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EnglishWriting LectureNotesYoungSir Therearetwototallydifferentopinionsonthematter Manyexpertsadvocatetheendingofthedivisionofthescienceandtheart Theypointoutthattheseparationofsbjectsgreatlyaffectsthequalityofourpeople Ithasresultedinmanyartstudents lackingthespiritofexploringscienceaswellassomesciencestudents notcaringforimportantissues suchassocietyandhumanbeings Withoutthedivision studentsarelikelytodevelopall roundabilities However manystudentsandparentsstronglyopposetheopinion sayingthatcancelingtheseparationofsbjectsmeansputtingmorepressureandburdensonstudents whilefocusingonfewercoursesenablessstoexcelinsomespecificareas Furthermore eachsshashis herstrengthsandweaknesses whichneedstoberespected Frommypointofview eventhoughoursocietyneedsexpertsratherthan Jackofalltradesandmasterofnone separatingsubjectstooearlyisn tgoodforss futuredevelopment What smore itisunrealistictotalkaboutthehissueifthecurrentexamsystemisn treformed ThereforetheMMMhadbettertakeacautiousattitudetowardstheproblem evencastoutunlesstheirstudentsdowellintheexams Sinceteachersarejudgedbythegradestheirstudentsachieveintheexams theyhavenochoicebuttogivestudentssomuchhomework Besides inmostcases examscanbetoodifficult AsfarasI mconcerned Frommypointofview onmypart theproblemliesinthecurrenteducationsystem Tosolvetheproblem weneedtomakegreatadjustment Firstly thegovernmentistoimprovethecurrentevaluationsystemineducation takingpracticalmeasurestolightenstudents burden Besides parentsandteachersshouldn tattachtoomuchimportancetostudents grades Afterall therealpurposeofeducationistodevelopstudents abilities notjusttogetstudentstoachievehighgrades Howtopresentyourfeelings Lookingbackupontheincident Thinkingbacktotheexperiencein I mgreatlytouched shocked upset proud inspired Ifeelstronglythatunityispower strength Iamovercomewiththecohesionofournation IfeelproudtobeaChinese Ifeellucky honoured gladtohavebeenhelpfultoothers IknowIcan tchangetheworld butIcancontributemybitsonmyindividuallevel Solongaseveryonecontributeshisbit theworldwillbemorebeautifulandharmonious One scontribution thoughsmall canmakeadifference Justasanoldsayinggoes ajourneyof1000milesbeginswithastep Ican thelpfeeling butfeelangryabout atSb sevildeeds cruelty coldness ignorance Istronglyfeelthegreatresponsibiltyonourshoulders Wearetoworkhardtoequipourselveswithsolidfoundationandstrongabilitiestomakeourcountrymorepowerful Asisvividlydescribedinthechartabove greatchangesinownershiphavetakenplaceinChinaoverthelastdecade Thenumberofprivatecarshasincreasednearlyseventimesfrom2millionin1999toover15millionthisyear What sthereason Therearemainlytwofactorsleadingtothischange Foronething developmentineconomyplaysavitalrole Increasingincomesresultinmanypeople sowningprivatecars Foranotherthing timemeansmoneyinmodernsociety somanypeopleneedacartodobusinessontime Frommypointofview thisphenomenonwillcontiniueforaperiodoftime It struethatprivatecarsbringusalotofconvenience buttheproblemsarisingfromcarexplosioncan tbeignored Forexample theenvironmentwillbedamagedduetotoomuchpoisonousgasfromcars Somesocialproblemssuchastrafficjamswillalsoturnup 上大学是唯一出路吗 1增长学识 提高素养 利于择业2成功的路不只一条3学费高 就业难 Deareditor I mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwehavehadintherecentclassmeetingaboutwhetheritistheonlywayoutforstudentstogotocollege