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高考作文评分标准分析及复习建议高考作文评分标准分析及复习建议 1 高考作文评分标准分析及复习建议 1三年市平均分：2006 年 情景 10.4 开放 6.4 16.8 2007 年 情景 7.06 开放 4.54 11.6 2008 年 情景 7.42 开放 3.92 11.34 2三年市平均分：2情景作文评分原则：1.本题总分为20分，按5个档次给分。2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3.评分时应考虑：内容要点、上下文的连贯、词汇和句式的多样性及语言的准确性。4.拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。5.词数少于60，从总分中减去1分。3情景作文评分原则：3第一档（18分20分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖了所有内容要点；运用了多样的句式和丰富的词汇；语法或用词方面有个别错误，但为尽可能表达丰富的内容所致；体现了较强的语言运用能力；有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，所写内容连贯、结构紧凑 完全达到 了预期的 写作目的第二档（15分17分）完全完成了试题规定的任务覆盖了所有内容要点运用的句式和词汇能满足任务要求 语法和用词基本准确，少许错误主要为尽可能表达丰富的内容所致 使用了简单的语句间连接成分，所写内容连贯达到了预期的写作目的第三档（12分14分）基本完成了试题规定的任务覆盖了内容要点 运用的句式和词汇基本满足任务要求语法和用词方面有一些错误，但不影响理解基本达到了预期的写作目的第四档（6分11分）未恰当完成试题规定的任务 漏掉或未描述清楚主要内容所用句式和词汇有限语法或用词方面的错误影响了对所写内容的理解未能清楚地传达信息第五档（1分5分）未完成试题规定的任务 明显遗漏主要内容 句式单调，词汇贫乏 语法或用词方面错误较多，严重影响了对所写内容的理解 0分 未能传达任何信息；写的内容与要求无关4第一档完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖了所有内容要点；运用了多20072007情景作文情景作文 假设你是李华，要给英国笔友假设你是李华，要给英国笔友HarryHarry写封信，介绍你班两位同学写封信，介绍你班两位同学竟选班长的过程。请按下图顺序描述。竟选班长的过程。请按下图顺序描述。注意：注意：1.1.信的开头已为信的开头已为 你写好。你写好。2.2.词数不少于词数不少于6060。提示词：提示词：竞选班长竞选班长 monitor election monitor electionDear HarryDear Harry，How are things going?How are things going?Last MondayLast Monday，(请将情景作文写在答题卡请将情景作文写在答题卡IIII第一页指定区域内第一页指定区域内)Best wishesBest wishes，Li HuaLi Hua52007情景作文 5 Last Monday,my class had a meeting which was about monitor election,now let me tell you about this.There were two students taking part in this election.The first one who gave us a speech about the election was a boy,called Liu Dong.And the second one was a girl whose name is Wang Hong.She gave us a so perfect speech that I thought she must be our monitor.Then,every student made a decision about who should be our monitor.And the result was about 28 students who supported the girl and about 15 students who supported the boy.The girl would become our new monitor.This was the meeting about monitor election.I think its very meaningful,and I hope you will interested this.116 Last Monday,my class had Last Monday,we had a monitor election.At the beginning the two candidates,LiuDong and Wang Hong gave us a speech introducing themselves and telling us their plans in the future.Then we had a vote.We wrote down the name of the better one in our mind and put the paper in a box.Then the exciting time came that our teacher counted the number and wrote it on the blackboard.The result was that 28 students who voted Wang Hong,13 more than the number of students who voted LiuDong,which meaned WangHong was elected as our monitor.Wang is really pretty good.I believe she will be a good monitor.11+17Last Monday,we had a monito Last Friday.There was a monitor election in our class.Liu Dong and Wang Hong took part in this election.Both of them gave a speech to show their thinking.Then classmates made a choice careful.At last,28 of classmates including me elected Wang Hong and 15 of classmates elected Liu Dong.Wang Hong won this election.Wang Hong and I are good friends.She is a warm hart girl.She is good in study.I think she can also good in class contribution.If you want to know more about our school life please write to me soon.108 Last Friday.There was a mo Last Monday,our class had a monitor election.At first,Liu Dong and Wang Hong announced their dreams about our class and what they can do for us.Then,we elected