2020高考英语ppt课件(山东专用)：专题十-概要写作

专题十概要写作高考英语高考英语(山东专用山东专用)专题十概要写作高考英语(山东专用)1Writing1(2019浙江6月)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Parentseverywherepraisetheirkids.JennBerman,authorofTheAtoZGuidetoRaisingHappyandConfidentKids,says,“Wevegonetotheoppositeextremeofafewdecadesagowhenpar-entstendedtobemorestrict.”Bygivingkidsalotofpraise,parentsthinktheyrebuildingtheirchildrensconfidence,when,infact,itmaybejusttheopposite.Toomuchpraisecanbackfireand,whengiveninawaythatsinsincere,makekidsafraidtotrynewthingsortakeariskforfearofnotbeingabletostayontopwheretheirparentspraisehasputthem.Still,dontgotoofarintheotherdirection.Notgivingenoughpraisecanbejustasdamagingasgivingtoomuch.Kidswillfeelliketheyrenotgoodenoughorthatyoudontcareand,asaresult,mayseenopointintryinghardfortheiraccomplishments.五年高考五年高考2Sowhatistherightamountofpraise?Expertssaythatthequalityofpraiseismoreimportantthanthequantity.Ifpraiseissincereandfocusedontheeffortnottheoutcome,youcangiveitasoftenasyourchilddoessomethingthatdeservesaverbalreward.“Weshouldespeciallyrecognizeourchildrenseffortstopushthemselvesandworkhardtoachieveagoal,”saysDonahue,authorofParentingWithoutFear:LettingGoofWorryandFocusingonWhatReallyMatters.“Onethingtorememberisthatitstheprocessnottheendproductthatmatters.”Yoursonmaynotbethebestbasketballplayeronhisteam.Butifhesoutthereeverydayandplayinghard,youshouldpraisehiseffortregardlessofwhetherhisteamwinsorloses.Praisingtheeffortandnottheoutcomecanalsomeanrecognizingyourchildwhenshehasworkedhardtocleantheyard,cookdinner,orfinishabookreport.Butwhateveritis,praiseshouldbegivenonacase-by-casebasisandbeproportionate(相称的)totheamountofeffortyourchildhasputintoit.Sowhatistherightamountof3答案答案写作提示1.本文是一篇议论文。文章论述了如何有效表扬孩子的问题。文章结构清楚,论点明确。2.文章第一段指出过度的表扬不利于孩子的成长。第二段认为不表扬孩子也不好。第三段指出了表扬的核心:要关注过程而非结果。最后一段指出,我们要表扬孩子的努力,不必太过关注结果。3.针对此类文章最好在概要中加入主旨句,先对文章的总体内容给予介绍。Onepossibleversion:Howtopraiseourkidsisreallyasensitiveproblem.(主旨)Expertsbelievethattoomuchpraiseorpraisingthekidsinawrongwaymayhaveoppositeeffectsonchildren.(要点1)Ontheotherhand,nopraisealsodoesharmtokidsdevelopment.(要点2)Togainthebestresult,ourpraiseshouldfocusontheprocessratherthantheendproduct.(要点3)Therefore,whatweshouldpraiseisourkidspropereffort,regardlessoftheresult.(要点4)答案4精彩语句精彩语句1.精美词汇sensitiveadj.敏感的focuson集中于regardlessof不管2.出彩结构Howtopraiseourkidsisreallyasensitiveproblem.(“特殊疑问词+动词不定式”结构作主语)Therefore,whatweshouldpraiseisourkidspropereffort,regardlessoftheresult.(what引导主语从句)精彩语句5Writing2(2018浙江11月)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Itsareallygoodideatovisitcollegesbeforeyouapplybecausetheirwebsitescanallstarttolookandsoundthesame.Nothingwillgiveyouthesenseofwhatitwillactuallybeliketoliveonacol-legecampus(校园)likevisitingandseeingforyourselfthedorms,classroomsandathleticequip-mentand,ofcourse,thestudents.Itseemsalittlecrazyoncesenioryearhitstofindthetimetovis-itcollegecampuses,anditcanalsobepriceyiftheschoolsyouareapplyingtohappentobemorethanacarrideaway.Butkeepinmindthatyouaremakingadecisionaboutthenextfouryearsofyourlife,anddoalltheresearchyoucantomakesureyouaremakingtherightone.Theresnoexcusenottovisittheschoolsinyourlocalarea.Infact,alotofcollegeapplicationsevenaskifyouhavevisitedcampus,andobviously,ifyouliveacrossthecountrythatwontbeasmuchofapossibility,butifyoulivenearby,gocheckitout!Ifcampusvisitsarentgoingtohappenbeforeyouapply,attheveryleastyoushouldfindsometimebetweenapplyingandgettingyouracceptanceletterstovisittheschoolsyoudliketoattend.Writing2(2018浙江11月)6Itcansaveyoualotofheartacheifyouruleoutnowthethingsthatyoudontlikeaboutcertaincampuses,thingsthatyouwouldntknowunlessyouactuallyvisit.Now,iftimeandmoneyaremakingitimpossible,thencheckouttheonlinecollegefairsatCol-legeWeekLive.Itsachancetochatonlinewithadmissionsofficers,students,andcollegecoun-selors(顾问),anditwontcostyouapenny!Youcanregisterforitsonlinecollegefairatcollege-.Whilevisitinganonlinecollegefaircanttaketheplaceofanactualcampusvisit,itcanbeaveryusefultoolthatalongwithallyourotherresearchwillhelpyoumakeaninformeddecisionaboutwhichcollegesoruniversitiesyoudliketoattend.Itcansaveyoualotofheart7答案答案写作提示本文是说明文。文章结构比较清楚,段落之间的逻辑关系也很紧密。文章第一段开门见山,提出观点:在你上大学之前,要去亲眼看看目标的大学。第二段特别指出对附近的大学一定要去看看。第三段的内容是,如果你在申请之前没有去过,在申请之后,或得到offer之前,一定要去看看,免得将来后悔。第四段的主要内容是如果无法去亲自参观的话,可以登录网站了解相关的信息,并提供了网站的信息。Onepossibleversion:Itisawisechoiceforyoutopayapersonalvisittothecollegeyouareapplyingto,especiallytheonesthatareclosetoyou.(要点1)Inordertoavoidbeingregretful,youshouldatleastvisitthecol-legeyoudecidedtoattend.(要点2)Ifalltheaboveisnotaffordable,itwillbehelpfultosearchtheonlinecollegefairsatCollegeWeekLivewhereyoucangetthenecessaryinformation.(要点3)答案8高级语块高级语块1.especiallyspeliadv.特别;尤其2.affordablefdbladj.支付得起的3.onlinecollegefair网上大学博览会高级语块9A A组组2017201920172019年高考模拟年高考模拟考点基础题组考点基础题组Writing1(2019浙江杭州高三一模)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Sometimes,wewishwecouldstoptheclockandgobackintime.Well,twiceayear,countriesintheEuropeanUnion(EU)andmoststatesintheUnitedStatesactually“changethetime”them-selves.Eachspring,theyputtheirclocksforwardanhourandinthefall,clocksareturnedanhourback.Thisisknownasdaylightsavingtime(DST).ThepracticefirstbecamewidespreadduringWorldWarOne.Atthattime,artificiallightingwasexpensiveandhavinganextrahourofdaylightwasbelievedtohelpreducethecostofrunningsuchlighting.However,aboutacenturylater,thisoldpracticemaybecomeathingofthepast.StartinginOctober2019,theEUwillendthepracticeofDST,reportedBloomberg.ThedecisioncameafterasurveypublishedbytheEuropeanCommissioninAugustshowedthatabout85per-centofthe4.6millionEUcitizenswantedtoendDST.ItsbelievedthatDSTsoriginalfunction三年模拟三年模拟10ofsavingenergyisnowuseless.