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专题06 书面表达2019年高考书面表达1.【2019全国I】假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要剧版中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括:1.写信目的:2.个人优势:3.能做的事情。注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.结束语已为你写好。_【答案】Im Li Hua, an outgoing boy, who is studying in London. I am writing to apply to be a volunteer of your team, having heard that a Chinese Painting Exhibition will be held in this local city. I have some advantages for the job.First of all, having lived in China for sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a child , I have a good command of English and Chinese, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings. Besides, having a good knowledge of Chinese paintings because of my familiarity with Chinese painting culture, I can get foreigners and the locals to know more about it. Last but not least，through my introduction and efforts, I believe, I can strengthen the friendship between China and England. I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。【详解】1.审题立意本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写申请信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在式。2.谋篇布局书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段写个人优势和能做的事，最后一段总结。3.关键词根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇有：volunteer，a Chinese Painting Exhibition，local city，advantages，a good command of，beneficial for，familiarity with，appreciate ，take my application into consideration。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误，并增加一些细节和过渡性的词汇，如First of all, Besides, to begin with，moreover，as for me，Last but not least，等，使全文衔接自然，语义流畅。【点睛】本文首段开门见山，表达了写信的目的；第2段详细介绍了个人的优势和能做的事情，an outgoing boy, who is studying in London.此处使用了同位语和非限制性定语从句。having heard that a Chinese Painting Exhibition will be held in this local city.使用了分词做状语和宾语从句及被动语态。having lived in China for sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a child, I have a good command of English and Chinese, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings.使用了分词和非限制性定语从句。另外First of all, Besides, Last but not least的使用使文章富有条理性。此外，还使用了高级句式结构，如I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration条件状语从句。【思路点拨】 无论是在学校还是今后读大学再到走上工作岗位，写好一份申请都是你必不可少的一项技能。这种形式的写作，学生需结合自身优势， 考生成文时应注意：1. 要点要齐全：(1)提出写信的目的申请做这个志愿者；(2)提出个人优势；(3)表达出自己能做的事情；2. 时态：以一般现在时为主；3. 人称：第二人称为主；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅；5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。【参考范文】Dear Sir or Madam,I am Li Hua, a 17-year-old teenager studying in London. Learning that a volunteer is needed for an exhibition of Chinese traditional painting , I am writing to apply for it.I have some advantages for the job. First of all, having lived in China for years and learnt English since I was a child , I have a good command of both English and Chinese, which is beneficial when introducing Chinese paintings to foreign friends. Besides, because of my familiarity with Chinese painting culture, I can get foreigners and the locals to know more about it. Last but not least, through my efforts, I believe, I can strengthen the friendship between China and England. I would appreciate it if this wonderful chance would be offered to me. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua2.【2019全国II】假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括:1.比赛信息；2.赛前准备；3.表达期待。注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【思路点拨】本文要求给你的队友Chris写一封邮件，告知他关于近期参加排球比赛的情况。邮件的主要内容包括：1. 比赛信息；2. 赛前准备；3. 表达期待。1.考生在写作的时候，要注意：由于书面表达开放性很强，只为考生提供了一个笼统的写作提纲，因此首先，要在邮件的开始点明排球比赛的具体信息，可以自己增加一些内容等。其次，写明比赛的赛前准备等。另外，在邮件中最后表达自己的期望等。2.时态：以一般将来时为主；3. 人称：第一人称；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。同时要灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。【参考范文】Dear Chris, Im writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month. The match will take place in our school gym on the morning of July 8th. We will play against a team from ChaoYang High school. For good performance in the match, we must get fully prepared and practice hard. So starting morning, we all need to train for two hours after school every day. In addition, we should avoid getting hurt during the training and have a healthy diet to keep fit. Youre an excellent player. With you on the team, we have every hope of beating another team. Lets try hard together. Sincerely,Li Hua3.【2019全国III】假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括:1.时间；2.活动安排；3.欢迎他表演节目。注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【思路点拨】 随着网络的发展，写电子邮件是中学生经常与朋友沟通的一种方式，这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到熟悉。考生成文时应注意：1. 要点要齐全：(1)音乐节的时间(2)活动的安排(3)欢迎朋友表演一个节目 2. 时态：以一般将来时和一般现在时为主；3. 人称：第二人称为主；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅；5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。【参考范文】Dear Alien, I am writing to invite you to attend the Music Festival to be held from 8：00 a. m .to 5：00 p.m. next Sunday in my school. In order to enrich our after-class life, our school is to organize this festival, which is intended to promote Chinese traditional folk music as well as enjoy foreign ones . Not only will you appreciate wonderful folk music items like performances of Erhu and Guzheng, but also you can give a performance to us in person . I hope you can play the piano or sing an English song for us. Looking forward to your coming. I promise it will be a feast for your eyes and ears. Best wishes! Yours sincerely，Li hua4.【2019浙江】假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括:1.表示感谢；2.回顾Alex对你的帮助；3.临别祝愿。注意:1.词数80左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【思路点拨】本文是邮件，主题是感谢信，根据写作提示，考生应用英语给Alex写一封邮件，感谢他的帮助。