between Liu Dong and Wang Hong one by one in the front of the classroom.Finally,Liu Dong had 15 tickets and Wang Hong had 28 tickets.Wang Hong won!We all congratulated her.The process of the election was wonderful.139 Last Monday,our class had Last Monday,we did a monitor election in the class which was very interesting.There were two persons who were waiting to be elected.One is a guy named Dong Liu,the other one is a girl named Hong Wang.Each of them made a speech at the beginning of the class.After hearing that,every one in my class wrote the name of their favourite monitor on a piece of paper and put it in the election box one by one.Finally,the result came out,Dong Liu got 15 tickets and Hong Wang got 13 more which was 28.She became the monitor of my class.In the end,she thanked us of choosing her to be the monitor,and promised us to be a good monitor.We all congratulated to her as well.1510 Last Monday,we did a monito Last Monday,we held a monitor election in our class.Id like to tell you how things were going on.The two students,Liu Dong and Wang Hong,each gave a short speech about their working desire as a monitor.Having thought twice,the rest of the class voted one by one putting their tickets into the box in the front of the classroom.After a while,there came the result:Liu Dong gained 15 while Wang Hong gained 28,which meant Wang Hong would be our new monitor during the next term.The whole class then gave Wang Hong the best wishes.She thanked us and promised to work hard.Thats all for our election.Its quite formal,isnt it?1811 Last Monday,we held a monit Last Monday,an exciting monitor election was held in my class.The two candidates are Liu Dong and Wang Hong.In the beginning of the election,each of them gave a speech to us and talked about the future plan.Then the most exciting moment came.Every student stood up and walked to the election box to cast a vote to his/her ideal monitor.I thought Wang Hong was well qualified for this position.So I wrote down her name and put my note into the box.Several minutes later,the final result came.Compared to Liu Dongs 15 votes,Wang Hong got 28 votes and became our monitor.We all congratulated to Wang Hong and believed that she would serve our class heart and soul in the future.What about the monitor election in your class?I hope that I will receive your reply soon.1912 Last Monday,an exciting mo Liu Dong and Wang Hong is a monitor election.Wang Hong is a election.Liu Dong is a monitor election.Liu Dong and Wang Hong XueXi is very very good.Class students is a Liu Dong and Wang Hong and toupiao.Students is very renzhen,but a toupiao Liu Dong jieguo is 28.Wang Hong is a election.Wang Hong biaoshi jixue is a class fuwu.013 Liu Dong and Wang Hong is a情景作文评分标准：评分原则：1.本题总分为20分，按5个档次给分。2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3.评分时应考虑：内容要点、上下文的连贯、词汇和句式的多样性及语言的准确性。4.拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。5.词数少于60，从总分中减去1分。14情景作文评分标准：评分原则：14第一档（18分20分）完全完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖了所有所有内容要点；运用了多样的多样的句式和丰富的句式和丰富的词汇；词汇；语法或用词方面有个别错误，但为尽可能表达丰富的内容所致；体现了体现了较强的语言运较强的语言运用能力用能力；有效地使用了有效地使用了语句间的连接语句间的连接成分，所写内成分，所写内容连贯、结构容连贯、结构紧凑紧凑 完全达到 了预期的 写作目的第二档（15分17分）完全完全完成了试题规定的任务覆盖了所有内容要点运用的句式和词汇能满足任务要求 语法和用词基本准确，少许错误主要为尽可能表达丰富的内容所致 使用了简单的语句间连接成分，所写内容连贯达到了预期的写作目的第三档（12分14分）基本基本完成了试题规定的任务覆盖覆盖了内容要点 运用的句式和词汇基本满足任务要求语法和用词方面有一些错误，但不不影响理解基本达到了预期的写作目的第四档（6分11分）未恰当未恰当完成试题规定的任务 漏掉或未描述清楚主要内容所用句式和词汇有限语法或用词方面的错误影响了对所写内容的理解未能清楚地传达信息第五档（1分5分）未完成未完成试题规定的任务 明显遗漏明显遗漏主要内容 句式单调单调，词汇贫乏贫乏 语法或用词方面错误较多，严重影响严重影响了对所写内容的理解 0分 未能传达未能传达任何信息；写的内容与要求无关15第一档完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖了所有内容要点；运用了多2008 2008 情景作文情景作文假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为英语园地写一篇题为Our Spring OutingOur Spring Outing的英文稿件。