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（32）短文改错三1、假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文,文中共有10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除: 把多余的词用斜线() 划掉。修改: 在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词: 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起) 不计分。 Ted, a British boy, along with his parents were invited to visit a Chinese calligraphy exhibition in London on last Saturday. They were exciting to have such a good chance to have a close look at the traditional Chinese culture. On the show they enjoyed various fine work with great admiration. To their joy, they saw some Chinese artists giving live performances with brush pens. Ted couldnt help approach an elderly Chinese artist, which was writing attentively with a big brush pen. Ted watched with great interest but asked the artist to show her how to use the brush pen. The artist agreed and gave him some instruction patiently. Then Ted couldnt wait to have try. He admit he was deeply attracted by the Chinese calligraphy.2、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。 It has been a long time since I did anything good for the environment. Feeling responsible to protect the environment, I decided to take the action again. I told my idea to my friends and we planned to plant tree on the hill in the countryside. We came to the foot of the hill and selected a place where looked suitably and settled down. We spend a few hours digging holes and placing the young seedlings. Then we wrote our wishes on cards one to one and buried it deep down the roots of the trees. We also took a lot of pictures. We were such busy that we didnt realize that it was time to go back. I felt really glad that we made difference to the environment.3、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。Nowadays many people drive instead of taking a bus or walking to work. It causes more traffic jam: and accidents. As the student, what can we do to guarantee our safe? First of all, the traffic rules must be strict obeyed. When we cross streets, wait until the traffic light turn green. Next, dont forget walk on the pavement. Finally, I think it very dangerously to wear headphones while walking or cycling. Since we cant pay enough attention on the traffic around us, so accidents may happen. Taking good care of ourselves and dont let our parents worry about us.4、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。 All students from our class go to the exhibition displaying Chinas outstanding achievements in last month.As soon as we arrived,a guide gave us a introduction to the exhibition.While listen,we made some notes carefully.We felt excitedly and couldnt wait to start the visit.We were both inspired by the various exhibits,including the models of the high-speed train.We took a lot of photo and were proud of the achievements of our country. The next day,we decided have a class meeting to present which we had seen.Immediately we devoted ourselves to prepare the presentations.5、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ) 并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。 During my childhood, I only had a tiny bit of privacy. I didnt have my own room and have to share one with my two young brothers. When I was fifteen years old, our family moved in a new house and I got my own room. Since then, my parents have seldom e into my room and I have had a privacy pletely. While it was still necessary for my parents to support me economically and mentally at that time, I was old enough to think and decide by myself which I should do. I wanted my privacy to be respect and thought it was important for me to bee an adult. I agree that get my own place and being independence are two important ways for me to preserve privacy. By the way, I also agree that every child thinks privacy is important. Maybe its only important to those children who are mature, such as myself.6、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。 