2016改革后新专业四级英语写作开头技巧.ppt

2016改革后新专业四级英语写作开头技巧 内容摘要 写作新题型考的是summary comment 这种题型看似新颖 其实更加简单 明显不同的是开头需要summarize Comment部分不一定要写考生自己的观点 完全可以摘取阅读材料中现成的观点稍作展开 这样考生至少从头到尾不愁 无话可说 Readcarefullytheopinionsfrombothsidesandgiveyourviewontheissue 新样题中的 阅读材料 由原来的一段话变成了对某个issue的正反双方鲜明对立的几段文字 并且题目明确要求考生先summarizebriefly summary应该用原文四分之一的文字表达原文的主要观点 新专四的样题阅读材料原文一般200词左右 这样概述以后大概保留80字左右 对于一篇总共200字左右的考试作文 这样的开头会让整体结构不太匀称 因此也可以稍微再做压缩到50 60 Inrecentyears traditionalprintednewspaperhasfacedaseriouschallenge TheChristianScienceMonitorbecamethefirstnationalnewspapertoshutdownitsprintedition andrecently theworldfamousmagazineNewsweekannouncedthatitwouldsoonceasepublishingonpaperandshifttoanonline onlyformat Willtheprintednewspaperonedaybereplacedbyonlinenewspaper Somebelievesowhilemanystillholdanoptimisticviewonthefutureoftraditionalnewspaper Readcarefullytheopinionsfrombothsidesandwriteyourresponseinabout200words inwhichyoushouldfirstsummarizebrieflytheopinionsfrombothsidesandgiveyourviewsontheissue EXERCISE1 Traditionalcharacters whichdatebacktomorethan2000yearsago haveamorebeautifulappearanceandamorereasonablestructure Traditionalcharactersmakemoresenseconveytraditionalvaluesandcanthereforerepresenttraditionalculture Fortwomillennia Chinesehistoricalrecordsandclassicworkswerewrittenintraditionalcharacters Tobeabletoreadthemandinherittraditionalculture weneedtobringtraditionalcharactersback Politically itisalsonecessarytorestoretraditionalChinesecharacters Currently traditionalcharactersarestillinuseinHongKong TaiwanandmanyChinesecommunitiesaroundtheworld Restoringthemcancontributetocross straitsexchangesandnationalreunificationanduniteChinesepeoplearoundtheworld YES Intoday sworldefficiencymattersmost Traditionalcharacters whichusuallyhavemorestrokesthansimplifiedones aremoredifficulttolearn Bycontrast simplifiedcharactersaremucheasiertolearnanduse Overthepast50years lotsofclassictextshavebeenturnedintosimplifiedcharacterversions whichmeanssimplifiedcharacterscanalsopromoteandpreservetraditionalculture ConstantsimplificationhasbeenatrendintheevolutionofChinesecharacters Fromtheoraclebonesscriptof3000yearsagototraditionalcharacters theChinesewritingsystemhasalwaysbeenslimmingdownforbettercommunication NO Markswillbeawardedforcontentrelevance contentsufficiency organizationandlanguagequality Failuretofollowtheaboveinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks 找出对立双方的主要论点感觉有难度 简单的办法是用句子代替词组 注意尽量不要照抄原文 实在感觉个别观点有难度还可以忽略 WhenitcomestosimplifiedChinesecharacters 或WhenitcomestowhetherweshouldrevivetraditionalChinesecharacters people sviewsvaryfromonetoanother Someclaimthatweshouldadoptthepolicyforaesthetical culturalandpoliticalbenefits Others however contendthatsimplifiedversionsarebetterchoicebecausetheyareeasiertolearn slimmerforbettercommunicationandalsohelpfultopreservetraditionalculture Frommyperspective itiswisetochoosetraditional simplifiedversionsforthefollowingreasons YESThenewmedia suchastheInternetandmobilephoneapplications haveexertedagreatinfluenceonpeople slife Onlinenewspaperisfast instant andconvenient whiletheprintednewspaperoftenrespondsslowlytothelatestnews Peoplearenowusedtoreadingonlinenewspaperontheirsmartphones andnoonehasthepatienceofwaitingfortheprintednewspaper Onlinenewspaperisalsoenvironment friendly whichisinaccordwiththetrendofsavingenergyintoday