“Newerstudiesshowthattheenergysavingsnowadaysaremarginal(不重要的),”EuropeanCommissionVice-PresidentMarosSefcovictoldtheReuters.Weareclearlyheadingtowardsmartcities,smartbuildingsandsmartsolutions,whichwillbringmuchmoresavingsthanchangesoftheclock.Meanwhile,itwasfoundthatDSTcouldactuallyhavebadinfluencesonpeopleshealth.PolishlawmakerBronislawKarasektoldTheWashingtonPostthatDSTcouldcause“imbalanceinthebodyclock,leadingtomoodchanges,troublewithsleeping,andanincreasedriskofheartat-tacks”.“Ourbodieschangeradicallyoverthecourseofadaybasedonhowmuchlightweseeandhowmuchsleepweget.Evenanhoursshiftinresttimeanddaylighthoursscrewseverythingupslightly,”accordingtoPopularScience.However,DSTisntcompletelywithoutitsbenefits.AccordingtoTheNewYorkTimes,withDST,peoplecouldhaveanextrahourofactivitiesoutdoorsduringthespringandsummer.WhileDSTwillcometoanendintheEUin2019,itisntgoingtodisappearforgood,asmanycountrieswillkeepitinuse.ofsavingenergyisnowuseles1112答案答案写作提示文章介绍了欧盟取消夏令时的前前后后。文章共分5个自然段,划分的意群比较细致。在进行概要写作时,可以根据文章的逻辑进行整合,不过要注意句子之间的逻辑衔接。Onepossibleversion:TheEUisplanningtoputanendtodaylightsavingtime.(要点1)Asameansofdecreasinglightingcosts,daylightsavingtimebecamepopularinWorldWarOneandisbeingperformedinmanyplaces.(要点2)Butnowtherearebetterwaystosaveenergy.(要点3)Besides,itssaidthatitmaybeharmfultohealth.(要点4)Nevertheless,itwillcontinuetoexistinotherplacesasitdoesprovidesomebenefits.(要点5)高级语块高级语块1.putanendto结束;终止2.decreasedkrisv.减少;减小;降低3.saveenergy节能4.neverthelessnevlesadv.尽管如此答案13Writing2(2019浙江金丽衢十二校高三第二次联考)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Technologyisforeverchangingthewaywegetournews.Manypeoplenowgetalotoftheirnewsonelectronicdevices,insteadoftraditionalmedia,suchasnewspapers,televisionorradio.Anin-creasingnumberofpeoplealsoreportturningtosocialmediaforinformation.Now,thereisanewtechnologythatcouldgreatlychangethewaywegetthenews:computer-cre-atednewsreaders.Recently,Chinalaunchedwhatiscalledtheworldsfirstartificialintelligence,orAI,newspresenters.Thenewsreaders,supportedbymachinelearningtechnology,arebasedontworeal-lifeChinesenewsmen.OneisabletopresentnewscastsinEnglish;theother,inMandarinChinese.Reportsaidmachinelearningwasusedtoexaminevideoimagesandsoundsofthetwonewsmen.Similartechnologyhasbeenusedtocreatevideoproductsknownas“deepfakevideos.”Adeepfakeisavideothatlooksreal,butwaselectronicallychanged.Suchvideoscanmakepeopleappeartosaythingstheyneversaid.Writing2(2019浙江金丽衢十二校高三第二次联考14ItssaidthattheAIpresenterswillbeagreatimprovementtothenewsteambecausethey“canwork24hoursaday”onitswebsiteandonsocialmedia.Oneofthepresentersevenpromisedto“worktirelessly”tokeeppeopleinformed.SomemachinelearningexpertssaidthesystemshowedoffChinaslatestprogressinvoicerecognition,text-to-speechtechnologyanddataanaly-sis.Otherswonderedabouttheeffectsrobotsmighthaveonemploymentandworkers.Somepeoplearguedthatonlylow-leveljobsrequiringheavylaborwillbeeasilyreplacedbyrobots.Otherspraisedthetechnologyasawayforcompaniestomakemoneyfromlow-costlabormachines.Somebusinesseshaveexperimentedwithsimilartechnologyforpossibleuseinnewsoperations.BritainsBBCrecentlyreleasedavideothatusedmachinelearningtomakeitlooklikeoneofitsnewsreadersspeakingdifferentlanguages.TheLondon-basedcompanythatdevelopedthesystemsaysitsgoalisto“removethelanguagebarrier”formanydifferentkindsofvideosontheInter-net.Also,AmazonsworkingonAlexasmartspeakersystemtocreateaspecialnewsreadervoice.AmazonisreportedlypreparingtolaunchAlexasnewsreadervoiceinthenearfuture.ItssaidthattheAIpresente1516答案答案写作提示文章介绍了中国开创的一种新的技术:AI播音技术。文章共分6个自然段。进行概要写作时,一定要把握好每一段的核心,然后进行有机整合。要注意语言的提炼和构思。Onepossibleversion:Technologyhasbeenupdatingoursourceofinformation.(要点1)Now,anothertechnology,so-calledAInewsreader,hasbecomeahit.(要点2)ThisnewinventionusesthevoiceoftwogreatChinesenewsmen,broadcastingbothinEnglishandChinese.(要点3)Oneadvantageofthema-chineisthatitcanworknon-stop.(要点4)Manycompanies,includingBBCandAmazon,aretry-ingtoproducebetterlearningmachines.(要点5)高级语块高级语块1.updatepdetv.更新;升级2.so-calledadj.号称的;所谓的3.non-stopadv.不间断地,连续地精彩语句精彩语句原句:Oneadvantageofthemachineisthatitcanworknon-stop.分析:本句话的主干是Oneadvantage.isthat.,that引导表语从句。译文:这种机器的一个优点是它能不间断地工作。答案17Writing3(2019浙江丽水、衢州、湖州高三质检)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。In1971,ChinasfirstsubwaylineinBeijingwasformallyputintooperation.ByDecember2017,therewere171subwaylinesstretchingover5,083kmin35citiesontheChinesemainland.Cur-rently,Chinahasthelongesturbanrailwaynetworkintheworld,whichispredictedtosurpass6,000kmby2020.TherapiddevelopmentofChinasurbanrailwaysystemreflectsthecountrysgrowingeconomicstrength.Thesystemhasexperiencedthefastestgrowthoverthepast15yearsduetotheinvest-mentofwealthaccumulatedfromthereformandopeningupinurbaninfrastructureconstruction.Anurbanrailwaysystemisexpensivetobuild,withonekilometerofsubwaycostingapproximate-ly700millionyuan($110million).Acitywithouteconomicstrengthcannotdevelopsuchanex-pensivesystem.Theprogressinurbanrailwayconstructiontechnologieshasalsocontributedtothefastexpansionoftheinfrastructure.Subwayconstructioninvolvesbuildingundergroundtunnels,layingrails,Writing3(2019浙江丽水、衢州、湖州高三质检)18manufacturingtrainsandtheoperationandmanagementofsubways.Itisasystematicprojectwhichnotonlycoverstraditionalinfrastructurebuildingbutalsomodernelectronicsandinforma-tiontechnology.Chinasrailwayconstructiontechnologiesarethebestintheworld,withChinesesubwaytrainsnowexportedtodevelopedcountriesincludingtheUnitedStates.TheexpansionofChinesecitieshasmadeitnecessarytodevelopurbanrailwaysystems.Sincethestartofthereformandopeningup,alargenumberofpeoplehavemigratedtocitiesandthenum-berofprivatecarshasincreaseddramatically,resultinginserioustrafficcongestion.Buildingsubwayshasbecomeanimportantwaytosolvethisproblem.Thisyearmarksthe40thanniversaryofthelaunchofChinasreformandopeningup,andtherapiddevelopmentofChinasurbanrailwaysystemexemplifiestheachievementsmadebythepolicy.AsChinafurthersitsopeningup,itwillcontinuetomaintainsteadyandrapideconomicgrowthandrailwaysystemswillbeavailableinmoreandmorecities.manufacturingtrainsandtheo19答案答案写作提示文章体裁为说明文。