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,分类写作,十八、留言/请假条,apartment公寓Itisapitythat.真遗憾losethisopportunity失去这个机会excuse借口givesb.aspeech给某人作演讲society社会recordv.录音tape录音带,【必备词语】,meanagreatdeal意味着很多promisetodosth.承诺做某事stadium体育馆befondof喜欢localfood当地食物guarantee保证lookforwardto期待着,【必备词语】,1.Imwritingtoaskfortwodayssickleave.我给您写信请两天病假。2.CouldyoukindlyexcusemyabsenceonMondayandTuesday?周一和周二我不得不缺席了，你能准假吗？3.ImsorrytosaythatIcantwaitforyouathome.很抱歉，我不能在家等你了。4.Sinceyouwereout,Ihavetoleavethisnotetoyou.既然你出去了，我只好给你留张便条了。5.Imgoingoutshopping,andwontbebackuntilabout5:00pm.我外出购物了，下午五点才回来。6.Tracycalled,sayingthatshecouldntmeetyouatBoltonCoffeetomorrowmorningas.Tracy打电话来，说她明天早上不能在Bolton咖啡馆见你，因为,【好句朗诵】,7.Shewantedyoutocallherbackassoonasyouarehome.她想你回到家马上给她回电话。8.Finally,wouldyoucallherbackuponyourarrivinghomesothatyoucanfixanothertimeforyourmeeting?最后，你回到家可以给她回电话吗？这样你们可以安排另外一个时间见面。9.IamsorrythatIcantattendthepartytobeheldthisFridayatyourapartment.很抱歉我不能参加星期五在你公寓举办的派对。10.Iwonderifitispossibleforthetalktoberecorded.我想是否有可能把讲座录音。11.Ifyouareinterested,pleaseletusknowassoonaspossible.如果你有兴趣，请尽快告知我们。,【好句朗诵】,1.Aftertakenmytemperature,IknewIhadafever.,1.taken改为taking,2.Pleasecallmebackatyourconvenient.,2.convenient改为convenience,【单句改错】每句只有一个错误,3.IlearnthatyouareinterestedinBeijingOpera,andIwanttoinviteyouenjoyafamousopera.,3.enjoy前面加to,4.Asmydictionaryhasbeenleftathome,Iwonderifyoucanlendmeyour.,4.your改为yours；或者your后加dictionary,5.Imseriousilltodayandcannotcometoclass.,5.serious改为seriously,【单句改错】每句只有一个错误,6.Illleavebyatrainat8:00tomorrowmorning.,6.删掉a,7.IwillcomebacktoworkthemomentIwillfeelbetter.,7.删掉第二个will,8.Tracycalled,saidthatshecouldntmeetyouatBoltonCoffee.,8.said改为saying；或者said前面加and,【单句改错】每句只有一个错误,9.Thereisasupermarketnearbywhichwecangoshopping.,9.which改为where；或者which前面加in,10.WedolookforwardtoseeyouatourEnglishparty.,10.see改为seeing,【单句改错】每句只有一个错误,【2009全国卷：外出留言】假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东MrsWilson不在家，你准备外出，请给MrsWilson写一留言条，内容包括：1.外出购物2.替房东还书3.Tracy来电话留言：1)咖啡屋(BoltonCoffee)见面取消2)此事已告知Susan3)尽快回电,【真题满分佳作赏析】,满分佳作（一）Mrs.Wilson,Imgoingoutshopping,andwontbebackuntilabout5:00pm.IhavetakenwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturntotheCityLibrary.Atabout1oclockthisafternoon,Tracycalled,sayingthatshecouldntmeetyouatBoltonCoffeetomorrowmorningasshehadsomethingimportanttoattendto.Shefeltverysorryaboutthat,butsaidthatyoucouldsetsomeothertimeforthemeeting.Shewantedyoutocallherbackassoonasyouarehome.ShehasalreadytoldSusanaboutthischange.,满分赏析youaskedmetoreturntotheCityLibrary是省略了关系代词的定语从句。saying是现在分词作状语，且含有that引导的宾语从句；本句还有as引导的原因状语从句；作者用多样的语法手段，有效地把相关信息整合起来。feelsorryabout(觉得抱歉)和setsomeothertimefor(确定另外的一个时间)两个表达都自然地道。考生平时要多积累，才不会“巧妇难为无米之炊”。