sworld Theprintednewspaperconsumesalargenumberofnaturalresources andwill inthelongterm begraduallyreplaced Themultipleservices suchaspostingcommentsandfindingrelatednewsthroughthelinksprovidedbyonlinenewspaperhavegreatlyenrichedpeople sreadingexperiencesandknowledge Traditionalnewspapercanhardlycompeteinthissense EXERCISE2 NOTherearestillalargenumberofpeopleintheworldwhohavenoaccesstotheInternet Forthesepeople printednewspaperisanimportantwaytoknowaboutthelatesteventsathomeandabroad Althoughtheprintednewspapercannotbeasfast respondingastheonlinenewspaper itstillcanprovidemanyin depthreportsandanalyticalarticlesforreaders Manycolumnwritersareinvitedtowritespecialfeaturereportsfortheprintednewspaper Onlinenewspaper ontheotherhand isonlysuitableforfastreading Manyreadersprefertoreadtheprintednewspaperfortheydonotlikestaringatthecomputerorcellphonescreen Printednewspaperisalsopreferredbytheelderlypeople 难以抗拒的网络报纸潮流审题思路 本题讨论的是在网络媒体的冲击下 传统报纸是否会被网络报纸所取代 在具体行文方面 应首先根据材料简要概括正反两方的观点 正方认为网络报纸优势明显 反方则认为纸质报纸仍然有存在的理由 然后提出自己的观点 纸质报纸最终会消失 并给出论据 最后总结全文 重申观点 Withtheadventofinformationtechnology thetraditionalmediaarepushedtothecornerandarestrugglingtosurvive Surprisingly notallpeoplearehailingthebirthofonlineversionnews SomepeoplebelievethattraditionalprintednewspaperisirreplaceablesincealargenumberofpeoplestillhavenoaccesstotheInternet However othersbelievethatthedemiseofprintedversionisathand Beingfasterandmoreconvenient cellphonesandpersonalcomputershaveledustoapaper freelifestyle TheIrresistibleTrendofOnlineNewspaper AsfarasIamconcerned itisirresistiblethattheprintednewspaperwilldemisewhiletheonlinenewspaperwillprosper Asthemodernlifepicksupspeed newsisreportedateveryturn 到处 Newsisnolongernewwhenprintedonpaper Whiletheprintingprocessoftraditionalnewspapertakeshours anditsdistributionmaytakeevenlongertime theelectronictransmissionofnewsontheInternetmayonlytakeacoupleofseconds evenincludingvideosandaudios Besides youngpeople thelargestnumberofconsumers prefertoreadnewsviacellphoneorlaptop Bythesedevices userscanshareandcommentonthenews whichenablesthemtoenrichtheirknowledgeandmindinashorttime Inconclusion Ifirmlyholdtheideathattheonlinenewspaperwilldominatethemarketinthefutureandtheprintednewspaperwillbedisplayedinthemuseumrepresentingaperiodofhistory Readcarefullythefollowingexcerptonterm timeholidayargumentsintheUK andthenwriteyourresponseinNOLESSTHAN200words inwhichyoushould Summarizethemainmessageoftheexcerptandthencommentonwhetherparentsshouldtakechildrenoutofschoolforholidayduringtemtimeinordertosavemoney Youshouldsupportyourselfwithinformationfromtheexcerpt Markswillbeawardedforcontentrelevance contentsufficiency organizationandlanguagequality Failuretofollowtheaboveinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks EXERCISE3 TermtimeholidayswillbeBanned ParentsaretobebannedbyMichaelGove theEducationSecretary fromtakingtheirchildrenoutofschooltosavemoneyonholidays Heistoabolishtherightofheadteachersto authoriseabsence fromtheclassroom whichhasbeenusedtoletfamiliestaketerm timebreaks andwillwarnthemtheyfacefinesfortheirchildrennotbeingatschool Anytimeoutofschoolhasthepotentialtodamageachild seducation aseniorsourceattheDepartmentforEducationsaidthisweekend Thatiswhythegovernmentwillendthedistinctionbetweenauthorisedandunauthorisedabsence