I didnt realize the importance of working in groups since I was chosen the monitor of my class in high school. At first, I did most of the duties myself when other students cared much about class activities. As a result, I was tired out and depressing. Then I turned to my teacher and he gave me some advice on how to cooperate well with other. However, I begin to realize the power of my classmates and have everyone do his part in class. From my experience, I strong feel that it is working in teams instead of on my own that has freed me from trouble and made me work efficiently. So we need the teamwork spirit in our lives.7、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。 Journey to the West is a fantastic story setting in the Tang dynasty. When opening the book, you would read an exciting story. Tangseng and his three panions went through adventurous experience to get the scriptures(经文) , which could be beneficial for ordinary people. They made the long and hard journey westwards to achieve their dream. The Monkey King, also was called Sun Wukong,managed to fight against all kinds of difficulties. Therefore, the Monkey King as a symbol of being bravery and determined is deeply loved by our Chinese. The story is so amazing that it is very worth reading, I believe you can learn more about Chinese culture from this book.8、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(), 并在其下写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。 Jack lives in a smaller town inEngland. He usually stayed in his own country during the holidays. Last year, he decided to go toRussiaand stayed there for a few day. One day, he went out for walk. InEngland, people drive on the left side of the road. And inRussia, they drive on the right, which Jack forgot. When crossed a busy street, she was almost knocked down by a car. Jack stood here for a moment, full of fear. Shortly after he recovered from himself, he said: “Where am I?” An old man which sold maps nearby ran to Jack at once and said: “Maps of the city, sir?”答案以及解析1答案及解析：答案： Ted, a British boy, along with his parents invited to visit a Chinese calligraphy exhibition in London on last Saturday. They were to have such a good chance to have a close look at the traditional Chinese culture. On the show they enjoyed various fine with great admiration. To their joy, they saw some Chinese artists giving live performances with brush pens. Ted couldnt help an elderly Chinese artist, was writing attentively with a big brush pen. Ted watched with great interest asked the artist to show how to use the brush pen. The artist agreed and gave him some instruction patiently. Then Ted couldnt wait to have try. He he was deeply attracted by the Chinese calligraphy.解析：考査主谓一致.along with不是并列连词.不连接并列成分,谓语动词的单复数取决于最前面的主语。考查介词。last Saturdy前不能加介词,故去掉on考查形容词。形容同exdted形容人的状态考査名词。work表示“作品”时是可数名词,因此.“各种各样精美的作品”应为 various fine works。在考査非谓语动柯。cant/couldnt help doing sth.是固定短语,意为“忍不住做了某事”。考查定语从句先行词。artist指人,故应用关系代词who引导非限制性定语从句,且who在从句中作主语考查并列连词。根据句意可知,上下文之间为顺承关系,故应将bill 改为and.考查代词根据句意可知,此处show的宾语为Ted,故应将her改为him。考査冠词。have a try是固定短语,意为“试一试”。考查动词的时态.