Themajorityofusconsideritverynecessarytogotocollege Theythinkitcanwidentheirknowledgeandimprovetheirqualities Onlyinthiswaycantheyfindbetterjobsaftergraduation Veryfew accountingforonly10 thinkitmakesnosensegoingtocollege becausethetuitionistoohighfortheir familiestoafford What smore itisnoeasytaskforcollegegraduatestoseeksatisfactoryjobs 30 however holdthebeliefthat allroadsleadtoRome Therefore itdoesn tmakeanydifferencewhethertogotocollegeornot Inmyopinion wecanreceiveabettereducationatcollege whichcangiveusanedgeoverothercandidatesinthefutureemploymentmarket IlikeSbecausehiscomediesandtragediesbringmeintoafantasticworld IadorehiminthathispoemsgetmetoenjoythebeautyoftheEnglishlanguage Iadmirehimforhiskeensights whichsetmethinkingandteachmehowtoleadameaningfullife Since lifeisastage weareallactorsandactresses Onthestage everyonehashisownroletoplayandIwilltrymybesttoplaytherolewell 第五部分书面表达 满分25分 学校里一些同学互相攀比 追求时髦和高档消费 请你根据下表中所提供的信息 写一篇题为 MyAttitudetoPursuitofFashioninSchool 的英文演讲稿 现象 仿明星发型 穿名牌衣服 名牌鞋子 使用高档手机 原因 追求美 爱面子 感觉很酷 你的看法 请考生自己拟定内容 列举两至三点 注意 1 对所给要点 逐一陈述 适当发挥 不要简单翻译 2 词数150左右 开头和结尾以及提示句已经写好 不计入总词数 3 信中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名 Goodafternoon everyone Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis MyAttitudetoPursuitofFashioninSchool Goodafternoon everyone Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis MyAttitudetoPursuitofFashioninSchool Thankyouforlistening Nowinourschoolthereisahotpursuitoffashion Somestudentsliveaveryexpensivelife Theyhavehairstyleslikethoseoffamousstarsandwearclothesandshoesoftopbrand Someuseexpensivemobilephones Personally Iunderstandwhytheydoso Firstly theyhopetolooksmartandspecial Secondly theyhighlyvalueothers respectandrecognition Inaddition itmakesthemfeelcool Inmyopinion westudentsshouldholdtherightvalues Itishowwebehaveratherthanhowweappearthatmakesuscool Itiswhatwehaveachievedratherthanwhatbrandwearewearingthatmakesusrespectable Itishowmuchwecareforothersratherthanhowmuchwespendongiftsandluxuriesthatmakesuscharming Ithinkitwillmakegreatsensetosavethemoneytohelpthosewhostillcan tmakeendsmeet 最近 某报正对是否恢复五一长假作调查 你对此完全赞同 请以苏华为笔名给该报写一封信 表明你的态度 说明此举将会有一石二鸟的作用 一方面可以刺激消费 对经济 尤其旅游业有利 另一方面 人们可以有更多时间同家人在一起 或者去祖国各地旅游度假 告诉读者如果今年五一有更长假期 作为一名高三学生 你计划怎样度过 说明理由 最后你希望该报继续关注此事 注意 1 信的开头结尾已经写好 不计入总词数 2 信中必须包含已给所有信息 不得出现自己和学校的真名 3 参考词汇 恢复五一长假 resumetheseven dayMayDayholiday刺激消费 stimulateconsumption DearEditor Iamwritingtotellyouthatitisaverygoodideaweresumethe7 dayMayDayholiday Bydoingso wecankilltwobirdswithonestone Foronething wecanstimulateconsumption whichwillhaveagoodeffectonoureconomy especiallytourismindustry Foranother peoplecanhavemoretimewiththeirfamilyortravelingacrossthecountry IfwehavealongerMayDayholidaythisyear asasenior3student Iwouldliketogobacktothecountrysidetoseemygrandma forIhaven tseenhersincetheSpringFestival ThenIwillmakeuseofthetimetogooverallthemistakesIhavemadeinthepastmodeltestpapersinthehopethatIwon tmakethesamemistakeagainintheentranceexaminationFinallyIhopeyouwillcontinuetofocusonthisissue 2009年高考在即 在学校举行高考百日冲刺誓师大会以后 高三全体学生目前正处在紧张复习迎考的氛围中 假如你叫李想 江苏省盐城中学高三学生 面对目前的压力 想和父母说说知心话 请你用英文在你的博客上用书信形式表达出来 主要内容如下 知心话感恩 关切鼓励 倾注爱心 对父母的期望1 多交流 使自己保持良好状态2 创造条件 给自己提供适时帮助学习打算考生自拟 至少写三点 Theannualcollegeentranceexaminationisaroundthecorner