birthday._,the,NO.2冠词1、the与a/an的特指和泛指 a2、固定搭,NO.3,形容词和副词,1,、,adj.,与,adv.,的混用,I was in greatly pain at that moment._,great,much,great,2,、比较级、最高级结构误用,It is more greater than that one._,It is as greater as that one._,3,、双重性质的副词误用,，如：,high,highly;hard,hardly,等。,4,、注意,-ing,和,-ed,结尾的形容词,NO.3形容词和副词1、adj.与adv.的混用 grea,NO.4,介词,1,、固定短语中的介词误用,On that moment his friend Ron came in._,2,、时间状语前的介词滥用,He will come back in next week.,3,、注意定语从句中,“,介词关系代词,”,的用法,Dad gave me some money which I can buy a book._,4,、注意介词,to,和动词不定式,to,的误用,I am looking forward to receive your letter._,At,with,receiving,NO.4介词1、固定短语中的介词误用Atwithrecei,Thanks very much on inviting me to your birthday party,on Sunday.,(2000),_,2.He had only a small cold room to live._,3.He paid a visit to his grandfather on that afternoon.,_,4.I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my,head touched the pillow.,(2002),_,for,at,in,on,时间状语前有指示代词,this,that,或,one,next,last,等修饰时,不用介词,.,(,Eg.Ill see you next Friday.),2,.,不定式后的动词短语中介词不能省,注意：,Thanks very much on inviting m,NO.5,代词,1,、代词指代的单复数问题,We can tell others our need for help and accept his help._,their,that,both,2,、定语从句中关系代词的考查,This is the best movie which I have seen._,3,、不定代词之间的误用,There are so many trees on all sides of the street._,4,、代词和主谓一致的关系,例如：,every,和,each,，,neither,和,none,等,NO.5代词1、代词指代的单复数问题theirthatbot,NO.6,连词,1,、连词的重复误用,例如：,Though,but,；,Because,so,等。,unless,meeting,2,、连词的逻辑含义误用,You won,t get a high mark if you can work harder._,3,、注意,and,的前后对称关系,I,m looking forward to coming back and meet you._,NO.6连词1、连词的重复误用unlessmeeting2、,1.The food was expensive and the service was good.,(2002),2.,Everybody sleeps in tents,that is very interesting.,(2006),3.Although it is raining heavily,but I decided to go out.,4.Because he is ill,so he cant go to school today.,5.Tony is a naughty boy,that always breaks others glass of the windowpane.,but,which,(,一,),注意,定语从句,中关系代词和关系副词正确用法,(,二,),注意连词,and/but,and/or,but/however,之间错用,(,三,),注意从属连词如,because,与,so,though/although,与,but,if,与,and/or,等不能同时使用,.,注意：,that,who,1.The food was expensive and,1.,句子中不能缺少谓语,(,be,),3.,语态,(,主动语态和被动语态,),2.,时态,(,上下文时态要基本一致,),4.,一致性,(A.,主谓一致,B.,并列结构一致,and),7.,偷换动词,(,如,take/bring,receive/accept,repeat,与,again/return,与,back/enter,进入与,into,),5.,正确选用非谓语动词,(,动名词,分词,不定式,),6.,注意固定句型运用错误,(used to/be used to/there is no doubt that/it is no need doing,),NO.7,动词,1.句子中不能缺少谓语 (be)3.语态(主动语态和被动,NO.7,动词,1,、动词的时态、语态和主谓一致,2,、动词和非谓语动词误用,There are many girls in our class wear beautiful skirts._,3,、注意虚拟语气等特殊句型中的动词时态,I wish all of us can get bright future._,It is the first time that I cooked the dinner._,wearing,could,have,NO.7动词1、动词的时态、语态和主谓一致wearingco,Now my picture and prize is hanging in the library._,2.,Play football makes us grow up tall and strong,._,3.,They eager to know everything about China and asked me lots,of questions.,(,1996),_,4.As we climbed the mountain,we fed monkeys,visiting temples,and told stories.,(2002),_,6.He used to getting up early to take physical exercise._,7.,so we will have plenty of spare time visit the area.,(2006),_,were,are,visited,How to correct them?,playing,get,to,Now my picture and prize is ha,NO.8,逻辑,1,、注意,and,、,but,和,so,之间的误用,or,however,2,、注意,and,和,or,之间的误用,A man with a knife burst in and said:,“,Your money and your life?,”,_,3,、注意副词之间的逻辑误用,This is a small village,therefore,there are many thefts happening.,_,NO.8逻辑1、注意and、but和so之间的误用orhow,五、应试解题策略,1,、改错命题的,“,五不改,”,：,标点符号不改,.,大小写不改,.,词序错误不改,.,“,一变多,”,和,“,多变一,”,不改,.,大纲外生词不改。,五、应试解题策略1、改错命题的“五不改”：,五、应试解题策略,2,、应试解题的,“,(A-S-L-A),四步法,”,：,(,A,rticle),通读全文，把握句意，正确理解全篇全义。,(,S,entence),变文章改错为句子改错。,(,L,ine),在行中检查错误。,(,A,rticle),复读全文，解决难点，进行检查。