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话题写作（二）物品介绍第一篇教材考点梳理【话题点睛】（1）涉及的话题主要有:物品介绍、失物招领等。（2）涉及的要点:学习用品、生活用品、发明物等在外形、颜色、功能、用途、操作步骤以及特点等方面的介绍。2019温州最近,用手机APP买菜的人多了。手机菜场菜品丰富、洗净配好、预约送菜上门外国朋友对此也很感兴趣。请你以“A New Use of the Mobile Phone”为题,写一篇110词左右的英语短文介绍手机买菜带来的便利,让外国朋友了解中国人民生活中的这个新变化。典例分析A New Use of the Mobile Phone 【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:主题是描写手机带来的便利。文章主要可从三个部分展开叙述:（1）引出本文的中心对象,即新的手机（买菜）软件。（2）具体描写手机买菜软件的用途。（3）将传统的买菜方式和通过手机软件进行买菜的方式进行对比。2.确定时态:一般现在时3.确定人称:第三人称【写作架构】【基础写作】根据所给提示写句子。1.基础句这些软件上有肉、鱼、蔬菜,几乎一切都有。（apps软件,have）.升格句这些软件给你提供肉、鱼、蔬菜,几乎有你为一顿饭需要的一切。（providewith,you need for a meal）.2.基础句你可以自由地预订。（order freely）.升格句你可以在你喜欢的任何时候预订。（whenever）.These apps have meat,fish,and vegetables,almost everything.These apps provide you with meat,fish,and vegetables,almost everything you need for a meal.You can order freely.You can order whenever you like.3.基础句一些软件指导你做饭。（guideto）.升格句一些软件甚至一步一步指导你做饭,使做饭更容易。（even,step by step,make）.4.基础句手机软件节约你的时间和精力。（save）.升格句与去市场的传统方式相比,手机软件节约你的时间和精力。（compared with）.Some apps guide you to cook.Some apps even guide you to cook step by step,making cooking easier.Mobile apps save your time and energy.Compared with the traditional way of going to the market,mobile apps save your time and energy.5.基础句你能享受一种轻松的生活。（relaxing）.升格句你能享受一种更轻松的生活。（more relaxing）.You can enjoy a relaxing life.You can enjoy a more relaxing life.【连句成文】A New Use of the Mobile Phone Preparing for meals is tiring.You may have to spend hours getting everything ready for cooking.Now in China,new mobile apps are here to help.These apps provide you with meat,fish,and vegetables,almost everything you need for a meal.You can order whenever you like and decide on the time for them to arrive.If you like,they can be washed,cut and packed for a certain dish.Some apps even guide you to cook step by step,making cooking easier.Compared with the traditional way of going to the market,mobile apps save your time and energy.With such a new use of the mobile phone,you can enjoy a more relaxing life.【相关短语】look like看起来像;as small as和一样小;the most useful最有用的;for example比如;such as比如;with the help of在的帮助下;in order to为了;from then on从那以后;bring to sb.给某人带来;learn about了解拓展积累【参考谚语】1.Something is learned every time a book is opened.开卷有益。2.A letter from home is a priceless treasure.家书抵万金。3.Its my cup of tea.那恰是我所喜欢的。4.You cannot eat your cake and have it.鱼与熊掌,不可兼得。【亮点句型】物品来源1.There is a washing machine in my home.2.It was invented by an American tanner named John Loud in 1888.3.My mother bought the scarf for me as a gift.物品用途1.It is easy to wash dirty clothes and other things.2.The electronic schoolbag is like a computer.3.Computers are useful,convenient and they have more functions.4.For example,you can listen to music and watch movies on it.5.The ballpoint pen is one of the most useful inventions.6.The ballpoint pen really helps us write faster and makes our life easier.物品特点1.The electronic schoolbags are easy to carry and childrens backs and necks may not be hurt.2.And the price of it is usually low.3.The book is just like my best friend.物品外观1.Ballpoint pens are becoming smaller and lighter.2.My handbag is red and small.3.The special cup looks like a small football.A2019福建假定你是李华,收到英国笔友Harry的邮件,获悉他在机器人制作比赛中获奖。请根据邮件内容给他回复。词数:80左右。实战演练To:LFrom:HDear Li Hua,Im glad to tell you that Ive just won the first place in a robot-making competition.I love robots!They bring me great fun.What do you think of robots?Do you want to have your own robot?Why?Looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Harry参考词汇congratulation祝贺注意事项1.回复邮件时可适当发挥,邮件格式已给出,不计入总词数;2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。Dear Harry,Yours,Li HuaOne possible version:Dear Harry,Congratulations!How glad I am to share your good news!I think robots are helpful in many ways.And in the future theyll play more important roles in our daily life.In addition,Im dying to have a robot of my own.I can have it take care of my grandparents when we are not at home.You see,my grandparents are old and cannot move easily.It can help them do some housework,such as cooking,cleaning the house and so on.Hoping youll make greater progress.Yours,Li HuaB2019宿迁某软件公司为了开发一款适合中学生在课后学习英语的app,邀请你一起参与设计。请根据下文提示,用英语向该公司介绍你的构想。名称Happy English Learning内容 英语类的新闻、电影、歌曲、游戏等好处1.便于和同学一起学习;2.帮助学生扩大词汇量;3.有利于提高英语听力;4.（自主发挥,至少一点）其他方面（自主发挥,至少一点）注意事项1.词数:90左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等。Here is my design for the new app.One possible version:Here is my design for the new app.It is named Happy English Learning.This app includes English news,English movies,English songs,English games and so on.It can make it easy for students to study together.It is true that vocabulary is very important in English study.Students can enlarge their English vocabulary by using this app.Their English listening skills can be greatly improved.They can also practise their spoken English by singing English songs and watching English films.In a word,students can have fun learning English by using this app.I think the new app should be suitable for students of different ages.
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