写作内容主要包括三项：1表达感谢；2回顾Alex的帮助；3临别祝愿。这封邮件由三段组成：第一段陈述写信的目的；第二段陈述写信的理由；最后一段为结束语。【参考范文】 Dear Alex,Hearing that you will return to your country soon, I feel a bit upset. But meanwhile, I want to send my sincere gratitude for your kind help with my English learning.I still remember what you have devoted to improve my oral English and English writing. Besides, you also frankly shared your learning experience with me. Additionally, without your help, I would not have been a top student in English and would not have won the English Speech Contest. All in all, words fail to express my thankfulness to you.I do hope that you will have a bright future and that our friendship will last forever! Yours,Li Hua第二节 读后续写(满分25分)67.阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Parents everywhere praise their kids. Jenn Berman, author of The A to Z Guide to Raising Happy and Confident Kids, says, Weve gone to the opposite extreme of a few decades ago when parents tended to be more strict. By giving kids a lot of praise, parents think theyre building their childrens confidence, when, in fact, it may be just the opposite. Too much praise can backfire and, when given in a way thats insincere, make kids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of not being able to stay on top where their parents praise has put them.Still, dont go too far in the other direction. Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging gas giving too much. Kids will feel like theyre not good enough or that you dont care and, as a result, may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishments.So what is the right amount of praise? Experts say that the quality of praise is more important than the quantity. If praise is sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome, you can give it as often as your child does something that deserves a verbal reward. We should especially recognize our childrens efforts to push themselves and work hard to achieve a goal, says Donahue, author of Parenting Without Fear: Letting Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really Matters. One thing to remember is that its the process not the end product that matters.Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team. But if hes out there every day and playing hard, you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses. Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard, cook dinner, or finish a book report. But whatever it is, praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate(相称的)to the amount of effort your child has put into it._【思路点拨】作为概要写作，要注意每段归纳主题句和关键词，然后通过词汇替换，句式转变等多种方式，改写要点，要注意一定要用自己的语言，不可以完全照搬照抄。然后，添加衔接词，使得逻辑上要点之间能够通顺、流畅。最后要注意单词拼写不要出现错误，大小写和标点符号也是关键，还要注意字数的控制，不要少于40字或多于80字。【参考范文】Nowadays, parents tend to offer considerate praise to their children, hoping to boost their confidence, but it may produce the opposite effect.（要点1） However, no praise from parents also does harm to their self-confidence. （要点2） Therefore, expertsclaim that sincere praise should be given for the process not for the result. Meanwhile, kids do deserve praise if they strive to do their duty. （要点3） Anyway, the amount of praise you have depends on how hard they work. （要点4）5.【2019北京】书面表达(共两节，35分)第一节 (15分)51.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括:1.交通出行；2.必备衣物。注意:1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim，_Yours,Li Hua【思路点拨】考生成文时应注意：1. 要体现交际感，重视对来信内容的回答。2. 思路清晰，要点要齐全：首段表示欢迎，第二段介绍城市的交通出行和必备衣物等要点，结尾表达期待。3. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。【参考范文】Dear Jim，How is everything going? Im so happy to hear that you will come in China for travel in summer vacation. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable journey during in China. Now Ill offer you some travel tips, which, I hope, can solve your problems. As the popular tourist cities, Beijing, Tianjin and Shanghai have extremely convenient transportation. The subway systems can take you everywhere in the city.If you want a deep experience in the cities, shared bikes would be the best choice.As for city-to-city tour, the high-speed trains are highly recommended because they have been the most convenient way in recent years.As for clothes preparation, hats, sun glasses and sun-proof clothing would be necessary, considering you will come to China during the summer. Also, pack a pair of comfortable shoes in case of the city walk. I hope these suggestions above will be of some help toy you.I am looking forward to hearing from you. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.Yours，Li Hua第二节(20分)52.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述整个过程。注意:词数不少于60。提示词:西瓜watermelon_【思路点拨】该情景作文的主题是“劳动最光荣”，四幅图的要点：老师在黑板上写下活动主题“劳动最光荣”；“打包行李出发去乡下”；“在乡下摘西瓜”；“和家长吃饭，回忆一天的劳动旅程”。在行文时应该注意思路清晰，条理清楚，文章最后应该升华主题。【参考范文】Last week, we held the class meeting and our teacher informed us of the news that an activity themed Glory of Labor would be held. When On hearing that, we were extremely excited and couldnt resist the desire to be involved in it. We regarded it as a wonderful opportunity to experience the real life. Then I returned home to prepare the luggage. I packed my necessities into it which included some clothes, towels and the water glass. I couldnt wait to experience the activity. We came to the watermelon patch and were divided into several groups and got down to work. Some students were responsible for picking the watermelons; some students put the watermelons into the baskets while others carried the baskets filled with watermelons to the specified place. Tired as we were, we were in high spirits. After getting the task finished, I returned home and recalled the whole day, sharing my excitement with my parents. An overwhelming sense of pride came over me.It was through this experience that I realized that labor is glorious. Never could it fade from my mind and I expected another activity like this.6.