介绍了中国改革开放40年来城市地铁的飞速发展。文章共分5个自然段,思路清晰,主题鲜明。进行概要写作时,可以根据需要将文章段落大意重新整合,并注意复杂句子和高级表达的使用。Onepossibleversion:ThepastfewdecadeshaswitnessedthefastdevelopmentofChineseurbanrailwaysbothinnum-berandlength,whichisareflectionofChinasprosperouseconomy.(要点1)Actually,notonlythegrowingconstructiontechnologiesbutalsotheexpansionofChinesecitieswithboomingpopu-lationandheavytraffic,stimulatestheurbanrailwayconstruction.(要点2)Withthedeepeningofthereformandopeninguppolicy,moreurbanrailwayswillcomeintouse.(要点3)高级语块高级语块1.witnesswtnsv.见证2.urbanbnadj.城市的;都市的3.reflectionrfleknn.反映4.prosperousprsprsadj.繁荣的5.expansionkspnnn.扩张6.stimulatestmjuletvt.刺激答案20精彩语句精彩语句原句:ThepastfewdecadeshaswitnessedthefastdevelopmentofChineseurbanrailwaysbothinnumberandlength,whichisareflectionofChinasprosperouseconomy.分析:本句话的主干是Thepastfewdecadeshaswitnessedthefastdevelopment.。which引导非限制性定语从句,先行词为前面主句的宾语。译文:几十年来,我国城市地铁在数量和长度上都得到了快速发展,这是我国经济繁荣的反映。精彩语句21Writing4(2019浙江临安昌化中学高三上学期期末)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Noisyneighborsareacommonprobleminasocietywheremanypeoplelivecloselytogether.Ob-viously,thisissuecanbemostsignificantwhenyousharewallsorafloor/ceilingwithaneighborinanapartment.Anoisyneighborcanmakelifechallenging,particularlyifnoisecontinueswellintothenight,oroccursduringearlymorninghours.Thissituationneedstobedealtwithproperly,whichrequiresyourabilitytokeepcalm.Youshouldfirstattempttotellyournoisyneighborsaboutthenoise.Thisconversationshouldbepolite,evenfriendly.Itcanbeginwithastatementlike“Imnotsureyoureaware.”Explainthenoiseissuebriefly,andasktheneighbortoturndownthemusic,ornottoholdpartiesuntil3a.m.Youcanalsoaddthatyourealizetheyhearyournoisetoo,andyourecertainlywillingtotrytostopanythinginyourbehaviorthatiscreatingextranoise.Youshouldknowthatnotallneighborsaregoingtorespondtoyourrequest,andsomemayre-spondinabadmanner.Ifthenoisyneighborsdontchangetheirbehavior,thenextstepshouldbeWriting4(2019浙江临安昌化中学高三上学期期末22towritetheneighborsaletter.Thelettershouldstatethespecificgrievances(不满)andanydateswhenthenoisewasparticularlybothersome.Forexample,ifyourneighborhasloudgatheringsev-eryFridaynightthatlastintotheearlymorning,thenwritedownthosedates.Whenthenoiseremainsongoing,youshoulddefinitelyreportittolocalauthorities.StartwithlandlordsorHOASandcontinuewithcallstothepolicedepartment,whenabsolutelynecessary.Often,however,theproblemisresolvedwhenthenoisyneighborsknowyouaregoingtocallthepolice.Dobeawarethatyoucannotalwaysrequestnoisyneighborstobequiet.Whenthenoiseremainsongoing,itiswisenottorespondtonoiseinanangryorretaliatory(报复性的)fashion.Ifyouhavefollowedthroughwiththestepsandletter,dontstartbangingthingsaroundinyourhomeorturn-ingupthemusictoannoytheneighbors.Simplyreporttheirbehaviortotheappropriateauthorities.towritetheneighborsalette23答案答案写作提示文章体裁为说明文。介绍了生活中常见的被吵闹的邻居打扰的现象,并给出了解决这个问题的几条建议。