Onthisspecialoccasion howIwishIcouldhaveaheart to hearttalkwithyou Throughthoseyearsofmygrowingup Ialwaysfeelgratefultoyouforyourunselfishhelp careandlove Thankstoyourconstantencouragement Ihavebeenmakingremarkableprogressinmystudies ItwillbeaboutthreemonthsbeforeItaketheCollegeEntranceExamination whichmakesmeundergreatpressure Ineedfrequentsupport Youknow goodstudyingconditionsandtimelyhelpwilldomealotofgood MomandDad mydreamistheveryoneyoualwayshave IamfullyawareoftheresponsibilitiesIambearing IplantomakeadetailedstudyscheduleforthiscomingexaminationsothatIcanreviewlessonsandpractisesolvingproblemsofdifferentsubjects ItisalsonecessarythatIdosomephysicaltrainingonceinawhilesothatIcankeepfit Ifpossible asafamilymember Iwillalsohelpdosomehouseworktomakeyourelaxalittlebit IamquiteconfidentofmyfuturelifeandIdowishyougoodhealthandahappylife 为了保护自己的知识产权 微软公司2008年10月决定对盗版软件的使用采用 黑屏 的措施 此举在网上引起了轩然大波 请你更具下表中提供的信息 写一篇博客文章 对此事件进行综述 并表达自己的观点和建议 事件起由 2008年10月 为了保护自己的知识产权 微软公司决定对盗版用户采用 黑屏 的措施 此举在网上引起了轩然大波 微软观点1 公司投入资金研究新产品 应当获得利益回报 2 盗版软件让该公司每年蒙受几十亿美元的损失网民观点 1 正版价格太高 微软应考虑发展中和发达国家用户消费能力的差距 2 微软公司应当采取正当的法律手段反对盗版 不能侵犯消费者隐私 Inordertopreserveitsintellectualproperty inOctober 2008 Microsoftdecidedtoblackoutthedesktopscreenofpiratedsoftwareusers whichhasaroused stirredupaheateddiscussionontheInternet FromthepointofviewofMicrosoft sinceithasinvestedlargesumsofmoneyindevelopingnewproducts ithastheunquestionablerighttoprofitfromthem What sworse thecompany slossresultingfrompiratedsoftwarecanreachuptobillionsofUSdollarsannually Asaconsequence thismeasureisnodoubtamust Nevertheless netizensthinkabsolutelydifferently Inthefirstplace largenumbersofpeoplehavenoalternativesbuttousepiratedsoftware justbecausetheycan tbearthehighpriceofthelegitimatecopy andfacingthissituation thecompanyhastheresponsibilitytotakeitintoaccountthatthereexistsawidegapinpurchasingpowerbetweendevelopinganddevelopedcountries Inthesecondplace thecompanyshouldfightagainstpiracyinaproperandlegalway Asitis ithasinfringedontheprivacyoftheusersconcerned andcausedgreatlosstothem AsfarasI mconcerned ononehand weshoulddoeverythinginourpowertostopusingpiratedsoftwareinordertoencouragecompaniestodevelopmoreadvancedproducts Ontheotherhand companieslikeMicrosoftneedtotakewisermeasurestoprotectthemselves Afterall extremeactioncan tsolveproblemsatall Howtobuildaneconomizedsociety P189 Ourgovernmentisaimingtobuildaneconomizedsociety Itiseverybody sdutytoworkhardtoachievethisgoalincludingusstudents Recently thestatisticsinthereportofacertainschoolintwoschooltermssuggestthattheexpensesofelectricity waterandpaperaresurprisinglylargeandgrowingrapidly whichdrawsourattention Asacommonmemberofsociety wemustkeepthefollowingpointsinourminds First makesurethatthelightsandalltheotherelectricfacilitiesareturnedoffwhenwefinishourworkandleavetheroom Secondly trytoformthehabitofturningoffthetapafteritisusedandthewastewatercanbereusedformorepurposesbeforebeingthrownintosewers Thirdly savepaperasmuchaspossibleinoureverydaylife Itisevenbettertoreuseit Inaword ifwepaymuchattentiontooureverydaybehaviorandtakeactionstoreducewaste wecanmakecontributionstoaneconomizedsociety 南京卷 Therehasbeenareversalofthebraindrainsince1978acrossthecountry Between1978and2008 about7 000overseasChinesereturnedtoShanghaiaftercompletingtheirstudiesabroad