,五、应试解题策略2、应试解题的“(A-S-L-A)四步法”：,六、题例分析,（,2006,年高考安徽卷）,There is a public library in every town in Britain.Anyone,76.,_,can borrow books if he or she wish.In some places you,77.,_,may borrow as more books as you need,but in others,78.,_,you are limited in a certain number of books.You may,79.,_,keep the books for several weeks so as you can have,80.,_,enough time to finish it.If the book you want is out,81._,you may ask it to be kept for you.Most public libraries,82._,also have a reading-room,that you can sit at the desk,83._,and read the daily newspapers,magazines and the other,84._,books,but you are not permit to take them out.,85._,六、题例分析（2006年高考安徽卷）There is a p,I was a high school student then,from low-income 1._,family.So I have to support my family.My 2._,first one job was to clean the tables in a small restaurant.3._,I still remember going there early and felt anxious about 4._,the new world.I worked harder because I was afraid of 5._,losing the job.At night,I was sometimes very tired to do 6._,my homework.And I came to understand that was not 7._,easy to earn money,and that knowledges could change 8._,my life.So what I learned from the job,in a hard 9._,way,was much more important as what I learned.10._,a,had,one,feeling,hard,knowledge,it,too,than,七、习题巩固,I was a high school studen,The main purpose of newspapers are to provide 76._,news.If you examine newspapers closely,you find 77._,that there are all sort of news:accidents,floods,fires,78._,wars,sports,books,etc.The news cover everything 79._,that happens to people and their surroundings.Sometimes 80._,there are news items which are very interested.81._,A news report is usual short,except when 82._,it is very important,but has a lot of information.It 83._,is also writing in short paragraphs.The first paragraph 84._,is in the fact a summary of the news items.It gives all 85._,the necessary information,what,when,where,how,and why.,is,will,sorts,covers,interesting,usually,and,written,the,七、习题巩固,The main purpose of news,Have you ever heard Angel Falls?,1,、,It is a highest waterfall in the world,deep in the jungles,2,、,of Venezuela.Few has ever seen Angel Falls.3,、,That is very hard to get there.If you went,4,、,in land,you would have to travel for weeks through,5,、,thick jungles.If you went by plane,it would take about,6,、,four hours.No one knew about this high waterfall since 1930.,7,、,In that year,James Angel,American pilot,flew over the area.,8,、,Suddenly he saw a waterfall,that seemed,9,、,to drop straight out of from the clouds.,10,、,heard heard of,a-the,has-have,That-It,in land-by land,正确,since-until,an,American,that-which,去掉,from,七、习题巩固,heard heard ofa-thehas-have,Today I visited the Smithsmy first time visit 1,to a American family.They live in a small town.2,It was very kind for them to meet me at the 3,railway station and drove me to their home.4,The Smiths did his best to make me feel5,at home.They offered me coffee and other drinks.6,We have a good time talking and laughing7,together.They eager to know everything about8,China and asked me lots of question.In fact,9,they are planning to visit China in the next year.10,去掉,time,a-an,for-of,drove-drive,his-their,正确,have-had,eager,前加,were,question,加,s,去掉,in,七、习题巩固,去掉 timea-anfor-ofdrove-driv,The journey was long and tired.We left London at five oclock,1,in the evening and spent eight hours on the train.2,We had been traveling for three hours after someone appeared selling,3,food or drinks.It was darkness all the time we were4,crossing Wales so we could see nothing across the windows.When,5,we finally arrive nearly everyone was sleeping.6,As soon as a train stopped everyone came to life,grabbing(,抓,)7,suitcase and rushing onto the platform.8,While we were getting off the train it was an announcement 9,that the boat had not arrived already from Ireland and there,10,had been a delay,when the boat finally came we had been,waiting for over two hours.,tired-tiring,on-in,after-before,darkness-dark,across-through,arrive-arrived,正确,it-there,a-the,already-yet,七、习题巩固,tired-tiringon-inafter-befo,Practice makes perfect!,Practice makes perfect!,
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