进行概要写作时,可以根据建议的顺序,有序展开。但是要注意概要的层次和逻辑。Onepossibleversion:Beingdisturbedbynoisyneighborshappenscommonlyinourlife.(要点1)Todealwiththisprob-lem,youneedtofollowthesesteps.(要点2)Firstofall,youareadvisedtohaveafriendlyconver-sationwithyournoisyneighborsaboutthisissue.(要点3)Iftheydontrespondorrespondinabadmanner,trywritingthemaletter,inwhichyoushoulddetailthenoiseandyourgrievances.(要点4)Whenthesetwomethodsfail,justreporttheissuetorelevantauthorities,butdoremember:dontreturnlikeforlike.(要点5)高级语块高级语块1.issueun.问题2.inabadmanner态度恶劣3.detailditelv.详述,详细列举4.grievancerivnsn.委屈答案24精彩语句精彩语句原句:Iftheydontrespondorrespondinabadmanner,trywritingthemaletter,inwhichyoushoulddetailthenoiseandyourgrievances.分析:本句话的主干是trywritingthemaletter。前面是由If引导的条件状语从句。后面是由inwhich引导的非限制性定语从句,先行词为aletter。译文:如果他们没有回应或以很不好的态度回应,请尝试着给他们写封信。在信中你应该详细描述噪音和你的不满。精彩语句25Writing5(2018浙江温州一模)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Doeswritingcomehardtoyou?Areyoudiscouragedtofindyourselfpooratwriting?Nobodyisbornknowinghowtowrite.Goodwritinghabits,whichhelpmakeyouwriteonaregularbasis,arenecessaryforyoutoimproveyourwriting.Firstly,youaresupposedtoreadawiderangeofbooks.Itsobviouswhenawriterisnotwell-readlackofreadingwillbeobviousineverysentenceonewrites.Readingpreparesyouwithnecessaryknowledgetobeagoodwriter.Whatsmore,itprovidesyouwithbasicskillsforwriting.Theimportanceofreadingcannotbestressedtoomuch:readasmuchandasoftenasyoucan.Secondly,itsimportanttomakeawritingscheduleandwritedailyifitispossible.Whetheryouwritefortwohoursadayorfifteenminutesaday,dailywritingisthekeytodevelopinggoodwrit-inghabits.Itsbettertowriteforfifteenortwentyminuteseverydaythantositforfiveorsixhourstowriteovertheweekend.However,ifyoucanmakeadailywritingschedulewithlongerhoursonyourwritingonweekends,thenitsmuchbetter.Writing5(2018浙江温州一模)26Oneoftheworsthabitsisnevertogethelpfromotherstoimproveyourwriting.Itisadvisedthatyoushareyourworkwithothers.Forexample,youcansendyourwritingtoafewfriends,roundupsomereadersandletthemcommentonyourwriting.Thatway,youllfindyourwritinggradu-allyimproved.Oneoftheworsthabitsisnev27答案答案写作提示文章主要讲述好的写作习惯对提高写作水平的帮助。文章结构比较清晰,以自然段为基础概括要点即可。其中第一段是主旨段,而后面的三段为具体的做法。Onepossibleversion:Goodwritinghabitscontributealottoimprovingyourwriting.(要点1)First,youshouldreadasmuchaspossibletogettheknowledgeandskillsforwriting.(要点2)Youshouldalsomakeawrit-ingplanandkeepupyourdailywriting.(要点3)Besides,youdbetterturntoothersforhelptoim-proveyourwriting.(要点4)高级语块高级语块1.contributeto有助于2.keepup坚持3.turnto向求助答案28Writing6(2018浙江金华十校一模)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。