请的英文稿件。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。到春游结束的完整过程。注意：词数不少于注意：词数不少于6060。提示词：提示词：游乐园游乐园 amusement park amusement park 垃圾箱垃圾箱 bin bin 162008 情景作文注意：词数不少于60。16 Last week,our class made a decision of having a Spring Outing.Some wanted to go to the Amusement park,some wanted to go boating and some others wanted to climb hill.Finally we choosed to climb mountain.Each of us prepared a lot of things which was full of our bags such as food,drinks and so on.Having reached the top of the hill,we started having a relax and got together to have a meal.After that,we cleaned the place which was polluted by ourselves.Then we went down the hill and put the garbage into the bin.All the above is our trip.1117 Last week,our class made Last week,we decided to go out to have a fun.We wanted to go many places like amusement park,lake,and hiking.At last,we decided to go hiking.It was a fun day when we were climbing.We talked and laughed with each other.When we arrived at the top,we had the lunch.The time went so fast that it was time to go back.We collected the rubbish on the top no matter weather it was thrown by us.When we got the bins,we threw different rubbishes into different bins.I think this Spring Outing was not only very interesting but also very meaningful!1218 Last week,we decided to g Last week,we hold a class meeting to discuss if we could have a spring outing.Since we have already in grade three,all of us agreed that we need one to relax ourselves.Then we talked excitingly about where we would go.Somebody said hed like to an amusement park.Some people prefered paddling on a lack and I suggested to climb a hill and have a picnic.Finally,I convinced the others.On a sunny day,we set out to Xiang Shan Park.There are colorful flowers,soft green grass all along the road to the top of the hill,so we had a really wonderful walking experience.19 Last week,we hold a class But once we reach the top,we were shocked by the terrible environment.Plastic bags,bottles,papers and other things spreaded everywhere!That time we had no excitement but angre and disappointment in heart.So we decide to clean up the whole hill!We picked up every litter and separated them in“can recycle”can“cant recycle”.Then,we threw them into the particular bin.Although we didnt have a picnic as we wish.But we had a quiet meaningful day!1420 But once we reach the top,Im very eager to tell you something about the expression we had last week.Our class expected our spring outing very much and we discussed many places to go to,such as lakes,mountains and amusement park.However,we chose the mountain at last.We climbed the mountain in a sunny day and saw many trees and flowers.Then at the top of the mountain,we picked up the waste and collected them in plastic bags.Upon our arrival at the foot of the mountain,we separated the rubbish and threw them into the recycle bins and unrecycled bins separately.We very appreciated our Spring Outing experience,becasue we not only enjoyed ourselves but also made contribution to the protection of the environment.1521 Im very eager to tell you Last week there was a heated discussion on where to go