Theyaccountedforabout25 ofallreturneesnationwide Thisyearhaswitnessedaboom Thenumberofreturneeshasreachedupto15 000 Itisestimatedthatafurther22 000willhavereturnedtothiscitybytheendof2010 Thereversalofthebraindrainmainlyarisesfromthreefacts Firstly ourgovernmentvaluesoverseasChinesescholarshighly encouragesthemtoreturnhometostarttheirowncareersandhasworkedoutaseriesofpreferentialpolicies InShanghai aworldfamousinternationalcity theycanenjoyamodernlifestyle Secondly China seconomyhasbeendevelopingatanamazingspeed whichprovidesthemwithavastspaceofdevelopment Manyreturneeshaveachievedoutstandingsuccessinscientificresearchorinhigh levelmanagement Theyareplayingamoreandmoreimportantrole Thirdly thecurrentglobalfinancialcrisisleavesmanyoverseasoutofworkorattheedgeofbeinglaidoff Theyfeelmoresecureathomebecausetheeconomyismorestable IhopethatmoreoverseasChinesecanheadhome Herewehaveabetterstageforthemtodisplaytheirtalent Thereisabrightprospectaheadofthem p189 Withtheimprovementoflivingstandards thereisalotofwasteoncampus Forexample thelightsarekeptoninthedaytime somestudentsleavewaterrunningaftertheydosomewashing Unfinishedfoodisseenhereandthereaftermeals Therearealsosomestudentsinpursuitoffashion suchaswearingtopbrandclothingandusingexpensivemobilephones Asisknowntoall itisaverybadhabittobewasteful Inthefirstplace ithasabadeffectonone scharacter Besides itaddsfinancial burdentoparents Lastbutnotleast italsoexhauststheverylimitednaturalresourcesintheworld ItishightimethatwedidsthtodealwiththeProblem Firstofall everyoneissupposedbeawareoftheimportanceofsavingenergy Andindailylife weshouldbeginwithpettythingstolearntosave Wearesupposedtoturnoffthelightsandtapsintime Whenbuyingfood makesuretheamountisadequateincaseofbeingwasteful Weshouldalsoadvocatelivinganddressingsimply I mconvincedthatwitheveryonedoinghis herbit thepresentsituationwillsurelybeimprovedsoon P191 Opinionsaredividedonthismatter Themajorityofthestudentsdon tapproveofSsretakingclasses Thepointout firstofall itisunfairforthosewhotaketheexamforthefirsttime Besides itaddstothefamily seconomicburden What smore retakers havingfailedonce mayhavegreaterpressure Itisquitelikelythattheymaysuffersomementalproblems Therest ontheotherhand thinkquitedifferently Theirreasonsarebasedonthefollowingfacts Firstofall throughanother yearofhardwork theycangetachancetoenteranidealuniversity whichcangivethemtheedgeoverothercandidatesinthefutureemploymentmarket Afterall theuniversityoneentersdirectlyaffectsthefuturedevelopment Frommypointofview whetheritispropertoretakeclassesalldepends Ifonehasnochancetogotocollege maybeitisawisechoicetodoso Buttheproblemisthatmanystudentswhohavegothighscoresorhavebeenadmittedalsowantto Ifso thereisnoneedandweshouldforbidit 1图表类2正反利弊观点类3热点类4书信类5选择类6议论类 P178 1thinkitunderstandable 2takeadifferentstand Theyarguethat addpressuretotheareastheymoveto whichalsomeansanunfairsituationtothestudentsinlow scoreareas Itwilltakelongbeforesudentsgetusedtoanewenvironment whichwillhaveabadeffectontheirstudies 3Idon tregarditasagoodpractice Weeklytest2 Peoplereacttothisissueindifferentways Supportersholdtheviewpointthatthisisaproperwayinrecognitionandpraiseoftheirchildrenforwhattheyhaveachievedthroughhardwork whichcanalsoencouragetheirchildrentoworkstillharderinthefuture Besides