,满分佳作（二）Mrs.Wilson,IamgoingoutshoppingwithmyfriendMarythismorningandwillcomebacklatethisevening.Iwillreturnthebooksthatyouborrowedlastweektothelibrary.Inaddition,Tracycalledyouandleftamessage,sayingthatthemeetingatBoltonCoffeewascanceledbecauseshehadtoattendhercousinsweddingthatday,andsheapologizedtoyou.Susanwasinformedofthischangetoo.Finally,wouldyoucallherbackuponyourarrivinghomesothatyoucanfixanothertimeforyourmeeting?Haveaniceday!LiHua,满分赏析本句含有that引导的定语从句。beinformedof(被告知)，词汇使用高级。sothat引导目的状语从句；fixanothertimefor(确定另一时间)。“语言靠模仿，内容要原创”，语言学家王初明教授的这句话值得同学们在学习英语时牢记。,【模拟真题：留言条】作文原题假设你是李华，你们学校的Smith先生打算本周五在他的公寓举办一个晚会，并邀请你参加。但是，你有其他事情无法参加。请给Smith先生写一个留言条，内容包括：1.对无法参加晚会表示歉意；2.不能参加晚会的原因；3.通知他下周三你班英语晚会的时间和地点。,【模仿翻译】,作文翻译亲爱的Smith，非常抱歉我不能参加星期五在你公寓举行的派对。失去这个机会真遗憾。我的姑姑星期六晚上将来看我们，我们很长时间没有见面了，因此我没有理由不去她。嗯，还有一件事。下周三下午18：30我们班将在会议厅举行英语派对。将会有演讲和表演。我们邀请你来做评委，然后在派对结束为我们做一次英语学习的演讲。我十分期待能看到你。你的，李华,DearSmith,IamsorrythatIcantattendthepartytobeheldthisFridayatyourapartment.ItisapitythatIwilllosethisopportunity.MyauntwillcometovisitusonFridayeveningandwehaventseeneachotherforaverylongtime,soIcantmakeanyexcusetomissher.Well,thereisonemorething.WearegoingtoholdanEnglishpartyatthemeetinghallintheschoolat18:30p.m.nextWednesday.Therewillbespeechesandperformances.WeinviteyoutobethejudgeandgiveusaspeechonEnglishlearningattheendoftheparty.Wedolookforwardtoseeingyou.Yours,LiHua,【2004全国卷3：上课请假】假设你是李华，你的美国老师MissMorgan要求你们明天下午去听一个有关美国历史的讲座。你因故不能参加。请你根据以下要点，写一封短信向MissMorgan请假。内容要点：*表示歉意*理由：去机场接人*询问：是否有录音，以便补听讲座DearMissMorgan,.YourssincerelyLiHua,【全真考场】,【2004全国卷3：上课请假】DearMissMorgan,IamsosorrythatIwontbeabletoattendthelectureonAmericanhistorytomorrowafternoon.MyuncleisreturninghomefromFrance,andIhavepromisedtomeethimattheairportat3:30tomorrowafternoon.IamverymuchinterestedinAmericansocietyandhistory.Iwonderifitispossibleforthetalktoberecorded,andifso,couldIborrowthetape?Itwouldmeanagreatdealtometolistentothetapeandlearnwhatiscoveredinthetalk.YourssincerelyLiHua,【模拟真题：留言条】假设你叫李华，是一名高中生，你和朋友约定周日上午去体育场打篮球，外教Mr.Hopkins非常喜欢体育运动，你邀请他加入你们。你的留言条应该包括以下内容：1.和朋友一起打篮球的时间和地点；2.从学校门口到体育场的方式；3.午饭和下午活动安排；4.希望尽早回复。DearMr.Hopkins,IamwritingtotellyouaboutmyplanforthecomingSunday.Sincerely,LiHua,【模拟真题：留言条】DearMr.Hopkins,IamwritingtotellyouaboutmyplanforthecomingSunday.MyfriendsandIhavedecidedtoplaybasketballfrom9:00a.m.to11:30a.m.onSundayatthecitystadium.Sinceyouarefondofplayingbasketball,wedliketoinviteyoutojoinus.YoucantakebusNo.102fromthestopnearourschool.Ittakesabout29minutestogetthere.Atnoon,wewillhavelunchatFoodCity,wherewecanhaveallkindsoflocalfood.Oryoucanreturnafterlunch.Ifyouareinterested,pleaseletusknowassoonaspossible.Ifyoucome,Iguaranteeyouwillhaveagoodtimewithus.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Sincerely,LiHua,ThankYou!,
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