for our Spring Outing.Some students wanted to go to amusement park,so we considered to go boating and others gave their idea for climbing.Eventually,we decided to take a climbing.The next day,all of us prepared well.With our enjoyment,each of us climbed the mountain full of energy.However,when we got to the top of the mountain,what covered our eyes first was the mass of rubbish.It was really a pity that the rubbish destroyed a beautiful scenery.At last,we made up our mind to pick up the rubbish.22 Last week there was a heat After a while,with everyones effort,the rubbish was cleared off immediately and we put them into the recycled and unrecycled bins.In my eyes,this spring outing not only gave us lots of pleasure,but aslo gave us a meaningful lesson.Only to protect our environment,can we get a beautiful society.1623 After a while,with everyon Last week,our class organized a spring outing.To make this memorable activity more wonderful,we discussed the destination carefully and finally decided to go mountain climbing instead of other choices like playing in an amusement park and going boating.With high spirits,we started our spring outing on a fine day.Flowers presented us with their sweetest smiles and were soaked up in the warm sunshine.However,we were shocked when we reached the top of the mountain.Waste bottles and used packages were thrown everhwhere which totally ruined the beauty of the nature.Feeling a great pity for the trourists,we picked up the rubbish and carefully divided them into two groups:the recycle ones and the non-recycle ones.After that,we put the rubbish24 Last week,our class organizinto the bin differently.We call on awareness on protecting our environment which is of great importance.Though cleaning up the rubbish was a tough task,our hearts were filled with joy and we will remember this outing for ever.1925into the bin differently.1925 Last Sunday,we went out for a spring outing.Before we started,our group got together to discuss where we went.Some people said amusement park is a good place to go.Some people said go boating was wonderful.Finally,we decided to go hiking.On Sunday we start from school.The weather was so nice that we were all very happy.But when we reached the top of the hill,we found there were a lot of rubbish on the flood,which against the beautiful envirment.So we decided to clean them up.We picked them up and put them into bag.When we get back from the hill,we throw the rubbish into the bins.Although that was a hard work.We were all satisfacty with the spring outing.1126 Last Sunday,we went out f Recently I and my classmates had made a talk about where we would go in our spring outing.One of my classmates wanted to amusement park.Other wanted to go boating.But most of my classmates agreed with me to go to hill.So we decided to go to a hill.The second day,we went to the hill.On our way to the top of a hill,there was so many green trees that made us very happy.But on the top of a hill,we saw a different picture.Many rubbish left by people.So we decided to pick up the rubbish.When we had picked up the rubbish,we put them into the bin.927 Recently I and my classmat I am Li Hua.I am in Class One Grade three.I am a student of Hong Xing Middle School.Last week,our class decided to organize a spring outing.After class,my classmates dicussed where to have a trip.Some students wanted to go to the amusement park.Some of my classmates wanted to the park,which is