alaptopreallyplaysavitalroleinuniversitystudiesintheInformationAge asitmakesitveryconvenientforcollegestudentstopickupvaluableinformationontheInternet surftheInternetforusefulinformation Criticsarguethatitistotallyunnecessarytodoso Theirreasonsarebasedonthefollowingfacts Inthefirstplace thelearningconditionsinuniversitiesaremuchsuperior withenoughcomputersavailableforstudents Besides alaptopcostsaconsiderablesumofmoney Tosomefamilies itisaheavyeconomicburden Worsestill itisquitelikelythattheirchildrenwillspendanabsurdamountoftimeoncomputergames whichmayhaveabadeffectontheirfuturestudiesandwork Frommypointofview whetheritisagoodpracticetodosoalldepends Thepurchasingpowerofdifferentfamiliesshouldbetakenintoaccountfirst Besides howthelaptopwillbeusedreallycounts Wemustensurethatbydoingso parentsarepushingtheirchildrentoafavorablesituation Ifnot we drathernotdoso Neverloseheartandkeepinmindthatperseveranceisthemotherofsuccess Withstrongwillanddetermination successissuretowaitforyouattheendofthetunnel 3 Thereisawiderspaceforyouto display demonstrateyouraptitudeandskillsathome 4 Thebestoneemergesfromallwalksoflife AllroadsleadtoRome HowtodealwithanArgumentation OnSuccess Whatissuccess Differentpeoplehavedifferentviewsonit Somethinkthatoneissuccessfulifhecanearnalotofmoney Othersarguethatsuccessmeansholdinganimportantpostinthegovernment Stillothersbelievewhoeverhasgotahighacademictitleissuccessful Despitethedifferentopinionsonsuccess mostpeopleagreethatsuccessfulpeoplehavesomegoodqualitiesincommon Firstofall theyshouldbebothperseverantanddiligent Asweallknow whateverwedo therearealwaystwopossibleresults successorfailure Sofailureisadailyoccurrence Whenwefail weshouldneverloseheart Instead weshouldalwayskeepinmindthatperserveranaceisthemotherofsuccess Inaddition weshouldpaymoreattentiontoourworkmethod Itisofgreatimportancethatwesumupourexperienceconstantlyandimprovetheeffeciencyofourwork Moreover itreallymattersthatwegetonwellwithourco workers careforandhelpeachother Frommypointofview successmeansachievingbrilliantresultsinourworkwhateverwedo Thatis makingoutstandingcontributionstothedevelopmentofourcountryandbringinghappinesstoothers Onhappiness Whatishappiness Differentpeoplehavedifferentviews Somethink othersregard Asforme happyishewhoiscontent Thecurrentgovernmentisattachinggreatimportancetothepeople slivlihood Thecentralgovernmentisundertakingaseriesofmeasurestoensurethatpeople slivingconditionsaregreatlyimproved Therearemanymeasuresbeneficialtothepeopletobetaken Theconditionofeducation medicalservices housingandemploymentwillbegreatlyimproved Thegovernmentwillprovidefreecompulsoryeducation Thefarmers burdenwillbefurther lightened Housepricesaretobeeffectivelycontrolledandmedicalcarewillundergogreatchanges Aboveall thegovernmentwilllcreatemorejobopportunitiesforlow incomepeople ItgoeswithoutsayingthattheabovemeasuresindicatethatChinaisbecomingmuchricherandmorepowerful Andwehaveeveryreasontobelievepeople slivingconditionswillbegreatlyimprovedandthesocietywillbecomemoreharmonious AsSs wearetoworkhardtomakeourbitstoourmotherland DearLinhong VerygladtohavereceievdyourlatterandknowthatyouareconsideringreturningandworkinginChina I mwritingtovoicemyopiniononyourissueforyourreference Frommypointofview it sadvisableforyoutocomebackfordevelopment Myreasonsarebasedonthefollowingfactors Firstofall