全文以一般过去时为主体叙事时态,故应将admit改为其过去式.2答案及解析：答案： It has been a long time since I did good for the environment. Feeling responsible to protect the environment, I decided to take the action again. I told my idea to my friends and we planned to plant on the hill in the countryside. We came to the foot of the hill and selected a place looked and settled down. We a few hours digging holes and placing the young seedlings. Then we wrote our wishes on cards one one and buried deep down the roots of the trees. We also took a lot of pictures. We were busy that we didnt realize that it was time to go back. I felt really glad that we made difference to the environment.解析：考查不定代词。something常用于肯定句中;而anything常用于疑问句或否定句中。考査固定短语。take action是固定短语,意为“采取行动”故把the去掉。考査名词。tree是可数名词,根据句意可知此处应为复数形式.考丧定语从句。分析句子结构可知,定语从句中缺主语,因此应将关系副词where改为关系代词that或which来引导定语从句.修饰先行词 place.考查形容词.此处look是系动词,表示“看起来”,其后接形容词作表语。考査动词的时态全文以一般过去时为主体时态,因此应将spend改为spent .考査介间。one by one是固定短语,意为“一个接一个地”.考查代词。根据句意可知,此处的代同指代的是前文中的cards,因此应使用复数形式them.考查状语从句。busy是形容词,其前应用so,构成so.that结构,意为“如此以至于”。考査冠词。make a difference to sth.是固定短语,意为“对.有影响”。3答案及解析：答案：Nowadays many people drive instead of taking a bus or walking to work. It causes more traffic : and accidents. As student, what can we do to guarantee our ? First of all, the traffic rules must be obeyed. When we cross streets, wait until the traffic light green. Next, dont forget walk on the pavement. Finally, I think it very to wear headphones while walking or cycling. Since we cant pay enough attention the traffic around us, so accidents may happen. good care of ourselves and dont let our parents worry about us.解析：考查名词。jam作“拥挤,堵塞”讲时为可数名词,其前有more修饰. 故此处应用其复数形式。考查冠词。此处表示泛指,故应将定冠词the改为不定冠词。考查名词。由语境可知.guarantee的宾语应该是名词,故将形容词 safe改为其名词形式safely。考查副词。此处修饰动词.PV:用副词,故将形容词strict改为其副词形式 strictly.考查主谓一致全文主体叙事时态为一般现在时,在until引导的时间状语从句中,主语the traffic light是单数,故谓语动词turn应用第三人称单数形式。考查非谓语动词。forget后接不定式作宾语,forget to do sth.总为“忘记要去做某事”考查形容词。本句为“think + it(形式宾语)+adj.(形容词作宾语补足语)+不定式(真正的宾语)”结构,故将dangerously改为dangerous。考査介词。pay attention to sth.是固定短语,意为“注意某事”考查连词。该句含有从属连同since引导的原因状语从句,故主句前的连词so多余,应删除。考查祈使句。此句为and连接的两个祈使句,故应以动词原形开头。4答案及解析：答案： All students from our class to the exhibition displaying Chinas outstanding achievements in last month.As soon as we arrived,a guide gave us introduction to the exhibition.While ,we made some notes carefully.We felt and couldnt wait to start the visit.We were inspired by the various exhibits,including the models of the high-speed train.We took a lot of and were proud of the achievements of our country. The next day,we decided have a class meeting to present we had seen.Immediately we devoted ourselves to the presentations.解析：考查动词的时态。根据时间状语month可知,谓语动词应用一般过去时。考查介词。时间状语以last开头时,其前不能加介词。考查冠词。名词introduction以元音音素开头,其前应用不定冠词a。考査省略句。当时间状语从句的主语和主句主语一致,且从句中含有be动词时,可将从句的主语和be动词一起省略,即“While (we were) listening, we made some notes carefully。考査形容词。feel是系动词.其后接形容词作表语,故应将副词excitedly 改为 excited。考查代词。根据全文第一句可知,both(两者都)不符合文意,应改为all表示“三者或三者以上都”。考查名词。photo是可数名词,“很多照片”要用a lot of photos。考査非谓语动词。表示“决定做某事”时,decide后跟不定式作宾语, 因此在have前添加to。考查宾语。从句句意:第二天我们决定举行一个班会,把我们看到的东西呈现出来此处应由what引导从句作present的宾语,且what在从句中作had seen的宾语。考査非谓语动词。在动词短语devote oneself to中.to是介词跟动名词作宾语。5答案及解析：答案： During my childhood, I only had a tiny bit of privacy. I didnt have my own room and to share one with my two brothers. When I was fifteen years old, our family moveda new house and I got my own room. Since then, my parents have seldom e into my room and I have had a privacy pletely. While it was still necessary for my parents to support me economically and mentally at that time, I was old enough to think and decide by myself I should do. I wanted my privacy to be and thought it was important for me to bee an adult. I agree that my own place and being are two important ways for me to preserve privacy. By the way, I also agree that every child thinks privacy is important. Maybe its only important to those children who are mature, such as .