广二模答案及作文2014

基础写作主要考查考生语言结构的应用能力：能够用正确、规范的语言表达特定的内容。 命题思想是希望考生在表达这些内容时能够 使五个句子之间的逻辑通顺。 从篇章层面考虑句型结构的平衡性和多样性，1. Using solar panels to get energy from the sun, solar cars look similar to ordinary cars,Solar cars, which get their energy from the sun through solar panels, look similar to ordinary cars,/is similar to ordinary cars in shape.2. 正确使用复合句，比如定语从句、状语从句、表语从句等They produce , which is great for the environment. /is beneficial to the environment/is environmentally friendly3. 将多项并列的内容用简单、清晰的结构表达出来，或者根据并列内容的内在逻辑关系使用合理的句型表达As theyre comparatively smaller, solar cars are easy to drive and park. / Solar cars are comparatively smaller, so (and) theyre easy to drive and park. 4. 将多项并列的内容用简单、清晰的结构表达出来，或者根据并列内容的内在逻辑关系使用合理的句型表达However, solar cars are much more expensive to buy than normal cars, and theyre much less powerful, with a top speed of only 70 km/h. 5. 正确使用复合句，比如定语从句、状语从句、表语从句等The biggest problem of all is that . /they can only be driven about 100km.Using solar panels to get energy from the sun, solar cars look similar to ordinary cars, but they have several advantages. They produce little noise and almost no air pollution, which is great for the environment. Also, as theyre comparatively smaller, solar cars are easy to drive and park. However, solar cars are much more expensive to buy than normal cars, and theyre much less powerful, with a top speed of only 70 km/h. The biggest problem of all is that they can only be driven about 100 km before their battery needs recharging / to be recharged. Version two: Solar cars, which get their energy from the sun through solar panels, look similar to ordinary cars, but they have several advantages. They produce little noise and almost no air pollution, so theyre quite good for the environment. Also, as theyre comparatively smaller, solar cars are easy to drive and park. However, not only are they much more expensive to buy than normal cars, theyre also less powerful, with a top speed of only 70 km/h. The biggest problem of all is that they can only be driven about 100 km before their battery needs recharging / to be recharged.