China seconomyisdevelopingsteadilydespitetheimpactoftheglobalfinancialcrisis Besides thegovernmentvaluesadvancedintellectualslikeyouhighly Ithasworkedoutaseriesofpreferentialpoliciestoreturnees encouragingthemtosetuptheircareersathome In2008alone about50000returneeschosetocomebackandtheyarenowworkinginallwalksoflifeseniorengineers high levelmanagers universitytutorsorofficialsinthegovernment Andaconsiderablenumberofreturneeshavebecomesuccessfulbusinessowners Allthisshowsthatthereisawiderspaceherefor youtodisplay demonstrateyourtalentsandskills Lastbutnotleast itiseveryone sresponsibiltytomakecontributionstohismotherland isn tit Tosumup therearevariousjobsavailabletoyouandI mgreatlyconvincedthatyouwillfeelhappytohavemadethewisedecisionverysoon It shightimethatyousetoffyourjourneyback Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreturnandbestwishes 21 Andrewwon tlikeit youknow Canyouchangeitscolor Idon tcarewhatAndrewthinks A NowayB NoproblemC It soutofquestionD It snowonder22 Thewholeworldisundergoingthebiggestfinancialcrisisnowadays callsforinternationalcooperationamongallnationstogetover A thatB whenC whatD which23 Sorrytohaveinterruptedyou Pleasegoon WherewasI You youdidn tliketobeprejudicedagainst A saidB hadsaidC weresayingD hadsaid24 Mum pleaseletus Maryandme gotoJack sbirthdaypartytomorrow A canyouB willyouC shallweD maywe 25 OnlyafterbeingattackedbytheJapaneseinPearlHarbor intheSecondWorldWarthoroughly A hadAmericainvolvedB wasAmericainvolvedC AmericahadinvolvedD Americawasinvolved26 Wewereluckytohavesurvivedthetrainaccident thefirstandlastcarweresmashed OntopofthisB WhatwasworseC AsitwasD Soitwas27 Theproblemlies wearenowgivinghimafish notteachinghimtofish A inthatB onthatC inwhichD onwhich28 theclassdonemostofthework Yes buttherest ratherdifficult A Has areB Has isC Have areD Have is 29 Fathersoftenfeel theirdutytoearnmoremoneyfortheirfamily A thatB itC oneD what30 Oh it ssocoolinthehouse You haveturnedontheair conditioner haven tyou A shouldB mightC mustD can31 What sthematterwithJason Helooksabitupset Didn tyouknow Whenreturningfromhisholidaylastnight hefoundhishouse A brokenoffB brokenintoC brokenoutD brokendown32 AterribleearthquakestruckSichuanProvinceonMay12 tensofthousandsoflives A claimingB claimedC causingD caused33 Ithinkitwillbelong theinfluenceofSanluMilkPowderincidentdiesdown A thatB sinceC beforeD after 34 Doyouthinkthebrightgirlwillsoongetusedtothenewjob It shardtosay Intelligenceonly forherlackofexperienceinpart accountsB compensatesC countsD answers35 LetmeteachyouhowtodownloadmusicfromtheInternet Teachme Iknowhowtodoitearlier A It seasiersaidthandone B Hewholaughslastlaughsbest C Youaretryingtoteachyourgrannyhowtosuckeggs D Youcantakeahorsetothewaterbutyoucannotmakehimdrink 21 Whenaskedbyhissontotakehimonapicniclunchin park Marktoldhimtheyhavetowaitfor bettertime A the aB a aC a theD a22 Afterbeingadmittedtouniversity you llhavetoarrangemostofthelife yourown byB forC ofD on23 Alargeproportionofruralworkforceisnowservingindifferentlinesinthecity leavingtheoldandthechildreninnearlyemptynestles 家 A thenB andC soD thus 24 Ithasbecomeanationwiderequirementthateverystudent havedailyexerciseforonehour A mustB shouldC willD need25 Kate mayIuseyourbikeforamoment Sorry it 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