own a large lack.Others wanted to climb mountain to enjoy the great time.Final,we decided to go hiking.In last Sunday,we get together in the foot of mountain.We went up to the top of the mountain with our bags.On the top we collected the things which were thrown on the grass.When we went back,we put them into bins as well as do them selected.In this activity,we set free ourselves and have a good rest and we can do our best to protect our environment.We are all very happy.728 I am Li Hua.I am in Last week,our class had an spring outing.When after class,we got together and everybody told us an idea.Some classmates said that went to boating.Howeve,we desided that we would go hiking.The second day,when the sun just came to the sky,we began to our plan.We were very exciting and everywhere could share our happiness.But when we got to the hills top,we found a lot of rabash.We saw each other and we stared to pick up the rabinsh to the bin at that some time.Different rabinsh put into different bin.After we finished it.We still felt very happy.29 Last week,our class h I want to say:the Olympic games will be hold in China.At that time many different countrys people will come China.If the Beijing environment like the top of a hill,they wii hite China and not come China then China will be developed hardly.Whats more,the earth is ours.If people dont protect the environment,I cant imagine how our son or grandson lived in that earth.So lets protect the earth at once!530 I want to say:the Olympic Our spring outing very happy,we are thinking where to go?Go to amusement park?Go to park?Or go to hill?Finally,we are decideing to go to the hill.What a nice day!The hill is too beautiful.But when we are arrived the top,we can cee a lot of the junk.So,we are catch the junk into the bin.What a nice spring outing!231 Our spring outing very I am Li Hua.I from Hong Xing Middle School in the 1 class.I and our classmeet is good friend.Our want to spring outing.Such as go to amusement park.The end,our go to park.Because it in different from went,our go to the there as soon as begin clear.Our at it in the bin.In the whole our very merry today.Our the other want go to there,too.032 I am Li Hua.I from Hon情景作文评分标准：评分原则：1.本题总分为20分，按5个档次给分。2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3.评分时应考虑：内容要点，上下文的连贯，词汇和句式的多样性及语言的准确性。4.拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。5.词数少于60，从总分中减去1分。33情景作文评分标准：评分原则：33第一档（18分20分）完全完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖了所有所有内容要点；运用了多样的多样的句式和丰富的句式和丰富的词汇；词汇；语法或用词方面有个别错误，但为尽可能表达丰富的内容所致；体现了体现了较强的语言运较强的语言运用能力用能力；有效地使用了有效地使用了语句间的连接语句间的连接成分，所写内成分，所写内容连贯、结构容连贯、结构紧凑紧凑 完全达到 了预期的 写作目的第二档（15分17分）完全完全完成了试题规定的任务覆盖了所有内容要点运用的句式和词汇能满足任务要求 语法和用词基本准确，少许错误主要为尽可能表达丰富的内容所致 使用了简单的语句间连接成分，所写内容连贯达到了预期的写作目的第三档（12分14分）基本基本完成了试题规定的任务基本覆盖基本覆盖了内容要点 运用的句式和词汇基本满足任务要求语法和用词方面有一些错误，但不不影响理解基本达到了预期的写作目的第四档（6分11分）未恰当未恰当完成试题规定的任务 漏掉或未描述清楚主要内容所用句式和词汇有限语法或用词方面的错误影响了对所写内容的理解未能清楚地传达信息第五档（1分5分）未完成未完成试题规定的任务 明显遗漏明显遗漏主要内容 句式单调单调，词汇贫乏贫乏 语法或用词方面错误较多，严重影响严重影响了对所写内容的理解 0分 未能传达未能传达任何信息；写的内容与要求无关34第一档完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖了所有内容要点；运用了多审题 语言语篇写什么写得对写得好问题与建议35审题 语言语篇写什么问题与建议35.We spent much time on discussing,Xiao Hong said going boating was great,LIMing said going to amusement park was better,while Xiao Hua wanted to to hiking.It was really a great idea!All the studetns agreed at last.36.We spent much time on discufor we not only made the mountain greener,but also prevented the environment from being polluted.37for we not only made the moun2006 2006 情景作文：情景作文：国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平、友谊和平、友谊”夏令营活动，要求报名者提交英文个人简介。