【2019天津】书面表达（满分25分）61.假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:（1）你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；（2）选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；（3）希望从中有何收获。注意：（1）词数不少于100：（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。Dear Chris，Im Li Jim，a student at Chenguang High School._Thank you for your time.Yours，Li Jin【思路点拨】 随着时代的发展，电子邮件越来越受广大中学生的欢迎，所以写电子邮件是中学生经常做的事，这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到熟悉。考生成文时应注意：1. 要点要齐全：(1)讲座的话题；(2)选该话题的原因；(3)该话题你感兴趣的内容；(4) 希望从中有所收获2. 时态：以一般现在时为主；3. 人称：第一人称为主，辅以第二人称；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅；5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。【参考范文】One possible versionDear Chris, Im Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School. Learning that you will give us a presentation about art in western countries during the coming summer holidays, were more than delighted. Most of us prefer western painting. Several reasons may account for my preference. For one thing, Im interested to learn how western art has developed into what it is today through history, and the most influential artists in each period of its development. For another, Im crazy to learn how to appreciate western paintings. Last but not least, It would be better if you can tell us some tricks about how to paint. I hope your presentation will contribute to our better understanding of western paintings. Thank you for your time.Yours,Li Jin7.【2019江苏】书面表达(满分25 分)81.请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。Li Jiang:Have you heard this？A group of exchange students from the UK are visiting our school next month.Su Hua:Yes，I have. Some are already recommending the traditional Chinese dress for the welcome ceremony.Li Jiang:But it seems people have different opinions.Su Hua:What do you think？Li Jiang:I think its a good idea. Its an opportunity to make the Chinese culture better known to international students.Su Hua:I agree. But we dont have to dress that way. Thats not our daily style. Besides，its not very convenient.Li Jiang:You see. Its the Chinese culture that the British friends are coming for. Just the right occasion.Su Hua:I prefer the school uniform. Its nice. Its also a better display of our school culture.【写作内容】1.用约30个词概括上述信息的主要内容；2.在上述场合，你是否倾向于穿中国传统服装？请说明理由(不少于两点)。【写作要求】1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.不必写标题。【评分标准】内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。_【参考范文】Possible version one:Li Jiang and Su Hua are discussing what to wear when receiving the British students next month. Li recommends the traditional Chinese dress while Su prefers the school uniform.I would be happy to wear traditional Chinese clothes at the welcome ceremony. Firstly, this is precisely what the British visitors are expecting. They come to learn about Chinese culture with their own eyes. Their Chinese peers in the typical Chinese dress would be highly impressive. The school uniforms are fine, but not special enough to give a unique Chinese flavour. Secondly, the inconvenience is not a problem if our purpose is to share Chinese culture. It is just the so-called inconvenience that displays the richness, delicacy and great fascination of Chinese culture with a history of thousands of years.The traditional Chinese clothes, it seems to me, will make the occasion very Chinese and inviting to the British guests.Possible version two:Li Jiang and Su Hua dont agree on what to wear when greeting the British students Li suggests traditional Chinese clothes while Su thinks the school uniforms are more suitable.I prefer the school uniform to the traditional Chinese dress at the welcome ceremony next month. Although the traditional Chinese dress may look more beautiful and stylish, it is a little bit strange to walk around in it. We feel at ease in our school uniforms every day. Whats more, the traditional Chinese dress cant reflect the unique culture of our school. From the design and colour of our uniforms, the British friends will learn more about our school. Besides, the choice of the traditional Chinese dress means extra money, and extra time, for we have to change it back after the event.So the school uniforms are a better choice than the traditional Chinese dress for such an occasion.【思路点拨】本篇书面表达要求考生根据所提供的对话信息提示写一篇文章，总结上述是否穿中国传统服饰接待外国来客的现象，阐述你是否倾向于穿中国传统服饰，并用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。文章为任务型读写，属于议论文，写作时应以第一人称为主，第二人称为辅；一般现在时为主，一般将来时为辅。考生首先应当仔细阅读所提供的对话文字，明确其主旨；接着最后在此基础上合理安排好文章结构。本文可以从支持穿中国服饰和反对中国传统服饰观点中任选一进行阐述，书写是可用三段写作：第一段用约30词概括是否穿中国传统服饰接待外国来客的现象，提出文章主题；第二、三段指出你赞成穿中国传统服饰或反对穿中国传统服饰来接待外国来客，然后用2-3个理由或论据来支撑你的看法。在遣词造句上，应当注意合理使用连接成分，以提高文章的逻辑性，如在列举理由时可以用Firstly，secondly，besides，whats more等；还应尽量使用较复杂的句型如，使用名词性从句，状语从句，形式主语it等等。2019年高考名校经典模拟试题1.【东北三省四市2019届高三二模联考】校学生会计划举办“汉语桥”活动，你受学生会委托写一则通知，邀请你校美国留学生参加此活动。内容包括：1. 介绍活动的意义；2. 邀请美国留学生参加动员会 the pep rally；3. 动员会的时间、地点。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结语已为你写好。NoticeDear overseas students from America_The Students Union【答案】NoticeDear American overseas students,Here comes the news that Chinese Bridge series activities will be held in our school. So all of participants are warmly welcome in the pep rally to get fully prepared for th
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