ThefamiliaryellowschoolbusisthelargestsystemofmasstransportationintheUSandeveryschooldaytransportsroughly25millionyoungpeopletoschoolandhomeagainaftertheschooldayends.Meanwhile,itisthesafestmethodforgettingkidstoandfromschool,accordingtotheNationalHighwayTrafficSafetyAdministration(NHTSA).Childrenare70timesmorelikelytoarriveatschoolsafelyontheschoolbusthaniftheyhadtraveledtoschooldrivingthemselvesorridingwithfriends.Theseschoolbusesmeetmoreofthenationsmotorvehiclesafetystandardsthananyothervehi-clesontheroad.Also,severalnewtechnologiesavailabletodayaremakingschoolbusesevensafer,suchasvideocamerasontheinsideandoutside,stoparmcameras,GPStrackingandcolli-sionlesseningsystems.Anothersafetytoolonschoolbusesishighseatbacks,closely-spacedseatsandenergy-absorbingseats.ButeventhesafenessofschoolbuseswouldnotcompletelysumupwhychildrenaresaferwhenWriting6(2018浙江金华十校一模)29ridingthebig,yellowbus.Thebusisonlyassafeastheprofessionalmenandwomenwhodrivethem.AlldriversmustobtainaClassBorCCommercialDriversLicense(CDL).Theyareran-domlytestedforalcoholanddrugs,usuallyhavetheirdrivingrecordchecked,andaregiventhesamereviewofcriminalhistoryasteachersandotheremployeeswhohavecontactwithstudents.Inordertoserveasaschoolbusdriver,mostapplicantsarerequiredtosuccessfullycompleteatrainingcourse,alongwithinstructionintheclassroomandbehindthewheel.Schoolbusesaresafefortheenvironment,notonlybecauseeachbusreplaces36passengercarsthatwould,butforthebuses,beontheroadtakingandpickingupschoolchildren.Additionally,schoolbusesusealternativegreenfuelslikenaturalgas,andelectricpower.ToddMonteferrario,PresidentoftheNationalSchoolTransportationAssociation,saidparentsshouldrememberthatthesafestandsmartestchoiceistoputtheirchildrenonthebigyellowbuswhentheycan.ridingthebig,yellowbus.Th30答案答案写作提示本文是议论文。文章主要论述校车的好处。文章的结构为“总分总”模式。第一段是主题段,提出了主要观点。第二至第四段分别是具体的论据。最后一段提出结论。Onepossibleversion:TheschoolbusisthesafestandwisestchoicetoschoolintheUS.(要点1)Firstly,schoolbusesnotonlymeethighvehiclesafetystandardsbutalsoaretechnologicallyequipped.(要点2)Secondly,thebusdrivershavetopassstrictqualificationtestsandsafetydrivingtraining.(要点3)Thirdly,schoolbusespoweredbygreenfuelsareenvironmentallysafebyreducingthenumberofprivatecarshittingtheroads.(要点4)Thereforechildrenareencouragedtogotoschoolbyschoolbus.(要点5)高级语块高级语块1.vehiclevikln.车辆;交通工具2.safetystandard安全标准3.technologicallyteknldkliadv.技术上地4.qualificationkwlfkenn.资格5.greenfuel绿色燃料答案31精彩语句精彩语句原句:Firstly,schoolbusesnotonlymeethighvehiclesafetystandardsbutalsoaretechnologicallyequipped.分析:本句话含有notonly.butalso.结构。notonly.butalso.连接两个并列的谓语动词。译文:首先,校车不仅达到了很高的车辆安全标准,而且还配备了技术装备。精彩语句32Writing7(2017浙江衢州高三一模)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Amongallthefastgrowingscienceandtechnology,theresearchofhumangenes,orbiologicalen-gineeringaspeoplecallit,isdrawingmoreandmoreattentionnow.Discussionsaboutitarein-creasinglyheatedaroundtheworld.Thegreatestthingthatgenetechnologycandoistocureseriousdiseasesthatdoctorsatpresentcanalmostdonothingwith,suchascancerandheartdisease.Everyyear,millionsofpeoplearemurderedbythesetwokillers.Andtodate,doctorshavenotfoundaneffectivewaytocurethem.Butifthegenetechnologyisapplied,notonlycanthesetwodiseasesbecuredcompletely,bring-inghappinessandmorelivingdaystothepatients,b