解析：考査动词的时态:作者在回忆自己的童年往事,应用一般过去时.故将have改为had。考査形容词 “我的两个弟弟要用my two younger brothers。考査动词短语move in不及物,其后不接宾语,若要接宾语,应将in 改为into。考查冠词privacy是不可数名词,不能加不定冠词。考査宾语从句此处应用what引导从句作decide的宾语,且what在从句中作do的宾语,意为“什么”。考查非谓语动词动词wanted的宾语my privacy和respect之间是逻辑上的被动关系,故应用be respected作宾语补足语。考查非谓语动词:在that引导的宾语从句中,and连接两个动名词短语作主语。考查形容词bee是系动词,后跟形容词作表语。考查部分否定根据下文可知,此处指“不是每一个孩子都认为隐私是重要的”,every与not连用可表示部分否定,因此在every前加not。考査代词such 中的as是介词,后接宾格me作宾语;反身代词必须与句子主语为同一主体。6答案及解析：答案： I didnt realize the importance of working in groups I was chosen the monitor of my class in high school. At first, I did most of the duties myself other students cared about class activities. As a result, I was tired out and . Then I turned to my teacher and he gave me some advice on how to cooperate well with . , I to realize the power of my classmates and have everyone do his part in class. From my experience, I feel that it is working in teams instead of on my own that has freed me from trouble and made me work efficiently. So we need the teamwork spirit in our lives.解析：考查连词。根据句意“直到上高中被选为班长,我才意识到团队合作的重要性。”可知,此处为not.until句型,意为“直到才”。考査冠词。表示独一无二的职位名称前不用冠同,故删除monitor前的the。考査连词:句意:起初,大部分职责都是我自己承担,而其他同学几乎不关心班级活动由句意可知应用连同while连接.考査副词。上下文的对比关系提示该处应用表示否定含义的副词, 故将much改为little。考査形容词.形容词depressed用来形容人的状态.考査代词。此处表示“其他人”应是复数概念,故将other改为others.考査副同:根据句意可知,上下文之间为因果关系,故应将However 改为 Therefore/Thus.考査动词的时态.第一段是作者回忆的往事,应用一般过去时,故将begin 改为 began.考查副同。副词修饰动词feel。考査副词的比较级此处表示工作更加高效了。 efficiently多音节词,应在其前加more构成比较级.7答案及解析：答案： Journey to the West is a fantastic story in the Tang dynasty. When opening the book, you read an exciting story. Tangseng and his three panions went through adventurous to get the scriptures(经文) , which could be beneficial ordinary people. They made long and hard journey westwards to achieve their dream. The Monkey King, also was called Sun Wukong,managed to fight against all kinds of difficulties. Therefore, the Monkey King as a symbol of being and determined is deeply loved by Chinese. The story is so amazing that it is worth reading, I believe you can learn more about Chinese culture from this book.解析：考査非谓语动词。set与它修饰的名词story之间为逻辑上的被动关系,故应将现在分词setting改为过去分词set.考査动词的时态。句意:当你打开这本书的时候.你将读到一个令人兴奋的故事,故应改为一般将来时。考查名词。experience在此处指“经历”,故应改为复数名词,泛指“许多冒险的经历。考査介词。be beneficial to是固定搭配,意为“对有益处”。考查冠词。此处泛指“一次漫长而又艰难的向西之旅”,故应将the改为不定冠词a。考查非谓语动词。此句的谓语动词是managed,应将was called改为非谓语形式,故去掉was,用过去分词called作后置定语修饰主语The Monkey King。考杏治容词。and连接两个并列的形容词作being的表语,故应将名词bravery改为形容词brave。考查代词。句意:因此,美猴王作为勇敢和坚定的象征,被我们中国人深深地喜爱。介词by后应用宾格us,Chinese是其同位语。考査副词。sth. be well worth doing是习惯搭配,意为“很值得做某事。考査并列连词。在英语中,逗号不能连接两个句子,根据上下文的递进关系可知,应添加并列连词and。8答案及解析：答案： Jack lives in a town inEngland. He usually in his own country during the holidays. Last year, he decided to go toRussiaand stayed there for a few . One day, he went out for walk. InEngland, people drive on the left side of the road. in Russia, they drive on the right, which Jack forgot. When a busy street, was almost knocked down by a car. Jack stood for a moment, full of fear. Shortly after he recovered from himself, he said: “Where am I?” An old man sold maps nearby ran to Jack at once and said: “Maps of the city, sir?”解析：考查形容同此处没有比较的对象,故应将smaller改为原级。考查动词的时态由usually可知此句表示现阶段的状态,故位为一般现在时。考查名词day是可数名词.其前的a few与复数名词连用.故将day 改为days.考查冠词go for a walk是固定短语,意为“去散步”考查并列连词上下文之间为转折关系,故将And改为But.考查省略句在时间状语从句中,当主句的主语与从句的主语一致, 且从句含有be动词时,可将从句主语和be动词一起省略,即“When (he was) crossing a busy street.由此可知应将 crossed 改为crossing.考査代词。此处人称代词指代Jack.故应将she改为he。考査副词。句意:杰克在那儿站了一会儿,充满恐惧此处应用there指上文提到的a busy street。考査介词。recover oneself表示“恢复(适当的状态或位置)”。考査定语从句。先行词man指人,应用关系代词who或that引导定语从句,且关系代词在从句中作主语。
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