假设你是王姗，夏令营活动，要求报名者提交英文个人简介。假设你是王姗，请根据下列信息写一篇个人简介。请根据下列信息写一篇个人简介。注意：注意：1 1、词数不少于、词数不少于6060。2 2、可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。、可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。(请将情景作文写在答题卡请将情景作文写在答题卡IIII指定区域内指定区域内)382006 情景作文：注意：1、词数不少于60。3820072007情景作文情景作文 假设你是李华，要给英国笔友假设你是李华，要给英国笔友HarryHarry写封信，介绍你班两位同学写封信，介绍你班两位同学竟选班长的过程。请按下图顺序描述。竟选班长的过程。请按下图顺序描述。注意：注意：1.1.信的开头已为信的开头已为 你写好。你写好。2.2.词数不少于词数不少于6060。提示词：提示词：竞选班长竞选班长 monitor election monitor electionDear HarryDear Harry，How are things going?How are things going?Last MondayLast Monday，(请将情景作文写在答题卡请将情景作文写在答题卡IIII第一页指定区域内第一页指定区域内)Best wishesBest wishes，Li HuaLi Hua392007情景作文 392008 2008 情景作文情景作文假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为英语园地写一篇题为Our Spring OutingOur Spring Outing的英文稿件。请的英文稿件。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。到春游结束的完整过程。注意：词数不少于注意：词数不少于6060。提示词：提示词：游乐园游乐园 amusement park amusement park 垃圾箱垃圾箱 bin bin 402008 情景作文注意：词数不少于60。40全国卷I第二节 书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫（panda）,一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：自我介绍；祝贺苏琳生日；感谢工作人员；索取苏琳三岁生日照。注意：1、词数100左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3、开头语已为你写好。Dear Sir/Madam,Greetings from China!_ Yours truly,Li Hua41全国卷I41全国卷全国卷II第三节 书面表达(满分30分)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文.请你根据下列要点写回信.要点:1.参加中文学习班;2.看中文书刊、电视；3.学唱中文歌曲；4.交中国朋友。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好。Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well._ Best wishes,Li Hua 42全国卷II42安徽卷安徽卷 第二节 书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，David 是你的美国笔友。他对中国鼓励使用环保购物袋很感兴趣，来信向你询问此事。请你给他写封回信。主要内容如下：感谢他的关注。简要介绍相关情况。谈谈你的感想。注意：词数100左右，信的格式已为你写好。可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：环抱购物袋-environment-friendly shopping bag;关注-concern.Dear David,_ Yours,Li Hua43安徽卷43开放作文评分原则:1.本题总分为15分，按4个档次给分。2.评分时，先根据文章内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3.评分时应考虑：文章是否扣题，内容是否充实、健康，思维是否活跃,逻辑是否清晰；语言是否规范，交际是否得体。4.拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。5.词数少于50，从总分中减去1分。44开放作文评分原则:44第一档（18分20分）完全完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖了所有所有内容要点；运用了多样的多样的句式和丰富的句式和丰富的词汇；词汇；语法或用词方面有个别错误，但为尽可能表达丰富的内容所致；体现了体现了较强的语言运较强的语言运用能力用能力；有效地使用了有效地使用了语句间的连接语句间的连接成分，所写内成分，所写内容连贯、结构容连贯、结构紧凑紧凑 完全达到 了预期的 写作目的第二档（15分17分）完全完全完成了试题规定的任务覆盖了所有内容要点运用的句式和词汇能满足任务要求 语法和用词基本准确，少许错误主要为尽可能表达丰富的内容所致 使用了简单的语句间连接成分，所写内容连贯达到了预期的写作目的第三档（12分14分）基本基本完成了试题规定的任务基本覆盖基本覆盖了内容要点 运用的句式和词汇基本满足任务要求语法和用词方面有一些错误，但不不影响理解基本达到了预期的写作目的第四档（6分11分）未恰当未恰当完成试题规定的任务 漏掉或未描述清楚主要内容所用句式和词汇有限语法或用词方面的错误影响了对所写内容的理解未能清楚地传达信息第五档（1分5分）未完成未完成试题规定的任务 明显遗漏明显遗漏主要内容 句式单调单调，词汇贫乏贫乏 语法或用词方面错误较多，严重影响严重影响了对所写内容的理解 0分 未能传达未能传达任何信息；写的内容与要求无关45第一档完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖了所有内容要点；运用了多第一档（13分15分）完全完成了试题规定的任务内容充实，体现了活跃的思维和清晰的逻辑交际得体，表达时充分考虑到了交际对象的需求语法或用词方面有个别错误，但为尽可能表达丰富的内容所致；体现出较强的语言运用能力完全达到了预期的写作目的第二档（9分12分）基本完成了试题规定的任务内容、逻辑和交际等方面基本符合要求所用语法和词汇满足了任务的要求语法或用词方面有一些错误，但不影响理解基本达到了预期的写作目的第三档（4分8分）未恰当完成试题规定的任务表达未能切题所用词汇有限，语法或用词方面的错误影响了对写作内容的理解未能清楚地传达信息第四档（1分3分）未完成未完成试题规定的任务写了少量相关信息语法或用词方面错误较多，严重影响了对写作内容的理解0分分未能传达任何信息；写的内容与要求无关46第一档完全完成了试题规定的任务内容充实，体现了活跃的思维和清请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。In an English speech competition,you are asked to describe the follo
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