Thisispartofthegovernment swidercommitmenttobringdowntruancylevelsinourschools Therewillalsobestricterpenaltiesforparentsandschools ThetoughmeasuresontruancyarepartofawiderattemptbyMr Govetomakeeducationmoreacademicallyrigorousandtotackleacultureintheeducationalestablishmentwhichhebelieveshasaccepted excusesforfailure RussellHobby thegeneralsecretaryoftheNationalAssociationofHeadTeachers saidthemeasurewoulddiscourageparentsfromtryingtoputpressureonheadstosanctiontermtimeholidays Thehighcostofholidaysoutsideoftermtimeisstillanissuebutultimatelyachild seducationismoreimportantthanaholiday hesaid WhichIsMoreImportant EducationoraCheaperHoliday sample1NewresearchhasshownthatalmostfouroutoftenparentsintheUKhavetakentheirchildrenoutofschooltogoonholidays Costisthemainreasongivenbyparentsforsacrificingtheirchildren seducation Parentsaretobebanned however byUK sEducationAuthority fromtakingtheirchildrenoutofschoolforholidayduringtermtime Tobeginwith takingtoughmeasuresonthiskindoftruancyisconducivetothenormalteachingprocess oneofthekeyelementstoguaranteekid sacademicperformance Asweknow currently teachershavethediscretiontoapproveacertaintimeofabsencefromschoolforeachchild whichissupposedtobeforillnessandisnotsupposedtobegrantedforholidays Bydefinitelyabolishingtherightofheadteachersto authorizeabsence fromtheclassroom thoseteacherscanrarelybepesteredbyparentswhowanttotakechildrentogoonaholidayjusttosavemoney whichseverelydisruptsteachingprocess What smore withoutstrictpenaltiesimposedontheparentswholeadtotheirkid splayingtruant thoseparentscangraduallyviewaskingforholidayleaveasaright Oncethisculturalexpectationisformed theleveloftruancywilldramaticallyincrease Accordingly thegrowingtrendofterm timeholidaysshouldbebannedwithnodelay Inthisway teacherscanimpartknowledgewithoutdisturbanceandparentswillbedeterredfromsavingmoneyattheexpenseofsacrificingtheirkid seducation Sample2Whenitcomestowhetherparentsshouldtaketheirchildrentospendholidaysduringterm time viewsontheissuevaryfrompersontoperson Parentsclaimthatbydoingso theycansavealotofmoneybornofbusyschoolholidays Educationalofficialsstronglyopposethistendencyonthegroundthatitencouragestruancy whichinturndamagesachild seducation Frommyperspective themeritsofbanningterm timeholidaysoutweighitsdemerits Shouldlocalauthoritiesstaggerschoolholidaystoenablefamilieswithchildrentotakeadvantageoftravelbargains Orisitwrongforparentstojeopardizetheirchildren seducationforthesakeofacheaperholiday AsfarasIamconcerned educationismoreimportant Firstly children seducationmustcomefirst Acheapholidayduringtheschoolseasonshouldn tbethereasontotakeachildoutofschool Someparentsarenotwillingtosacrificeorscheduletheirlivesintermsoftheirchildren sneeds Thiskindofattitudewillinfluencetheirchildrendeeply It snowondersomanykidsarenotinterestedinschoolanddon ttaketheirstudyseriously Secondly schoolisn tdaycarecenter It saneducationalinstitutionthatneedseverystudenttofollowitsrules Takingachildonholidaywhenschoolisinsessionwilldisturbtheorderoftheschool Besides itisdisruptiveforthechild becausehewillhavetocatchupwhenhereturns Allinall takingchildrenoutofschoolforacheaperholidayisirresponsiblebehavior Thoseparentswouldriskbeingfinedfinanciallyandmorally It snotonlykidsthatneedtogrowup alotofparentsneedtoaswell